专题22 提纲作文- 2025年高考英语二轮热点题型归纳与变式专练（天津专用）

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天津历年高考英语的作文题材涉及到：
文化交流：包括中英文化交流活动、向外国友人介绍中国文化、与外国学校学生交流等；
学习与教育：包括学生学习方法、学校活动策划、学生辅导等；
个人发展与交往：包括个人规划、交换生互动、机器人技能竞赛等；
文学艺术：包括推荐书籍、讲座话题选择、观剧邀请等。
体裁主要有：信件、发言稿等
考点覆盖：词汇、语法、长难句
需在正确表达的基础上，适当加入长难句、高级词汇，可以预先积累作文模版素材，但注意不要照搬模版。
【解题技巧】
如何写好高考英语提纲作文？要想书面表达拿高分，必须做到三个要求：内容全面、语言高级、字迹清晰。
1)内容全面：即要符合题目要求，要求写什么就写什么，不要来搞笑，可以适当增添细节，使行文连贯即可。
2)语言高级：陈述不如倒装妙，分词结构不能少；主动不如被动巧，从句结构必须好。
3)字迹清晰：尽量避免“很随意”式的书写，以及“蝌蚪文”，字迹清晰工整就可以，不在涂抹太多。当然，一手漂亮的字体肯定会博人眼球，会留给改卷老师很好的第一印象，分自然不会低。
第一步：审题。
1.审体裁：书信格式（电子邮件）
2.审人称：第一、二人称
3.审时态：（现在时、过去时）：一般现在时、将来时
4.审结构（段落）：Para. 1 开头；Para. 2 正文；Para. 3 结尾。
第二步：列提纲/要点，适当增加细节。
Para. 1 开头；Para. 2 正文；Para. 3 结尾:结束语（谢意，意愿）。
第三步：连句成篇，注意：亮点呈现，句式升华。
第四步：注意润色修正文章的方式。
使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力：
1.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档；2.尝试多样化表达方式，如：强调句、名词性从句、定语从句、同位语从句等。
第五步：定稿（全面检查）。文章完成后，需要认真检查与修改，力求减少失误。
具体如下：1.要点是否有遗漏。2.时态和语态是否恰当。3.拼写是否有误。4.文章是否连贯。5.词数是符合要求等。6.一篇好的文章必须书写工整，卷面整洁。作文如同一件产品，只有包装好才能卖个好价钱，只有卷面漂亮、整洁才能得高分。
近几年的高考书面表达写作大都是提纲式书信（电子邮件），这类作文特点是要点明确，范围具体，因此提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及，一个也不能遗漏。这类作文主要考查的内容有：说明主题、分析原因或解释做法；提纲作文的另一特点是思维空间灵活、开放。因此为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
题型01 邀请信
【题型诠释】
思路点拨：
表明写作意图，向某人发出邀请；
说明邀请的具体原因，邀请的内容；
表示强烈的期盼，并希望尽快得到答复。
开头打招呼：
- Hw are yu ding? -你好吗？
- Hw have yu been? /What’s ging n？- 你最近怎么样？
阐述目的：
- [On behalf f (the classmates/my schl/the student unin..)], I am writing t invite yu t cme and attend it/my birthday party, if yu can spare the time.
- [代表 （同学们/我的学校/学生会..）]，我写信邀请你来参加它/我的生日派对，如果你有空的话。
- I’d like t invite yu t jin us fr a visit t - 我想邀请您加入我们，参观
- The purpse f writing this letter is t invite yu t jin in... - 写这封信的目的是邀请您加入...
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In a bid t ______(活动目的), a/an ______(活动) is scheduled t be held in/at ______(地点). I wuld like t invite yu t participate in it.
As scheduled, the ______(活动) falls n ______(具体日期), lasting frm______ t______(具体时间点) , during which time a wide variety f ______ (活动内容) will be put n. Fr example, ______(具体内容). In additin, /As far as I can see, ______(其他活动/重要意义).
Hpefully, yu can spare time t jin us. Shuld yu have any questin, please dn’t hesitate t let me knw. May yu have a gd time!
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型02 感谢信
【题型诠释】
思路点拨：
写信目的，表达真挚谢意
解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
结尾段：再次感谢
第一部分：表达真挚谢意
万能句型：I'm writing t express my thanks/gratitude（感激）t yu fr sth/ding sth.
我写信是为了表达对于你做。。。的感谢。
例句：
1. Thank yu s much fr yur generus help.
非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
2.1 am sincerely grateful t yu fr yur timely help.
我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
3.1t was s kind f yu t treat me as yur wn sister.
谢谢你把我当作自己的妹妹。
4.1 am s grateful t yu fr what yu have dne fr me.
我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
5.1 wuld like t cnvey my thanks t yu fr yur kind help.
我想感谢你的帮助。
6. I’m writing t thank yu fr the few wnderful days in Lndn.
我写信感谢你帮我在伦敦度过的快乐日子。
7.1 am writing t express/shw/cnvey my sincere thanks t yu fr yur help.
我写信真诚地感谢你的帮助。
8. Fr this reasn, I am writing this letter t express my sincere thanks t yu.
为此，我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
第二部分：解释感谢的原因或对方的帮助给自己带来的好处
1.Thanks t yur help, I have made rapid prgress in my English.
多亏了你的帮助，我的英语有了飞速的进步。
2. Withut/But fr yur help(lf it were nt fr yur help) ,I wuld nt have made s much prgress in my English.
要是没有你的帮助，我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
3.1 extend yu again a thusand thanks fr the great favr.
我太感谢你的帮助了。
第三部分：再次感谢
1.Thanks again fr helping me.
