第21讲 书面表达之建议信（练习）中考英语一轮复习讲练测（全国通用）（解析版）

这是一份第21讲 书面表达之建议信（练习）中考英语一轮复习讲练测（全国通用）（解析版），共25页。

（2023·湖南永州）
最近你的笔友Mike在与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助，请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件，提出你的一些建议，帮助他解决烦恼。
注意：1）文中请勿使用真实人名。
2）词数：不低于80词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3）语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：share, slve, friendly, respect (尊重)
Dear Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu have sme prblems with yur schlwrk and classmates. I’m glad t help yu.
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I hpe everything will g well with yu sn.
Yurs
Li Hua
【答案】 例文
Dear Mike,
I’m srry t hear that yu have sme prblems with yur schlwrk and classmates. I’m glad t help yu.
First, when yu have difficulties, yu shuld talk t yur parents, yur teachers r yur friends and share yur sadness and happinesss with them. They will help yu slve the prblem. Secnd, when yu get alng with yur friends, yu are suppsed t respect them. Third, yu shuld be friendly t peple arund yu. Yu can help each ther. Last but nt least, yu have t be hnest t yur friends. Then yu will make mre friends.
I hpe everything will g well with yu sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏注意事项中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“很抱歉听到你与同学的交往中遇到了烦恼”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示词汇得到的要点——与同学分享悲伤和快乐、尊重对方、友善待人等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望你很快好起来”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share yur sadness分享你的悲伤
②be friendly t对……友好
③Last but nt least最后的但不是最不重要的
[高分句型]
① when yu have difficulties, yu shuld talk t yur parents, yur teachers r yur friends and share yur sadness and happiness with them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② I hpe everything will g well with yu sn. (宾语从句)
2．（2023·陕西咸阳）
假如你是李华，你的朋友王磊给你发邮件说他最近很不开心。请你根据下面的表格提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件，给他提一些建议，帮助他尽快摆脱烦恼。
参考词汇：
nervus (紧张的), great pressure (压力大), make a plan, g fr a walk, relax …
要求：
1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3）文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4）词数：不少于50词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Wang Lei,
I am srry t knw that yu are unhappy these days.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Wang Lei,
I am srry t knw that yu are unhappy these days. Yu say yu have t much hmewrk every day and have little time t rest. Because f great pressure, yu ften feel nervus. Nw let me give yu sme advice. First, yu shuld make a plan fr yur study and try t find yur wn ways f studying. Secnd, try t find time t relax, such as listening t light music and ging fr a walk. Third, why nt talk mre with yur parents, teachers r friends when yu feel nervus? They may help yu feel better.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，回复电子邮件给王磊提一些能解决他的烦恼的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信目的，简述王磊的问题并引出自己的建议；
第二步，分条给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①every day 每天
②because f 因为
③such as 例如
④help sb. d sth. 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①Nw let me give yu sme advice.（let祈使句）
②Third, why nt talk mre with yur parents, teachers r friends when yu feel nervus?（why nt d sth.?固定句式；when引导时间状语从句）
（2023上·陕西延安）
青少年在成长过程中难免会遇到一些困惑。假如你是李华。昨天你收到你的美国笔友Jim的电子邮件。请你根据他提出的问题，给他回一封电子邮件，向他提出合理的建议。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，逻辑合理，可适当发挥；
（2）意思连贯，书写规范；
（3）70词左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Jim,
I’m srry t hear that yu have sme prblems in life.
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Hpe yu can be better sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
I’m srry t hear that yu have sme prblems in life. Yu say that yu have s much hmewrk that yu have n time t d what yu like. Why dn’t yu talk t yur teachers? If yu d, they will knw mre abut students’ prblems and give yu less hmewrk. Als, yu can make gd use f yur time. Yu are als wrried abut yur health. I think ding sprts can help yu a lt. What’s mre, yu shuld eat mre fruit and vegetables. Yu’d better nt stay up late. It is nrmal t have prblems in life. When yu have ne, the first step is t find smene t talk t. Sharing a prblem is like cutting it in half.
