专题05 写作技巧+书面表达专练+满分范文-2024-2025学年七年级英语上学期期末复习（外研版2024）

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步骤一：审题
审题注意八个方面：一审主题（写什么），二审体裁（记叙、说明、议论、夹叙夹议），三审时态，四审人称（别犯低级错误），五审内容要点（一定要在试卷中画出，免得写的时候忘记，导致跑题），六审长难要点（找出主干或者分解成若干个简单句或者用自己熟练的词汇或习惯用语替换难点），七审作文开头，如果开头给出了半句话，应该思考如何把这句话简单明了地续写完整。
步骤二：打草稿：列出要用的主要时态，短语，句型和词汇等（不要在答题纸上涂涂改改，不要用修正带，修正液等）
步骤三：正文写作
做到两点，一要凝练， 二要变化。文章80—100字为宜，一定要注意使用过渡词、从句、句型和词组搭配。穿插使用简单句和复合句。
步骤四：检查：
1 内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档
2 语法错误：名词查单复数和冠词问题，动词查时态语态和三单问题。
3 变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化
4单词拼写：低级的单词拼写错误
5标点符号：英文和汉语标点符号有差别
6作文内容：不要出现自己的真实身份姓名等信息。
二、选择好自己喜欢或者常用的逻辑过渡词，默写和背诵它们直到烂熟于心并且运用到作文中。
1.开始： first f all, at first, first and fremst, in the beginning , t start with, t begin with
2.另外/然后：what’s mre, and then, next, at the same time, in additin, besides, mrever, furthermre (在写作时，每篇作文，不超过三个)
3.一方面，另一方面：n ne hand, n the ther hand; fr ne thing, fr anther (thing); in the first place , in the secnd place. (同时使用)
4.最后，总之：in the end, in shrt, in all, all in all, in a wrd, last but nt least, in cnclusin，at last, Generally speaking, in general
5.在我看来：I think/believe, as fr me, frm my part, in my pinin, in my view, as far as I’m cncerned, as far as I knw, as a student.
6.表转折:but, yet, hwever, instead f, instead， nevertheless，ppsitely(相反地)，what’s wrse(更糟糕地), even wrse.
7.表原因：because f, because，hence, thanks t/due t(因为，由于，幸亏，归功于),
8.表结果：s, thus, as a result, therefre.( 因此，所以，结果)
9.表目的：in rder t , in rder that, s that, （为了）
三、常见褒义词：fantastic, wnderful, meaningful(有意义的), , great, excellent, super，
四、常见开头句型
1. Let me tell yu smething mre abut…
2. Everybdy knws that… （众所周知）
3. It can be easily seen that…（显而易见）
4. It is true that… （…确实是如此）
5. I am happy t tell yu that…
6. Hell, everyne! Tday I'd like t share my ideas abut…
7. Hw are yu? I’d like t share a stry with yu.
8. Hw are yu? I have a mving(感人的) stry t tell yu.
9.写信旅行话题开头：I’m writing t tell yu smething abut…
Starter
初中是你人生的一个新起点。假如你是李华，你的同班同学和老师想了解你的情况，请根据以下提示，写一篇自我介绍。
基本情况：姓名、年龄、所在班级；
爱好和性格；
今年暑假所做的趣事；
4.希望：想在新学校交到新朋友。
要求：1.适当拓展，行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右。
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【写作指导】
1.人称：第一人称。
2.时态:介绍自己的情况应用一般现在时;描述过去的活动应用一般过去时;介绍未来的打算应用一般将来时。
3.构思:
开篇介绍自己的基本情况:My name is...
l am..
I like.
My hbby is/are...
中间介绍假期活动:I went
I visited/bught…
结尾介绍未来的打算:I'm ging hpe..
【参考范文】
Hell everyne! My name is Li Hua. Let me intrduce myself.
I am 13 years ld this year. I am frm Class One, Grade Seven. My hbby is ding sprts. Basketball is my favrite. I am a helpful student, s I ften help peple d lts f things. This summer hliday, I went t Hainan with my parents. It was ht but beautiful. I swam and tk many phts there. I was very happy. Here in this schl, I am ging t make sme new friends. D yu want t be my friend?