再次感谢你对我的帮助。
2.Thank yu again fr yur generus help.
再次感谢你的慷慨帮助。
3. 1 wuld appreciate it if yu culd accept my sincere thanks.
如果你能接受我诚挚的感谢，我将不胜感激。
4. Yur kindness and help will always be remembered.
我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
5.1 deeply/greatly appreciate yur hspitality（款待）．
我深深感谢你们的盛情款待。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing t extend my heartfelt gratitude t yu fr ______(感谢的原因). Undubtedly，had it nt been yur assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I wuld have been______ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encunter difficulties, yu ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, n wrds are strng enugh t cnvey hw grateful I am. Many thanks t yu. I wish ______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型03 推荐信
【题型诠释】
1. 词汇
能力：have a gift fr, be skilled in, be experienced in, be an expert in, speak fluent English, creative, a by with great ability, efficient, intelligent, etc.
经历：graduate frm, be a graduate frm, majr in, gain/win/get the first grade schlarship, get gd grades, an all-arund student with excellent grades in, excellent grades in all subjects, be given the title f, gain/win the first prize/place, win a gld/silver/cpper medal, etc.
性格：utging, easy t get alng with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part f his character, etc.
2. 经典句型
(1) He is an all-arund student with excellent grades in all subjects. He has been given the title f the ＂excellent student＂.
(2) As a by with great ptential, he is gd at slving difficult prblems.
(3) Li Ming, a graduate frm Peking University, majrs in cmputer sftware design.
(4) He has enjyed the reputatin/title f the Excellent Graduate.
3. 写作套路
开头：
(1) I am writing t recmmend t yu…
(2) I wuld like t recmmend t yu…
(3) It is a great hnr fr me t recmmend t yu…
(4) I take the pleasure in recmmending t yu…
结尾：
(1) If he can jin yur cmpany, he will give full play t his talent. And yur cmpany will als be greatly benefited. S I strngly recmmend… t yu.
(2) In a wrd, he wuld be a gd chice. I wuld be grateful if yu wuld like t cnsider my recmmendatin.
(3) I hpe yu can give him a chance. I believe he will make a great cntributin t yur cmpany.
(4) I hpe that yu wuld take my recmmendatin int cnsideratin/accunt.
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
In respnse t yur request fr ______(推荐事由), I wuld like t recmmend ______(具体推荐事项). I recmmend it mainly fr the fllwing three reasns.
Initially, ______(推荐理由一) . Additinally/Aside frm it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus, ______(推荐理由三) . If yu want details, please______(联系方式) .
Yur taking my recmmendatin int cnsideratin will be highly appreciated/expected.
Keenly anticipate yur prmpt reply.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型04 告知信
【题型诠释】
【常用词汇】
1.infrm sb. f sth. 告知某人某事
2.intrduce sth.t sb.向某人介绍某物
3.prvide sme infrmatin fr sb. 为某人提供一些信息
4.wrk ut my schedule制订我的计划
5.as fllws列举如下
6.shw sb. arund... 带领某人参观某处
7.have a try试试看，尝试一下
8.sign up fr.. 报名参加
9.wk as/serve as/act as.任……职，当……
10.mean/intend t d sth. 打算做某事
11.spare sme time t d sth. 抽出时间做某事
12.take a curse参加一门课程
13.pay a visit t..…去参观
14.make a difference有影响；起（重要）作用
15.hesitate t d sth. 犹豫，有所顾虑
16.be scheduled at/n... 被安排在
17.make preparatins fr..为……准备
18.make an arrangement fr sth.为……做安排
19.be intended t sth. 打算，意图
【常用句型】
Nw, I am writing t infrm yu f sme relevant details.
Yu are suppsed/expected t …
Yu shuld/ Yu’d better …
There will be a lecture n ….
The lecture will last 3 hurs. / The lecture will begin at … and end at …
Hpefully, these suggestins wuld be helpful fr yu.
Please get there n time. / Please get everything ready ahead f time.
Dn’t miss the chance. /Dn’t be late.
Everyne is welcme t ……
I sincerely invite yu t…
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware f yur enthusiasm fr /Delighted t learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), I’m writing t extend my ______(看法、关心、欢迎等) and infrm yu f sme relevant infrmatin.
______(活动信息). T begin with, ______(要点一). Furthermre, ______(要点二). T sum up, ______(要点三).
I highly expect the experience t be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型05 建议信
【题型诠释】
I am writing t express my views cncerning... 我写此信来表达我关于……的观点。
Yu have asked me fr my advice abut...，and I will try t make sme cnducive suggestins. 对于你来信问我关于……的事，现提供几条有益的建议。
I wuld like t suggest that... 我建议……
Why Why dn't yu...？为何不……？
I think it will be a gd idea/mre beneficial if yu culd... 我认为……是个好办法/有利的。
It's imprtant It helps shuld be a gd idea t... 很重要/有帮助/是个好主意。
I am writing t put up sme suggestins cncerning... 我提出几条有关于……的建议。
Please take gd cnsideratin f my advice.Thanks. 请仔细考虑我的建议，谢谢。
I hpe yu will find these prpsals/suggestins/recmmendatins helpful/useful. 希望这些建议对你有帮助。
Thank yu fr yur attentin.感谢你对此事的关注。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Yu can’t imagine hw ______(情感) I am hearing abut ______(写信的原因). I’m mre than glad t ffer my advice fr yur reference.
Firstly, yu are suppsed t ______ (建议一) . Additinally(Fr ne reasn), it makes sense t ______ (建议二/理由一) . Mrever（Fr anther reasn）, ______ (建议三/理由二)is als a gd chice . D bear in mind that （Therefre）______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully cnvinced that use the tips abve and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my suggestins int accunt (表达希望接受建议).
