专题10写作满分范文20篇-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册期末专题复习练习（译林版）

这是一份专题10写作满分范文20篇-2024-2025学年九年级英语上册期末专题复习练习（译林版），共30页。试卷主要包含了时代呼唤英雄，英雄光耀时代等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1．新年伊始，学校英语社团将举行以“Lk back n the past, Hpe fr the future”为主题的英语征文大赛。请根据下图提示，就本学期一次难忘的经历谈谈收获及感受，并写写新学期的希望和打算。
注意：
1．词数在90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Lk back n the past, Hpe fr the future
This term is nearly ver． As the saying ges “N pain, n gain”． During this term, I experienced a lt．
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2．我们的家乡泰兴，迄今有一千多年历史，素有“教育之乡”、“银杏之乡”、“建筑之乡”、“提琴之乡”等美誉。为了探寻家乡文化，你校结合“泰兴元素”在上周举办了为期三天的“文化节”活动 (Cultural Festival)。请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，用英语写一篇关于“文化节”的报告。
注意：
1．短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3．词数100左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Cultural Festival
Last week, ur schl rganized an activity — “Cultural Festival”． I was happy that I learned a lt abut ur hmetwn．
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3．掌握日常生活技能（如烹饪、种植、修理、救护方法……）能增强青少年的自信心，形成独立自主能力，提高生活质量和健康水平。请结合下列提示，以“Little life skills are a big help”为题，用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享。
提示：
1． What life skills d yu have?
2． Which life skill d yu think is the mst useful, and why?
注意：
1．内容须涵盖所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary fr us teenagers． They help us live mre healthily and happily． _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文(先介绍你喜欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议)，向社团投稿。
1．短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3．词数90左右，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy t hear that there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth．
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Hpe my suggestins help．
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
5．梦想，是夜空中最亮的那颗星，指引着我们前行的方向。某英文报正在举行题为“My dream”的征文活动，请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文向该报投稿。
提示：
1． What is yur dream?
2． Why d yu have the dream?
3． Hw will yu realize yur dream? (schlwrk, after-schl activities, …)
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．不得透漏学校、姓名等相关个人信息；
3．信息完整，适当发挥，结构连贯，书写工整。
My dream
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6．假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信，请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。
注意：
1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2．词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t receive yur letter．
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Yurs,
Li Ping
7．唯有不断成长，才能遇见更好的自己。你校正在开展主题为“做更好的自己”的演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请以“T be a better self”为题写一篇演讲稿，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面谈一谈自己的理解。
注意事项：
1．内容必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥1-2点；
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
T be a better self
Dear schlmates,
I am Li Hua． I am glad t be here t give a speech abut “T be a better self”．
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That’s all． Thanks fr yur listening!
8．义务教育阶段“双减政策”实施后，周末培训机构不再提供服务，校内课后服务全面覆盖。为更好地帮学生自主安排课余时间，校网站张贴了一份问卷。假如你是张宁，请根据问卷内容，用英语给校长回一封电子邮件。
要求：1．词数80左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
2．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear headmaster,
Thanks fr ffering us such meaningful chances． I am glad t tell yu smething abut my after-schl activities．
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Yurs faithfully,
Zhang Ning
9．课间十分钟你在做什么呢？近期，一些地方中小学 “课间十分钟被约束” 的问题受到社会广泛关注。你觉得课间十分钟应该怎么安排才更有意义呢？请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法并说明理由。
要求：
1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．请将思维导图中所示内容表达自己的观点，句式规范，字迹工整。
3．可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
4．文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
Hw t make ten minutes between classes mre meaningful
Nwadays, students are always busy with their lessns． Hw t make ten minutes between classes mre meaningful?
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10．时代呼唤英雄，英雄光耀时代。其实，英雄就在我们身边，这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、朋友、老师……他们把英雄精神体现在平凡的岗位中，普通的生活里。请根据下列提示，以“A Her in My Heart”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向《英语广场》杂志投稿，分享你心中的英雄。
提示:
1．你心中的英雄是谁；
2．记述你印象深刻的一件事；
3．对你的影响。
A Her in My Heart
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11．某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，讲述你通过勤奋，获得成功的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
提示问题：
What did yu achieve by wrking hard?