Hpe yu can be better sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作材料已给出，注意不要遗漏材料中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先针对邮件中的第一个问题，作业很多，没有时间做喜欢的事情给出建议。
第二步，再针对邮件中的第二个问题，身体健康问题提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①make gd use f 充分利用
②had better nt d 最好不要做某事
③stay up 熬夜
[高分句型]
①If yu d, they will knw mre abut students’ prblems and give yu less hmewrk.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②When yu have ne, the first step is t find smene t talk t.（when引导的时间状语从句）
（2023·浙江湖州）
假设你是李华，以下是你的英国朋友 Tny 发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给他回复一封邮件。
注意：
（1）邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（2）词数 80 左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi Tny,
I knw hw yu feel.
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Hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tny,
I knw hw yu feel. Yu said yu went t a new schl and wanted t find sme gd ways t have fun.
There are sme ways t deal with yur prblems. First, it is a gd idea t make a plan fr yur daily wrk. If yu have smething t d, yu wn’t have wild thughts. Secnd, yu can jin sme clubs where yu can make sme friends. I think yu will have great fun there. Finally, yu can vide with yur parents if yu miss them. It culd relieve yur hmesickness.
Hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：本文是给建议，以一般现在时为主；
③提示：根据电子邮件内容给出合理的建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，用“Tny的当前面临的困境”引出下文；
第二步，给出合理的建议；
第三步，表达希望建议有效的美好期许。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①it is a gd idea t make a plan fr yur daily wrk.（动词不定式作主语）
②yu can jin sme clubs where yu can make sme friends（定语从句）
③yu can vide with yur parents if yu miss them.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（2023·江苏常州）
假如你是李蕾，刚刚收到一封来自英国朋友Sandy的邮件。她在邮件中说自己想上一门艺术课，但是不知道选什么好，想听听你的建议。请根据表格提示，选择或自拟1—2门艺术课，给出建议并阐述理由，用英语给Sandy回复一封邮件。
要求：1．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数：100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Sandy,
Glad t hear frm yu. Since I’m taking art lessns, I have sme ideas t share with yu.
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Yurs
Li Lei
【答案】例文
Dear Sandy,
Glad t hear frm yu. Since I’m taking art lessns, I have sme ideas t share with yu.
I suggest yu chse the music lessns. Yu knw, learning t play the guitar r sing sngs can make yu mre ppular in the future sciety. What’s mre, it will be the mst enjyable t listen t sme beautiful sngs after a lng day’s study. It can make yu relaxed. And it is als a gd idea t take drawing lessns that can make yu mre creative. And I think it will help yu in ther subjects.
Hpe my advice can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格内容给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，提出自己建议的艺术课以及理由；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①hear frm收到……的来信
②play the guitar弹吉他
[高分句型]
①learning t play the guitar r sing sngs can make yu mre ppular in the future sciety. (动名词作主语)
②And it is als a gd idea t take drawing lessns that can make yu mre creative. (that引导的定语从句)
（2023·广西·统考三模）
假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lucy是月光中学的初三学生，中考将至，她写邮件询问你，如何缓解学习压力。请你根据下面的导图内容，用英文给她回复一封邮件。内容要点：
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 文中不能提及本人的真实姓名、地名和校名；
3. 字数80左右，开头不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
Hw are yu these days?
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Lucy,
Hw are yu these days? In yur e-mail, yu asked hw t relieve study pressure. I have sme advice t tell yu.
First f all, yu can listen t sme sft music. Music can make yu relaxed. Yu can als watch sme interesting mvies which will make yu feel happy. Then yu can learn much better. Besides, it’s a gd idea t ask yur parents r teachers fr help if necessary. At last, exercise is a gd way, t.