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型06 道歉信
【题型诠释】
I wuld like t express my aplgy fr... 对于……，我想要表达我的歉意。
Will yu be gd enugh t excuse me me fr... 请原谅我……
Please accept my sincerest and deepest aplgy fr... 请接受我最真诚的致歉……
I'm terribly srry t tell yu I regret t infrm yu that...很抱歉地告诉你……
I write t yu t express my deep regret. 我写此信向你表示深深的懊悔。
I am writing t aplgize t yu fr... 我写信向你致歉，因为……
Wuld yu mind if I...？你是否介意如果我……？
T make up my thughtless behavir，I...为了弥补我欠考虑的行为，我……
I wish I culd be given a chance t make up fr my incnsideratin. 我希望你能给我一个机会来弥补我的考虑不周。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly srry t infrm yu that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing t aplgize fr nt keeping my wrd. Smething unexpected happened and ______(失约理由) .
Shall we fix anther time? I’ll be available any time after______(补救办法). Will ______(另约时间) suits yur cnvenience? If it’s k, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If nt, let me knw what time suits yu best. I hpe the adjustment wn’t put yu int much truble.
Keenly anticipate yur prmpt reply.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型07 申请信
【题型诠释】
I wish t apply fr a psitin f which yu advertised in tday's newspaper. 我想申请你们今天报纸上刊登的广告中的一个职位。
I have learned frm a friend that... 我从一个朋友那得知……
I shall be glad t prvide yu with any further infrmatin cncerning my educatin and persnal experience. 我很乐意提供关于我的教育及个人经验方面的更多信息。
My name graduated in...，majring in...我的名字是……。我毕业于……大学，专业是……
I am cnfident my prfessinal knwledge has prepared me t handle the jb. 我相信我的专业知识能让我胜任这份工作。
I am skilled in/gd at...我擅长……
I had gd perfrmance in every curse，especially in... 我每门课成绩都很好，特别是……
I trust that I am capable f ding the wrk well. 我相信我能干好这份工作。
I believe that I am well qualified fr the psitin as... 我相信我定能胜任作为……的工作。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am really delighted t learn that ______(职位) is required, and I feel this ______(职位或机会) is specially tailred t me.
T start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that ______(优势一) . Furthermre, ______(优势二) . Finally, there is n prblem with ______(优势三) .
I d hpe my ______(资质或能力) will win me a favrable cnsideratin frm yur side. Shuld yu need any details related t my applicatin, feel free t cntact me at______(联系方式).
Keenly anticipate yur prmpt reply.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型08 咨询信
【题型诠释】
【常用词汇】
1.inquire abut sth.询问……的情况
2.seek fr sth.寻求
3.btain sme infrmatin 获得一些信息
4.regarding/cncerning/with regard t sth.关于
5.prvide sb. with sth.提供给某人某物
6.infrm sb. f sth.通知某人某事
7.prmpt/immediate reply及时的回复
8.take int accunt f sth./take sth. int accunt 考虑到……
9.detailed infrmatin详情
10.be grateful/bliged t sb. fr sth.因某事而感谢某人
11.express ne's appreciatin fr...对某事表示感激
12.be cncerned abut... 对……关心
13.attend a summer schl参加暑期学校
14.during the summer vacatin 暑假间
15.a six-week English curse一个为期六周的英语课程。
16.per week 每周
17.as fr至于，关于
18.including extra fee fr sth.包括……额外费用
19.cver the entrance fees ..怎么样？（提出建议或用以引出活题）
20.What abut..…?/Hw abut.…? ……怎么样？
【常用句型】
I am writing t ask fr infrmatin abut hw t be a vlunteer fr the Asian Winter Games. 我写信来是为了咨询如何成为亚洲冬季运动会志愿者。
I am writing t see if it is pssible fr yu t prvide me with infrmatin regarding /cncerning /n hw t learn Chinese well. 我写信来是为了想知道您是否可以给我提供一些关于如何才能学好中文的信息。
I am writing t yu fr further infrmatin abut the English training. 我写信来是为了进一步了解英语培训。
I’m writing fr mre infrmatin abut hw t better learning habits. 我写信来是为了进一步获取有关改善学习习惯的信息。
I am writing in respnse t yur advertisement. 我写这封信是为了回复、回应你们的广告。
Culd yu please tell me smething abut hw t be a vlunteer fr the Asian Winter Games？您能向我介绍一下如何成为亚洲冬季运动会志愿者吗？
I wuld greatly appreciate it if yu culd tell me smething abut the rebuilt Qianmen Street in Beijing. 如果您能告诉我有关改建后北京前门大街的情况，我将感激不尽。
I wnder if /whether yu culd tell me smething abut English speech cntest t be held in ur schl n June 1st. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我一些有关我们学校将在6月1日举行的英语演讲比赛的情况。
I wuld like t knw if /whether yu culd tell me smething abut summer curses. 我想要知道您是否可以告诉我暑期课程的情况？
I wuld be much bliged t yu if yu let me knw smething abut the summer camp. 如果你能告诉我有关夏令营的情况， 我将不胜感激。
Culd yu （be s kind as t）tell me smething abut students’ visiting grup. 您是否可以告诉我有关学生访问团的情况。
I wuld （als）like t inquire smething abut a spkesman fr animals. 我（也）想咨询动物代言人的情况事宜。
I wuld be grateful if it’s s kind f yu t give me sme essential infrmatin. 如果您能告知一些必要的信息，我将不胜感激。
I’d like t knw smething mre abut the vlunteer activity. 我想要了解志愿者活动。
I wuld be grateful t receive a prmpt reply.如果您能回复，我将感激不尽。
I’d appreciate it very much if yu culd give me a reply.如果您能回复，我将感激不尽。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍). I am writing t inquire abut ______(要询问的内容).