What did yu d t achieve it?
Hw did yu feel abut it?
注意事项：1．文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；2．词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总次数）；3．文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Diligence is a must fr us t realize ur dreams．___________________________________
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12．新的一年，新的希望，新的开始。学校英语广播站正在以“I lk frward t ________ in 2024”为题向同学们征稿，请根据以下征稿内容，用英语向校英语广播站投稿，和大家分享你对新的一年的期待、思考以及如何付诸行动。
内容要点：
★你对新的一年的期待；
★你的理由；
★你的具体行动。
要求：
1．写作前请先补全标题；
2．包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
3．不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
4．词数100左右。
I lk frward t ________________ in 2024
The new year has cme． I’d like t share my expectatin f the new year with everyne． I lk frward t ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．走进艺术世界，感受艺术魅力。你校英语社团正在组织“Enjy Art”学习交流活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图式，写一篇英语发言稿参加活动。
注意：
(1)词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)发言稿应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjy Art
Hell, I am Li Hua． I’m happy t give yu a speech n enjying art．
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That’s all fr my speech． Thanks fr listening!
14．
青春期是我们成长的必经之路，往往伴随着各种各样的困扰。Teenagers校刊针对当前青少年面临的问题进行了调查，结果如图所示。请你以“Teenage Prblems”为题，写一篇短文，分别介绍你已经解决和依然存在的问题，谈谈具体表现和解决方法。
注意事项：
1．短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2．词数在100个左右；
3．短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4．短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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15．三年的初中生活让你收获满满。假如你校英语报邀请你写一篇短文，谈谈你初中三年学习生活的感受，并给学弟学妹们提一些如何适应初中生活的建议。请你结合自己的学习（或生活）经历，根据以下提示和要求，用英语完成一篇短文。
要求：
(1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hw time flies! My three years f middle schl life is cming t an end．
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I hpe yu will enjy yur schl life and achieve yur dreams．
16．寒假即将来临，请以“Hw t have a meaningful winter hliday”为题写一篇演讲稿，给你的同学们讲一讲应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假。
要点如下：
注意事项：
（1）词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
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17．假如你是李华，阳光英语社团提供了两位笔友的基本信息，你想选择其中一名作为你的笔友，请用英语介绍他（她）的情况，并谈一谈你选择的理由。
要求：
（1）所写内容必须包括其中一位笔友的所有信息，需适当发挥；
（2）请说明你选择的理由；
（3）词数：不少于90词，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Sunshine English Club has prvided sme infrmatin abut tw excellent pen friends． I wuld like t chse ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．学期即将结束，学校评选本学期优秀团员。假如你是李华，请写一篇推荐张波同学为优秀团员的短文。要求如下：
注意: (1) 词数90 左右;
(2) 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(3) 表达中请勿提及真实校名、姓名。
Dear sir/madam,
Zhang B is the mnitr f Class 1, Grade 9． I wuld like t recmmend him as an excellent League Member this term．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We think Zhang B is the mst suitable persn t be an excellent League Member． We hpe that yu can agree with us．
Yurs,
Li Hua
19．“双减”政策推行之后，中学生的学习生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标，学校在延时服务时段开展了丰富多彩的社团活动。以“The Art Club I Enjy Mst”为题写一篇短文。
• Which club d yu enjy?
• Why d yu jin it?
• What d yu d in it?
• What can yu learn frm it?
要求：
1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2．须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
3．词数100左右；
4．不得使用真实姓名和校名。
The Art Club I Enjy Mst
I’m a student in Grade 9．
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20．为进一步加强校园文化建设，促进学生全面发展，你校即将组织一系列课外社团活动，请你根据下图提示，用英语向全校同学介绍社团，并阐述开设这些社团的理由。
注意：1．表达中必须包含所给要点；
2．省略部分按要求自拟作答；
3．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
4．表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
Students in ur schl are welcme t jin ur after-class clubs ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe these clubs will be f great help and all f us can enjy ur schl life．
When
What I did
What I learned
Feelings
Mnday
visit Taixing Museum
…
the lng histry f the city
Tuesday
visit Huangqia Ancient Twn (黄桥古镇)
taste Huangqia Sesame Cake (黄桥烧饼)
…
…
…
Wednesday
visit Natinal Ancient Ginkg Frest Park (国家古银杏森林公园)
…
写作要点
1． What utdr activity d yu like?
