初中英语中考题型汇编高分训练训练 50 书面表达(话题作文精选15题)(全国通用)（附答案）

这是一份初中英语中考题型汇编高分训练训练 50 书面表达(话题作文精选15题)(全国通用)（附答案），共21页。
(一)
根据要求完成大作文, 词数: 80～100词.
请以 “I Have Changed A Lt!”为题, 从外貌、性格、爱好或其他方面谈谈你这几年的变化.
I Have Changed A Lt!
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I Have Changed A Lt!
Time ges by. I grw up every day. Of curse I have changed a lt in the last few years. Let me shw yu my changes.
I used t be shrt, but I’m much taller nw. I think this change is really great. And I used t be very shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. When I talked t peple, my face ften turned red. Nw I’m much mre utging and that makes me mre ppular. Nw I can give a speech in frnt f the whle schl. I als make lts f friends. As fr my hbby, I used t like reading bks. But nw I’m mre interested in playing sprts. That’s because ding sprts is nt nly exciting but als helpful fr my health. I think the biggest change is that I wrk harder than befre. I used t hate study. A year ag, my head teacher talked t me in persn. He let me knw the imprtance f study. Then, I decided t change. Nw, bth my parents and my teachers are prud f me. I als feel gd abut myself.
Generally speaking, peple sure change. I believe my life will be better and better.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文.要求以“I Have Changed A Lt!”为题,介绍自己的变化.注意要点齐全,可适当发挥.
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时.作文可分别从外貌、性格、爱好等方面描述自己的变化.要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误.
(二)
时光荏苒,回望充满很多回忆的成长之路,也一定是你的蜕变之路.请结合生活实际,谈谈对你影响最大的一次改变和自己的感受.
要求:
1.书写规范,表达连贯,可根据内容适当发挥.
2.文中不得出现真实的地区、学校及姓名.
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Life is full f ups and dwns. Fr me, learning frm unavidable difficulties and making changes are the mst imprtant and meaningful.
Last year, I went abrad fr sightseeing with my parents. While traveling, I was s excited abut the attractive scenery that I failed t stay clse t my parents and lst my way. Tears and fear turned ut t be useless, s I had t keep cl and depend n myself. By reading the map carefully and asking the lcal peple fr help, I succeeded in finding the plice statin and the prblem was slved sn.
Frm the experience, I’ve changed a lt. I becme mre independent and braver, because I knw independence and curage can help me vercme difficulties and get prepared fr the challenges ahead.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,谈谈对你影响最大的一次改变和自己的感受;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”;
③提示:考生应根据话题提示要点,发挥想象,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点.
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图.总写,改变的意义;
第二步,具体阐述遇到的困难和事情的经过.
第三步,书写感受,结束全文.
[亮点词汇]
①be full f ups and dwns充满了起伏
②be excited abut对……感到兴奋
③turn ut结果是,证明是
④depend n依靠
⑤succeed in ding sth. 成功地做某事
vercme difficulties and get prepared fr the challenges ahead 克服困难,为未来的挑战做好准备.
[高分句型]
①learning frm unavidable difficulties and making changes are the mst imprtant and meaningful.(动名词作主语)
②While traveling, I was s excited abut the attractive scenery that I failed t stay clse t my parents and lst my way.(s that引导的结果状语从句)
③I becme mre independent and braver, because I knw independence and curage can help me vercme difficulties and get prepared fr the challenges ahead.(原因状语从句)
④Tears and fear turned ut t be useless, s I had t keep cl and depend n myself(s连接的并列句)
(三)
保持健康的体魄,拥有健康的生活方式对我们每个人来说都是至关重要的.假如你是李明,你们学校将开展以"Hw t keep healthy"为题的主题演讲.请你从健康饮食,体育锻炼和好的生活习惯等方面写一篇演讲稿.
要求:1.语言通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名,校名和地名等) ;
3.词数: 不少于70词.开头已经给出.不计入总字数.(请把标题和已给出的开头抄写在答题卡上)
Hw t keep healthy
Hi, Everyne, I'm glad t give a speech here. My tpic is "Hw t keep healthy"._______________________
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Hi, Everyne, I'm glad t give a speech here. My tpic is "Hw t keep healthy". As students, we shuld nt nly study hard but als have strng and healthy bdies. S it is very imprtant t develp a healthy living habit. And there are many things we can d in ur daily life t keep healthy.
