话题35 同情与关爱-2025年初中英语中考热门话题作文高分突破训练

这是一份话题35 同情与关爱-2025年初中英语中考热门话题作文高分突破训练，共8页。
一、话题解读－审主题
同情是仁爱之心的具体体现，是一个人对他人不幸遭遇的感同身受。拥有了同情心，我们才能对他人伸出援助之手。通过同情去理解别人的痛苦，自己的内心情感也能更丰富。为他人送去温暖，为自己带来收获。关爱他人，就等同于善待自己。关爱他人本身就是一个完善自己的过程，通过关爱他人，我们能相应地得到他人的回馈和帮助。
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In this cming winter hliday, I will jin a vlunteer team t d smething fr children in a remte village. Many f thse kids there are in pr cnditin and sme f them have drpped ut f schl.
I think ne prblem fr these children is that they are shrt f necessaries. Thus, I plan t ask my classmates t d sme dnatins first, and ten we can prvide them with sme bks, clthes and shes. When I am there, I will accmpany them and learn mre abut their prblems that need t be slved at nce s that I can call n mre peple t help them n the Internet. I als plan t write a reprt abut the pverty and prblems f these children. I hpe this reprt can make mre peple aware f this prblem and get them t jin us with a helping hand.
We are living under the same blue sky, and we shuld care abut thers and d smething fr thse wh are in need. As lng as everyne gives a little lve, the wrld will becme mre beautiful. I believe this jurney will be meaningful and helpful.
二、话题框架－列提纲
Step 1:说明利用寒假去帮助贫困孩子的计划。
Step 2:具体阐述为什么要帮助、关爱这些孩子，如何把关爱落实在行动上。
Step 3:呼吁大家一起帮助、关爱这些孩子。
三、话题短语和亮点句型－加内容
A.话题短语
1. take pity n the ld 同情老人
2.mve frward bravely 勇往直前
3.cheer them up 鼓舞他们／使他们振作
4. prvide children with sme bks为孩子们提供一些书籍
5.encuragement and supprt 鼓励和支持
6. make dnatins fr children 为孩子们组织捐赠
7.shrt f many necessaries 缺少生活必需品
8.a traditinal virtue 传统美德
9.in favur f/against赞成／反对
10.make every effrt尽一切努力
11. g thrugh difficulties 渡过难关
12.care fr 关爱
13.g t a remte area 去遥远的地区
14.be shrt f mney 缺钱
15. call n mre peple t help them号召更多的人来帮助他们
16.withut hesitatin 毫不犹豫
17.pressing prblems 紧迫问题
18.lend a helping hand 伸出援助之手
19.respect the elderly 尊重老人
20.be aware f the prblem 意识到这个问题
21.see hpe in the disaster 在灾难中看到希望
22.fcus n/cncentrate n the ld 关注老人
23. have sme truble/difficulty ding smething 做某事有困难
24.material/spiritual cmfrt物质／精神安慰
25.be surrunded by care被关怀包围
26.with a sense f being useless 有一种无用的感觉
B.亮点句型
1.T care fr thers is t treat yurself well.
关爱他人就是善待自己。
2.As lng as everyne gives a little lve, the wrld will becme mre beautiful.
只要人人都献出一点爱，世界将变得更美好。
3.Nthing is mre imprtant than taking gd care f the elderly and making them happy.
没有什么比照顾好老人，让他们快乐更重要的了。
4.We shuld make every effrt t help the peple wh are in truble.
我们应不遗余力地帮助那些有困难的人。
5.It is bvius/clear that we shuld let mre ld peple feel the care and warmth f the sciety.
我们应该让更多的老人感到社会的关爱和温暖。
6.What I did shws my lve t the children in pr cnditin.
我所做的事情表达了我对贫困孩子的爱。
7. Helping thers is a traditinal virtue.
帮助别人是一种传统美德。
8. It is my great hnur t be a vlunteer.
很荣幸成为一名志愿者。
9.Filial piety is the mst imprtant in all virtues.
百善孝为先。
10.Let's take care f the earth tgether.
让我们一起关爱地球吧！
11.Many hands make light wrk.