2． Why d yu like it?
3． What is yur plan? (when, where, what t d…)
Dear Li Ping,
These days I’m ging crazy! My teacher requires me t run fr half an hur every mrning． But I dn’t like sprts at all． I think it’s meaningless． What d yu think f it? Culd yu share yur sprts experience and tell me what yu have learned frm it? Please give me sme advice as well．
Yurs,
Peter
T be a better self
懂感恩
敬爱父母；服务社区……
亲自然
保护环境；关爱动物……
爱自己
健康生活；培养兴趣……
Have a Meaningful Schl Life
你三年的学习生活感受。
你的收获：
学习上；课外生活。
你的建议：
1．保持身心健康；
2．（补充 1—2 点）
学习
（1）仔细计划好每一天；
（2）……（至少一点）；
阅读
（1）多看书，因为……（至少一点）；
（2）推荐一本书；
听音乐
（1）自小就对音乐感兴趣，因为……（至少一点）；
（2）计划……（至少一点）；
看电影
（1）推荐一部值得看的电影；
（2）……是你最喜欢的演员之一，因为……（至少一点）。
Name
Lucy (frm China)
Steven (frm America)
Persnality
creative, utging
helpful, energetic
Hbby
music
films
Her
Tan Dun
Audrey Hepburn
Dream
a music teacher
a vlunteer
基本情况
张波, 九 (1) 班班长;
有绘画天赋，喜欢红色，因为……(自拟一点)。
兴趣爱好
1．喜欢观看纪录片，因为……(自拟一点)；
2．喜欢音乐，最喜欢乡村音乐，因为……(自拟一点)。
优秀事迹
1．富有爱心，上个月把零用钱捐给甘肃地震灾区的人们；
2．乐于助人，这个学期，帮助警察找到小偷；
3．……(自拟一点)。
未来梦想
希望成为一名工程师，为家乡沭阳设计出连接北京的高铁。
参考答案
1．例文
This term is nearly ver． As the saying says “N pain, n gain”． During this term, I experienced a lt．
Last Octber, I quarreled with mther abut the time I spent n hbbies． I thught hbbies helped me relax but she didn’t think s． I felt upset then． Luckily, there were many true friends wh ffered me valuable advice． Nw I can get alng better with Mther and have a deeper understanding f her lve．
Next term, we’ll face an imprtant exam． I hpe t be successful． S I plan t use my time mre wisely． I decide t list my gals and try t make them cme true．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述过去的经历用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述过去的经历及感受；
第二步，描绘新学期的希望和打算。
[亮点词汇]
①quarrel吵架
②upset心烦
③valuable advice有价值的建议
④wisely明智地
[高分句型]
①Last Octber, I quarreled with mther abut the time I spent n hbbies． (定语从句)
②I thught hbbies helped me relax but she didn’t think s． (宾语从句)
2．例文
Last week, ur schl rganized an activity — “Cultural Festival”． I was happy that I learned a lt abut ur hmetwn．
Last Mnday, I visited Taixing Museum with my classmates and enjyed the beauty f traditinal wrks f art． Everyne was excited t learn abut the lng histry f Taixing． We all enjyed urselves．
The next day, I went t Huangqia Ancient Twn, a beautiful twn in the east f Taixing． It was exciting that I tasted Huangqia Sesame Cake． I als saw many ld huses there． Nw Huangqia is well-knwn arund the cuntry and attracts a lt f turists every year．
Taixing is knwn as the hme f Ginkg, s I visited Natinal Ancient Ginkg Frest Park n Wednesday． It was wnderful t see lts f ancient ginkg trees there． I was very happy t learn that the ginkg prducts in ur hmetwn are very ppular．
These experiences have nt nly helped me have a better understanding f ur city, but als left a lasting influence n my heart and mind．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述经历用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分段介绍周一至周三的行程以及学到的东西；
第二步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①traditinal wrks f art传统艺术作品
②excited兴奋的
③attract吸引
④lasting持久的
[高分句型]
①I was very happy t learn that the ginkg prducts in ur hmetwn are very ppular． (宾语从句)
②These experiences have nt nly helped me have a better understanding f ur city, but als left a lasting influence n my heart and mind． (并列句)
3．例文
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary fr us teenagers． They help us live mre healthily and happily．
I have many life skills such as cking, washing clthes, making traveling plans and s n． As fr me, cking is the mst useful ne． Nw, mre and mre yung peple like fast fd, but I dn’t think it’s a healthy lifestyle． I learned hw t ck fd by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary schl． Our teacher taught us hw t make tmates with eggs． I als learned cking sme ther dishes frm my mm． S when my parents are nt at hme, I ften ck fr myself． It is nt nly delicius but als meaningful． It always makes me feel prud f myself．
Life skills are a big help, and I will try t learn mre t make my life mre clurful．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点明主题；
