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III. Summary Writing
Directins: Read the fllwing passage. Summarize the main idea and the main pint(s) f the passage in n mre than 60 wrds. Use yur wn wrds as far as pssible.
【来源】上海市进才中学2024-2025学年高三上英语9月月考英语试题
Light the Cities f the Future
The previusly unlit cycle path in the Netherlands has recently drawn ur attentin. It has been resurfaced with a material that cnsists f shining stnes in rder t create a well-lit rute. The Van Ggh path, s called after the artist wh lived in the twn f Nuenen in 1883, cmbines the traditinal with the cntemprary in a gesture that acknwledge Van Ggh’s masterpiece. The Starry Night, but als shws the way ahead fr city lighting. The Van Ggh path is nt a single case: it’s nt difficult t fresee a time when natural materials culd help light the cities f the future.
Why shuld we care abut city lighting? What’s wrng with current electrical lighting anyway? Well, the prblem that it causes is tw-fld. First, f curse, electricity in mst cities cme frm nn-renewable resurces. Accrding t the Internatinal Energy Agency, almst 20% f glbal electricity is cnsumed fr lighting, which is respnsible fr high levels f car emissins. But there’s als the belief that electric light itself is a frm f pllutin by destrying ur view f night sky.
Fr the abve reasns, then, it seems wise t investigate ther appraches. The city f Glasgw, is attempting t use intellect street lighting, t mnitr hw citizen interact with the urban landscape and minimize electricity cnsumptin and thus emissins. This “Smart City” apprach is seen by many as the way f the future, but sme designers are nt cnvinced.
They’re pineering the altgether mre riginal apprach f using materials frm the natural wrld in rder t replace electric light entirely. They believe that this new “technlgy” can ne day cmpletely replace micrchips and digital systems as we find better ways f making use f the light-prducing machines that already exist in the natural wrld.
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【答案】
The passage discusses the innvatin in city lighting by intrducing the Van Ggh Path in the Netherlands, which uses luminus stnes fr illuminatin. It highlights the envirnmental and aesthetic issues with current electrical lighting and explres alternatives such as intelligent street lighting and natural materials t create a mre sustainable and visually appealing urban envirnment.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章首先介绍了荷兰一条新铺设的发光自行车道——梵高之路，它使用了数千颗发光石来照明，以此引出城市照明的未来趋势。接着，文章介绍了当前城市照明存在的问题，包括能源消耗和光污染，并提出了智能街道照明和利用自然材料作为替代方案。最后，文章展望了这些新技术可能完全取代现有微芯片和数字系统的未来。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①The Van Ggh Path in the Netherlands has been resurfaced with luminus stnes t create a well-lit rute.
②Electrical lighting in mst cities cmes frm nn-renewable resurces and cntributes t high levels f carbn emissins.
③Electrical light is cnsidered a frm f pllutin that destrys ur view f the night sky.
④Alternatives such as intelligent street lighting and natural materials are being explred t create a mre sustainable urban envirnment.
2. 缜密构思
将第①要点作为引入，第②和第③要点整合讨论现有城市照明的问题，第④要点作为解决方案和未来展望。
3. 遣词造句
The Van Ggh Path, a luminus cycle path in the Netherlands, represents an innvative apprach t city lighting. Current electrical city lighting is prblematic due t its reliance n nn-renewable resurces and the pllutin it causes.
Alternatives like intelligent street lighting and the use f natural materials are being cnsidered fr a mre sustainable and visually pleasing urban envirnment.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The passage discusses the innvatin in city lighting by intrducing the Van Ggh Path in the Netherlands, which uses luminus stnes fr illuminatin. 运用了一个复杂的主从复合句，对原文第一段进行了概括。其中which引导的定语从句，表达非常高级。
[高分句型2] It highlights the envirnmental and aesthetic issues with current electrical lighting and explres alternatives such as intelligent street lighting and natural materials t create a mre sustainable and visually appealing urban envirnment. 运用了such as引出具体的例子，对第二段和第三段进行了总结。其中不定式t create作目的状语，表达非常高级。
IV. Translatin
Directins: Translate the fllwing sentences int English, using the wrd given in the brackets.
1．成长与舒适不能共存，难道不是吗? (cexist) (汉译英)

