专题05 投稿征文 活动报道（课件）-2025年高考英语二轮复习讲练（新高考通用）（新高考通用）

这是一份专题05 投稿征文 活动报道（课件）-2025年高考英语二轮复习讲练（新高考通用）（新高考通用），共60页。
投稿是指作者将自己创作的文章、作品、论文等提交给杂志社、报社、出版社、网站、比赛组织方或其他媒体平台，期望其能够被选用、发表或参与评选的行为。投稿的目的可能是为了发表作品、分享观点、获得认可、赢取奖项或报酬等。
1. (2024·浙江1月卷)请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sprts and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1. 介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答：Stand Up and Exercise, Everybdy!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Stand Up and Exercise, Everybdy! Everybdy! Are yu tired f sitting in class all day? Hw abut incrprating sme physical activity int yur daily rutine? One great ptin is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple rutine invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way t get yur bld flwing and re-energize yur bdy and mind. This exercise is recmmended fr several reasns. First, it helps t cmbat the negative effects f prlnged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Secnd, it can imprve yur fcus and cncentratin, making it easier t stay engaged in class. Lastly, it prmtes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential fr verall well-being. S, next time yu feel a bit sluggish during class, remember t stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in yur day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sprts and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。【详解】1.词汇积累厌倦：be tired f→be fed up with首先：first→abve all提高：imprve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This simple rutine invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.拓展句：This is a simple rutine that invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths.【点睛】[高分句型1] Lastly, it prmtes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential fr verall well-being. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] This simple rutine invlves standing up frm yur desk, stretching yur arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. (运用了动名词作宾语)[高分句型2] It’s a small change that can make a big difference in yur day. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
2. (2023·全国甲卷) 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2. 意义或启示。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】 Cnfucius is a well-knwn figure in Chinese histry. His teachings emphasized the imprtance f mral values, respect fr elders, and scial harmny. Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety. The significance f Cnfucius cannt be verstated. His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. Even tday, his ideas cntinue t guide individuals and cmmunities in China and beynd. Cnfucius’s life ffers valuable lessns. He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. His teachings remind us f the imprtance f integrity, cmpassin, and scial respnsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1. 词汇积累著名的：well-knwn → famus人物：figure → persn强调：emphasize → stress基础：fundatin → basis2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, fstering respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. 拓展句：His teachings shaped the mral and ethical fundatin f Chinese culture, which fstered respect fr authrity, harmnius relatinships, and the pursuit f knwledge. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Cnfucius traveled thrughut the cuntry, imparting his wisdm t cuntless disciples and leaving a prfund impact n Chinese sciety. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivatin, respect fr elders, and the pursuit f knwledge, which serves as a guiding light in ur fast-paced and intercnnected wrld. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3. (2023·全国甲卷)请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】 When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. That was the first time I watched a live musical perfrmance. The fantastic players tuched me deeply. I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult t read the ntes n the stave. Hwever, it did nt demralize me. I spent mst f my leisure hurs t practice pian. Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. Even thugh I will nt pursue as my life career, I will still cntinue learning and playing pian as my hbby. It is simply because music is the best medicatin fr my sul.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。【详解】1. 词汇积累机会：pprtunity → chance使沮丧：demralize → discurage满意的：satisfied → cntent空闲的：leisure → spare2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply. I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.拓展句：The fantastic players tuched me deeply, s I asked my parents allwing me t take up a pian lessn fr beginner.【高分句型1】When I was in my primary schl, I had an pprtunity t attend a musical cntest held in my schl. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】Althugh my fingers were painful after few hurs practice, I felt satisfied if I culd play a music piece cmpletely. (运用了althugh引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句)
4.（2022·全国乙卷）学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beynd the Classrm为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 学习活动状况描述；2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【满分范文】Learning English Beynd the Classrm Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm in varius ways. It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%. As far as I’m cncerned, it is a disturbing trend. Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks. Because f their lack f self-discipline, they’re mre easily addicted t chatting nline r playing games. It’s urgent fr students themselves t imprve their self-discipline, and it’s als urgent fr parents and teachers t strengthen the guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，对学生的英语学习活动状况进行描述并作简单的评论，提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累缺乏：lack→shrtage加强：strengthen→enhance就我而言：as far as I’m cncerned→frm my perspective2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hwever, thse chsing reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.拓展句：Hwever, thse wh chse reading English bks and visiting English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%.【点睛】【高分句型1】It can easily be seen that the percentage f students wh chse listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is respectively 65% and 50%. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句以及wh引导的定语从句)【高分句型2】Fr students, what benefits mst t their study is reading English bks.(运用了what引导的主语从句)。
5.（2022·全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1. 海洋的重要性；2. 保护海洋的倡议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Our Oceans, Our Respnsibility When it cmes t cean, its pllutin is becming mre and mre serius. Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin. Ocean plays a key rle in ur wrld. Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature. Thus, it is imperative t prtect cean. First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins. Fr example, garbage can’t be thrwn int cean. What’s mre, we can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is. All in all, it is high time that we devted urselves t prtecting cean. T prtect cean is t prtect urselves.