First, keep ding exercise. It can help yu reduce pressure and make yur bdy strng. Jgging, walking after meals and dancing are gd chice.
Secnd, Develp a gd eating habit. Eat mre fresh vegetables and fruit instead f junk fd and sugar.
Third, Enugh and gd sleep is gd fr ur health. S dn’t stay up late.
I hpe my advice can help yu. Thanks fr listening.
【详解】本文要求以"Hw t keep healthy"为题写一篇演讲稿,内容从健康饮食,体育锻炼和好的生活习惯等方面去表达.文章时态要用一般现在时,人称主要用第一、第三人称.在写作的时候,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性.同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;词汇、句式要丰富多样,避免句式单一.在提出建议时,可以使用first,secnd⋅⋅⋅进行列举,使文章显得更加条理.最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求;检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确,语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误.
点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡.在提出建议时,可以使用first,secnd⋅⋅⋅进行列举,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;条理性更强.最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误.
(四)
云“百善孝为先”,自古以来“孝文化”承载着中华传统美德.“孝”字老在上,子在下,请结合自身经历,以 “Respecting the elders”为题写一篇短文.
注意:
90词左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
内容中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
开头已写好,不计入总词数.
参考词汇:filial piety 孝顺 virtue 美德 respnsibility 责任
Respecting the elders
Thrugh the histry, being filial and respectful t the elders has been a traditinal virtue f the Chinese natin._______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
Respecting the elders
Thrugh the histry, being filial and respectful t the elders has been a traditinal virtue f the Chinese natin.
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip t Beidaihe. On Saturday mrning, tgether with my grandparents, I searched the Internet fr the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and sme htel infrmatin. In the afternn, I went t the train statin and managed t buy tw tickets fr my grandparents althugh there was a lng queue. After dinner, I packed int the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clthes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next mrning, I went t the statin t see them ff. Waving gdbye t them n the platfrm, I felt happy fr them and wished them a safe jurney.
Respecting the ld and cherishing the yung is a traditinal Chinese virtue. I am prud f what I have dne fr my grandparents.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作.在写作时应承接短文开头;要求我们关于“孝”这个这个主题,并联系实际,发表自己的观点.
2.写作指导:本文应该以第一人称为主来叙述;时态采用一般过去时为主;紧贴题目要求和文章主旨;语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使行文连贯、自然.
(五)
英国怀特学校下学期组织学生来你校学习了解中国文化,请你以李明的身份给该校校长Mr. Green写一封邮件,介绍你校的相关活动安排及其理由.
要求:
1. 介绍不少于两个有关中国文化的活动及安排理由;
2. 词数:80－120词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称.
参考要点:
1.活动计划(打乒乓、包饺子……)
2. 安排理由(非常流行、带来好运……)
3. …….
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m glad that yu’ll cme t ur schl fr a visit next term. _______________________________________
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I’m lking frward t yur cming.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m glad that yu’ll cme t ur schl fr a visit next term． Nw I’ll intrduce smething abut the activities and the meanings f them．
Since ping-png is ppular in bth Britain and China,we arrange a ping-png game fr the students．They can learn frm each ther. What’s mre,they’ll have a chance t make and taste the traditinal Chinese fd．All the students will wrk tgether t make dumplings and have a big dinner．In ur culture,dumplings are nt nly a kind f delicius fd but als a symbl f gd luck．I think they will enjy their time here．
I’m lking frward t yur cming．
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ming
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给英国怀特学校的校长Green 先生写一封信,介绍他们学校的学生来你校参观时的活动安排以及理由.通过审题可知,这篇作文的主要内容有以下几个方面:首先介绍不少于两个关于中国文化的活动,如打乒乓球、包饺子等;然后叙述安排这样的活动的理由.根据表达要点充实写作内容,使文意完整.整篇作文应主要使用一般现在时态,根据表达的需要使用适当的人称,注意谓语动词的正确形式.写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语.而应从句子的整体结构考虑,使用恰当的词汇和句型.句式表达以简单句为基础,穿插复合句,如宾语从句、定语从句等,提升文章档次.语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅.