The fllwing is my cnfusin. First f all, I’m tempted t knw ______. Secndly, when will ______ ? Thirdly, is ______?(要咨询的问题罗列)
I wuld be much appreciated if yu can furnish me with the abve infrmatin and yu can cntact me via ______ (表达感谢).
Thank yu and yur prmpt reply will be highly appreciated.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型09 求助信
【题型诠释】
①第一种类型：请求提供信息
如：“我”要去海外求学，请求对方提供相关学校的学费、住宿等信息。这种请求信也叫“咨询信”，
【内容分析】
a.客观描述（靠翻译）
b.喜爱/推荐原因
重点准备：中国文化类，如节日，中国结，唐诗等中国元素相关的内容。
②第二种类型：请求对方付出建议或者某种行为（脑力或体力）
如：“我”要参加竞赛，请对方给“我”建议；
“我”是校报编辑，请求对方写文章。此种请求信也叫“约稿信”。
约稿信的变体：“我”是主办方代表，请求对方为某次展览提供摄影或绘画作品。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing t seek fr yur help in______(写信目的).
Nw, I struggle a lt in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve fund that ______(描述自己的困难). Fr ne thing, ______(困难一). Fr anther, ______(困难二).
Therefre, culd yu please put frward sme practical suggestins? I am cnvinced that I will benefit a lt frm yur valuable and timely advice.
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd respnd at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型10 祝贺信
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am writing t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n ______(祝贺事由). As ______(身份关系), I just want yu t knw hw delighted I was when______(祝贺事由) .
Fr these years, yu ______(被祝贺人过去的经历). Nt nly did/have/were______(被祝贺人的努力), but als______(被祝贺人的努力). It is a reward yu richly deserve fr yur ______(被祝贺人的优点) .
All my best wishes fr an even mre prsperus future!
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型11 慰问信
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Wrds fail me t cnvey my wrry when I heard that ______(写信原由). I am writing t extend sincere pity and care fr yu (I hpe that the unexpected failure/truble wn’t let yu dwn).
Yu must ______(表达对遭遇的理解). Hwever，if yu were brave enugh nt t ______(悲观失望等), which is admirable. Anyway，It can’t be better if yu can lift yur spirits t face up t the result. Plus, ______(提供建议或帮助) . Remember, I wn’t be far away.
I hpe yu can find my encuragement helpful（Hpe yu can have yur trubles remved sn）.
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型12 通知
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
NOTICE
T enrich ur schl life and aruse students’ enthusiasm fr ______(活动主旨) , ______(活动)is ging t be held at ______(活动地点) n ______(活动时间).
Cntestants are required t ______(活动要求). All entries must be submitted t ______(报名地点) by ______(截止时间) . All the ______(参赛内容) will be graded carefully by ur freign teachers. Winners f the cntest will be awarded with ______(颁发奖品).
Thse wh shw their keen interests in the activity will be highly appreciated. Keenly anticipate yur participatin.
Student Unin
题型13 倡议书
【题型诠释】
如何出题
①爱护环境：1.节约用水save water，2.节约食物save fd，3.公车出行take bus，4.拼车car-pling 5.lw-carbn life 低碳生活
②身体健康（倡导吃早餐，倡导公共卫生等）；
③公益类（如：号召大家给希望工程捐款）
【写作模板】
标题
Dear ______ (称谓)
It is cmmn t see that ______(陈述现象). Nt nly ______, but als______ (现象的影响). I’m writing t call n us students t ______(呼吁) .
Firstly, we are suppsed t ______(建议一). What’s mre, it is suggested that ______(建议二). Eventually, whatever pssible it’s gd t______(建议三) .
Such measures can definitely make a marked imprvement in______(在什么方面提高), we wuld like all f yu t attach imprtance t______(主题)!
Yur sincerely,
Li Hua
题型14 发言稿
【题型诠释】
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
It is a great hnr fr me t stand here t deliver/address a speech. My tpic tday is ______(主题).
There is n dubt that ______(陈述自己的观点). Hwever，______(陈述问题)，which gives rise t______(问题结果).
T remedy the situatin, we students need t spring int actin. We are suppsed t ______(建议一). D dear in mind that ______(建议二).
That’s all. Thank yu!
题型15 新闻报道
【题型诠释】
【常用词汇】
1.be present ( at)出席
2. be absent frm.缺席
3. express ne’s pinin表达某人的观点
4. chse sb. as.选择某人作为……
5. attend a lecture/meeting听课／参会
6. give a lecture/speech做讲座／演讲
7. take part in/participate in an activity参加活动
8. be expected t d.．被期待做某事；有望做某事
9.in case( f)以防／万一
10. be rganized by.由……组织
11. will be held/be t be held将被举行
12. be aimed/intended t d.打算……，意图是
13. with the aim/intentin/purpse f.目标是……
14. sign up/sign up fr/register fr签到／报名参加
15. be invited t.被邀请去……
16. bring sth. with sb.某人带来某物
17. be required t d.被要求做……
18. take ntes做笔记
19. infrm sb. f sth. /tell sb. abut sth.告知某人某事
20. take measures/steps/actin采取措施
【常用句型】
1. Hell, everybdy/everyne.
2. Ladies and gentlemen，may I have yur attentin, please? I have an annuncement t make.
3. Attentin, please! I have smething imprtant t tell yu.
4. There will be a party/speech/cntest held by ...
5. In rder t ..., the Student Unin will rganize ...
6. There will be clurful activities then, such as ...
7. All the teachers and students are required t attend it.
8. Thse wh are interested in the activity are welcme.
9. Please cme and jin in it. Everyne is welcm t attend it.
10. Please cme n time and dn’t be late.
11. I believe yu will have a wnderful time then.
12. That's all. Thank yu.
【写作模板】
______ (标题)
______(时间或地点) saw/witnessed ______(活动). Aimed at ______(活动目的), this activity was well received in the whle schl.
______(参与者) tk an active part in the activity. The ______(活动) prvided a platfrm fr all the students t ______(活动内容一). Mst impressively, ______(活动内容二).