【解题导语】本文是一篇应用文，就世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿，阐述海洋的重要性并提出一些建议。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越：mre and mre→increasingly重视：place imprtance n→attach imprtance t重要的：key→significant此外：what’s mre→furthermre2 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Wrld Ocean Day, falling n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.拓展句：Wrld Ocean Day, which falls n June 8th, is aimed at raising awareness f cean cnservatin.【点睛】[高分句型1]Nt nly des cean ffer us sufficient fd, but als it maintains the balance f nature.(运用了部分倒装结构)[高分句型2]When it cmes t cean, its pllutin becming mre and mre serius.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]First f all, what we can d is t place imprtance n ur daily actins.(使用了主语从句)
6.（2021·新课标I卷）你校英文报Yuth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 读报的经历；2. 喜爱的栏目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式写字答题卡的相应位置作答。Yuth and Me________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Yuth and Me It has been 10 years since Yuth was funded. Cngratulatins n the 10th anniversary f Yuth. In my memry, it is Yuth that accmpanies me thrugh my whle high schl. When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn. Besides, I even submitted my wn fictin t Yuth. Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer. I d expect Yuth can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报Yuth表达自己的经历，并送上自己的祝福。【详解】1.词汇积累建立：fund→establish沮丧的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’s mre得到：receive→btain2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：These stries can relieve my stress and braden my hrizn.拓展句：Nt nly can these stries relieve my stress, but als they can braden my hrizn.【点睛】[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I ften chse t enjy the nvel part which includes a lt f imaginative stries. (运用了状语从句的省略和which引导的定语从句)[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received sme great encuragement, which gives me cnfidence t be a writer. (运用了as引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.（2021·天津卷）假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了《最美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021By Li Jin____________________________________
【满分范文】A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19, 2021 By Li Jin Sichuan Prvince is lcated in suthwestern part f China. It enjys many wrld-famus places f interest, such as Jiuzhaigu and Dujiangyan Irrigatin prject. Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park is a nature reserve in the nrth f Sichuan Prvince. What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes. What’s mre, walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals like giant pandas, glden mnkeys. There are als many species f rare plants prtected here. Anther famus scenic spt is Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject. It dates frm ver 2,000 years ag. Hwever, it is still playing an imprtant part in irrigatin tday. I’m sure the visitrs will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigu as well as the cnstructin Dujiangyan Irrigatin Prject.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文 时态：一般现在时 结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程第二步:列提纲（重点词组）第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇【点睛】[高分句型1]What is the mst impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and clrful lakes.（what引导的主语从句）[高分句型2]Walking in the nature reserve, yu have a chance t see rare animals such as giant pandas, glden mnkeys.（现在分词作状语）
8.（2020·全国I卷）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1. 人物简介；2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】The persn I respect mst We have a lt f respectable peple arund us. They may be ur teachers, parents r ne f ur elders. As fr me, my father is the persn I respect mst. My father is a teacher, wh lves his wrk and his students very much. He wrks very hard every day but he will als spare sme time t accmpany me and share many funny things with me abut his wrk. When I cme acrss the prblems f learning in my study, my father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lt in his wrk, respected by his students. S, in my mind my father is the persn I respect mst and I lve him deeply.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介： 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）As fr me；spare sme time；listen t me patiently;第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因 2.表示并列补充关系：As fr; and; but; S第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher wh lves his wrk and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lt in his wrk, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I cme acrss the prblem f learning in my study, my father will listen t me patiently and encurage me t vercme the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