Unit1
小学生活精彩纷呈。回首过去，你是否感到充实和快乐? 展望未来，你是否对初中生活充满期待? 请以“A new start”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的感悟。\
( 1 ) What did yu get in primary schl?
(2)What d yu feel srry abut in primary schl?
( 3 ) What did yu think f the schl life befre yu start junir high?
( 4 ) Hw did yu feel when yu were in junir high?
( 5 ) What's yur plan fr yur future life in junir high?
(1)词数:80左右。
(2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
A new start








【参考范文】
Primary schl was a time f jy and learning. I gt knwledge, made friends, and had fun. Hwever, I regret nt wrking harder fr my exams. Lking back, I really like thse times but I thught I culd d better.
Befre junir high, I thught it wuld be harder. Yet, when I gt here, I fund it is really fun. The teachers are kind, and I really like them.
Fr my future in junir high, I plan t wrk hard n my studies, jin sme clubs and make new friends. I'm excited fr this next part f my life and hpe t grw even mre.
Unit2
假设你是李华, 是光明中学七年级一班的一名学生。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Hbby”的短文。
内容包括:(1)你的爱好是什么? 列举你喜欢这个爱好的原因(至少两个)。
(2)你的爱好对你学习、生活的影响。
注意: (1)词数 70 左右(文章的开头已经给出, 不计人总词数)。
(2) 内容必须包括所有要点, 但不要逐条翻译。
(3)在所提示的要点之外, 要求有适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺。
My Hbby
Hell, everyne






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Hell, everyne, my name is Li Hua. I have many hbbies.
Of all my hbbies, I like playing basketball best. Why d I like playing basketball? First f all, playing basketball makes me relaxed and happy. What’s mre, I can make a lt f friends when playing basketball with ther peple. And then, I can keep healthy by playing basketball. I think playing basketball can bring happiness t me, and I can study better after I play it. My life will be meaningless withut hbbies.
I hpe everyne can have a gd hbby and keep lving it fr their whle life.
Unit3
(一)假设你是李林,根据爸爸和你一起放风筝的一张照片。请你以“Father's Lve”为题,根据提示介绍一下这张照片以及你从这张照片中感受到的父爱。
(1)简单介绍一下父亲的情况: 父亲是一名医生，工作很忙, 但会尽量抽时间陪我。
(2)描绘一下照片的内容和感想: 上周日爸爸陪我放风筝时拍的照片, 他教会了我如何放风筝。
(3)表达一下你从照片中感受到的父爱: 父亲的爱是深沉的, 像山一样。
要求:(1)不得出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯, 70 词左右。
Father’s Lve







【参考范文】
Father's Lve
My father is a dctr and he wrks in a hspital. He is very busy. But he tries his best t spend sme time with me every week.
Last Sunday, we went t the seaside t fly a kite. Mther tk the pht f us. In the pht, my father was teaching me hw t fly a kite. It was a very warm mment. I like spending time with my father, because he can always teach me smething new and we always play happily.
I lve my father. I think the father's lve is strng, like a muntain.
(二),你们家每年都给爷爷奶奶举办生日聚会吗? 根据提示写一篇英语短文，要求语句通顺，要点齐全，词数 80左右。
提示:
(1)我奶奶70岁了。每年家里人都会给她举办生日聚会;
(2)家人们总是带礼物和生日蛋糕给我奶奶;
(3)我妈妈和伯母们经常做一顿大餐;
(4)饭后，孩子们通常开心地唱歌、跳舞;
(5)对我奶奶来说，这是一个特殊的(special)日子。那天她总是很开心。
【参考范文】
My grandma is seventy years ld. Every year my family have a birthday party fr her. All f my family always bring sme presents and a birthday cake t my grandma. My mther and my aunts ften ck a big dinner. After dinner, children usually sing and dance happily. It's a special day fr my grandma and she is always very happy n that day.
Unit4
（一）假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike非常想了解春节,请你根据以下提示词语和提示问题,给他写一封不少于60词的电子邮件介绍春节。邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词语: clean the huse, have a big dinner, visit, imprtant
提示问题:
●What d yu usually d during the Spring Festival?
●What d yu like t d? Why?
●What d yu think f the Spring Festival?
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging?
The Spring Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China.








Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging?
The Spring Festival is ne f the mst imprtant traditinal festivals in China. It ften cmes in January r February. Befre the festival, we always clean the huse t sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, all the family members cme tgether t have a big dinner. The mst traditinal fd is dumplings. They are delicius. After dinner, we usually watch a special prgramme n TV.
I like t visit relatives and friends because I can get sme presents. I think the Spring Festival is very imprtant t us.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
（二）母亲节是一个感恩母亲的节日，假如你是刘丹，今年你给妈妈过了一个特别的母亲节，请你和同学们分享一下，并谈谈你的感受。
(1) 我为妈妈准备了很多。
(2) 母亲节当天妈妈仍然在工作。她是一名护士，很多病人需要她照顾。
(3)我决定给她打电话，并用快递寄给她一些花。
(4)我告诉妈妈我们爱她，感谢她，妈妈很感动。
(5)我认为…
参考词汇: 感动的tuched 用快递 by express delivery
要求: (1)词数:80左右 (2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Mther's Day is cming. I prepared






【参考范文】
Mther's Day is cming. I prepared a lt t celebrate it fr my mther. But she is still at wrk. My mther is a nurse and needs t take care f the patients. I decided t give her an unusual festival. I called her and sent her sme flwers by express delivery. I tld my mther hw much I lved her and thanked her. She was very tuched and happy.
In my pinin, even thugh my mther culdn't be with us tgether, ur lve crssed the distance.
Unit5
(一)根据所给提示用英文写一篇文章, 简要介绍一下中国的国宝(natinal treasure )----大熊猫(panda)。不少于 70 词。
主要栖息地: 四川、陕西、甘肃等省份
体貌特征: 黑白相间, 黑眼睛, 圆耳朵; 身体虽胖但动作敏捷 (mve nimbly); 非常惹人喜爱
生活习性: 最爱吃竹子;会爬树
呼吁:应得到保护
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【参考范文】
Pandas are China's natinal treasure. They live in Sichuan, Shaanxi, Gansu and s n. They are black and white. They have black eyes and rund ears. They are fat, but they can mve nimbly. They are very cute and many peple lve them. They like eating bamb best. Each panda needs t eat a lt f bamb every day. They can climb trees. We must try ur best t prtect them.
（二）假如你是李华，请你在笔记本记下此刻正在发生的事情。
(1)今年，超过 70种候鸟在天津北大港湿地找到了它们的新家。
(2)你和杰克、亨利、米娅正在游览天津北大港湿地。
(3)亨利对东方白鹳有着浓厚的兴趣，他甚至在图书馆里做了深入的研究。杰克和亨利正在观察东方白鹳。他正用知识来帮助自己理解鸟类的行为。
(4)米娅正在喂鸟，所以很多鸟都飞向她，她很开心。
参考词汇:
北大港湿地Beidagang Wetland 东方白鹳: Oriental White Strks
候鸟 migratry birds 对……有兴趣be interested in
行为behavir
(1)词数:80左右。
(2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
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【参考范文】
Nw, we are visiting the Beidagang Wetland in Tianjin. Over 70 kinds f migratry birds fund their new hme here. My friends Jack, Henry, Mia and I are excited t be here. Henry, with his great interest in Oriental strks, is especially excited. He did sme research n them in the library, and nw he is sharing his knwledge with us. He is using his knwledge t knw the behavirs f the birds. Jack is right there with him and watching the birds. Meanwhile, Mia is feeding the birds, and they're flying t her. She is really happy.
This trip is mre than just a walk in the wetlands. Nw we knw animals are beautiful and imprtant t the natural wrld. What a great day!
Unit6
(一)植物，是人类必不可少的伙伴。那芳草连天、山泉汨汨、鸟语花香和林海的阵阵音涛乐浪， 对于我们来说，都是一种美的享受。请根据要点提示，以“The imprtance f plants”为题写一篇短文。
要点：1. 植物在自然界中的重要性；2. 植物对人类日常生活的帮助；3. 保护植被的主要措施。
注意：1. 不少于80词(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)；2. 可进行适当发挥；3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
The imprtance f plants
Plants are imprtant in the natural wrld. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s take actin nw and prtect ur lvely plants tgether.
【参考范文】
The imprtance f plants
Plants are imprtant in the natural wrld. They prvide animals with hme and enugh fd. Mre imprtantly, plants can help keep the balance f nature as well as stp earth mving away with water.
Fr humans, plants have a lt f uses and make ur lives cnvenient. Plants can prvide us with many things， such as fruit， medicine and wd. Plants can als prduce xygen fr us t breathe， keep air cl and clean.
As a nature lver， I think we shuld nt nly stp cutting dwn t many trees but als plant mre trees and ther green plants.
Let’s take actin nw and prtect ur lvely plants tgether.
(二).假如你是李华，请描述你和朋友们在茶馆里的一次难忘经历。
(1)我们今天下午参观了一个茶馆，那里有很多香气扑鼻的茶。
(2)Jack 和 Henry 对制茶过程感兴趣，并向茶艺师学习了很多。
(3)服务员微笑着给客人们上茶和点心，让茶馆气氛更加温馨。
(4)老茶师教孩子们泡茶，帮助一个小男孩成功泡出好茶。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇: 泡茶pur the tea
要求:
(1)词数:80左右。
(2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
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【参考范文】
Tday, I went t an ld teahuse with my friends. There were s many kinds f tea, and each smelled wnderful!
Jack and Henry lved learning hw tea is made. They asked the tea master lts f questins and listened carefully.
A friendly waiter made everyne happy with her big smile. She served ht tea and tasty snacks, making the teahuse feel like a czy hme.
A kind ld tea master taught kids t make tea. A little by had a hard time at first, but the tea master helped him. Sn, the by culd pur the tea well and felt very prud.
We had a great time and learned abut the friendly culture f tea. It was a day full f smiles and gd feelings!
期末综合
(一)假如你是李华，请你给你的朋友 David写一封信，讲述你在新学校学习戏剧的经历和收获。
(1)开学第一堂课我上了戏剧课，我很感兴趣。
(2)我们学校有个戏剧俱乐部，我诚邀你参加。
(3)每周五下午三点，我们聚到学校小剧场学习和表演戏剧。
(4)这张照片展现的是我们表演戏剧的开心时刻。
(5)戏剧提高了我的英语，同时……
参考词汇: 戏剧drama 邀请invite剧场 theatre 表演perfrm
要求: (1)词数: 80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
(2)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Lng time n see.
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Lking frward t seeing yu sn!
Yurs,
Hua