第二步，列出生活技能并挑一个细说；
第三步，总结从中获得的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①and s n等等
②nt nly．．．but als．．．不仅而且
③be prud f为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①I learned hw t ck fd by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary schl．（句型：状语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
②S when my parents are nt at hme, I ften ck fr myself．（句型：状语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear Sir,
I’m happy t hear that there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth． I like climbing muntains with my classmates． We can enjy the beauty f nature． We can als make friends and help each ther n the way．
T make the activity mre interesting, I hpe t g t East Muntain n June 25th． Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the schl gate at 7:30 a．m． and g there by bus． We can cllect sme histry stries abut the famus muntain s that we can share them tgether． It’ll be nice if we can try sme lcal fd fr lunch there． In the afternn, we can pick up the rubbish t prtect the envirnment． Then we can g hme at 4:30 p．m． We’re sure t have great fun．
Hpe my suggestins help．
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，具体说明理由。
第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty f nature自然之美
②hpe t d希望做某事
③pick up拾起，捡起
[高分句型]
①Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the schl gate at 7:30 a．m． and g there by bus． (since引导原因状语从句)
②It’ll be nice if we can try sme lcal fd fr lunch there． (if引导条件状语从句)
5．例文
My dream
I want t be an astrnaut． I lve lking at the stars and space． I think it’s where we can learn a lt abut life．
I have tw reasns fr this dream． First, I like hearing abut astrnauts and their exciting trips in space． They make me want t learn mre． Secnd, I want t help find new things that can help everyne．
T make my dream cme true, I will study hard in science and math． These subjects are imprtant fr explring space． I will als jin a club abut stars and take part in science events． I will read bks abut space and keep up with the latest news abut space travel．
Dreams are like the brightest stars． They shw us the way t ur gals． I will wrk hard t tuch the stars and make my dream happen．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的梦想，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这个梦想；
第三步，介绍自己会如何实现自己的梦想；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①cme true实现
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Secnd, I want t help find new things that can help everyne． (that引导的定语从句)
②T make my dream cme true, I will study hard in science and math． (动词不定式作目的状语)
6．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad t receive yur letter． I understand hw yu feel． I used t dislike sprts t, but nw I enjy running． Running is very gd fr health． It nt nly keeps us healthy but als makes us mre energetic．
When I started running, I fund it difficult at first． But sn I started t feel strnger and happier． Mrever, running every mrning helped me fcus better during the day．
My advice is t start slwly and set small gals． Then try listening t music r thinking abut yur favurite things while running, which will make running mre enjyable．
Give yurself a chance t try running, I’m sure yu’ll lve it．
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Peter的信谈谈自己对跑步的看法、跑步经历并给出建议；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，谈谈自己对运动/跑步的看法；
第二步，介绍自己的跑步经历；
第三步，给出关于跑步的一些建议；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①used t d sth．过去常常做某事
②nt nly．．．but als 不仅……而且……
③think abut 思考
[高分句型]
①When I started running, I fund it difficult at first．（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Then try listening t music r thinking abut yur favurite things while running, which will make running mre enjyable．（which引导的定语从句）
7．例文：
T be a better self
Dear schlmates,
I am Li Hua． I am glad t be here t give a speech abut “T be a better self”． Being a better self, I think, means mre than being excellent in study but being an all-rund persn．