高考英语投稿正文满分技巧 对于“参赛”和“征文”的英语作文，常以记叙文为主。分为写人和叙事两种。写作步骤如下: 一、认真审题，提炼主题 认真分析标题或材料所提供的信息，确定主题。注意标题的含义很多，建议写自己最擅长和熟悉的人和事。 二、联系生活，确定要点 以主题为纲，进一步思考其内涵和外延，联系自己的学习、生活实际，确定写作的要点。高考英语书面表达试题凸显时代性，学生要多关注社会生活实际。 三、细化要点，布局谋篇细化要点，使文章更丰满。可以采用三段式的写作模式来行文。最好拟个提纲，以明确主次，切忌心中无数、边想边写。 四、斟词酌句，组句成篇选择适当的词语或结构将要点表达出来，选择适当的句型和适当的过渡语组句成文。尽量使用不同的单词、短语和语法结构，使表达多样化。
一、投稿征文首段金句：投稿约稿目的1. When it cmes t my favrite nvel, David Cpperfield by Charles Dickens ranks first in my heart.说到我最喜欢的小说，查尔斯•狄更斯的《大卫•科波菲尔》在我心中排名第一。2. When it cmes t prtecting the cean, it is well-knwn that cean plays an imprtant part in ur life. 说到保护海洋，众所周知，海洋在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。3. I’d like t submit an article entitled My Favrite Traditinal Chinese Fd which I’m sure will catch yur attentin.我想提交一篇题为《我最喜欢的中国传统食物》的文章，我相信它会引起你的注意。4. Recently we cnducted a survey cncerning ways t learn English beynd the classrm.The results are as fllws.最近我们进行了一项关于课堂外学习英语的方法的调查。结果如下。5. Nwadays, with the develpment f smartphnes and cmputers, an increasing number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm by using them.如今，随着智能手机和电脑的发展，越来越多的学生选择在课堂以外使用它们来学习英语。
二、投稿征文中段金句：介绍投稿的内容或具体要求1. Yur writing is expected t be real and riginal in nt mre than 1,000 wrds.你的文章要真实、原创，字数不超过1000字。2. Fr anther, peple will give mncakes t their relatives, friends and parents t express their gratitude. 另一方面，人们会把月饼送给亲戚、朋友和父母，以表达他们的感激之情。3. Please be reminded that all cntributins shuld be addressed t studentsunin@ qq. cm n later than May 30th.请注意，所有捐款均应不迟于5月30日发送至studentsunin@qq.cm。4. Freign Culture is my favrite clumn. The clumn expses me t different cultures, which nt nly bradens my hrizns but als makes me feel relaxed.《外国文化》是我最喜欢的专栏。这个专栏让我接触到了不同的文化，这不仅开阔了我的视野，也让我感到放松。5. My jurney with The Art f War began in seventh grade when I stumble upn a cpy f the bk in my wn huse.我的《孙子兵法》之旅始于七年级，当时我在家里偶然发现了一本这本书。
三、投稿征文尾段金句：表达期望或祝福1. I believe that with the tips abve we will becme smart nline learners. 我相信，有了以上提示，我们将成为聪明的在线学习者。2. I d expect the newspaper can publish mre classic wrks and have a prmising future.我确实希望这份报纸能出版更多的经典作品，并有一个充满希望的未来。3. We hpe that with all these measures taken, eyesight prblems can be greatly reduced.我们希望这些有效的措施能大大减少视力问题。4. We can als hand ut leaflets t call n mre peple t prtect the cean. The mre peple are invlved, the better the cean envirnment is.我们还可以散发传单，呼吁更多的人保护海洋。参与的人越多，海洋环境就越好。5. In my view, it’s the mncake that has becme an imprtant part f Mid-Autumn Festival culture and a mix f delicacy and culture.在我看来，月饼已经成为中秋文化的重要组成部分，是美食和文化的融合。
（24-25高三上·天津·期末）假如你是晨光中学学生李津，你校英文报正在征集主题为“My Dream University”的英语短文。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。1. 介绍你理想中的大学（名称、所在地等）；2. 你选择这所大学的原因（至少两点）；3. 你为此付出的努力和期盼。注意：1. 词数不少于100；2. 可适当增加细节。__________________________________________________________________
预测1 向校英文报推荐两个栏目
【满分范文】 My Dream University As is knwn, every student in high schl makes great effrts t g t their ideal university fr higher educatin. When it cmes t the university which I lng fr, I wuld say withut hesitatin that Peking University is my first chice. Lcated in the capital city f Beijing, Peking University is ne f the tp universities in China. The reasns why I desire t study in Peking University are as fllws. First f all, many f China’s leading and admirable schlars and scientists have emerged there wh inspire generatins f yung peple t make every effrt t achieve their gals and make cntributins t the mtherland. Bedsides, with a strng spirit f innvatin and scientific research, the university prvides students with a platfrm where they can nt nly get access t advanced technlgy and knwledge but als braden their hrizns. There’s n dubt that Peking University has becme the crwning glry f China’s universities, which allws me t have a great advantage ver ther peers in the future. As a result, I have been sparing n effrt t study hard and equip myself with necessary skills since I attended high schl. I will g all ut t prepare fr the cming Cllege Entrance Examinatin and I’m firmly cnvinced that years f hard wrk will definitely pay ff!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇主题为“My Dream University”的英语短文进行投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累此外：besides→in additin首先：first f all→t begin with尽最大努力：spare n effrt t→try ne’s best t肯定：definitely→certainly2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lcated in the capital city f Beijing, Peking University is ne f the tp universities in China.拓展句：Peking University, which is lcated in the capital city f Beijing, is ne f the tp universities in China.【点睛】[高分句型1] The reasns why I desire t study in Peking University are as fllws. (运用了why引导定语从句)[高分句型2] There’s n dubt that Peking University has becme the crwning glry f China’s universities, which allws me t have a great advantage ver ther peers in the future. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
