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Unit 1 Wish you were here单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）话题词块1.a treacherous odyssey（充满危险的漫长冒险）2.fraught with unforeseen perils（充满意想不到的危险）3.a labyrinth of challenges（充满挑战的迷宫）4.tested our mettle（考验我们的勇气）5.a roller coaster of excitement and danger（刺激与危险并存的过山车）6.a series of hair-raising incidents（一系列令人毛骨悚然的事件）7.a crucible of endurance（耐力的考验场）8.the inky darkness（漆黑一片）9.a realm of mystery and danger（神秘而危险的领域）10.a theater of the unexpected（意外事件的舞台）话题佳句The journey was a treacherous odyssey, fraught with unforeseen perils lurking at every turn.（这次旅程是一场充满危险的漫长冒险，每个转角都潜伏着意想不到的危险。）As we ventured deeper into the unknown, the path became a labyrinth of challenges that tested our mettle.（当我们深入未知领域时，道路变成了充满挑战的迷宫，考验着我们的勇气。）The expedition took an ominous turn when a sudden storm descended, blotting out the sky and engulfing us in chaos.（当一场突如其来的风暴降临，使天空变得漆黑并将我们卷入混乱时，这次探险出现了不祥的转折。）Traversing through the rugged terrain, we were constantly on edge, anticipating the next hazard that might befall us.（穿越崎岖的地形时，我们一直处于紧张状态，预料着可能降临的下一个危险。）Our journey was a roller coaster of excitement and danger, with each new day bringing a fresh set of trials.（我们的旅程犹如刺激与危险并存的过山车，每一天都带来一系列新的考验。）Amidst the wilderness, we encountered a series of hair-raising incidents that sent shivers down our spines.（在荒野之中，我们遭遇了一系列令人毛骨悚然的事件，让我们脊背发凉。）The long and arduous journey was a crucible of endurance, where only the strongest-willed could survive.（漫长而艰难的旅程是耐力的考验场，只有意志最坚强的人才能幸存。）When night fell during our journey, the inky darkness seemed to swallow us whole, intensifying our sense of vulnerability.（在旅途中夜幕降临时，漆黑的黑暗似乎将我们整个吞噬，加剧了我们的脆弱感。）The journey led us into a realm of mystery and danger, where the laws of nature seemed to have a mind of their own.（旅程将我们带入了一个神秘而危险的领域，在那里自然法则似乎有了自己的意志。）As we navigated the uncharted waters of our adventure, we were tossed about by the waves of uncertainty.（当我们在冒险的未知水域航行时，被不确定性的浪潮所颠簸。）The pathless wilderness we journeyed through was a theater of the unexpected, staging one astonishing event after another.（我们穿越的无路荒野是意外事件的舞台，接连上演着令人惊叹的事件。）Our trek was a gauntlet of hardships, from treacherous cliffs to raging rivers that stood in our way.（我们的长途跋涉是艰难困苦的考验，从险峻的悬崖到阻挡我们道路的汹涌河流。）In the midst of our journey, a strange phenomenon occurred, casting an eerie pall over our already precarious situation.（在旅程中途，一种奇怪的现象发生了，给我们本就岌岌可危的处境蒙上了一层诡异的阴影。）The arduous voyage tested not only our physical stamina but also our mental fortitude to the limit.（艰难的航行不仅将我们的体力，也将我们的精神坚韧度考验到了极限。）With each passing mile of the journey, the sense of adventure was tinged with a growing unease about what lay ahead.（随着旅程每一英里的过去，冒险的感觉中夹杂着对前方未知事物日益增长的不安。）The journey through the ancient forest was like stepping into a time capsule of danger and wonder.（穿越古老森林的旅程就像是踏入了一个充满危险与奇妙的时间胶囊。）As we journeyed on, the elements seemed to conspire against us, making progress a grueling battle.（随着我们继续旅程，各种自然因素似乎联合起来与我们作对，使得前进成为一场艰苦的战斗。）The expedition into the remote mountains was a baptism of fire, exposing us to the harshest of conditions.（深入偏远山区的探险是一场严峻的考验，让我们暴露在最恶劣的环境中。）Our journey along the perilous trail was a dance with death, where one wrong step could spell disaster.（我们沿着危险小径的旅程是与死亡共舞，一步走错就可能意味着灾难。）The adventure-filled journey was a kaleidoscope of thrills and terrors, constantly shifting and evolving.（充满冒险的旅程是刺激与恐怖的万花筒，不断变化和发展。）第一步：获救之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）1.The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds. Lightning flashed across the sky, followed by a clap of thunder. Minutes later, there came a downpour.2.The color of the sky was changing, first light grey, then dark grey, and finally dark and dense.3.With a deafening crack, lighting split the sky, illuminating the dark clouds.4.With rain clouds looming/hanging overhead, the atmosphere became heavy announcing/threatening the approaching storm.5.The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.6.Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey.7.The night enveloped the world in a blanket of darkness, a haunting/unsettling silence/stillness was suffocating.8.The mountain was like a furious ghost/monster, roaring its anger, thus making me more anxious.1.The water twisted and turned him, scraping him against the rocks. Water gushed into his mouth and up his nose.2.The big wind roared through our ears and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.3.Suddenly, he was stuck in the mud and couldn’t get out. He struggled hard but he was still trapped. He screamed for help, but all in vain.4.The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe.5.With their mouths choked with smoke, both of them feel the heat engulfing everything.6.He quickly soaked his clothes, for the approaching smoke could choke them.7.Entering the burning house was like “running into a bucket of black paint,” Surrell says. The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe.8.The roaring fire swallowed the whole house.9.A thick burning smell filled the air.10.The big red flames were licking the sides of the walls and columns of fire shot through the roof.11.Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging from the smoke, she clung to him, terrified by the leaping flames.12.Outside the window, the unfamiliar brilliance was growing stronger, with the loud shouts from all parties echoing in every corner of the island.13.The wall caving in, and deep cracks opening up in the streets, huge buildings collapsed sending clouds of dust into the air.14.The bear seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad.15.The dog’s growls louder, and its teeth glistened under the sun, as it approached poor Ben, who was frozen in place. Panic filled the air, and it seemed like time stood still.16.The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.17.He was sitting on the ground, blood running down his face.1.Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.2.Still more and more water flooding into her lung, she felt she was on the edge of collapse while all the colors of the world in front of her faded away quickly.3.Watching the shore in the distance, I felt powerless as if we were broken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.4.Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.5.Time passing us, tiredness engulfed us with my feet stiff/numb and shivering.6.Her teeth were chattering with cold.7.A chill feeling crept up her spine.8.Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind, which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/flight.9.Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my whole body.10.I felt I was deprived of breath, only to see the bubbles swirling around me and my vision began to blur, finally fading into unconscious darkness.11.It was getting dark/ Night was approaching, we were stuck in the middle of nowhere.12.After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.13.As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart and I could hardly tell how long I could plough on.14.The thought of hopelessness sent shivers down my spine.15.A wave of panic surged through my veins and my minds went blank with fear.16.Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.17.An ominous thought crossed his mind: I’m going to die up here. Grief comes in waves.18.After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued while swimming hard to keep myself afloat.19.Exhausted as we were, we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming.20.“We need to think out a way!” I muttered, scratching my head.第二步：获救之中（出现转机+救援动作）1.She could hear water trickling somewhere at a distance.2.At that moment, a shrill whistle ripped the air.3.In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them leading towards us in the distance.4.As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.5.After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help.6.When we were at a loss what to do next, there were shouts rising from the distance.7.Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit.1.A few minutes later, the firefighters arrived and the fire was soon brought under control. The mother was relieved.2.He grabbed the ladder, positioned it near the window and climbed toward the boy. When he reached the window, he pushed the screen into the room and coaxed Cody out.3.He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. Finally he touched something. A shoe, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara towards him. He hugged her into arms and stood.4.He felt the heat of the flames on his cheeks. Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran blindly into the blackness. Surrell put Tiara down on the porch.5.He started CPR-- the first time he’d ever done so. Soon she opened her eyes and took a breath on her own. 1.The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape!2.I struggled clumsily in the water. After a few ups and downs, I reached the edge of the pond.3.The water was up to his lap, but Alastair was very strong and struggled though waves with me on his back. Finally, we managed to return to the land safely.4.Seeing Ronny was almost drowned, Henry took off his clothes immediately and jumped into the water without any hesitation.5.Without thinking twice, he sprang in and caught him and quickly carried him to the bank. On the bank, Willie was given first aid and he came to life after a while.1.Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong.2.She applied a clean towel to the wound and pressed firmly on it to stop the bleeding.3.Rescuers took Paula to a car on a stretcher and took her to a hospital for emergency treatment.1.The first thing he did was to seek shelter from the freezing wind and snow.2.Using his skies, Nicholas built a snow cave. He gathered a huge mass of snow and dug out a hole in the middle.3.Then he piled branches on top of himself, like a blanket, to stay as warm as he could.4.However, they knew the clock was ticking and Nicholas stood a better chance of survival the earlier they found him.1.Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry.2.Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry.1.He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry! What a narrow escape!2.Amy had a good idea. She took off her scarf and coat to make a rope. She threw it to the boy. Everyone pulled the rope. They pulled the boy out of the pond.3.After that, Mum dressed me in a warm coat, wrapped me in a blanket and poured me a cup of hot milk.1.He balanced himself on the truck, leaned back and threw the rock at the window. Finally, the glass broke and Steve kicked in the remaining pieces of glass.2.In that split second, I lunged forward, extending my arms, ready to catch him and prevent any harm from coming his way. The weight of his little body landing safely in my arms was a feeling I will never forget. The emergency services arrived promptly and took over, ensuring that the baby received the necessary medical attention.3.Without thinking twice, I grabbed the burger and tossed it in the opposite direction with all my might, hoping to distract the dog.No sooner had we arrived where the kid was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings. Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands, pulling him out without reserve.第三步：获救之后（宽慰，感激+升华）1.I breathed a sigh of relief , throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.2.Smiling in relief, I felt a rush of gratitude.3.On hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief, grinning merrily at each other.4.“If I had not been given first aid, I would have been dead,” Simmons said to Norwood gratefully. “It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.”5.After spending 27 hours alone in the wildness, Compean cried, “I’m safe.”Compean’s story probably would have ended very differently had a total stranger with strong satellite skills and a sharp eye for detail not taken action.6.The baby’s parents rushed over, tears streaming down their faces and their gratitude pouring out in heartfelt words.1.Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before.2.From then on, he made up his mind never to take any risks unless he could ensure tight safety.3.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory.4.