In rder t becme a better versin f urselves, we shuld first be grateful． We shuld lve ur parents． We als use ur spare time t serve the cmmunity． If we meet peple in need f help, we shuld lend a hand in time． Secnd, we shuld get clse t nature． We shuld prtect the envirnment and care fr animals． We als d vlunteer wrk t prmte the imprtance f animals and plants． Finally, we have t lve urselves． We shuld live a healthy life and develp ur hbbies． We shuld learn ways t relax urselves and keep a gd md． I strngly believe that a better self can definitely lead us t a better future and let’s make changes frm nw n．
That’s all． Thanks fr yur listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题“做更好的自己”；
第二步，从懂感恩、亲自然、爱自己三个方面具体阐述怎么做。
第三步，总结话语。
[亮点词汇]
①get clse t亲近
②keep a gd md保持好心情
[高分句型]
①If we meet peple in need f help, we shuld lend a hand in time． (if引导的条件状语从句)
②I strngly believe that a better self can definitely lead us t a better future and let’s make changes frm nw n． (宾语从句)
8．例文
Dear headmaster,
Thanks fr ffering us such meaningful chances． I am glad t tell yu smething abut my after-schl activities．
Because f taking part in different after-schl activities, my schl life is much mre clurful and meaningful than befre． In my spare time, I like listening t different types f music like pp music, jazz r classical music． While listening, I feel relaxed and calm, especially after a day’s f hard wrk． I als like painting if I have a lt f time． Every time I paint, I lse myself in the wrld f clurs．
Hwever, it will be mre pleasant if ur schl can rganize mre activities, such as ging hiking, hlding art festivals, and reading and speech cntest． With mre different chices, we students will be mre active and imprve urselves better．
I hpe yu think my advice is wrth taking．
Yurs faithfully,
Zhang Ning
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：根据问卷内容及要求完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，校内课后服务带自己带来的变化，自己最喜欢的课后活动及原因；
第三步，给出建议；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
in ne’s spare time在某人的业余时间
lse neself in迷失在
such as例如
[高分句型]
While listening, I feel relaxed and calm, especially after a day’s f hard wrk．(while引导的时间状语从句)
I als like painting if I have a lt f time．(if引导条件状语从句)
9．例文：
Hw t make ten minutes between classes mre meaningful
Nwadays, students are always busy with their lessns． Hw t make ten minutes between classes mre meaningful?
First f all, we can d sme simple exercises like running r jgging． This can help us relax ur bdies and relieve the tiredness frm studying． Secndly, we can cmmunicate with ur classmates． We can talk abut interesting bks r ur hbbies． It can nt nly strengthen ur friendship but als braden ur hrizns． In additin, if we have sme questins abut study, we can discuss them with ur classmates．
In a wrd, a well-arranged ten-minute break can make us mre energetic fr the next class．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，结合图片适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“课间十分钟应该怎么安排才更有意义”这个话题；
第二步，介绍你关于合理安排课间十分钟的建议；
第三步，最后总结合理安排课间十分钟的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
②nt nly…but als…不但……而且……
③in additin此外，而且
[高分句型]
In additin, if we have sme questins abut study, we can discuss them with ur classmates． (if引导的条件状语从句)
10．范文：
A Her in My Heart
Mst peple see a her as smene they lk up t． If yu ask me wh the her is in my heart, my answer wuld be Li Lianjie． Li Lianjie is ne f the mst famus film stars in China． He played a rle in a film when he was a child． Thrugh his hard wrk he has made a lt f films． He is s brave and careful that he always tries his best t make the actin perfect． As a Chinese he prmises t make every freigner knw Chinese kung fu culture well． He gave away much mney t help the children in pr villages．
Frm Li Lianjie I can learn a lt , such as the reslutin t succeed and the thughts f helping thers．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己心目中的英雄；
第二步，具体阐述英雄事迹；
第三步，书写结语，表达对自己产生的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①lk up t敬仰
②try ne’s best尽最大努力
③gave away赠送
[高分句型]