With the students' active participatin and teachers' enthusiastic supprt, the ______(活动) was undubtedly a success.（This activity was highly spken f by students, fr it mtivated them t______(影响).）
题型16 投稿
【题型诠释】
【常用词汇】
旨在；以为目的 be aimed at
出版 publish
文章的要求 requirements f the article
如果 n cnditin that
限制在词 be limited t abut ... wrds
是很受欢迎的 be very ppular with...
任何有关的事情 anything relevant t
大约120字就可以了 Abut 120 wrds wuld be fine
在之前提交你的文章 submit yur article befre
体育专栏 sprts clumn
【常用句型】
我想邀请某人写一篇文章 I wuld like t invite sb t write an article fr...
我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I’d like t ask yu t writr an article fr ur schl’s English newspaper.
你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？Culd yu/Wuld yu please write smething cncerning yur schl life?
有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。 Any student wh is interested is welcme t participate
这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。And here are sme relevant detail abut the articles we are eager fr .
它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。 It carries articles written by freign students cncerning the culture f their cuntry .
这篇文章应该在400字以内。The article is suppsed t be within 400 wrds .
我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。We wnder if it is practicable t have it befre next week.
你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。Yu’d better send yur article t me next Sunday and abut 120 wrds wuld be fine .
期待您方便时尽快答复。 Lking frward t yur reply at yur cnvenience ..
【高考真题】
1．（2024·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，学校即将举办“低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题演讲活动，你要报名参加。请根据以下提示，写一篇演讲稿：
（1）指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象；
（2）建议从身边小事做起，如……；
（3）号召大家行动起来。
试题词汇：低碳校园 lw carbn campus
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My fellw students,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank yu!
【答案】My fellw students,
Recently, sme careless behavirs like wasting fd and leaving lights n all day lng at schl have raised ur cncern, all f which are bad fr the envirnment. T deal with such prblems. I’d like t give the fllwing prpsals t prmte awareness f green living.
Firstly, always turn ff the lights in yur classrm upn leaving. Secndly, dn’t rder mre than yu need in the schl canteen t save every bit f fd. After all, the prductin f fd prduces a large amunt f greenhuse gases. Thirdly, take reusable water bttles alng instead f bttled water t reduce plastic waste.
Small acts can make a big difference. S let’s d smething t create a beautiful, lw carbn campus.
Thank yu!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】学校活动、环境保护
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按要求写一篇演讲稿，参加学校即将举办的“低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题演讲活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
处理：deal with → tackle with
想要做某事：wuld like t d sth. → feel like ding sth.
关掉：turn ff → switch ff
减少：reduce → diminish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thirdly, take reusable water bttles alng instead f bttled water t reduce plastic waste.
拓展句：Thirdly, take reusable water bttles alng instead f bttled water s that we can reduce plastic waste.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, sme careless behavirs like wasting fd and leaving lights n all day lng at schl have raised ur cncern, all f which are bad fr the envirnment. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】T deal with such prblems. I’d like t give the fllwing prpsals t prmte awareness f green living. (运用了不定式形式作目的状语)
2．（2024·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。一位外国游客近日在Understanding China网站上发布短视频，赞叹科技在中国人购物、出行、学习等方面的广泛应用，一位名为 Chris的网友在评论区询问是否确实如此。请根据以下提示留言：
（1）对视频反映的情况予以肯定；
（2）介绍科技在你生活中的应用；
（3）希望国际友人来中国亲身体验。
试题词汇：短视频 vide clip
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
What yu see in the vide clip is all true. Technlgy is indeed everywhere in ur life.
Every day, I g t schl by subway. I pay the fare with my mbile phne. In my schl, every classrm is equipped with a big tuch screen, s we dn’t use blackbards anymre. If I need bks fr study, I will d shpping nline. With a simple click, the bks will be delivered t my dr the next day. During hlidays, my family usually g traveling by high speed train, which carries us t ur destinatins with speed and cmfrt.
If yu have the chance t cme t China, yu can see fr yurself. Yu will be amazed by the fact that Chinese peple are s at ease with technlgy.
Best regards,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】日常生活 、科学技术
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外国游客在网站上发布短视频，赞叹科技在中国人购物、出行、学习等方面的广泛应用，对网友Chris在评论区询问一事进行留言。
【详解】1.词汇积累
地铁：subway→undergrund
配备：be equipped with→be furnished with
机会：chance→pprtunity
惊讶的：amazed→astnished
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Technlgy is indeed everywhere in ur life.
拓展句：It is certain that technlgy is indeed everywhere in ur life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During hlidays, my family usually g traveling by high speed train, which carries us t ur destinatins with speed and cmfrt. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Yu will be amazed by the fact that Chinese peple are s at ease with technlgy. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
3．（2023·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画，拟招募学生现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：
(1)申请参加本次活动；
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
参考词汇：中国工坊 Chinese Wrkshp
中华美食 Chinese cuisine
手工艺 handicraft
书法 calligraphy
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, an exchange student frm China. Knwing that Chinese Wrkshp will be held in the schl, I am writing t apply fr taking part in the activity.
