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Unit 2 Sports culture 单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）Making a fact file about a sportsperson（人物描写）人物描写句式●Born in …, he was a great …, who …●…, (who is) an outstanding scientist, was born …●When he was a boy, he showed great interest in …●Being poor, he had to leave school at the age of ... ●As a teacher, she is kind, patient and helpful, so all of us like her. ●He is considered to be one of the great scientists.●He was confident enough to solve different problems by himself.●With his hard work, he once won …●As a warm-hearted person, he always does everything in his power to help those who are in need.●He devoted himself to scientific research and made great contributions to his country.●He will be remembered for his contributions to …人物描写词句模板1.背景:....was born in/into a poor/rich family in ..;. when .. was young;at the age of..; ... spent one's childhood in..; his parents are both famous musicians...2.外貌:beautiful, pretty, good-looking ，ordinary-looking, odd-looking, handsome, strong, fat, thin ..3.品质或个性:committed, kind, determined，gentle,considerate，optimistic,easy- going，warm-hearted, hard-working ，responsible, patient, helpful, friendly, generous...4.爱好:be good at; have a great gift for; be keen on; be interested in; be fond of; be crazy about...5.教育背景:graduated from; got/earned a(n) .. degree; majored in;went abroad to further one' s study...6.经历和成就:devote oneself to; do sth with great determination; fight for; make up one's mind to do sth; be determined to do sth; overcome many difficulties; try one's best to do sth;enjoy widespread popularity; win fame as; make great contributions to...7.评价:one of the best; the most important; one of the heroes of the 20th century; set a good example to;is the pride of; be regarded as...; be recognized as..; be respected/honored as--.; sb still lives in one's heart...话题词块1．be born into a wealthy family　　出生于富裕人家2．at the age of   在……岁时3．in one’s teens/twenties   在某人十多岁/二十多岁时4．a16-year-old girl   一个16岁的女孩5．a boy with great ability   一个能干的男孩6．a promising writer   一位有前途的作家7．spare no effort to do sth.  不遗余力地去做某事8．have a wide range of interests   兴趣广泛9．get on well with   与……相处融洽10．a considerate person   体贴别人的人11．be willing to help others  乐于助人12．be expert in/at   善于……13．be in good health/shape/condition　身体健康14．depend/rely on  依靠；依赖15．gain scholarship   获得奖学金16．gain/win the first prize/place   获得一等奖/第一名17．be awarded with the title of   获得……的称号/头衔18．make great contributions to   对……做出巨大贡献19．set a good example to sb.  为某人树立好榜样20．to one’s credit   值得赞扬的是话题佳句1．His great personality has gained their respect.他伟大的品质赢得了他们的尊重。2．She makes a promise that she will behave herself and set a good example to schoolmates.她承诺，她会表现好的，并为同学们树立好榜样。3．My mother, a housewife of 45 years old, is my favorite person.She is always dressed very elegantly and neatly with a smile of contentment on her face.我最喜爱的人是我的妈妈，一个45岁的家庭主妇。她总是穿着整齐优雅，脸上带着满足的微笑。4．After reading the passage, I was lost in thought.From my own perspective，however busy parents are，they should make time to accompany their children.读完这篇文章，我陷入了沉思。从我个人的角度看，不管父母有多忙，他们都应该挤出时间陪伴他们的孩子。5．It reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.这使我想起了我的妈妈，她总是尽她所能给予我最好的。人物描写微语境(微语境1：历史人物—孔子）Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of moral values, respect for elders,and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.孔子是中国历史上著名的人物。他的教诲强调道德价值、尊重长辈和社会和谐的重要性。孔子周游全国，将他的智慧传授给了无数的弟子，对中国社会产生了深远的影响。The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.孔子的意义非常重大。他的教诲塑造了中国文化的道德和伦理基础，培养了对权威的尊重、和谐的关系和对知识的追求。即使在今天，他的思想仍然指导着中国和世界各地的个人和社区。Confucius's life offers valuable lessons. His emphasis on self-cultivation, respect for elders.and the pursuit of knowledge serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion and social responsibility.孔子的一生提供了宝贵的教训。他对自我修养、尊重长辈和追求知识的强调，在我们快节奏和相互联系的世界中起着指路明灯的作用。他的教诲提醒我们正直、同情和社会责任的重要性。（微语境2：推荐科学家）Tu Youyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure for malaria. In 2015. she was awarded the Nobel Prize for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspired by her devotion and persistence, I decided to study harder to realize my dream.屠呦呦将大部分时间都投入到了寻找疟疾的治疗方法中。2015年，她因发现青蒿素而获得了诺贝尔奖，这是治疗疟疾的关键。她对世界的贡献如此巨大，以至于她成为了很多人的偶像，包括我。受到她的奉献和坚持的激励，我决定更加努力地学习来实现我的梦想。