（24-25高二上·四川成都·期末）你校英语报正在开展以“My Dream Jb”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：（1）介绍该工作；（2）阐述其原因。注意：（1）写作词数应为100个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。My Dream Jb______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
预测2投稿征文—我的理想大学
【满分范文】My Dream Jb Everyne has a dream jb. As fr me, I dream abut becming a jurnalist in the future. Eager t wrk in different lcatins, I believe being a jurnalist will fit my preferences. I’d like t reprt many interesting things. Plus, it’s my desire t help peple knw mre abut the wrld. Being a jurnalist may be stressful and even dangerus at times, but I’m sure that I can manage it. T make my dream cme true, I’ll study hard. Meanwhile, I’ll devte my spare time t learning smething abut jurnalism.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语报正在开展以“My Dream Jb”为主题的征文活动这一情况，写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累此外：Plus → What’s mre帮助：help → assist梦想成真：make ne’s dream cme true → make ne’s dream a reality致力于：devte ... t → cmmit ... t2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：T make my dream cme true, I’ll study hard.拓展句：I’ll study hard s that I can make my dream cme true.【点睛】【高分句型1】Eager t wrk in different lcatins, I believe being a jurnalist will fit my preferences.（运用了省略了连接词that的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Being a jurnalist may be stressful and even dangerus at times, but I’m sure that I can manage it.（运用了动名词短语作主语以及连接词that引导的宾语从句）
（24-25高三上·甘肃白银·期末）假定你是李华，上周你参加了你校举办的交通安全知识竞赛。请你就此写一篇短文向你校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.你的参赛情况(含笔试和口试等)；2.你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：笔试written test口试ral quizMy Experience f Participating in a Cntest n Traffic Safety Knwledge
预测3投稿征文—参加交通安全知识竞赛
【满分范文】 My Experience f Participating in a Cntest n Traffic Safety Knwledge Last week, I participated in the Traffic Safety Knwledge Cntest held at ur schl, which turned ut t be a bth challenging and enlightening jurney. The cmpetitin started with a written test that assessed ur understanding f traffic rules and safety measures and it required a deep knwledge f traffic regulatins. The next rund was an ral quiz, where we had t answer questins n the spt. This was where I felt my preparatin paid ff, as I was able t recall much I had studied. As far as I’m cncerned, the cmpetitin is nt just abut passing a test but abut saving lives. I hpe mre students will jin in future events t raise awareness abut traffic safety.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报投稿，介绍学校举办的交通安全知识竞赛的相关情况。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participate in→get invlved in回忆：recall→recllect拯救：save→rescue评估：assess→evaluate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：As far as I’m cncerned, the cmpetitin is nt just abut passing a test but abut saving lives.拓展句：As far as I’m cncerned, the cmpetitin is nt just abut passing a test but abut saving lives, which left a deep impressin n me.【点睛】[高分句型1]Last week, I participated in the Traffic Safety Knwledge Cntest held at ur schl, which turned ut t be a bth challenging and enlightening jurney.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]I hpe mre students will jin in future events t raise awareness abut traffic safety.（运用了省略了that的宾语从句）
新闻报道是高考应用文常考的一种文体，常常涉及时间，地点，参加者，活动内容以及活动感想。对报道事实展开叙述，既不能过于详实，把所有材料充实进去，进行具体的细节描写，也不能过于简略，使人看不出报道的事实，应繁简适度，努力做到层次分明，详略得当。
1.（2023·浙江1月卷）上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动的过程；2. 收获与感想。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us____________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文】Getting t Knw the Plants Arund US Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin. The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species. We then went n a natural walk t bserve and cllect samples f different plants. Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals. I als gained a greater appreciatin fr the rle that plants play in maintaining the balance f ur ecsystem. Overall, it was a valuable and enriching experience.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写篇报道，介绍上周末校学生会组织的“认识我们身边的植物”活动。【详解】1. 