The theme f the activity invlves Chinese fd, traditinal Chinese handicrafts, Chinese calligraphy and painting. S I think this activity is very significant, which is cnducive t spreading excellent traditinal Chinese culture and prmting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. As a Chinese, I have a passin fr making Chinese cuisine, fr example dumplings. Nt nly can I teach participants hw t make dumplings, but als let them fall in lve with Chinese cuisine.
I wuld appreciate it if yu wuld enrll me in the event. Lking frward t yur reply.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】中国文化与节日、学校活动
【导语】本文是应用文。假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读，校方为加强中英文化交流，将举办“中国工坊” 活动。请按照以下提示，写一封申请信：(1)申请参加本次活动；(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解；(3)结合个人兴趣和特长，说明拟教授何种技能，并阐述原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办：hld→hst
参加：take part in→participate in
有助于：be cnducive t→cntribute t
促进、推动：prmte→facilitate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I wuld appreciate it if yu wuld enrll me in the event.
拓展句：I wuld be very appreciative if yu wuld enrll me in the event.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Knwing that Chinese Wrkshp will be held in the schl, I am writing t apply fr taking part in the activity.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及现在分词Knwing作原因状语)
【高分句型2】 S I think this activity is very significant, which is cnducive t spreading excellent traditinal Chinese culture and prmting cultural exchanges between China and Britain. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】Nt nly can I teach participants hw t make dumplings, but als let them fall in lve with Chinese cuisine.(nt als连接句子时，nt nly位于句首引起的部分倒装)
4．（2023·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件：
(1)解释“活雷锋”的意思；
(2)举一个身边“活雷锋”的例子；
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。
参考词汇：活雷锋 a living Lei Feng
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
Happy t hear frm yu.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yurs;
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
Happy t hear frm yu. I'm glad that yu're interested in the expressin “活雷锋”. In Chinese, “活雷锋” means a persn wh is kind, helpful, and selfless, just like the legendary her Lei Feng. This expressin is used t describe smene wh is always ready t lend a helping hand t thers withut expecting anything in return.
T give yu an example, let me intrduce yu t Zhang Jian, a student frm ur schl. Zhang Jian is knwn as the “living Lei Feng” amng his classmates and teachers. He is always the first ne t ffer help when smene is in need. Whether it's helping a classmate with their studies, assisting a teacher with classrm duties, r vlunteering fr cmmunity services, Zhang Jian is always there t lend a hand.
I encurage yu t cntinue yur study f Chinese language. I wish yu all the best in yur studies and hpe t hear mre frm yu sn.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Jin
【难度】0.65
【知识点】语言与文化
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是晨光中学学生李津。你的英国朋友 Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。
【详解】1.词汇积累
期待：expect→anticipate
提供帮助：lend a hand→give a hand
高兴的：glad→delighted
继续：cntinue→carry n with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Zhang Jian is knwn as the “living Lei Feng” amng his classmates and teachers. He is always the first ne t ffer help when smene is in need.
拓展句：Zhang Jian is knwn as the “living Lei Feng” amng his classmates and teachers because he is always the first ne t ffer help when smene is in need.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This expressin is used t describe smene wh is always ready t lend a helping hand t thers withut expecting anything in return. (运用了wh引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] He is always the first ne t ffer help when smene is in need.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
5．（2021·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan Irrigatin prject.
Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes. What’s mre , walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas, glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected here. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject. It dates frm ver 2,000 years ag. Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
I’m sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigu as well as the cnstructin Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject.
【难度】0.4
【知识点】自然地理
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be lcated in；wrld-famus；places f interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance t d…；rare animals；scenic spt；date frm；play an imprtant part in；be amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China.
(2) It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan Irrigatin prject.
(3)Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince.
(4) What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals such as giant pandas, glden mnkeys.
(6) There are many species f rare plants prtected here.
(7) Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject.
(8) It dates frm ver 2,000 years ag.
(9) It is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday.
(10) I’m sure the visitrs will be amazed by its cnstructin.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表递进关系：what is mre
2.表转折关系：hwever
3.表示列举：such as, like
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.（what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals such as giant pandas, glden mnkeys.（现在分词作状语）
6．（2022·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：
(1)向同学们发出入社邀请；
(2)介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；
(3)分享本人入社以来的收获。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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Hell, everyne! I’m Li Jin, a member f the Spken English Club f ur schl. I’m here t invite yu t jin us. This will be a gd chance fr all English lvers.
The club ffers varius interesting activities. We can participate in English speech cntests, watch classic English mvies, sing English sngs and attend inspiring lectures. All f them help t stimulate ur interest in learning English and make ur schl life much mre enjyable.
The club activities have benefited me a lt. I have nt nly imprved my spken English, but als made a lt f friends.
Nw, it’s yur turn t jin us. We are lking frward t having yu in the club!
【难度】0.65
【知识点】学校活动
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance →pprtunity
参加：participate in →take part in →jin in
愉快的：enjyable →jyful
激发：stimulate →mtivate →activate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The club activities have benefited me a lt.
拓展句：The club activities which I have jined in have benefited me a lt.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】We are lking frward t having yu in the club!（运用了动名词作宾语）
【高分句型2】I have nt nly imprved my spken English, but als made a lt f friends.
（运用了nt nly…but als…连接并列结构）
2020天津卷|应用文写作-介绍成人礼活动
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括：
（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）；
（2）对活动的感受；
（3）对自己未来的展望。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
成人礼 the cming-f age ceremny
新冠脑炎 COVID-19
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu.
