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这是一份备战2025年高考英语考点一遍过学案考点66 书面表达电子邮件(附解析),共12页。学案主要包含了写作佳句,写作模板,满分范文,范文赏析,写作指导等内容,欢迎下载使用。
英文e-mail与英文书信的写法和格式大体相同,但也有不同之处。英文e-mail一般由以下五部分组成:
1.标题栏
这是英文书信中没有的。标题栏中有“收件人”、“抄送”和“主题”三个框。在“收件人”框中填写收件人的e-mail地址。如要将邮件同时发送给多人,可在“抄送”框中填入其他人的e-mail地址。在“主题”框中简要地概括邮件的内容,可以用一个单词,如:Greetings(问候);也可以用短语,如:Persnal infrmatin(个人情况);还可以是一个内容完整但语言简短的句子。
2.称呼语
如果是同学或亲朋好友间的邮件,可以直呼其名,如:Mike;但如果是发给老师、长辈或上级,最好在称呼前加上称谓或职位。职位可用Dctr,Prfessr等,如:Prfessr Li。男性用Mr;女性用Miss(未婚),Mrs(已婚),Ms(不知婚否)。
3.正文
大多数e-mail篇幅短小,语言简单明了。如果是写给不熟悉的人,一般要先进行自我介绍;反之,则可直接进入正题。要多使用短句、简单句,少用或不用长句。一是便于阅读,再者使意思清楚。如果内容很长,可就重点部分作些介绍,而把详细内容以“附件”的方式发出。
4.结尾客套话
英文书信的信尾客套话常用Best wishes! Gd luck t yu! 等。而e-mail通常很简明,如:Best,Thanks,Yurs等。
5.落款
直接写发件人的姓名即可,且与客套话对齐。
【写作佳句】
1.段首常用语:
(1)Thank yu fr yur letter f Dec. 15th…
(2)I'm glad/pleased t tell yu that…
(3)I am very glad t have received the letter yu sent me tw weeks ag.
(4)Thanks fr yur invitatin t the Christmas party.
(5)Hw are yu getting alng with yur study?
2.话题引入常用语:
(1)I'm glad t tell yu smething abut…
(2)As far as I knw/am cncerned/see
3.段尾常用语:
(1)Please write t me sn and tell me abut yur…
(2)I'm lking frward t yur reply…
(3)With kind/ best regards/wishes.
(4)If s, please e-mail me in respnse…
【写作模板】
Dear_____ ,
I am extremely pleased t hear frm yu. And I wuld like t write a letter t tell yu that .(寒暄句加主题句)
(扩展句一)
(扩展句二)
(扩展句三)
I will greatly appreciate a respnse frm yur earliest cnvenience./I am lking frward t yur reply at yur earliest cnvenience.(结束主体段落)
Best regards.(结束语)
Sincerely yurs,
________
(1)
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. ______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【满分范文】
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. The Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin will be held in Tianjin at the end f July. Hearing that yu nce tk part in a Rbtics Skills Cmpetitin and wn an award, I, n behalf f the Rbtics Hbby Grup, intend t invite yu t jin ur team in the cming cmpetitin. I am sure that yur invlvement will nt nly help us in winning the award but als enhance the friendship between ur tw schls.
With this email I als send yu ur training plan, abut which I wish t get yur advice because yu are mre experienced than us. We sincerely hpe that we can participate in the cmpetitin as team partners.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
(2)
(2017·新课标卷I)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:
(1)时间和地点;
(2)内容:学习唐诗;
(3)课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 人称:第二人称为主;
4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。
5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【范文赏析】
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that yu have made great prgress in learning Chinese and yu are interested in Chinese culture. Nw I'll tell yu the next learning prgramme. On July 20, we are ging t learn pems f the Tang Dynasty which yu are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a freign learner, it is difficult fr yu t understand the true meaning and the culture f them. Therefre, befre class, yu can read sme bks related t the histry f the Tang Dynasty t better appreciate the pems.