【参考范文】
Dear David,
Lng time n see. I wanted t share with yu my exciting experience in my new schl's drama class. The first lessn was really interesting and I was excited abut it.
Our schl als has a drama club, and I wuld like t invite yu t jin us. Every Friday afternn at 3 'clck, we meet at the small theatre f ur schl t learn and perfrm dramas. It's a fantastic time t explre this art and imprve ur skills. The pht shws ne f ur happy mments while perfrming a drama. It was an unfrgettable experience. Drama imprves my English and builds my cnfidence. Lking frward t seeing yu sn!
Yurs,
Hua
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（二）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友 David写一封信，讲述你周日一天的生活，并谈谈感受。
(1)周日早上，在公园闻花香，喂动物，听到了孩子们笑，救助了一只小猫。
(2)回到家后，认真完成作业。
(3)和朋友策划了一个生日派对，派对上欢声笑语。
(4)人们过来帮忙。
(5)你觉得…
要求:
(1)词数:80左右。
(2) 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I'd like t share a stry with yu.
On a sunny Sunday mrning,
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Yurs,
Hua
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Hw are yu? I'd like t share a stry with yu.
On a sunny Sunday mrning, I tk a break and went t the park. I smelled smething different, a mix f flwers. I enjyed feeding the animals and heard children laughing. We fund a lst kitten and helped it.
I wrked hard n my schl hmewrk. It was imprtant. After that, my friends and I planned a birthday party. We wanted t celebrate and relax tgether. At the party, we played and laughed a lt. The day was full f fun. I felt grateful fr the day and the friends with me. It was a day I will always remember.
Yurs,
Hua