Everything will be OK. I hpe these suggestins can be helpful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件，要求就如何减轻学习压力给好友提些建议。
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主
③提示：题目要求根据所给提示，就好友关于缓解学习压力的问题回一封电子邮件，给出一些建议，并进行适当的内容扩展。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，开篇点题。
第二步，根据所给要点，给出一些建议，并进行适当补充。
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①first f all首先
② help向……寻求帮助
③at last最后
[高分句型]
①Yu can als watch sme interesting mvies which will make yu feel happy.（which引导的定语从句）
②Besides, it’s a gd idea t ask yur parents r teachers fr help if necessary.（it作形式主语）
（2023·安徽合肥·统考一模）
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike作为交换生，将于下个月来你校交流学习。请给他写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你们学校并提出一些旅行建议。
要点如下：
（ 1）介绍学校：课程多样，活动丰富；
（ 2）旅行建议：绿色出行，体验文化……
要求：
（ 1）语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
（ 2）不可出现真实姓名与学校名称；
（ 3）词数80—100。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad t knw that yu’ll visit ur schl as an exchange student.
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I’m lking frward t meeting yu here.
All the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m glad t knw that yu’ll visit ur schl as an exchange student. Our schl has many curses, such as English, art, dance, and basketball. After class, ur activities are als very culrful. I like playing basketball. I ften play with my friends after class. We als have many activity grups. We can learn Paper Cuttings, ck and Peking Opera. If yu enjy traveling, I suggest yu g green. Yu can ride a bike r walk. Yu can visit museums and parks t experience Chinese culture. I hpe yu have a happy time here.
I’m lking frward t meeting yu here.
All the best!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对自己学校的介绍，并提出一些旅行建议。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍自己的学校。
第二步，具体阐述自己的旅行建议。
第三步，书写结束语。表达“祝福以及尽快见面”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① such as例如
② like playing basketball喜欢打篮球
③ learn Paper Cuttings 学剪纸
④ lk frward t 期待
[高分句型]
① If yu enjy traveling, I suggest yu g green.（if引导的条件状语从句。）
② I hpe yu have a happy time here.（I hpe+宾语从句。）
8．（2023·天津河西·统考模拟预测）
假设你是戴安娜老师，你的学生Steve转入另一个城市的一所高中。Steve给你发邮件，倾诉他在新学校的一些烦恼。请根据提示内容，给Steve回一封邮件，提出如下建议。
(1)主动问候同学，课间和同学交谈；
(2)课上参与小组讨论，表达自己的想法；
(3)参加班级活动和学校社团(如运动会、歌咏比赛等)；
(4)你希望……
参考词汇：小组讨论grup wrk 表达express
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Diana,
I just came t a new schl. I miss yu all very much. I find it difficult t get n well with my new classmates. What shuld I d?
Steve
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Dear Steve,
I have learned abut yur prblems. I think
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Best wishes,
Diana
【答案】例文
Dear Steve,
I have learned abut yur prblems. I think if yu want t get n well with yur classmates, dn’t frget t say hell when yu meet them. Try t talk with yur classmates at break. In additin, yu shuld be active in grup wrk in class and be brave enugh t express yur ideas. Being friendly and helpful is als very imprtant. Yu need t take part in all kinds f class activities, such as sprts meeting, ftball games and singing cmpetitins.
I’m sure yu will sn be amng friends, and I hpe yu will have a gd time with yur classmates.
Best wishes,
Diana
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给的中文提示给Steve具体的建议；
第二步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①get n well with sb和某人相处融洽
②frget t d sth忘记做某事
③in additin此外
[高分句型]
①I think if yu want t get n well with yur classmates, dn’t frget t say hell when yu meet them. （if引导的条件状语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）
②Being friendly and helpful is als very imprtant.（动名词作主语）
（2023·浙江杭州·统考二模）
美国朋友Sam发来的邮件，请阅读后以电子邮件的形式回复。
要求：
①可适当添加内容让行文通顺、连贯。
②字数不少于80词。
T: Li Ping
Frm: Sam
Subject: What shuld I d?
Dear Li Ping,
Hw is everything ging with yu? I’m stressed ut these days. My last exam results drpped nce again and I really dn’t knw hw t imprve my grades. What’s wrse, my parents always cmpare me with thers and expect t much frm me. It’s difficult t get n well with them. I am s upset. What shuld I d? Please give me sme advice.
Lking frward t yur quick reply!