词汇积累参与：participate in 开始：begin → start观察，调查：bserve → survey震惊：strike → astnish/surprise2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin.拓展句： Last weekend, I participated in a “Getting t Knw the Plants Arund Us” activity rganised by ur Students’ Unin, which benefited me a lt.【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity began with a lecture by a lcal btanist, wh taught us abut the different characteristics and uses f varius plant species.（运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Thrughut the event, I was struck by the incredible variety f plants that exist in ur wrld and learned abut plants that are used fr medical purpses, as well as thse that prvide fd and shelter fr animals.（运用了一般过去时的被动语态和定语从句）
2.（2021·浙江6月卷）昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿，内容包括：1. 展览时间、地点；2. 观展感受；3. 推荐观展。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文】 In rder t enrich students’ after-schl life, an exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl, which sparks a grwing lve fr traditinal art. The exhibitin is held n the first flr f the schl library. Mst f the students think highly f this exhibitin，which prvides a platfrm fr them t explre the beauty f China and experience the charm f Chinese art. Thrugh the exhibitin, nt nly can yu admire wnderful pictures, but als enable yu understand the art f traditinal Chinese painting better. The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks, every student is welcme t visit.
【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇关于学校举办的学生国画作品展的宣传稿。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 绘画：drawing→ painting 激发：spirit→spark 欣赏：appreciate→admire 欢迎：greet→welcme 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks,every student is welcme t visit. 合并句：The exhibitin will last fr tw weeks,during which every student is welcme t visit. 【点睛】【高分句型1】An exhibitin f students' traditinal Chinese paintings is being held by ur schl , which sparks a grwing lve fr traditinal art. 本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。【高分句型2】 Mst f the students think highly f this exhibitin，which prvides a platfrm fr them t explre the beauty f China and experience the charm f Chinese art.本句是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
3.（2020·新高考卷）假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:1. 参加人员:2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:3. 活动反响。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Crss-Cuntry Running Race________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文】A Crss-Cuntry Running Race Last Sunday witnessed an extrardinary crss-cuntry running race, which nearly drew the attentin f every student and teacher f ur schl. The students selected frm every class tk part in the cmpetitin. The rute measured five kilmeters, frm ur schl gate t the ft f Nanshan Muntain. Every runner tried their best t finish the task, with their classmates alng the way giving them necessary help as well as encuragement. At last, all the runners managed t arrive the finish line, receiving cheers frm all the directins. The activity was highly spken f, because nt nly did it prvide chance fr us t exercise, but als made us mre chesive.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。【详解】体裁:应用文时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主结构:总分总要求:1. 参加人员2. 跑步路线3. 活动反响第二步:列提纲(重点词组)attend/witness/ draw ne’s attentin/ manage t d sth./ measure/ speak highly f/ prvide sth. fr sb.第三步:连词成句第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)表示并列的连词:and/but/r/s… 状语从句连词:because/ if/ thugh/ althugh…定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extrardinary crss-cuntry running race, which nearly drew the attentin f every student and teacher f ur schl. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The activity is highly thught f, because nt nly des it prvide chance fr us t exercise, but als makes us mre chesive.中使用了部分倒装。
4.（2013·江西卷）星光中学近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Muntain）；2. 活动的过程；3. 你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分作文】 In rder t encurage the students t take utdr exercise, ur schl rganized a muntain-climbing n April 10. Hundreds f us tk part in it. It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the ft f Daqing Muntain and set ut fr the tp in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When sme fell behind, thers wuld cme and ffer help. Abut 2 hurs later, we all reached the tp. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with jy. The activity benefited us a lt. Nt nly did it get us clse t nature and give us relaxatin frm heavy schl wrk, it als prmted the friendship amng us. What a wnderful time!