【答案】Grwth and cmfrt can’t cexist, can they?
【详解】考查动词、名词和反义疑问句。表示“成长”用名词grwth，表示“舒适”用名词cmfrt，二者为并列关系，用连词and连接，grwth and cmfrt为主语，句首单词首字母大写。表示“不能”用情态动词的否定形式can’t；表示“共存”用cexist，位于can’t后，动词用原形。陈述部分是否定的，反问部分将陈述句的否定形式改成肯定形式，陈述部分用can’t，疑问部分用can，主语用they“它们”，代替Grwth and cmfrt。故翻译为Grwth and cmfrt cannt cexist, can they?
2．这款新发布的电子产品在耐用性上比竞争对手的差得多。（inferir）（汉译英）

【答案】This newly released electrnic prduct is far inferir t its cmpetitrs in durability.
【详解】考查名词、形容词（短语）和非谓语动词。句子应该是介绍当前的情况，时态宜用一般现在时；主语“这款新发布的电子产品”可用名词短语this newly released electrnic prduct，其中过去分词released作修饰prduct的定语，表被动，“比……差得多”可用形容词短语be far inferir t，be动词用is，t的宾语“（它的）竞争对手”可用名词短语its cmpetitrs，状语“在耐用性上”可用介词短语in durability。故翻译为This newly released electrnic prduct is far inferir t its cmpetitrs in durability.
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【答案】Fr the sake f safety, the authrities insist that turists shuld nt deviate frm the marked paths when sightseeing.
【详解】考查固定短语、宾语从句和时态。因句子表示的是一个客观情况，谓语动词使用一般现在时。表示“出于……起见”短语为fr the sake f；“当局”可译为the authrities；“坚持要求”可用insist that，后面接宾语从句，用虚拟语气，即(shuld) d；“偏离”可译为deviate frm；“标记的路径”可译为marked paths；“在游览观光时”可译为 when sightseeing。故翻译为Fr the sake f safety, the authrities insist that turists shuld nt deviate frm the marked paths when sightseeing.
4．让公众大为震惊的是，原本用来运输汽油的车却被用来运输食用油，这又一次引发了公众对国内食品安全的担忧。(intend) （汉译英）

【答案】T the great shck f the public, the tank truck riginally intended fr transprting gasline was used t carry edible il, which nce again arused public cncerns abut dmestic fd safety.
【详解】考查固定短语和定语从句。表示“让某人大为震惊”短语为t the great shck f sb.，表示“公众”应用the public；主语“the public”为the tank truck；表示“原本用来运输汽油”翻译为riginally intended fr transprting gasline，为过去分词作定语；表示“被用来”短语为be used t d sth.；表示“运输”用动词carry；表示“食用油”短语为edible il；后跟which引导的非限制性定语从句，表示“又一次”短语为nce again；表示“引发”应用动词aruse；表示“公众对国内食品安全的担忧”翻译为public cncerns abut dmestic fd safety。发生在过去用一般过去时。故翻译为T the great shck f the public, the tank truck riginally intended fr transprting gasline was used t carry edible il, which nce again arused public cncerns abut dmestic fd safety.
V. Guided Writing
Directins: Write an English cmpsitin in 120-150 wrds accrding t the instructins given belw in Chinese.
【来源】上海市宝山区2024-2025学年高三上学期10月调研测试英语卷
假定你是李华，你校读书月期间组织英语名著阅读活动，外籍教师Jhn建议以小组合作形式展示分享阅读成果，现征求学生意见，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你对展示形式的看法和理由;
2. 你的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jhn,
Hpe this email finds yu well.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jhn,
Dear Jhn, Hpe this email finds yu well.
I believe that a grup presentatin wuld be an excellent way t shwcase ur reading achievements. It encurages cllabratin and allws students t learn frm each ther’s perspectives. Wrking in grups helps students develp their cmmunicatin and teamwrk skills. I suggest that each grup chses a different bk t ensure diversity in ur presentatins. I als recmmend that each grup includes a visual aid t help illustrate their pints.
Lking frward t hearing yur thughts n these suggestins and eager t participate in this cllabrative learning experience.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给读书月期间组织英语名著阅读活动提出建议，并对展示形式提出看法和理由
【详解】1.词汇积累
杰出的：excellent→utstanding
合作：cllabratin→cperatin
观点：perspectives→viewpints
多样性：diversity→variety
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：It encurages cllabratin and allws students t learn frm each ther’s perspectives.
拓展句：Nt nly des it encurage cllabratin, but als it allws students t learn frm each ther’s perspectives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Wrking in grups helps students develp their cmmunicatin and teamwrk skills. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】I als recmmend that each grup shuld include a visual aid t help illustrate their pints. (运用了that引导的宾语从句且从句使用了虚拟语气)