众人拾柴火焰高。
四、写前训练－备词句
I.词句操练
A.根据括号中的汉语意思完成句子。
We(1) ______________ (给孩子们捐赠)in the flded areas at my schl last week. I dnated sme clthes, shes, schlbags, and ther schl things, because I knew many f the children were having a hard time and (2) ______________ (缺少生活必需品)。Anther reasn why I dnated these is that I wanted them t knw that the fld may (3) ______________ (摧毁他们的家园)and carry away their belngings, but lve is always arund them. In additin, I als wanted them t knw they didn't have t (4) ______________ (担心困难状况)they are facing, because we wuld (5) ______________ (尽一切努力)t help them(6) ______________ (渡过难关)．T be hnest, I was very mved by the fact that althugh they(7) ______________ (面对罕见的灾难)，they still kept calm. Their spirit als inspired us t face difficulties and (8) ______________ (勇往直前)。
Thrugh this dnatin, I (9) ______________ (充分意识到)the fact that a small act f kindness als makes a big difference. As lng as we (10) ______________ (伸出援助之手)，we can bring warmth and lve t thers and make them (11) ______________ (在灾难中看到光明和希望)。
答案:
(1) made a dnatin t children
(2) shrt f many necessaries
(3) destry their huses
(4) wrry abut the difficult situatin
(5) make every effrt
(6) g thrugh difficulties
(7) faced such a rare disaster
(8) mve frward bravely
(9) am well aware f
(10) lend a helping hand
(11) see light and hpe in the disaster
B.将下列句子翻译成英语。
1.作为子女，无论我们有多忙，我们都应该在物质和精神上给予老人关怀。例如，我们应该常回家看看父母，给他们买一些他们喜欢的东西让他们开心。
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2.没有什么比照顾老人、使他们开心更重要了。我要回报他们给我的爱和关怀。
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3.我很乐意帮助那些缺少衣服、鞋子和书籍的孩子们。我相信他们会从我给他们的物品中感受到温暖和关怀。
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4.孩子是祖国的未来，我们要更多地关心他们的兴趣和生活状况，促进他们健康成长。
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5.关爱老人是中国的传统美德。我们应该经常陪伴他们，和他们聊天，让他们感到更快乐、不那么孤单。
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6.我们正在被各种各样的污染所包围。目前，很多志愿者为关爱地球所做的事情使我们感到温暖、感动和感激。
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7.我们面临的紧迫问题之一是如何关爱老人。我认为他们最需要的不是物质上的安慰，而是精神上的安慰。
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8.当我在学习上遇到困难时，爸爸妈妈总是鼓励我，给我信心。正是他们的关爱帮助我取得进步，变得越来越好。
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9.如果世界是一间小屋，关爱就是小屋中的一扇窗；如果世界是一片海，那么关爱就是茫茫大海上的一盏明灯。
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答案:
1.As children, n matter hw busy we are, we shuld give the ld spiritual and material care. Fr example, we shuld g hme t see ur parents frequently, buy smething they like and make them happy.
2. Nthing is mre imprtant than taking care f the elderly and making them happy. I wuld like t reward the lve and care they have given me.
3.I am willing t help the children wh are shrt f clthes, shes and bks. I believe they will feel warmth and care frm the items I give them.
4. Children are the future f ur mtherland. We shuld pay mre attentin t their interests and living cnditins, and make them grw healthily.
5. Caring fr the ld is a traditinal Chinese virtue. We shuld ften accmpany them, chat with them and make them feel happier and less lnely.
6. We are surrunded by all kinds f pllutin. At present, many vlunteers have dne smething t care fr the earth, which makes us feel warm, mved and grateful.
7.One f the pressing prblems we are facing is hw t care fr the elderly. I think what they need mst is nt material cmfrts but spiritual nes.
8. When I have truble with my study, my parents always cheer me up and give me cnfidence. It is their care that helps me make prgress and becme better and better.
9.If the wrld is a small huse, lve is a windw in the huse. If the wrld is a sea, lve is a light n the vast sea.
II.段落操练
将下列句子排成一篇文理通顺的短文。
1. My parents supprt me and lve me all the time.
2.Lve is everywhere in my life.
3. It is their lve that helps me make prgress and becme better and better.
4. My friends care abut me as well.
5.When I have truble with my study, my parents never get angry with me.
6. Instead, they always cheer me up and give me cnfidence.
7. My friends ften help me with my study.
8. I think everyne wh gets lve will be extremely happy.
9. In rder t shw my lve and gratitude, I will d smething fr them in return.
10. What they d makes me feel warm, tuched and grateful.
排序后的正确顺序是：_________________________________________________________________________
答案:
2-1-5-6-3-4-7-10-9-8
五、篇章实战－写短文
A.世界上还有很多需要帮助的人，他们有的可能生活在困境中，有的因为贫穷，孩子无法上学。国际慈善日就是让更多人知道慈善，让更多需要帮助的人能够得到温暖。请以“I Wuld Like t D Smething fr Charity”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
I Wuld Like t D Smething fr Charity
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答案:
The Internatinal Day f Charity is cming. I wuld like t d smething fr charity. I wuld like t sell ld things fr charity.
In sme pr parts f ur cuntry, many students can't g t schl fr varius reasns. Sme peple dn't have enugh mney t g t hspital, either. I think everyne shuld keep healthy and have the right t receive educatin. S we shuld make every effrt t help them. Just as the saying ges, “Many hands make light wrk.”
I wuld like t cllect sme ld but useful things t sell at schl. With the mney, I can help the children in the pr areas wh are shrt f clthes, shes and bks. I hpe they will feel warmth and care frm the sciety. I believe with the help f the sciety, the children wh are ut f schl will return t schl as sn as pssible.
As we all knw, children are the future and hpe f ur cuntry. We shuld pay mre attentin t their living cnditins and help them grw healthily. As lng as each f us lends a helping hand, they will certainly g thrugh their difficulties.
B.随着人口老龄化日趋严重，老年人也成为我们关注的焦点。作为学生，我们该如何关心、关爱身边的老年人？请以“Care fr the Old Peple Arund Us"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
Care fr the Old Peple Arund Us
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答案:
Caring fr the elderly has becme a scial prblem. As students, what can we d t shw ur lve and care t them?
First, we shuld ften cncern abut the life f the elderly. Fr example, we can ften chat with the elderly, and accmpany the elderly as ften as pssible. It's very nice t take the elderly ut fr a walk if we have time. I think caring fr the elderly nt just cncerns theirfd and husing, but their spiritual needs. Cmpany is what they need mst.
I always shw my respect and lve t the ld arund me. My grandparents dn't live with us, but I always d my best t help them. I usually visit them and help them d sme husewrk. Smetimes, I als g t a nursing hme t accmpany the elderly there, which makes them feel happier and less lnely.
In my pinin, it is ur duty t take care f the ld. As lng as everyne gives a little lve, the wrld will becme mre beautiful. Let's take actin t care fr the ld peple arund us.