【详解】试题分析：本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。首先写清写作目的，然后是时间，地点，人物，过程，包括如出发，途中，到达目的地等情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义，即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【亮点说明】①高级句型结构的运用，如感叹句What a wnderful time及倒装结构nt als的运用。②好的短语：set ut fr出发,动身，着手做某事 in high spirits 情绪高昂fall behind落后③非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化，如：Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with jy.
高考英语活动报道满分技巧一、写好首段导语部分，言简意赅，主题明确报道的开头部分开门见山，扼要概括报道的核心内容，无须自我介绍!无须寒暄！主要讲清what (事件),  when (时间), where (地点)和 wh (人物), 而在下文则要补充事件的过程和细节, 往往包括why(目的或原因) 和 hw(具体过程)等---5W1H。二、遵循活动报道句式和时态要求，条理清晰注意新闻类题材的一些常用语,如 It is reprted that..., As is reprted..., Accrding t the reprt...; It is estimated that...等。报道一般使用第三人称，不出现个人信息，不出现带有主观性观点的词或句子，如 I think，I believe，in my pinin，I hpe等。活动报道通常是报道过去所发生的事件，多用一般过去时，口吻客观。三、运用“彩虹屁”总结活动的收获以及反响 结尾段注意套用一些涉及评价或积极反响的句式，提升文章表达力。同时，注意借助于倒装句、强调句型或无灵主语是文章的语言更上一层楼。
一、活动报道首段金句：介绍活动的时间、地点、主题和组织者及意图。1. Last Sunday ur schl rganized a friendly ftball match in an effrt t enrich students’ schl life.上周日我们学校组织了一场友谊赛，以丰富学生的学校生活。2. Last weekend witnessed a fruit-picking activity, which arused the enthusiasm f all the teachers and students.上周末我们举办了一场水果采摘活动，激发了全体师生的积极性。3. Last Friday witnessed the extrardinary Autumn Sprts Day in ur schl, which turned ut t be a great success.上周五我们学校举办了非同寻常的秋季运动会，取得了巨大的成功。4. Last Sunday, ur schl rganized a 5000 metre crss-cuntry run, which saw participatin frm students and teachers.上周日我校组织了5公里越野赛跑，学生和老师都参与了。5. Last Sunday witnessed a “Getting t knw the plants arund” activity launched in ur schl btanical garden, which was thught-prvking and entertaining.上周日我们学校举办了“认识我身边的植物”的活动，非常有趣且发人深省。
二、活动报道次段金句：详述活动开展的时间、流程、靓点或场面。1. The running rute started at the schl gate and extended t the ft f Nanshan Muntain.跑步路线从校门口开始，一直延伸到南山脚下。2. As scheduled, we gathered n the playgrund at 8am and travelled t the destinatin by bus.按照计划，我们早上8点在操场集合，然后乘公共汽车前往目的地。3. The day was filled with varius exciting activities, ranging frm track and field events t team sprts.这一天充满了各种令人兴奋的活动，从田径赛事到团队运动。4. The visit began with an intrductin by the museum guide, wh gave us a glimpse int the rich histry f ur city.参观开始于博物馆导游的简短介绍，他让我们一瞥了我们城市丰富的历史。5. What impressed me mst was a histrical dcumentary related t the museum's cllectin, fllwed by a Q&A sessin with experts.但最让我印象深刻的是一部与博物馆藏品相关的历史纪录片，随后是与专家的问答环节。
三、活动报道尾段金句：活动的热烈反响或者积极评价。1. The activity turned ut t be a rewarding experience, frm which we benefited a lt.这次活动最终证明是一次有收获的经历，我们从中获益良多。2. This activity turned ut t be an enrmus success with students thinking highly f it. 评价活动并指出具体意义：活动非常成功，受到学生高度评价。3. The event ffered a unique pprtunity t immerse urselves in traditinal culture.这次活动为我们提供了一个沉浸于传统文化的独特机会。4. This enriching experience deepened ur appreciatin fr the arts and ur cultural rts.这次丰富的体验加深了我们对艺术和文化根源的欣赏。5. Nt nly did we gt clse t the nature, but als we grasped hw t tend t and preserve the plants.我们不仅亲近了自然，并且明白了如何照顾保护植物。
（24-25高二上·浙江宁波·期末）假定你是李华，你校与美国姊妹学校班级共同举办了在线的“共上一节科学课（Share a Science  Lessn）”活动，作为英文校刊编辑，请你为该活动撰写报道，内容包括：1.活动内容；2.学生反响。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。A Memrable Event: Share a Science Lessn_______________________________
预测1姊妹学校共上一节科学课活动报道