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.5.From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore the unknown world without a fully detailed plan.6.Grant felt that what the climb had taught him was how fragile and precious life is.7.This frightening experience left a deep impression on them, which made them realize that they should cherish every moment.8.It is unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulties we are faced with, as long as we stay united, we can conquer it.1.I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need.2.It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.3.The story shows that having a good command of first aid can make a real difference.4.Reflecting on the event, I couldn’t help but feel a deep sense satisfaction and fulfillment. It showed me that sometimes, the abilities we possess can have a profound impact on the lives of others. The incident serves as a reminder to always be prepared to lend a helping hand, as you never know when your unique skills might make difference in someone’s life.（2024·山西太原·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Amy’s youngest child, 2-year-old Jenna, wouldn’t go to sleep until Amy read her a story while rocking her. Rocking and reading became their favorite nighttime routine.Jenna awoke one night screaming in pain. Hospital tests later revealed that she had cancer, but luckily she had a successful operation.During Jenna’s first week in the hospital, Amy stayed with her day and night. The nurses put a rocking chair in her room so they could continue their nighttime routine. After Jenna was asleep, Amy got some rest in the hard armchair by Jenna’s bed. Jenna was doing well, and Amy began sparing time to help her husband Joe take care of their little boys. She would go home in the evening, have dinner with the boys, and then return to the hospital until Jenna was asleep. Then Amy would come home for the remainder of the night.It was pouring rain one evening as Amy hurried home to make dinner. By the time the meal was done, the roads were dangerous. Joe stood nearby as she looked out of the kitchen window. He firmly stopped Amy from going out in such weather.“Joe,” Amy cried, “I have to read Jenna a story and rock her. She won’t be able to sleep if I don’t.” “Honey,” he said, “be reasonable. What if you have a bad car accident? The roads will be better tomorrow. Then, you can go.”Amy finally nodded and called Sally, a middle-aged nurse who worked a twelve-hour shift from 8 am to 8 pm. In tears she told Sally that it was the first time since Jenna was born that she hadn’t rocked her at bedtime.Sally comforted Amy in a calm voice. She promised that she would go in to see Jenna before she left and tell her that when she woke up her mommy would be with her. “Thank you, Sally,” Amy said.When it was time to go to bed, Jenna couldn’t find her mom and got panic.注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Just when her tears welled up, Sally came in. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The next morning Amy opened the door, finding Jenna was sleeping peacefully in Sally’s arms.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Just when her tears welled up, Sally came in. Knowing Jenna was waiting for Mom anxiously, she carried the girl in the arms and gently told her that her mum would come a bit late due to the heavy rain outside. However, on hearing that, Jenna burst out crying. Just at this moment the nighttime routine Amy mentioned came to Sally’s mind. She took out a book and read it to Jenna while rocking her. It really worked! Jenna fell asleep soon! But Sally didn’t leave her alone, for fear that she would wake up during the night.The next morning Amy opened the door, finding Jenna was sleeping peacefully in Sally’s arms. Immediately, scalding tears streamed out and her hanging heart eventually settled down. The noise of the door awoke the nurse, who carefully got out of the bed. Amy came up and took her hand tightly, saying, “Thank you. You didn’t know how worried I was last night.” Sally smiled and said, “It’s nothing. But I’ve learned to comfort babies from you — the nighttime routine.” With the words, a knowing smile appeared on the faces of two women.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾米最小的孩子，2岁的珍娜，要艾米一边摇她一边给她讲故事，她才会入睡。摇摆和阅读成了他们最喜欢的夜间活动。一天晚上，珍娜痛苦地尖叫着醒来。后来医院检查显示她得了癌症，但幸运的是，她做了一次成功的手术。某天下大雨，妈妈没办法去给珍娜讲故事，幸好一位护士安慰了珍娜，让她睡着了。【详解】1. 段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“正当她的眼泪夺眶而出时，莎莉走了进来”可知，第一段可描写护士莎莉照顾珍娜入睡的经过。②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上，艾米打开门，发现珍娜正安详地睡在莎莉的怀里”可知，第二段可描写艾米悬着的心终于平静了下来，并对护士表示感谢。2. 续写线索：莎莉安慰珍娜——给珍娜讲故事——珍娜入睡——艾米感谢护士——两人会心微笑3. 