Yurs,
Sam
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【答案】例文：
Dear Sam,
I’m srry t hear abut yur prblems. First f all, ne test desn’t mean anything. As lng as we cntinue t study hard, I’m sure yur grades will imprve. If yu have any prblems, be sure t ask yur teachers and classmates fr help in time. Secndly, yu can find sme time t have a gd talk with yur parents. And they will surely understand yu. Finally, yu shuld learn t relax yurself. Yu can relax yurself by listening t music, ding running, etc., and ding smething yu like. I hpe yu find these suggestins helpful.
Lking frward t yur gd news.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件中的提到的问题给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提到的问题具体给出相应的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①as lng as只要
②in time及时
③listen t music听音乐
[高分句型]
①If yu have any prblems, be sure t ask yur teachers and classmates fr help in time.(if引导条件状语从句)
②I hpe yu find these suggestins helpful.(宾语从句)
（2023·浙江杭州·校联考二模）
假定你是李平，你的笔友Rse发来一封邮件，她计划九月份来杭州观看第19届亚运会。请根据Rse在电子邮件中的提问，给她写回信。词数80左右。
T liping@sina.cm
Frm rse@mail.cm
T rse@mail.cm
Frm liping@sina.cm
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Rse,
I am ding great! Hw are yu?
I’m glad t receive yur email. Yu asked me hw t learn Chinese well. Here’s sme advice fr yu. I think it’s imprtant t take Chinese classes. Yu’ll find it helpful.
What’s mre, yu culd imprve yur Chinese by watching Chinese mvies. It is als a gd idea t learn and sing Chinese sngs. Yu’ll learn mre Chinese wrds by ding that. If pssible, yu can even make sme Chinese friends. They will be pleased t help yu and it’s a gd chance fr yu t learn mre abut Chinese culture. Learning is a lifelng jurney. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring smething new. As fr gifts, I suggest yu buy tea. It is a symbl f Chinese civilizatin. Yur friends will lve it.
I’m lking frward t yur cming! Wish yu all the best.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将提供一些建议；
第二步，具体阐述这些建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad t高兴做某事
②What’s mre另外
③a symbl f……的象征
[高分句型]
①it’s a gd chance fr yu t learn mre abut Chinese culture.(it固定句型)
②Learning is a lifelng jurney.(动名词作主语)
（2023·河北·统考中考真题）
王梅的英国朋友Tny要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tny给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
备选名字：王健（Wang Jian）；李聪（Li Cng）；张友好（Zhang Yuha）
Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
【答案】例文
Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese. There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.
We always put ur family name first. They are frm ur family, and it’s surely ur Chinese traditin. Then given names cme last. Secndly, I prefer Li Cng as yur Chinese name. I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. Just like yu! As far as I am cncerned, the names are the culture f a cuntry. A gd name stands fr a gd luck.
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求针对邮件内容给出答复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学好中文的必要性；
第二步，介绍中国的姓名文化并为对方推荐一个名字；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①imprtant and useful重要的和有用的
②Chinese traditin中国传统
③stand fr代表
[高分句型]
①There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.（There is n dubt that...句型）
②I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. （省略that的宾语从句）
（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yurs, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
（2022·广西河池·统考中考真题）
今年4月，教育部颁发了《义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）》。从2022年秋季学期起，多种劳动技能将纳入中小学课程，引发同学们的热议和关注。假如你是李华，请根据下面内容对即将开设的劳动课（labr classes）写一封信给校长，提出你的想法及建议。
1.感觉非常高兴及兴奋。从中可以学到一些劳动技能，学会照顾自己（learn sme labr skills, lk after）。
2.希望学校能提供给每班劳动课的场地。每周开课两节。由生活经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种菜……（补充两个内容）（prvide ... fr, with rich experience, teach）。
3.希望学校在期末举行各种劳动技能比赛；邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果（at the end f, hld, labr achievements）。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2.内容需包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰；
4.词数100左右。（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。）
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are ging t have labr classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing t yu t share my ideas abut the cming labr classes.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all my pinins. We’re lking frward t the classes. Thank yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are ging t have labr classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing t yu t share my ideas abut the cming labr classes.