①If yu ask me wh the her is in my heart, my answer wuld be Li Lianjie． (if引导的条件状语从句)
②He is s brave and careful that he always tries his best t make the actin perfect． (s．．．that．．．句型)
11．例文
Diligence is a must fr us t realize ur dreams． I never realized it until I tried every effrt t win the English speech cmpetitin last year．
It was quite a big challenge fr me because I was nt cnfident abut my ral English and I was t shy t speak in public． T give a better perfrmance, I made full use f my spare time t prepare fr it． I recrded my lines and asked my freign teacher t crrect my prnunciatin． Then I kept practising day and night． Besides, I seized every chance t speak in frnt f my family r friends． The mre I practised, the mre cnfident I became． In the end, I wn the cmpetitin and gt a prize． It was s great that all my effrts paid ff． I felt s prud f myself．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“通过勤奋，获得成功的经历”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明勤奋的重要性。
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次通过勤奋获得成功的经历。
第三步，收尾，说明这次经历带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in public当众
②prepare fr准备
[高分句型]
①It was quite a big challenge fr me because I was nt cnfident abut my ral English and I was t shy t speak in public．（because引导的原因状语从句）
②T give a better perfrmance, I made full use f my spare time t prepare fr it．（不定式作目的状语）
12．例文
I lk frward t making great prgress in 2024
The new year has cme． I’d like t share my expectatin f the new year with everyne． I lk frward t making great prgress in my study in 2024．
Last year, I did nt d very well in my study． I spent a lt f time playing cmputer games． My teacher and my parents were wrried abut my study． Therefre, I want t make prgress in the new year．
In rder t reach my gal, I have t develp a gd habit． First, I will spend mre time studying hard instead f playing games． Secnd, I want t d sme mre readings． Bks are the best resurces t get knwledge． S I will make gd use f bks t imprve my knwledge． Finally, d exercise regularly． A healthy bdy is the basic f ther things． I must take part in exercise t keep healthy and energetic．
I hpe all my plans can be true in the new year．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作。
②时态：本文应主要使用一般过去时和一般将来时。
③提示：写作时应注意包含所有要点提示，可根据要求适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己的新年愿望。
第二步，介绍理由。
第三步，写出具体行动并结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①make great prgress取得巨大进步
②d well in擅长
③be wrried abut担忧
[高分句型]
①I must take part in exercise t keep healthy and energetic．（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I hpe all my plans can be true in the new year．（宾语从句）
13．例文
Enjy Art
Hell, I am Li Hua． I’m happy t give yu a speech n enjying art．
Art is especially imprtant in ur lives． There are different frms f art in the wrld, such as film, painting, dance, music and s n．
My favurite art frm is painting． I can feel the beauty when I’m painting． I can als learn a lt abut different cultures arund the wrld． I think painting is withut bundaries, because it can make us knw abut the styles nt nly in China but als in ther cuntries．
We need art in ur lives! I hpe everybdy can experience the value f art．
That’s all fr my speech． Thanks fr listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，围绕“Enjy Art”来写，注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，引出主题；
第二步，介绍艺术是什么；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢的艺术形式及喜欢的理由；
第四步，书写结尾，提出希望并感谢别人的倾听。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②and s n等等
③knw abut了解
④nt nly…but als…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think painting is withut bundaries, because it can make us knw abut the styles nt nly in China but als in ther cuntries．（省略that的宾语从句；because引导原因状语从句）
②I can feel the beauty when I’m painting．（when引导时间状语从句）
14．例文：
Teenage Prblems