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Yurs,
Li Jin
范文赏析：
Dear Chris,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. I am writing t yu t intrduce the fllwing adult ceremny activities rganized by ur schl n June 8.
The cming-f-age ceremny, usually at the age f 18 fr bys and girls ,symblizes the march twards adulthd. In the bar mitzvah, usually in sme parts f China, the bar mitzvah als ppular Han clthing, wrship Cnfucius and ther custms.
We knelt n ur knees/kneel n the grund t express ur gratitude t ur parents fr their upbringing. Rite is designed t make us understand maturity and sense f respnsibility. At the event scene, we watched the vide f alumni anti-epidemic, deeply mved.
As a new generatin f teenagers, I must be mtivated t study hard, grwing up t becme a useful persn fr the cuntry t sciety.
Yurs,
Li Jin
2019天津卷|应用文写作-有关西方艺术的讲座征求意见
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100;
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High Schl.
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Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs，
参考范文
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High Schl. As far as I am cncerned, a lecture abut western art will be given in the cming interchange activity in summer vacatin. I’m writing t give sme suggestins abut the tpic f the lecture.
As a music lver, I’m greatly fnd f classic music, therefre I wuld appreciate it if yu culd talk abut smething abut western classical music such as the rigin and develping prgress f it. In additin, sme representative figures and their masterpieces are als expected t be intrduced.
I believe this lecture will enrich my knwledge abut western classical music and develp students’ interest in western art. Last but nt least, I sincerely hpe that yu will take my suggestins int serius accunt and hpe yu a wnderful trip t ur schl.
Best wishes！
2018天津卷|应用文写作-邀请加入机器人兴趣小组
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
1.比赛的时间、地点;
2.邀请他的原因;
3.训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin
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范文赏析：
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. The Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin will be held in Tianjin at the end f July. Hearing that yu nce tk part in a rbtics cmpetitin and wn an award, I, n behalf f the Rbtics Hbby Grup, intend t invite yu t jin ur team in the cming cmpetitin. I am sure that yur participatin will nt nly help us win the award but als enhance the friendship between ur tw schls.
With this email I als send yu ur training plan, abut which I wish t get yur advice because yu are mre experienced than us. We sincerely hpe that we can participate in the cmpetitin as team partners.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
2017天津卷|应用文写作-介绍最近学习和生活
题目要求
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1.简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
2.告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
3.希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th Natinal Games
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范文赏析：
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. In yur last letter, yu asked me abut my study and life. I’m very pleased t tell yu that I have made great prgress in my spken English since yu left. As fr my life, I take exercise regularly and d mre utdr activities, which builds up my bdy and character as well.
I have gd news t tell yu that I have been chsen t be a vlunteer in the cming 13th Natinal Games t be held in Tianjin at the end f August. T be a qualified vlunteer, I made sme preparatins. I interviewed many peple frm all walks f life, which imprved and deepened my understanding f Tianjin.
I hpe yu can revisit Tianjin if yu have a chance. Lking frward t seeing yu again.
Yurs,
Li Jin
2016天津卷|应用文写作-欢送会发言稿致辞
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);
2.谈谈收获或感想;
3.表达祝愿与期望。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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范文赏析：
Dear friends,
Hw time flies! It is tw weeks since yu came t ur schl and yu are ging t return t England sn. As the chairman f the Students’ Unin f Chenguang Middle Schl, I am hnred t be given such a chance t deliver a speech t yu.
Firstly, we will never frget thse happy scenes f studying and living tgether with yu, which will benefit us a lt in the future. Yur perfrmance in sprts and art als has made a deep impressin n us.
Secndly, nt nly has the tw-week cmmunicatin helped us Chinese students have a better understanding abut English culture, educatin and custms, it als has made us becme gd friends.
Finally, may ur friendship last frever and hpe yu can visit ur schl next year.
Thank yu.
2015天津卷|应用文写作-告知捐赠图书
题目要求
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
1.自我介绍;
2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
3.询问对方的其他需求。
注意:1.词数不少于100;
2.请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:学生会 the Student Unin
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范文赏析：
Dear Chris,
First f all, please allw me t intrduce myself t yu. I’m president f the Student Unin f Chenguang Senir High Schl. Our schl has planned t present yur schl with a large number f bks, including bks n histry, literature, sprts and s n. The number f the bks is 10,000 r s, which can be used fr imprving yur knwledge f Chinese culture.
If yu have sme ther requirements, dn’t hesitate t infrm us. We’ll spare n effrt t ffer help t yu. By the way, I’ll g t yur schl t take part in the summer camp in July, when I’ll take the bks alng with me.
I’m lking frward t receiving yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【最新模拟】
（2023·天津红桥·统考二模）假定你要参加班级英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是“Time Lst Can Nt Be Recalled”。请你写一篇英文演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 你对题目的理解；
2. 以一个事例说明；
3. 总结发言。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Time Lst Can Nt Be Recalled
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Time Lst Can Nt Be Recalled
As this tpic indicates, time is valuable and can't get back nce it passes by.
I'll never frget last summer vacatin, when I was addicted t nline games. Having played day and night, I ignred all my hmewrk. Hw time flew! When I returned t schl in the new term, I felt myself left far behind by my classmates in studies, which greatly discuraged me. I came t realize my fault. Hwever hard I tried, I still culdn't make up fr the lst time.
I d hpe my stry can remind us all t treasure time and make full use f it t imprve urselves.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇题目是“Time Lst Can Nt Be Recalled”的英文演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
无价的：valuable→priceless
流逝：passes by→g by
假期：vacatin→hliday
珍惜：treasure→value
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having played day and night, I ignred all my hmewrk.
