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初中英语牛津译林版(2024)七年级下册(2024)Unit 7 Outdoor fun精品同步达标检测题
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这是一份初中英语牛津译林版(2024)七年级下册(2024)Unit 7 Outdoor fun精品同步达标检测题,文件包含Unit7Outdoorfun户外活动单元写作指导与演练原卷版docx、Unit7Outdoorfun户外活动单元写作指导与演练解析版docx等2份试卷配套教学资源,其中试卷共17页, 欢迎下载使用。
近三年考情分析
Unit 7的主题围绕“户外活动”。户外活动既可以放松心情,又可以强身健体。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能介绍自己在空闲时间进行的活动;
2.能简单介绍进行这些活动的注意事项及好处;
3.能叙述户外活动给生活带来的影响。。
【词汇积累】
Outdr activities:户外活动
cycling(骑自行车)hrse riding(骑马)hiking(徒步旅行)camping(露营)rller skating(滑旱冰)
skiing(滑雪)
与自然相关:
nature(自然)flwers(花)plants(植物)cuntryside(乡村)fresh air(新鲜空气)
活动准备与过程:
prepare(准备)set ff(出发)fllw(跟随)map(地图)get lst(迷路)arrive(到达)fix(修理)
tl(工具)teamwrk(团队合作)experience(经历)
时间与状态:
early(早地)excited(兴奋的)wrried(担心的)tired(累的)prud(自豪的)amazing(惊人的)
enjyable(愉快的)
【句式积累】
描述户外活动:
"I went n a [cycling/hrse riding/hiking] trip last weekend."
"We [camped/hiked/skied] in the cuntryside."
活动准备:
"We prepared fr the trip by [buying fd/packing tents/checking the weather]."
"We set ff early in the mrning t make sure we had enugh time."
活动过程中的经历:
"We fllwed the map, but we gt lst and had t ask fr directins."
"We tk lts f phts f the beautiful flwers and plants."
"We had t fix Sandy's bike n the way back."
感受与收获:
"It was an amazing experience and I had a lt f fun."
"I was prud f ur teamwrk when we fixed the bike tgether."
"I learnt a lt abut nature and hw t deal with prblems n my wn."
经常参加户外活动对我们的身心都大有好处。请你根据下列内容提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,第4点可适当发挥1—2句。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:1.上周日,你与同学们一起去野营;
2.你们在湖边搭了帐篷,老师教你们如何生火;
3.你忘记带午餐盒(lunchbx),同学们与你分享午餐,大家一起在树下享受美食和饮料;
4.这次活动带给你……
Taking part in utdr activities is really wnderful. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作框架设计】
标题:参加户外活动的乐趣
第一段:引言
开篇点题,强调参加户外活动的乐趣。
引出自己最近一次参加户外活动的经历(如:上周日与同学们一起去露营)。
第二段:活动描述
具体描述露营的地点(如:在湖边搭帐篷)。
提及活动中学习的技能(如:老师教我们如何生火)。
描述活动中的小插曲(如:我忘记带午餐盒,但同学们乐于分享他们的食物)。
第三段:活动体验与收获
描述在树下一起享受美食和饮料的愉快时光。
强调这次露营带来的乐趣(如:增强了同学间的友谊,带来了很多欢笑)。
突出在活动中学会的帮助他人的精神(如:当遇到问题时,我们学会了互相帮助)。
第四段:总结与期待
总结这次露营活动的意义和价值。
表达对下一次户外活动的期待(如:我期待着再次体验这样充满乐趣的一天)。
【范文赏读】
【答案】例文:
Taking part in utdr activities is really wnderful. Last Sunday I went camping with my classmates. We put up tents beside the lake. Our teacher taught us hw t make a fire. I frgt t take my lunchbx but my classmates were happy t share their fd with me. We enjyed lts f nice fd and drinks tgether under the tree. This camping really brught us a lt f fun and we learned t help each ther when having prblems. I’m lking frward t anther fun day nw.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据内容提示介绍自己上周末参加的一次野营活动,要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态采用一般过去时。可采用一段式写作,根据提示内容讲述自己的经历,并表明这次活动给自己带来了什么。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(1)
假如你是约翰,上周你的学校举行了风筝节(Kite Festival),请用英语写一封电子邮件把你的经历告诉你的笔友爱德华。词数80左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
提示:
1.上周我们在黄山湖公园(the Huangshan Lake Park)举行了风筝节;
2.我们花了一小时走到公园。进入公园后,我们朝沙滩走去;
3.抬头一看,天上有很多风筝在飞。我们从包里拿出了风筝;
4.一些同学在湖边放风筝,另一些在树下搭起了帐篷;
5.我们还享用了很多美食。我们……
注意:第5点必须要用2至3句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥。
Dear Edward,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All the best.
Jhn
【答案】例文
Dear Edward,
Last week, we held the Kite Festival in the Huangshan Lake Park. It tk us an hur t walk t the park. After entering the park, we walked twards the beach. We lked up and saw many kites flying in the sky. We tk the kites ut f ur bags. Sme students flew kites near the lake, and thers put up tents under the tree. We als enjyed lts f delicius fd. We fund it interesting t fly kites. Als, we had a picnic there. We had a gd time there.
All the best.