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文.短文内容完整,符合题目要求.短文主要分三段,第一段对怀特学校学生们的到来表示欢迎(题目给出),然后作者一句话引出了文章的主题,Nw I’ll intrduce smething abut the activities and the meanings f them．.第二段是文章的主体部分,这一段中介绍了学校的活动安排:打乒乓球和包饺子,并阐述了安排这些活动的理由.这一段占篇幅最大,里面使用了较丰富的句式,如Since ping-png is ppular in bth Britain and China, we arrange a ping-png game fr the students中Since引导原因状语从句;All the students will wrk tgether t make dumplings and have a big dinner中动词不定式作目的状语;In ur culture, dumplings are nt nly a kind f delicius fd but als a symbl f gd luck中使用了nt nly…but als...句式.最后一段作者用一句话表达了自己的期望.整篇文章结构合理、层次清晰,语句表达准确,意思连贯.
(六)
2020年一场突如其来的疫情,暂时改变了我们原定的运行轨迹,开学延期,最长寒假,线上学习,这对学生来说完全是一场自律能力的考验.假如你是李华,请用英语谈谈在家上网课期间的活动以及为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处.
提示词语:self-disciplined(自律的),plan, gal, habit, imprve, benefit
Self-discipline matters a lt during taking nline curses. _________________________________________
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Self-discipline matters a lt during taking nline curses. When I had nline curses at hme, I had t take different curses, finish hmewrk and d sme exercise every day. I usually made a plan in advance t make it easier t finish the tasks that I needed t d every day. After finishing all the tasks, I develped the habit f ging t bed early and getting up early.
I have benefited a lt frm being self-disciplined. First f all, I have had many gd habits, which makes my life easier and mre regular. Secndly, my life and my study have been well rganized s that a lt f time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me fr a better and brighter future. In the future, I will cntinue t be a self-disciplined persn.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时按记叙文格式写.在写作时开头介绍自理的重要性及我如何做到自理的人.第二段介绍我可以从自律中获得的好处.
2. 写作指导:例文采用两段式;用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般过去时和现在完成时,用一般过去时介绍我是如何自律的,叙述完成且条理清晰.写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用.写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.
(七)
伟人之所以成为伟人,是因为他们创造了时代、影响了世界.那么是什么让他们成为伟人呢?请结合下列调查问卷,以“What makes a great persn great”为题,谈谈自己的看法.
提示问题:
*Wh is the greatest persn in yur mind?
*Hw has he r she influenced the wrld?
*What gd qualities des he r she have?
…
注意事项:
1. 词数:100词左右;
2. 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 文中不能出现真是姓名、校名等信息.
What makes a great persn great
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What makes a great persn great
In my mind, Yuan Lngping, a rice scientist and a member f Chinese Academy f Engineering, is the greatest persn in the wrld.
As we all knw, Yuan Lngping has spent all his life t the research and develpment f better rice plants. He has slved the prblem f hunger which is ne f the mst difficult prblems in the wrld. Because f his effrt, millins f peple's lives are saved.
During the research, thugh he experienced many failures, he never gave up. He insisted n trying t find new type f hybrid rice. He is cnsidered as the “Father f Hybrid Rice”, but he takes n ntice f the fame.
All f these made him the greatest scientist in the wrld, I think. As a teenager, we shuld set this great persn as an example. When we have difficulty in ur life, we are suppsed t mve n until we realize ur dreams.
【详解】1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生以“What makes a great persn great”为题,根据提示问题记一位伟大的人,谈一谈是什么让他(她)伟大,属于话题作文,要注意首尾呼应.
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第三人称和一般过去时及现在完成时为主,以第一人称和一般现在时为辅展开叙述.写作时首先明确自己心目中最伟大的人,然后重点叙述他或她的主要事迹和重要影响等使其伟大的地方,最后谈一谈自己的感受.行文注意主谓一致,保证无语法和单词拼写错误.
(八)
“是角色,有光芒.”小组合作中,你通常会担任什么角色?请从以下情境中任选一个,谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由,并描述你承担该角色的经历,写一篇约100词的英语短文,在学校英语公众号We D, We Shw板块分享.
注意:文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息.
The rle I like t play
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The rle I like t play
I prefer t play the rle f leader in grup discussins. As the name suggests, leaders are peple wh can lead the prcess and directin f the discussin. Smetimes the leader shuld slve the prblems between grup members. As fr me, I think being a leader can help me learn hw t arrange things prperly, which means a lt t me.