【满分范文】 A Memrable Event: Share a Science Lessn On December 14, ur schl cllabrated with ur sister schl in the United States t hst an engaging nline event titled “Share a Science Lessn”. Students frm bth schls jined a virtual platfrm t explre fascinating science tgether. The sessin began with students frm bth schls presenting tpics such as renewable energy, space explratin, and the science behind everyday technlgies. This was fllwed by interactive experiments, including building simple circuits and explring chemical reactins. Students als participated in grup discussins, exchanging ideas and asking thught-prvking questins, which made the sessin lively and insightful. The students expressed their appreciatin fr this unique learning experience, thanking the teachers and rganizers fr prviding such an enriching platfrm. Such internatinal exchanges inspire curisity and fster friendships, making educatin truly glbal.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。学校与美国姊妹学校班级共同举办了在线的“共上一节科学课”活动，要求考生按照要求为该活动撰写报道。【详解】1.词汇积累合作：cllabrate → cperate迷人的：fascinating → enchanting参加：participate in → take part in表达：express → cnvey2.句式拓展简单句变复合句 原句：On December 14, ur schl cllabrated with ur sister schl in the United States t hst an engaging nline event titled “Share a Science Lessn”.拓展句：On December 14, ur schl cllabrated with ur sister schl in the United States t hst an engaging nline event, whse title is “Share a Science Lessn”.【点睛】【高分句型1】Students als participated in grup discussins, exchanging ideas and asking thught-prvking questins, which made the sessin lively and insightful.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Such internatinal exchanges inspire curisity and fster friendships, making educatin truly glbal.（运用了现在分词making作状语）
（2025·广西·一模）假定你是李华，最近你校为交换生成立的国画班反响较好。请你为校英文报写一篇相关报道，内容包括：1. 办班目的；2. 教学内容；3. 活动意义。注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A Chinese Painting Class fr Exchange Students________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
预测2报道为交换生成立的国画班
【满分范文】A Chinese Painting Class fr Exchange Students Recently, ur schl has established a Chinese painting class specifically fr exchange students. The aim f this class is t intrduce internatinal students t the rich cultural heritage f Chinese art and t fster crss cultural exchange. The curriculum includes varius traditinal Chinese painting techniques such as ink wash painting and the use f traditinal brushes and rice paper. Exchange students will learn t paint classic subjects like landscapes and bamb, gaining hands-n experience in this ancient art frm. This initiative is significant as it nt nly prvides exchange students with a unique cultural experience but als prmtes mutual appreciatin. By participating in this class, they can develp a deeper understanding f Chinese culture and build lasting friendships with their peers.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校为交换生成立的国画班反响较好，要求考生按照要求为校英文报写一篇相关报道。【详解】1.词汇积累最近：recently → lately建立：establish → set up目的：aim → gal各种各样的：varius → a variety f2.句式拓展简单句变复合句 原句：Recently, ur schl has established a Chinese painting class specifically fr exchange students.拓展句：Recently, ur schl has established a Chinese painting class, which is specifically fr exchange students.【点睛】【高分句型1】Exchange students will learn t paint classic subjects like landscapes and bamb, gaining hands-n experience in this ancient art frm.（运用了不定式t paint作宾语、现在分词gaining作状语）【高分句型2】This initiative is significant as it nt nly prvides exchange students with a unique cultural experience but als prmtes mutual appreciatin.（运用了nt nly... but als...固定句型、as引导的原因状语从句）
3. （24-25高三上·广东·阶段练习）假如你是李华, 刚刚参加完一个夏令营从纽约回来。在纽约期间，你住宿在Smith先生家，得到了他很多的帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达谢意。内容包括：(1)表示感谢；(2)回顾Smith先生对你的帮助与照顾；(3)你打算如何感谢他。注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,____________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
预测3 给寄宿家庭写信表示感谢