词汇激活行为类①起作用：work/function②抓住，握住某人的手：take one’s hand/hold one’s hand③吵醒：awake/wake... up情绪类①突然大哭：burst out crying/burst into tears②担心：worried/concerned【点睛】【高分句型1】Knowing Jenna was waiting for Mom anxiously, she carried the girl in the arms and gently told her that her mum would come a bit late due to the heavy rain outside. (运用了现在分词作状语以及that引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】The noise of the door awoke the nurse, who carefully got out of the bed. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句)1.（2024·吉林长春·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a bright and sunny day, but inside the classroom, Tom was feeling anything but cheerful. He had just received his test results, and they were far from what he had hoped for. His heart sank as he stared at the disappointing marks.Tom had always been a diligent student, and this failure came as a huge blow. He couldn’t understand how he had performed so poorly when he had put in so much effort. He felt defeated and wondered if he was just not good enough.As he walked home, he couldn’t help but think about what had gone wrong. He replayed the moments leading up to the test, trying to figure out where he had made mistakes. Maybe he hadn’t studied the right way? Or perhaps he had been too nervous during the exam?When he got home, Tom decided to talk to his elder brother, Jack. Jack was always wise and had a way of making things seem better. Tom poured out his heart, telling Jack about his failure and how discouraged he felt.Jack listened patiently and then said, “Tom, failure is not the end. It’s an opportunity to learn and grow. Every great success story is filled with failures along the way. Figure out what you need to do differently next time. Analyze your mistakes and use them as stepping stones to improve.”Tom took his brother’s words to heart. He spent the next few days going over his test, identifying his weak areas and making a plan to address them. He started studying with a new approach, asking for help when he needed it and practicing more.A few weeks later, another test was announced. Tom was nervous but also determined. As he sat down to take the test, he took a deep breath and reminded himself of what he had learned from his previous failure. Just as Tom was finishing up the test, the teacher announced that time was up.注意：(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Tom handed in his test paper with a mixture of nervousness and hope.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Days later, when the results were announced, Tom couldn’t believe his eyes.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tom handed in his test paper with a mixture of nervousness and hope. As he walked out of the classroom, his mind was consumed by thoughts about how he had performed. Had he truly learned enough from his previous failure? Had he unknowingly made the same mistakes once again? The waiting period was extremely long. He made an effort to keep himself occupied with other activities, yet his mind invariably wandered back to the test. Time and again, he found himself constantly checking the calendar, anxiously awaiting the day when the results would finally be announced. Days later, when the results were announced, Tom couldn’t believe his eyes. His name was at the top of the list with a much-improved score. A huge smile spread across his face. He felt a sense of pride and accomplishment that he had never felt before. He realized that his failure had been a valuable lesson. It had taught him perseverance, the importance of learning from mistakes, and the power of hard work. He rushed home to tell his brother the good news. Jack was proud of him and reminded him that this was just the beginning. From now on, Tom knew that whenever he faced a setback, he would look on it as an opportunity to learn and grow.【导语】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公Tom在一次考试成绩不理想后，经历从失望、反思到重新振作并改进学习方法的过程。Tom原本是个勤奋的学生，但考试成绩却远低于预期，这让他深受打击。在回家的路上，他不断反思自己可能犯错的地方。回家后，他向哥哥Jack倾诉了自己的困境和挫败感。Jack鼓励他看待失败为学习和成长的机会，并建议他分析错误，将其作为进步的垫脚石。Tom听取了哥哥的建议，认真分析了自己的弱点，并制定了改进计划。他改变了学习方法，积极寻求帮助并加强练习。几周后，当又一次考试来临时，Tom虽然紧张但充满决心。他深吸一口气，提醒自己从上次失败中学到的教训，并顺利完成了考试。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“Tom交上试卷时，心中既紧张又充满希望。”可知，第一段可描写考试结束后，Tom焦急等待成绩的过程。②由第二段首句内容“几天后，成绩公布了，Tom简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。”