I feel very happy and excited. I think we can learn sme labr skills and learn t lk after urselves. I hpe the schl can prvide a place fr each class t wrk. The schl can have tw classes a week. The teachers with rich experience teach students hw t ck, grw vegetables, wash clthes, clean the huse and ther simple husewrk. I als hpe that the schl can hld all kinds f labr skills cmpetitin at the end f the term and invite parents t visit and share labr achievements.
That’s all my pinins. We’re lking frward t the classes. Thank yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信类写作。书信的第一段和第三段已给出，第二段则需要包含题目中所给的三个要点，缺一不可。
2.写作指导：本文应使用第一人称书写；时态采用一般现在时；在展开写第二段的时候需要用到括号中的所给内容，并在第二点中进行适当拓展。写作过程中需体现词汇及句式的多样性，同时保证叙述过程条理清晰。
14．（2022·湖北十堰·统考中考真题）
假设你叫李华，即将从初中毕业。请你根据下面表格中的信息给校长写一封信，谈谈你对学校的一些看法。
提示词：schlyard校园
要求：1.短文应涵盖上述所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。
3.不得在文中出现学校名称和人名。
4.词数80-100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing t shw my sincere gratitude t yu fr the prgress I have made in the past three years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr./Ms. Headmaster,
I am writing t shw my sincere gratitude t yu fr the prgress I have made in the past three years. I am writing t tell yu sme things that have affected ur schl life.
There are many advantages in ur schl. We have excellent teachers and friendly classmates. Our schlyard is beautiful and big. But there are still sme prblems. First f all, we are faced with endless hmewrk every day. Sme students have t stay up very late t deal with it, which makes us have less rest time. Secndly, as we all knw, clrful ut-f-class activities are f great imprtance t ur healthy grwth, but we can hardly spare time t participate in them.
In my pinin, we shuld have mre free time t balance ur study and life. We shuld have mre clrful and meaningful activities.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，写信给校长谈谈学校的优点与不足，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，首尾两端已给出；第二段介绍学校的优点与不足；第三段给出建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
15．（2022·四川自贡·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫，希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示理解和安慰；
2. 建议：正确认识自己的不足；处理好和父母的关系；处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系；
3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Hw’s everything ging?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m srry t hear that yu have difficulty getting alng with thers. It’s cmmn t have the feeling. Take it easy. I’ll give yu sme advice.
First, yu shuld get a thrugh understanding f yurself: aware f yur strength and weakness. Secnd, yu shuld cmmunicate with yur parents. Tell them yur feelings s that they will understand yu better. Third, yu can take part in sme activities with yur classmates. It will help yu find mre abut yur classmates and they can learn mre abut yu t. Then yu can becme friends.
I hpe these suggestins can help yu.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Mike交友方面的问题提出合理的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段表达安慰和理解；第二段根据提示材料提出合理的建议；最后一段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
16．（2022·北京·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, plite, gift, chpsticks
提示问题：· What d we d when we meet peple fr the first time?
· Hw d we behave prperly at table?
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in Chinese scial manners. China is a cuntry with a lng histry, s there are many custms here. Let me tell yu sme f them.
Firstly, yu are suppsed t shake hands when yu meet smene fr the first time. Secndly, yu shuld bring a gift when yu are invited t a party and be sure t arrive n time r a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when yu eat meals with thers, it’s rude t pint at thers with yur chpsticks. And dn’t make nise when yu have yur sup.
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题，给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
17．（2022·浙江金华·统考中考真题）
假如你是Li Hua，你的外国好友Frank来信告知他将成为你校七年级新生。请根据下列表格中的内容，结合自己初中阶段学习、生活等方面的经历，回一封邮件，供他参考。
注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80~100；
4. 邮件的格式及正文首句已给出，不计入总词数；正文首句仅供选择使用。
正文首句： I’m glad t knw yu’re cming t study in ur schl.
Dear Frank,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
I’m glad t knw yu’re cming t study in ur schl. Here is smething I’d like t share.