Born in a poor family in Guangxi, Yuan had a strong will to tackle the hunger crisis when he was young. After graduation, he devoted all his life in the laboratory and farm until he developed the hybrid rice successfully, His modesty and diligence. which I admire most, have a deep impact on me.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself, but the happiness/welfare of the whole world.袁隆平出生在广西的一个贫困家庭，年轻时就有着解决饥饿危机的强烈愿望。毕业后，他将自己的一生都投入到了实验室和农场中，直到他成功地开发出了杂交水稻。他的谦虚和勤奋是我最欣赏的品质，对我产生了深刻的影响。正是从他身上，我意识到我所奋斗的不仅仅是为了自己，而是整个世界的幸福。（微语境3：发言稿—艺术家）It is my pleasure to share with you today about my favorite artist, Vincent van Gogh. Van Gogh was a Dutch post-impressionist painter, best known for his vivid and expressive use of color. One of his most famous works is “Starry Night" which depicts the night sky over a village in France.The swirling stars and bold brushstrokes make the painting come to life, conveying a sense of dynamic movement and profound emotion.今天我很高兴与大家分享我最喜欢的艺术家文森特·梵高。梵高是一位荷兰后印象派画家，以其生动而富有表现力的色彩运用而闻名。他最著名的作品之一是《星夜》，描绘了法国村庄的夜空。旋转的星星和大胆的笔触使这幅画栩栩如生，传达了一种动态运动和深厚情感。I admire van Gogh because of his ability to convey intense emotions through his art. He had a tough life, struggling with mental illness and poverty, but he found comfort and meaning in his painting, His dedication and passion for art are truly inspiring to me.我钦佩梵高，因为他能够通过他的艺术传达强烈的情感。他生活艰难，与精神疾病和贫困作斗争，但他在他的绘画中找到了安慰和意义。他对艺术的奉献和激情真正鼓舞了我。（2023年全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。【答案】                                                     Confucius was a Chinese philosopher and educator during the Spring and Autumn period. He was the founder of Confucianism, a system of ethical, social, and political ideas that has deeply influenced Chinese culture.Confucius emphasized moral cultivation, family values, and the importance of benevolent governance. His teachings, collected in The Analects, have shaped China’s ethical and social norms for over two millennia.The significance of Confucius stems from his profound impact on Chinese society and the world. His wisdom and teachings on virtue, respect, and integrity continue to inspire people in their personal and professional lives.In contemporary times, Confucius’ teachings encourage us to uphold strong moral values and strive for harmony in our relationships. His emphasis on education and self-improvement serves as a reminder of the importance of lifelong learning and personal growth.1. 应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为投稿；（2）因文体是投稿，故作者身份在正文中不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍人物生平事迹，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时，首尾两段采用一般现在时。2. 本文的亮点：（1）to name just a few仅列举几例；（2）renowned = celebrated = famous著名的；（3）Especially admirable are ...形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（4）as well as=not only ... but also ...；（5）stick to it for life坚守终生。（2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：1.人物简介；2.做出的贡献；3.你的感想。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tu YouyouTu Youyou is a great Chinese medical scientist.Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure. Luckily, her efforts paid off. In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me. Inspired by her story, I decide to study harder so as to realize my dream.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物，包括人物简介及其所做贡献并分享自己的感想。【详解】1. 词汇积累下定决心的：determined→resolved幸运地：luckily→fortunately努力：effort→endeavor无数的：numerous→countless实现：realize→achieve2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.拓展句：As she was determined to help those suffering from malaria, TuYouyou devoted most of her time to finding the cure.【点睛】【高分句型1】In 2015, she was awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine for discovering artemisinin, which is the key to the treatment of malaria. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Behind her success were numerous failures and setbacks, but never did she give up.（运用了介词短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装）【高分句型3】So great is her contribution to the world that she has become an idol of many people, including me.（运用了so+形容词前置的倒装及so... that...引导的结果状语从句）(2023·浙江丽水·统考期末) 假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“The Person I am Especially Moved by”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1. 人物介绍；2. 感动原因；3. 对你的影响。