可知，第二段可描写Tom知道自己成绩后的表现以及感悟。2.续写线索：反思——等待成绩公布——分数大幅提高——骄傲——感悟3.词汇激活行为类查看：check/look over宣布：announce/declare意识到：realize/be aware of情绪类焦虑地：anxiously/worriedly以……为骄傲：be proud of/take pride in【点睛】[高分句型1]Time and again, he found himself constantly checking the calendar, anxiously awaiting the day when the results would finally be announced.（运用了when引导时间状语从句）[高分句型2]He realized that his failure had been a valuable lesson.（运用了that引导宾语从句）2.（2024·广西柳州·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“We can totally do this!” my friend Sarah shouted excitedly, the smile on her face shining like a diamond as we stepped out of the art studio. “Definitely, we’ve got this in the bag!” I replied enthusiastically, jumping happily on the pavement as the door swung shut behind us. Both of us had just submitted our works for the Annual Art Showcase, an important event that every artist dreamed of being part of.That Saturday evening, Sarah and I stayed in my living room, refining our submissions. We aimed to demonstrate our creativity, technique and passion for art. I focused on my latest painting—a colorful landscape while Sarah showcased her vivid sculptures. We were determined to impress the judges, our confidence rising high.After a few days of anxious waiting, a letter arrived in the mail. Heart racing, I tore it open. But as I scanned the page, desperation crashed over me like a huge wave. My name wasn’t on the list of selected artists.Moments later, I spotted Sarah approaching, laughing and waving a brightly colored envelope. I felt a burst of pain at the sight. She was clearly thrilled and ready to share her good news. Unable to face her joy, I turned away sharply. I just couldn’t bear it: she made it, and I didn’t. Why was life so unfair? Anger and disappointment clouded my vision.That afternoon, on the bus ride home, I sat alone, staring out of the window and ignoring Sarah’s attempts to chat. When the bus finally pulled up to my stop, I jumped off without a word, my heart heavy. Upon reaching home, I threw the awful letter into my mom’s hands, unable to control my disappointment. I fell onto the sofa, burying my face in the pillows, allowing tears to flow freely. The sweetness of the moment had soured, and I was lost in a storm of sorrow, thinking what this meant for my future in art.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The next day, I decided to avoid seeing Sarah.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At last, my mom came to comfort me, saying it was not Sarah’s fault.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】The next day, I decided to avoid seeing Sarah. I took a different route to school and canceled our usual coffee date. I knew Sarah would want to celebrate her success with me, but I couldn’t stand seeing her success when I felt like such a failure. Sarah noticed the change of my attitude towards her and tried to ask me for the reason but I refused her for some excuses. In the following days, the sorrow of failure stayed with me all the time. All this was seen in my mom’s eyes.At last, my mom came to comfort me, saying it was not Sarah’s fault. She gently reminded me that setbacks are a part of any journey. “Sarah’s achievement doesn’t mean to kill your talent,” she said. “You both have your own paths to follow.” With my mom’s encouragement, I decided to talk to Sarah and make an apology for my narrowness. From that day on, we shared our art dreams again. From the experience, I learned that others’ success should be an inspiration rather than a burden.【导语】本文以个人经历为线索，描述了作者与朋友Sarah共同参与艺术展选拔，但最终只有Sarah成功入选，作者因此感到失落和愤怒，以及后续如何在母亲的安慰下重新振作的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“第二天，我决定避开Sarah。”可知，第一段可以描写主人公如何避免与Sarah见面，以及这种行为给她带来的内心感受。②由第二段首句内容“最后，我的妈妈来安慰我，说这不是Sarah的错。”可知，第二段可以描述母亲给予的安慰和支持，以及主人公态度的转变。2.续写线索：避开Sarah——内心挣扎——母亲的安慰——重新看待问题——向Sarah道歉——共同分享艺术梦想3.词汇激活行为类①庆祝：celebrate/ observe②安慰：comfort / console③道歉：apologize / make an apology④忍受：stand/bear情绪类①悲伤：sorrow / sadness②鼓励：encouragement / motivation【点睛】[高分句型1]. I knew Sarah would want to celebrate her success with me, but I couldn’t stand seeing her success when I felt like such a failure.（使用了动名词短语作宾语、when引导的时间状语从句）[高分句型2]. 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