T begin with, yu need t prepare sme ntebks and dictinaries, especially a Chinese ne, because yu will ften need them in yur study. As a student, yu have t wrk hard. But whatever happens, stay active, even when yu fail.
And respect the teachers as it’s a Chinese traditin. Besides, yu will be happier if yu get n well with yur classmates. Lastly, it is a gd idea t develp sme hbbies t make yur life better and mre clurful.
I hpe my advice will wrk. Lking frward t seeing yu!
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干表格中的内容给Frank写封邮件，告知他在中国学习的一些注意事项，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段和第三段根据表格中的提示详细告知他在中国学习时需要注意的事项；第四段表达自己的希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
18．（2022·浙江绍兴·统考中考真题）
假设你是刘军，在上周末的乡村旅游中，你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件，反映这些问题并提出建议。
注意：
（1）邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的建议至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：不文明行为uncivilized behavir；编辑editr
Dear editr,
I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Liu Jun
【答案】例文
Dear editr,
I was shcked t see sme uncivilized behavirs when I tk a trip t a village last weekend. Sme visitrs threw rubbish everywhere and left plastic bags flying arund. Sme picked flwers withut permissin t take phts s that they culd shw ff nline. And sme climbed trees fr fun, which might result in serius accidents.
I think it wrng t enjy neself at the cst f thers. Visitrs are suppsed t prtect the envirnment, like putting rubbish int prper bins. And they shuld be careful nt t cause truble t the lcals and keep away frm danger. In this way, a greener, cleaner and mre civilized new village will be there fr us all t enjy.
Yurs sincerely
Liu Jun
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以题干表格中的内容讲述一些游客的不文明行为并提出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段主要描述自己发现的游客的一些不文明行为；第二段提出自己的建议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。问题
1）家庭作业多，几乎没有时间休息；
2）压力大，经常感到紧张。
建议
1）制订学习计划，找到适合自己的学习方法；
2）学会放松；
3）多与父母、老师或朋友交谈。
Dear Li Hua,
Hw’s everything ging? I am nt gd these days. I have lts f hmewrk every day and I have n time t d what I like. And I am a little fat. I wrry abut my health. What shuld I d? Can yu give me sme advice?
I expect t receive yur reply.
Yurs,
Jim
T: Li Hua
Frm: Tny
Hi, Li Hua,
Lng time n see. I left my hmetwn with my parents and went t a new schl. But I dn’t have any friends nw s I feel upset these days. Life is kind f bring s I want t find sme gd ways t have fun. Can yu give me sme advice? Hpe t get yur reply sn.
Yurs,
Tny
Suggestins
Reasns
painting/drawing lessns.
make yu creative…
pian/vilin/guitar lessns
make yu relaxed…
dancing/singing lessns
help yu stay healthy…
Hw t relieve (缓解) study pressure?
listen t sme sft music
watch sme interesting mvies
ask yur parents r teachers fr help
……
Hi, Li Ping
Hw are yu ding recently?
I’m really excited t tell yu that I will g t yur city Hangzhu fr the Asian Games in September. I think it will be a gd chance fr me t learn mre abut yur city and yur cuntry. I’m planning t learn Chinese. Can yu give me sme suggestins abut hw I can learn it well? And I knw Hangzhu is famus fr smething like tea, umbrellas, scissrs and s n. I want t buy sme f them fr my friends as gifts. Culd yu give me sme suggestins abut it? Hpe I culd get sme gd ideas frm yu.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Rse
Dear Rse,
Yurs,
Li Ping
Yu knw, in English, given names (名字) cme first and family names (姓) cme last. Hw abut Chinese names? And can yu help me chse a Chinese name and tell me its meaning?
优点
不足
优秀的老师
课外活动少
友好的同学
休息时间短
美丽的校园
……
你的建议……
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in Chinese scial manners.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
内容要点
参考词汇
Things needed
ntebk, dictinary,…
Attitude（态度）t take
hard-wrking, active, happy,…
Relatinship t develp
respect, get alng with,…
Others
…
Uncivilized behavirs
Suggestins
● threw rubbish everywhere
● picked flwers
● climbed trees
● put rubbish int bins
● …