Jhn
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要用一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,按照所给提示,介绍我们怎么到达黄山湖公园,同学们是如何游玩的;
第二步, 展开合理想象,对除写作提示部分外的部分进行补充;
第三步,书写结束用语。
[亮点词汇]
①put up建造,搭建
②enjy享受
③als也
[高分句型]
①It tk us an hur t walk t the park. (it+takes/tk+时间+t d sth.)
②We fund it interesting t fly kites. (it作形式宾语)
(2)
假设国庆节期间你打算与你的家人去北京旅行,请根据表格内容,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,介绍一下你们的行程安排。
注意:短文的结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m lking frward t the trip and I’m sure we’ll have a gd time there.
【答案】One pssible versin:
I am planning t visit Beijing during the Natinal Day hliday with my family. We’ll get there by air at 10: 30 a m, n Octber 2, and we can enjy Beijing pera in the afternn. We are ging t climb the Great Wall n the mrning f Octber 3, and then visit the Summer Palace in the afternn. We can take phts there. On Octber 4, we will d sme shpping and try sme delicius fd. On the fifth f Octber, we will g back hme by train.
I’m lking frward t the trip and I’m sure we’ll have a gd time there.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求写一篇英语短文介绍国庆假期的行程安排;要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态用一般将来时;采用第一人称口吻;可采用2段落格式,第一段:介绍4天具体的行程安排;第二段:表达自己对假期的期待。写作时确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
(3)
请根据下面的提示,写一篇英语故事,内容可以适当发挥,不少于50词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示:
1. 一个女孩在森林里采花;
2. 她看到一所小房子。她敲门,但没人答应;
3. 她走进房子,那儿有一只熊;
4. 她和熊一起吃饭,成为了(becme过去式为became)好朋友。
Once upn a time, there was a girl called Jean. She lived near a big frest.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Once upn a time, there was a girl called Jean. She lived near a big frest. One day she picked flwers in the frest. Then she nticed a small huse. She kncked n the dr, but nbdy answered. S she walked int the huse. There was a bear there. The bear was friendly. He said, “Are yu hungry? Cme t have dinner with me!” Jean said, “OK.” Then they became gd friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,写一个故事;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生要注意逻辑顺序,可适当添加细节使文章更通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出故事的开端“一天,她去森林里采花”;
第二步,写出故事的发展,充实文章内容细节,可以对“熊”进行一些外貌或性格的描写;
第三步,写出故事的结局。“小女孩和熊成为了好朋友”。
[亮点词汇]
① pick flwers 采花
② in the frest 在森林里
③ ntice 注意到
④ knck n the dr 敲门
⑤ walk int 走进
⑥ becme gd friends 变成好朋友
[高分句型]
① Cme t have dinner with me!(祈使句)
(4)
请根据下面的故事梗概,发挥想象力,以“Tw little pigs”为题写一则小故事。要求:80个词左右。
时间:从前
地点:森林里
人物:幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪
情节:两只小猪长大了,猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林,到城市里看一看……
Tw little pigs
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【答案】例文
Tw little pigs
Once upn a time, there were tw little pigs. One was black and the ther was white. They lived happily with their mther in the frest. When they grew up, their mther decided t let them g ut f the frest and lk arund the city. And then they left hme with sme fd. When they gt t the city, they nticed peple in the city were nt really happy. S they returned t the frest and enjyed their life.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
提示:故事梗概已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,借用“简单介绍两只小猪”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从“时间、地点、人物、情节等”几个方面重点介绍两只小猪的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“它们享受着它们的生活”。
[亮点词汇]
①nce upn a time以前
②grw up长大
③enjy ne’s life享受某人的生活
[高分句型]
①When they grew up, their mther decided t let them g ut f the frest and lk arund the city.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②When they gt t the city, they nticed peple in the city were nt really happy.(when引导的时间状语从句)
(5)
假如你叫张华,今天是星期六,你和同学们一起去森林公园郊游,在那里度过了快乐的时光。请根据提示内容,用英语写一篇日记,70词左右。
要点:
1.天气;
2.目的地;
3.出行方式;
4.活动包括野餐、放风筝、爬山等;
5.自己的感受。
Saturday
I had a gd time tday.
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Saturday
I had a gd time tday. It was fine, and I gt t schl very early. My classmates and I tk a special bus t Frest Park at 8:30. When we gt there, we were very excited. The muntain was s beautiful. We culd see flwers and grass here and there. The air was s fresh. The birds were singing happily. We flew kites and climbed the muntain there. At nn, we had a picnic tgether. Everyne tk ut delicius fd and drinks t share. Then we danced and sang fr a lng time. Certainly we als tk many pictures tgether. We all enjyed the nature and felt very happy.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇日记。要求根据提示内容,介绍自己星期六的活动。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态用一般过去时。日记要分别介绍天气、目的地、出行方式、活动以及感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
甘肃兰州
分享马拉松看法
提纲类
2023年
辽宁丹东
表扬篮球队
提纲类
2022年
湖北襄阳
双减后课余活动
提纲类
时间
行程安排
10.2
坐飞机去北京,上午10:30到达,下午欣赏京剧
10.3
上午去爬长城,下午去颐和园游玩并拍照
10.4
购物并品尝美食
10.5
乘火车返回
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