Last week, we discussed the tpic f hw the internet affected ur life. The teacher asked us t wrk in grups and make presentatins the next day. As the grup leader, I assigned different tasks t different members. We all cmpleted ur wn tasks in an rganized way and did the presentatin successfully.
What a wnderful experience!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
② 时态:以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③ 提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干中所给出的提示“喜欢承担的角色及理由,相关经历”,注意正确拼写单词,避免出现语法错误.
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己喜欢承担的角色及理由;
第二步,阐述承担该角色时的经历;
第三步,表达个人感受.
[亮点词汇]
① prefer t d sth. 更喜欢做某事
② as fr 至于
③ ask sb. t d sth. 要求某人做某事
④ in an rganized way 有组织地,有条理地
[高分句型]
① As fr me, I think being a leader can help me learn hw t arrange things prperly, which means a lt t me.(动名词作主语,which引导非限制性定语从句)
② What a wnderful experience!(what引导感叹句)
(九)
某英语网站开展关于“Hw t Imprve Myself”的征稿活动,倡导同学们提升自我,努力成为“终生运动者,责任担当者,问题解决者,优雅生活者”,请根据以下图示内容积极投稿.
要求:
1.词数80~100;
2.请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥;
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰.
Hw t Imprve Myself
Life is really a lng lessn, s I have t imprve myself.
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Hw t Imprve Myself
Life is really a lng lessn, s I have t imprve myself.
First, I need t exercise ne hur every day. It is bad t stay at hme and play games fr a lng time. Secnd, I shuld be respnsible fr myself and my family. I shuld be independent instead f depending n my parents t ften. Third, in face f the prblems, I have t take up the challenges and wrk them ut rather than run away frm them. Next, I will develp my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead f being interested in nthing. Last but nt least, I will cmmunicate with thers and be a gd team player.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于议论文写作.在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述运动,责任担当,问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法.
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主,讲述提升自己的方法,要叙述完整,条理清晰.
(十)
国无精神不立,人无精神不强.北京冬奥会结束了,但奥运精神绝不会止于赛场,体育精神也会在现实生活中给予我们力量.请以“The sprts spirit inspired me”为题, 描述在生活或学习中运动精神激励你拼搏坚持的一次经历,并谈谈你的感悟和收获.
要求:1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2. 文中不能出现作者本人的真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计.
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The sprts spirit inspired me
The 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics was ver, but its sprts spirit was never gne, it wuld always inspire me.
I am nt gd at math, s I dn’t like it. But yu knw I must learn it well. T get a gd grade in math, I have t wrk ut 10 math prblems. One day, when I wrked n the furth prblm, I culdn’t find ut hw t slve it, althugh I tried again and again. I was s upset that I wuld give up. At that time, I thught f Wu Dajing, Ren Ziwei..., I knw I culdn’t give up, I must keep n, I must wrk hard fr my dream. At last, I succeeded.
The spirit is imprtant fr a persn and a cuntry. Let’s spread ur sprts spirit tgether.
【详解】题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作.写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“运动精神鼓舞我”这一主题展开叙述.内容要包括谈论自己在生活或学习中一次经历,经历的内容是受到体育精神的鼓舞,并谈谈感悟和收获.即题目要求的内容都要写到.内容要积极向上,条理要清晰.
写作指导:本文写作应该使用第一人称.时态应根据情境主要运用一般现在时和一般过去时.可以根据要求分三部分叙述.第一部分开门见山,引出体育精神鼓舞着自己;第二部分根据要求展开,描述自己受到体育精神鼓舞的经历,要具体,要扣题;第三部分总结全文,表达感受,感情升华,阐述精神的重要性.
(十一)
每个人都曾收到过礼物,它可能是一本书,一张卡片,一个篮球……在你心中,你曾经收到的最珍贵的礼物是什么?请根据要点提示,以The best gift I have received为题写一篇英语短文,讲述你和你最喜爱的礼物之间的故事.
要求:
1. 词数:100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3. 请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息.