In ur grwth prcess, we will always encunter varius prblems． I wasn’t very gd at sprts in the past． Later, with the encuragement f my teacher, I nw enjy sprts, especially playing basketball． S I am very slim and healthy． I used t have a lt f hmewrk and finished very late every day． But nw I have very little hmewrk． I can cmplete them at schl． Hwever, there are still sme prblems that we cannt slve very well nw． Fr example, I have almst n friends． Smetimes my relatinship with my parents is nt very gd．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：考生应根据图片中的调查结果，紧扣主题进行写作，介绍已经解决和依然存在的问题，谈谈具体表现和解决方法，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，表明写作意图，介绍青少年的问题；
第二步，详细介绍已经解决的问题；
第三步，具体阐述依然存在的问题。
[亮点词汇]
①be gd at擅长
②with the encuragement f sb．在某人的鼓励下
③enjy ding sth．享受做某事
④used t d sth．过去常常做某事
[高分句型]
①But there are still sme prblems that we cannt slve very well nw． (定语从句)
15．例文：
Hw time flies! My three years f middle schl life is cming t an end． In the last three years, I have made great prgress．
Althugh I was nt very gd at several subjects at the beginning, I am nw very gd at them with the help f my teachers and classmates． I have fallen in lve with playing basketball since I was in Grade Seven． I ften play basketball with my classmates when I am free． S I’ve made a lt f friends． I’ve been a member f the basketball club fr three years．
Here I’d like t tell yu smething t make yur schl life mre meaningful． First f all, it is imprtant fr yu t keep healthy, s dn’t frget t exercise every day and have a balanced diet． Yu shuld always lk n the bright side when yu’re in truble． Secnd, yu’ll be able t make great prgress if yu develp yur study skills． Besides, yu shuld finish the exercises n yur wn．
I hpe yu will enjy yur schl life and achieve yur dreams．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时，现在完成时；
③提示：结合表格所列出的要点提示，完成短文，注意避免语法错误，不要遗漏写作要点，可适当增加细节，确保上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：总体介绍初中三年的感受—— 取得了很大进步；
第二步：介绍你在学习上和课外生活上的收获；
第三步：介绍你给学弟学妹的建议；
第四步：书写结语——希望大家都能实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①make great prgress 取得很大进步
②fall in lve with．．．爱上……
③n ne’s wn 独自
[高分句型]
①Althugh I was nt very gd at several subjects at the beginning, I am nw very gd at them with the help f my teachers and classmates． (althugh引导的让步状语从句)
②Secnd, yu’ll be able t make great prgress if yu develp yur study skills． (if引导的条件状语从句)
16．例文
Hw t have a meaningful winter hliday
Dear classmates,
The winter hliday is cming． T make it meaningful, I have sme gd ideas t share with yu．
We shuld plan ur time carefully． It’s a gd way t make a list f all the hmewrk s that we can finish it in time． Reading can help us learn mre abut the wrld． Reading is fun．The Diary f a Yung Girl is my favurite． Listening t different kinds f music is a gd chice． I have been interested in music since I was a child, because it makes me relax． I’m ging t learn t play the guitar． I will see a mvie called Rman Hliday． Audrey Hepburn is ne f my favrite actresses, because she wn the best actress award fr her rle in the film．
Wish yu all have a happy and meaningful winter hliday!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格内容介绍应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍应该如何过一个充实而有意义的寒假；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list f列出……的清单
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
①It’s a gd way t make a list f all the hmewrk s that we can finish it in time． (s that引导的目的状语从句)
②I have been interested in music since I was a child, because it makes me relax． (since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句)
17．例文：
Sunshine English Club has prvided sme infrmatin abut tw excellent pen friends． I wuld like t chse Lucy as my pen friend because she shares my interests．
Lucy is a creative and utging student frm China wh lves music and dreams f becming a music teacher． Tan Dun is her her． I als have a passin fr music and want t pursue a career in music educatin． I believe that we culd have meaningful discussins abut ur musical experiences and gals． Additinally, Lucy’s utging persnality suggests that she wuld be an enthusiastic pen pal．