【满分范文】Dear Mr. Smith, I hpe this message finds yu well. I am writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur kind hspitality during my stay in New Yrk. Yur warm welcme and thughtful care made my experience truly unfrgettable. I deeply appreciate all the guidance yu prvided, especially in helping me navigate the city and intrducing me t lcal culture. Yur supprt was invaluable t me, making my trip bth enjyable and enlightening. In return fr yur genersity, I wuld lve t send yu sme traditinal gifts frm my hmetwn. I hpe we can keep in tuch, and I lk frward t welcming yu here smeday. Thank yu nce again fr everything. Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是篇应用文。要求考生感谢Smith先生在纽约期间的帮助与照顾，并表达回报的意愿。【详解】1.词汇积累表达：express→cnvey感谢：gratitude→appreciatin难忘的：unfrgettable→memrable珍贵的：invaluable→precius2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yur supprt was invaluable t me, making my trip bth enjyable and enlightening.拓展句：Yur supprt, which was invaluable t me, made my trip bth enjyable and enlightening.【点睛】【高分句型1】I deeply appreciate all the guidance yu prvided, especially in helping me navigate the city and intrducing me t lcal culture.（运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句修饰先行词guidance）【高分句型2】I hpe we can keep in tuch, and I lk frward t welcming yu here smeday.（运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句作hpe的宾语）
应用文写作10个场景20个美句
一、学校生活1. The mre a student is encuraged, the harder he will wrk at his lessns.学生被鼓励得越多，他学习就会越努力。2. There are a variety f after-class activities in ur schl, which benefit us a lt.我们学校有丰富多彩的课外活动，这些活动对我们很有益。
二、 语言学习1. My hard wrk pays ff, and I am quite prud f what I have achieved/the prgress I have made.我的努力没有白费，我为自己所取得的进步感到非常骄傲。2. We are suppsed t learn English well because a gd cmmand f English means mre pprtunities in the future.我们理应学好英语，因为精通英语意味着将来有更多的机会。       
三、兴趣与爱好1. Only by reading widely can we gain mre knwledge and braden ur hrizns.只有博览群书，我们才能增长知识，开阔视野。2. I jined the basketball team, where I nt nly learn the imprtance f teamwrk but als strengthen my bdy, which is f great benefit t my mental as well as physical health.我加入了篮球队，在那里我不但认识到团队合作的重要性，还增强了体质，这对我的身心健康大有益处。
四、工作与职业1. The prfessr, ccupied with his wrk, hardly had time t stay with his family.那位教授忙于工作，几乎没有时间和家人待在一起。2. Besides, my previus vlunteering experience will qualify me fr the psitin.此外，我以前做志愿者的工作经验使我能够胜任这个职务。
五、 饮食与健康1. The dctr advised that we (shuld) have a balanced diet and get int the gd habit f getting up early.医生建议我们要均衡饮食并养成早起的好习惯。2. With the imprvement f the living standards, mre and mre peple, especially children, are suffering frm besity.随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人，尤其是孩子，正在饱受肥胖之苦。
六、个人情感1. S pr was his family that he had t drp ut at the age f 12.他的家庭如此贫困以至于他十二岁时就不得不辍学。2. Althugh he has wn cuntless hnrs，he never shws any signs f pride.尽管获得了无数的荣誉，他却从未有过任何骄傲的迹象。
七、情感与态度1. It ges withut saying that a smile can help us get thrugh difficult situatins and find friends in a wrld full f strangers.毫无疑问，微笑能够帮助我们渡过难关，帮助我们在一个充满陌生人的世界里找到朋友。2. This experience has als taught me that as lng as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.这次经历也让我学到：只要我永不放弃并努力尝试，我就会成功。
八、计划与愿望1. Having paid a visit t the place, I will g smewhere else this year t spend my summer vacatin.因为我参观过这个地方，所以今年我会去其他地方过暑假。2. Our schl will make an rganized trip t the lcal muntains, encuraging the students t get clse t nature.我们学校将组织一次当地的登山旅游，鼓励学生亲近大自然。
九、人际关系1. Frm this experience I have learned it is imprtant t wrk tgether with thers.结果，从这次经历中我学到了与他人合作的重要性。2. In a wrd, a friend in need is a friend indeed.May all f us treasure friendship.总之，患难见真情。愿我们所有人都珍视友谊。
十、节假日活动1. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditinal festival f China, which is actually a day fr family reunin.中秋节是中国的传统节日，实际上是家人团聚的日子。2. It is said that the Tmb-Sweeping Day, which falls n April 5th, has a histry f several thusand years.4月5日是清明节，据说它有几千年的历史。