Be sure t g t the Lecture Hall n time. Yu cannt miss the wnderful pems.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
(3)
(2017·天津卷)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th Natinal Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. __________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs,
Li Jin
【范文赏析】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. While it has been mre than a year since yu taught us English, I’ve missed yu a lt, thinking abut thse happy mments when we stayed with yu. Actually, I’ve been ding pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart frm my academic studies, I always manage t find time fr what I’m interested in. Fr example, I have successfully gt admitted as a vlunteer fr the 13th Natinal Games, which is scheduled t be held at the end f this August. T get admitted, I have made gd preparatins befrehand, trying t knw as much as I culd abut my city, Tianjin.
By the way, it’s my sincere hpe that yu can spare sme time fr a visit t Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since yu left.
Please let me knw if yu cme t Tianjin.
Yurs,
Li Jin
Writing 1
(2017·新课标卷II)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 2
(2017·新课标卷III)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;
2.报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 3
(2016·新课标卷III)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bb约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 4
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
(1)自我介绍;
(2)拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
(3)询问对方的其他需求。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:
学生会 the Student Unin
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
Writing 5
假设你是李华,父母答应你今年高三毕业后去美国进行为期10天的观光旅游。请你给美国网友Lucy写一封电子邮件,咨询以下事情:
1.不随旅游团的食宿、交通等问题;
2.必看景点与时间安排;
3.邀请她到中国观光。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing 1
Dear Henry,
I'm Li Hua, ne f yur students in yur cultural class. I knw yu're interested in ne f Chinese traditinal art frms—papercutting. S I invite yu t attend an exhibitin f it.
It'll be held frm June 10 t July 10 this year and the pening time is frm 9:00 am t 7:00 pm frm Mnday t Saturday and the place f the exhibitin is at the City Gallery, which is lcated at 118, Jian Gu Rad, Hai Dian District. Shall we g there tgether this Friday afternn? I will meet yu at 2:00 pm at the teaching building gate if yu like.
Yu knw we Chinese have a lt f traditinal art frms, f which papercutting is ne f the mst ppular. In the exhibitin, yu will enjy many special kinds f papercuttings. Maybe yu can learn ne r tw skills f the cutting.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
3. 人称:第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词,使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。学&科网
Writing 2
Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing t invite yu t jin the table tennis team in ur schl. It is knwn that we can benefit a lt frm playing table tennis. It can prevent us frm getting shrtsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As t the activities, we plan t invite experienced players t giving training t us every Friday afternn. At the same time, we will divide the members int several grups t practice at 5:00pm after schl.
If yu are interested, sign up n ur schl website befre August 10.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作指导】该篇书面表达是书信类文体,要求考生按照所给提示进行写作,可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点:1. 确定文章的结构:书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文章的要点:写信的目的;表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态,在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式,如定语从句,状语从句,主语从句等。6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。
Writing 3
Dear Bb,
I’m srry t say that I cannt g t the bkstre with yu n Friday afternn. I have just fund that I have t attend an imprtant class meeting that afternn. I hpe the change will nt cause yu t much truble.
Shall we g n Saturday mrning? We can set ut early s that we’ll have mre time t read and select bks. If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at 8:30 utside the schl gate. If nt, let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available any time after schl next week.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Writing 4
Dear Chris,
I am Li Jin, chairman f the Student Unin f Chenguang High Schl. I am writing t infrm yu f ur dnatin.
In rder t enhance the friendship between us tw schls, ur schl has appealed t the students t dnate bks t yur Chinese class. The bks, which can be used as reading materials r reference bks in yur Chinese class, include 30 strybks, 25 magazines and 20 ChineseEnglish dictinaries. We will take the bks ver t yu when we take part in the summer camp t be held in yur schl in July.
Shuld yu need any ther things, please d nt hesitate t tell us.
Yurs,
Li Jin
Writing 5
Dear Lucy,
Hw are yu ding? My parents have just prmised me t make a 10-day tur f America after my graduatin frm senir high schl this summer, which will be a gd chance fr me t experience American culture and practice my ral English.
As I dn’t like t jin a tur grup, culd yu please ffer me sme advice n where t stay, what t eat and hw t travel in such a shrt time?
I wuld appreciate it if yu culd tell me the must-see attractins and the time arrangement. Yur advice will surely make my visit enjyable and wrthwhile.
Welcme t China at yur cnvenience!
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
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