The best gift I have received
The best gift I have received is_______________________________________________________________
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The best gift I have received
The best gift I’ve received is an English nvel called The Hbbit. It was a gift fr my 14th birthday frm my friend Jimmy. Attracted by its well-designed cver page, I had great interest in reading it.
Thugh it was the first time I had read an English nvel I fund it was nt that difficult t understand. Besides, I was surprised t find English culd be s lively and interesting. It cmpletely changed my idea abut learning a freign language. As a result, I made up my mind t read mre nvels in English.
Reading is always a wnderful time. The mre I read, the mre I knw abut the wrld. I’d like t thank my friend again fr his fantastic gift.
【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,以The best gift I have received为题,结合所给提示,讲述自己和最喜爱的礼物之间的故事.
写作指导:时态用一般过去时,人称用第一人称和第三人称.写作时,可分为三段式:首先点出自己最喜爱的礼物是什么,长什么样以及是谁在什么时候送的;然后重点阐述自己为什么喜欢它;最后进行总结.注意上下文衔接,无拼写和语法错误.
(十二)
看到北京冬奥会上滑冰滑雪健儿们英姿飒爽的身影;感受到他们顽强拼搏的精神以及他们勇于超越自我的信念,你一定心有感触.请以My future is nt just a dream为题,谈一谈自己将如何为自己的理想而奋斗.
要求:
1. 字迹工整;表达对奥运健儿们的仰慕之情并谈及对自己的影响.
2. 不可出现真实的人名校名.
3. 不少于80词.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考例文
My future is nt just a dream
The Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games has brught plenty f surprises t the wrld. During the games, I was deeply mved by thse athletes wh kept fighting, and never gave up, trying t be the best. They are the greatest.
The spirits that the athletes shwed us remind me f my wn future. I have been dreaming f being an internatinal lawyer since my primary schl. In rder t achieve this dream, firstly, I shuld make every effrt t prepare fr the senir high schl entrance examinatins. Besides, nt nly shuld I listen t the teachers carefully in class and practice mre t cnslidate basic knwledge, but I als shuld be cnfident and hard wrking. Always be ready t vercme difficulties. What’s mre, I am suppsed t have a gd attitude twards life. N matter hw difficult life is, we shuld face it with a smile.
Let’s wrk hard tgether and d ur best t fight fr a better future. I believe that my future is nt just a dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于话题作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章标题及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“表达对奥运健儿们的仰慕之情”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点.
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表达对奥运健儿们的仰慕之情,引出自己的梦想的话题;
第二步,分点说明自己将如何实现自己的这一理想,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,呼吁大家一起为梦想而努力并书写结语.
[亮点词汇]
①bring plenty f surprises t the wrld为世界带来了无限惊喜
②remind sb f sth让某人想起某事
③make every effrt t d sth尽一切努力去做某事
④be ready t vercme difficulties准备好克服困难
⑤have a gd attitude twards life有好的人生态度
[高分句型]
①During the games, I was deeply mved by thse athletes wh kept fighting, and never gave up, trying t be the best.(wh引导限制性定语从句;现在分词短语作目的状语)
②The spirits that the athletes shwed us remind me f my wn future.(that引导定语从句)
③Besides, nt nly shuld I listen t the teachers carefully in class and practice mre t cnslidate basic knwledge, but I als shuld be cnfident and hard wrking.(nt nly位于句首,句子用部分倒装结构)
④N matter hw difficult life is, we shuld face it with a smile.(n matter hw引导让步状语从句)
(十三)
请根据以下提示以Mzart为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况.
莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家.他于1756年出生于奥地利.不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴,还可以演奏小提琴.他的家人带着他在欧洲(Eurpe)许多城市进行巡演.他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲,然而他变得很穷,并且在1791年, 年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了.和施特劳斯(Jhann Strauss)父子一样,他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家,许多人仍然认为他的曲子是完美的.
要求:
1, 词数80左右
2, 文章要包含所有要点.不能有遗漏.
Mzart
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Mzart
Mzart was a very imprtant cmpser. He was brn in Austria in 1756. Befre he was six, he culd play nt nly the pian, but als the vilin. His family tk him arund Eurpe and he gave cncerts in many cities. He wrte hundreds f beautiful pieces f music, but he became very pr and died in 1791 when he was nly 35. Like Jhann Strauss, father and sn, he was a great Eurpean musician, and many peple still think his music is perfectin.