拓展句：Because I had played day and night, I ignred all my hmewrk.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As this tpic indicates, time is valuable and can't get back nce it passes by.（由As引导的方式状语从句）
【高分句型2】I'll never frget last summer vacatin, when I was addicted t nline games.（由when引导的定语从句）
【高分句型3】When I returned t schl in the new term, I felt myself left far behind by my classmates in studies, which greatly discuraged me.（由When引导的时间状语从句和which非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型4】Hwever hard I tried, I still culdn't make up fr the lst time.（由Hwever引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型5】I d hpe my stry can remind us all t treasure time and make full use f it t imprve urselves.（由省略连词that引导的宾语从句）
（2023·天津河西·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。高中三年即将结束，回顾丰富多彩的校园生活，哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢?请你以“The Mst Impressive Schl Activity”为题写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.介绍活动过程;
2.分享个人感受。
注意：短文不少于100词。
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【答案】
Hell, everyne!
I’m Li Jin, a senir three student frm Chenguang high schl. I’m mre than delighted t cmmunicate with the classmates frm the sister schl in Britain nline abut campus life. Lking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty f memrable activities. And the ne that impressed me mst is the cming-f-age ceremny.
The meaningful event was held n May 4th t hnr the students wh had turned 18. We gathered at the stadium, wearing traditinal dresses. First, ur principal sincerely extended his cngratulatins n us becming grwn-ups. And we reviewed ur high schl life tgether, which was full f happiness. Then fllwed the Cnfucian-style cming-f-age ceremnies —Ji Li (fr girls) and Guan Li (fr bys). Finally, we made a slemn vw t shulder the respnsibilities f an adult.
Persnally, this activity nt nly expsed us t traditinal Chinese culture, but als mtivated us t embrace the new identity and live up t ur prmise. We, 18-year-lds, shuld cherish ur yuth.
That’s all. Thank yu.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生以“The Mst Impressive Schl Activity”为题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
高兴的：delighted→pleased/cheerful
回顾：review→lk back/retrspect
激励：mtivate→inspire/stimulate
2.句式拓展：
原句：Persnally, this activity nt nly expsed us t traditinal Chinese culture, but als mtivated us t embrace the new identity and live up t ur prmise.
拓展句：Persnally, nt nly did this activity expse us t traditinal Chinese culture, but als it mtivated us t embrace the new identity and live up t ur prmise.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Lking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty f memrable activities.(运用了现在分词作状语。)
【高分句型2】
And we reviewed ur high schl life tgether, which was full f happiness.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。)
（2024届天津北辰·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次“安全进校园”的主题活动。你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
(1)活动目的；
(2)活动安排(专家讲座、学习防灾减灾和自救等)；
(3)活动感受。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于 100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
全国防灾减灾日—Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Li Jin
Dear Chris,
Hw is it ging recently? Learning that yu are enthusiastic abut the educatinal activity held by ur schl, I’d like t share with yu sme details.
With the appraching f the 16th Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day, ur schl carried ut a theme activity f safe entry int the campus, which aims t raise students’ awareness f safety, equip us with safety knwledge and prtect us frm ptential natural disasters.
In rder t better prmte the activity, ur arrangements are as fllws: T start with, an expert frm a prfessinal rescue team delivered a lecture n hw t react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics f evacuatin. In additin, we learnt the practical tips n disaster preventin and reductin n campus. Furthermre, in the face f danger, we were encuraged t grasp hw t save urselves.
We students have benefited greatly frm the activity. I’m lking frward t yur cming and sharing sme practical suggestins n this issue.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris介绍学校开展的一次“安全进校园”主题活动的相关情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
对……充满热情：be enthusiastic abut→be passinate abut
想要做某事：wuld like t d sth.→feel like ding sth.
此外：furthermre→what’s mre
鼓励：encurage→inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In additin, we learnt the practical tips n disaster preventin and reductin n campus.
拓展句：In additin, we learnt the practical tips n disaster preventin and reductin n campus, which is beneficial t life.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Learning that yu are enthusiastic abut the educatinal activity held by ur schl, I’d like t share with yu sme details. (运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】With the appraching f the 16th Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day, ur schl carried ut a theme activity f safe entry int the campus, which aims t raise students’ awareness f safety, equip us with safety knwledge and prtect us frm ptential natural disasters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
年份
体裁
难度系数
2024
演讲稿
0.65
留言稿
0.65
2023
申请信
0.65
2023
电子邮件
0.65
2022
短文投稿
0.65
2021
短文投稿
0.65
段落要点
首段
邀请目的
正文
介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理
结尾
期待对方接受邀请，并尽快回复
段落要点
首段
表达感激之情，简单陈述的原因
正文
说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的情况
结尾
再次表感谢及真诚祝福
段落要点
首段
告知内容（原因、背景等）
正文
告知具体事宜（时间、地点等）
结尾
表达期待愿望
段落要点
首段
写信目的
正文
提出建议、说明原因
结尾
表达期望和祝愿
段落要点
首段
表表示歉意，道歉的原由
正文
解释原因，提出弥补措施；
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再次请求原谅。
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简要介绍自己，说明信息来源，并提出申请
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突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由
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请求给予机会，期望尽快回复
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写信目的
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咨询详情
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表达谢意，期盼回复
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求助目的
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具体求助内容
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再次表示期望和感谢。
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引起注意，表明目的
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主要内容（时间、地点以及内容等）
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邀请参加+注意事项
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投稿约稿目的
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介绍稿件的具体内容
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期望祝福
Li Jin
@ Chris
Psted n Mar. 15, 202411: 00 AM