注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear fellow students,It’s my privilege to deliver a speech here. Of all the most respectable people, I am especially moved by Zhong Nanshan.This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his responsibility. He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against pandemics. The picture of him resting on the high-speed rail seat made us touched and tearful. Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal of the Republic. His deeds and spirit do make a great difference to me.Thank you.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主题为“The Person I am Especially Moved by”，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。【详解】1.词汇积累荣耀：privilege→honor发表演讲：deliver a speech→make a speech祖国：motherland→homeland责任：responsibility→duty2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This 85-year-old man with gray hair works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his responsibility.拓展句：This 85-year-old man whose hair is gray works really hard, for the people, for the motherland, for his responsibility.【点睛】[高分句型1] He is one of Chinese heroes volunteering many times to fight against pandemics. (运用了非谓语动词做后置定语)[高分句型2] Such great contribution did he make that he was awarded the Medal of the Republic.  (运用了倒装句，即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)（2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模）在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年逆行者榜样人物：00后消防员，00后志愿者等。你校正在组织“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。内容包括：1．青年榜样的突出品质；2．他们对你的影响；3．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。注意：1．词数80左右；2．参考词汇：00后：post-2000s generation／post-00s；3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。We Should Shoulder the Responsibility___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We Should Shoulder the ResponsibilityRecently many young role models emerged in the mountain fire in Chongqing and the Luding earthquake, in which post-00s firefighters, post-00s volunteers showed their bravery and ambition, especially, their sense of responsibility. What they did made me think about our responsibility. As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country. As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds of hardship. We should not escape any responsibility of love and care. In a word, all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校组织的以“We Should Shoulder the Responsibility”为题的英语征文活动投稿，内容包括青年榜样的品质、影响并呼吁学生向他们学习。【详解】1.词汇积累承担，肩负：shoulder →undertake完成：complete →finish忍受：endure →bear总之：in a word →in short2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country.拓展句：As young people, we have to work hard to serve the country, which can show our love for our country.【点睛】【高分句型1】What they did made me think about our responsibility.(运用了what引导主语从句)【高分句型2】As a student, we have a responsibility to complete our studies seriously and steadfastly, enduring all kinds of hardship.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)单元话题真题展示考情预测人物描写2023全国甲卷“对社会有突出贡献的人物”是高中英语新课标主题语境内容要求之一，也是高考英语常考话题之一。它包括个人情况简介和名人事迹介绍两个方面,这类文章通常以人物传记和逸闻趣事为主，目的是培养学生高尚的道德情操和帮助学生树立正确的人生观和价值观。The article of character introduction generally adopts the three-paragraph mode of "total one point one total". The first paragraph is brief and to the point. Get straight to the point, go straight to the theme, briefly introduce the identity of the characters and their achievements; The second paragraph introduces the main experiences of the characters:The third paragraph summarizes the full text with one or two sentences to achieve the beginning and end of the echo, finishing the effect.你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。段落内容句子设计开头段引入话题（介绍人物的基本情况，如外貌、年龄等）① As for my favorite figure, it must be ...至于我最喜欢的人物，那一定是 ......② Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history,  ... the person I respect most is ...在中国历史上的杰出人物中，我最尊敬的人是 ...... 。主体段具体介绍（包括人物的性格、事迹等）① I admire him because of his contributions to the world.因为他对世界的贡献我很钦佩他。② In fact, he was a man full of imagination, creation and wisdom. 事实上，他是一个富有想象力、创造力和智慧的人。③ She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair.她中等身材，披着金色的长发。结尾段总结全文（对所介绍的人物进行整体评价）① From him, I realize the secret of success is ... , I do thank him for what he did for me. 从他身上，我意识到成功的秘密是 ......， 我确实感谢他为我所做的一切。② Setting a great example to us , she fully deserves our admiration and respect. 她为我们树立了好榜样，完全值得我们的钦佩和尊敬。