【详解】1. 题干解读.题目要求以Mzart为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况,属于记叙文写作.写作时需围绕提示内容,介绍清楚莫扎特短暂而辉煌的人生.做到表达条理,重点突出.
2. 写作指导.本文是话题作文,要求音乐家莫扎特的情况,需用第三人称和一般过去时进行写作.写作时需结合提示内容,但不要逐字翻译,适当地展开合理的想象,介绍清楚莫扎特短暂而辉煌的人生,使语句通顺,内容充实,思路清晰,行文连贯,符合逻辑.
(十四)
庚子新春,新冠(nvel crnavirus)肆虐,举国上下、万众一心,积极投入到抗疫保卫战当中去.很多人在这场没有硝烟的战争中做出的努力,令我们感动.他们中有一线的医护人员、有教师、有社区工作人员、有志愿者、有外卖小哥等.本周五你们将召开以抗疫为主题的班会,请以The greatest her in my mind is______为题,谈谈你心目中的抗疫英雄.
【要求】
1.确定主题,说明原因;
2.围绕主题,进行叙述或阐述;
3.词数80-100.
【注意】
1.补全标题(参考词语:a dctr, a driver, a teacher, a delivery man, a vlunteer等);
2.可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以阐述具体观点;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
5.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名.
The greatest her in my mind is ______
During the breakut f the nvel crnavirus, there are s many peple wh have gne all ut fr fighting. I think the greatest her in my mind is______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
The greatest her in my mind is the security guard
During the breakut f the nvel crnavirus, there are s many peple wh have gne all ut fr fighting. I think the greatest her in my mind is the security guard. He kept wrking n his pst withut cmplaint. When we were stuck at hme, he stayed at the gate f the cmmunity day and night. He nt nly tk ur temperature, but als recrded the infrmatin f each visitr.
He risked his wn life fr ur safety and made cntributins t keeping the virus frm spreading. His spirit f dedicatin has influenced me a lt. It is his strng sense f respnsibility that mved me. His effrts always remind me t treasure the peaceful life that we are living nw. When I grw up, I will spare n effrt t help peple arund me.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,根据举国上下,抗击疫情的情况,本周五你们将召开以抗疫为主题的班会, 请以The greatest her in my mind is______为题, 谈谈你心目中的抗疫英雄.首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作.
2.例文点评:本文时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时,人称主要为第三人称.文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯.
3.高分亮点:
短语: at hme,at the gate f,day and night,nt nly…but als…,a lt,grw up.
句型:He kept wrking n his pst withut cmplaint．他毫无怨言地继续工作.keep n ding sth继续做某事.
He nt nly tk ur temperature, but als recrded the infrmatin f each visitr. 他不仅给我们量了体温,还记录了每位来访者的信息.nt nly…but als…不仅……而且…….
(十五)
Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “The ________ I want t recmmend”(请以“我想推荐________”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格.)
在你的日常生活中,肯定有很多给你留下了深刻的印象,如观看过一部电影,阅读过一本书,欣赏过一个表演.请你从以上三个方面选取其中一个内容,向你的朋友作推荐,并说明推荐理由.
(注意:文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分.)
The ________ I want t recmmend
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
The bk I want t recmmend
A gd bk is a gd friend. I’d like t intrduce a gd bk Harry Ptter.
Harry Ptter is a series f seven fantasy nvels written by British authr J. K. Rwling. The bk tells us the adventures f Harry Ptter and his friends frm the Hgwarts Schl. Althugh the characters are cmplex, we get attached t them easily and feel fr their pain and happiness. What’s mre, it makes peple think what they shuld d fr the peple they lve and what is really imprtant in life. Harry Ptter can shw yu a fascinating wrld and inspire yur imaginatin. The strng and lvely characters can help yu build yur wn persnality. I’m sure yu can als learn abut lve and friendship frm the bk.
I d hpe yu will like the bk and my recmmendatin can help yu.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目是半命题作文,要求将标题“The ... I want t recmmend”补充完整,向朋友推荐一部电影、一本书或一个表演,并说明推荐的理由.
2.写作指导:写作时要先把题目补充完整,使用一般现在时来介绍要推荐的内容,人称以第三人称为主,说明推荐的理由并做到无单词拼写和语法错误.