I am excited t learn mre abut her culture and experiences in China． I am cnfident that ur exchange f letters wuld be enjyable．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要选择哪个作为笔友；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了笔友的信息及选择的理由；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己对与笔友之间友谊的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①dream f梦想
②passin热爱
③enthusiastic热心的
[高分句型]
①I wuld like t chse Lucy as my pen friend because she shares my interests． (原因状语从句)
②Lucy is a creative and utging student frm China wh lves music and dreams f becming a music teacher． (定语从句)
18．例文
Dear sir/madam,
Zhang B is the mnitr f Class 1, Grade 9． I wuld like t recmmend him as an excellent League Member this term．
He has a gift fr painting． He likes red best because red represents pwer and strength．
He likes watching dcumentaries, because he can learn a lt abut nature, histry and real-life events． He als likes music, especially cuntry music． Because it makes him feel relaxed and peaceful．
He als has a heart full f lve． Last mnth, he dnated his pcket mney t the peple in Gansu after the earthquake hit it． He is very helpful t． He helped the plice find ut the thief this term． Beside these, he ften helps classmates wh are absent frm schl with their schlwrk． In a wrd, he is an excellent student in ur schl．
He has a big dream． He hpes t be an engineer when he grws up． He wants t design a high-speed railway cnnecting Shuyang and Beijing, in rder t make ur hmetwn mdern and beautiful． I hpe his dreams cme true．
We think Zhang B is the mst suitable persn t be an excellent League Member． We hpe that yu can agree with us．
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：记叙文。本文主要介绍张波的个人情况；
时态：整体用一般现在时，讲述优秀事迹时用一般过去时；
提示：省略号部分必须有发挥，时态变化要注意。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据内容表述的不同方面将文章分段，并将文中可能用到的短语，句型列出来。
第二步，根据表格内容初步完成一稿。
第三步，重读文章，尝试用不同句型将文章句子升格，并检查文中出现的错误，并改正。
[亮点词汇]
①have a gift fr ding在某方面有天赋；
②has a heart full f lve充满爱心；
③Beside these除此之外。
[高分句型]
①Beside these, he ften helps classmates wh are absent frm schl with their schlwrk．（定语从句）
②He hpes t be an engineer when he grws up．（时间状语从句）
19．例文
The Art Club I Enjy Mst
I’m a student in Grade 9． I jin Music Club, because I like singing very much． I hpe I can sing better and better． What is mre, I am interested in playing the guitar． I can learn t play it with the teacher’s help． Luckily, bth the teacher and the classmates think I have a real gift fr music． They encurage me a lt． I keep practising singing and playing the guitar hard． T my jy, I nt nly sing better but als play the guitar better． I gt the first prize in a singing cmpetitin． I learn a lt frm the club． I lve Music Club．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文的人称为第一人称，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍自己喜欢什么俱乐部；
第二步，详细介绍为什么加入这个俱乐部，及做什么和从中学到什么。
第三步，结束语，喜欢音乐俱乐部。
[亮点词汇]
①better and better越来越好
②have a real gift fr对……有真的天赋
[高分句型]
①I jin Music Club, because I like singing very much． (because引导原因状语从句。)
②T my jy, I nt nly sing better but als play the guitar better．( nt nly．．．but als)
20．例文
Students in ur schl are welcme t jin ur after-class clubs． These clubs can help us relax and make ur life clurful．
If yu’re interested in music, yu may jin the Music Club． The Music Club is pen fr thse wh wish t relax and enjy music． It helps yu unwind and ffers pprtunities t perfrm． If yu are a mvie fan, yu can jin the Film Club． It bradens yur knwledge and enhances yur critical thinking thrugh discussins n varius mvies． The Art Club develps creativity and prvides a platfrm t express yur ideas visually． Why nt jin the Safety Club t learn sme safety tips and skills? It is necessary fr us t knw hw t guard against any pssible danger arund us．
I hpe these clubs will be f great help and all f us can enjy ur schl life．
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍学校的社团都有哪些，并介绍开设这些社团的理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②ffers pprtunities提供机会
③develps creativity发展创造力
④guard against防止
[高分句型]
①If yu’re interested in music, yu may jin the Music Club． (if引导的条件状语从句)
②The Music Club is pen fr thse wh wish t relax and enjy music． (wh引导的定语从句)