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本节导航
模板01 介绍他人
模板02 介绍自己
识
中考·题型解读
善
总结·模板构建
答｜题｜步｜骤
模｜板｜构｜建
模板01 介绍他人
通常分为三段：
1.引出人物并作出具体介绍，例如：年龄、身份、外貌、性格等；
2.叙述典型事例，通过事例说明其品质以及对“我”的影响；
3.评价人物，或夸赞或指责，或从事例中得到的启示、感受等。
『典型例题』
一
即将毕业，请以“My favrite teacher”为题，写一篇英语短文。短文应包括以下内容：
1.老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；
2.以事例描述喜爱的原因；
3.表达对这位老师的感激与祝福。
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2-3分；
4.词数：80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
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【高分范文】
My favrite teacher
It's time t graduate frm junir high schl. I'd like t write smething abut my favrite teacher.
Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best.
She is a lvely and utging girl wh lves singing and reading. She is f medium height and has lng straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was s shy that I was afraid t take part in the English cmpetitin. She
encuraged me nt t give up any chances t shw myself t thers. Thanks t her, I changed my
attitude t the challenge and wn the first prize.
I will never frget the wnderful time we were tgether. Best wishes t her!
【参考译文】
我最喜欢的老师
到了从初中毕业的时候了。我想写一些关于我最喜欢的老师的事情。在所有老师中，我最喜欢我的英语老师。她是一个可爱外向的女孩,喜欢唱歌和阅读。她中等身材,留着长直发。
在七年级的时候,我很害羞,以至于不敢参加英语比赛。她鼓励我不要放弃任何向他人展示自己的机会。多亏了她，我改变了对挑战的态度并获得了一等奖。
我永远不会忘记我们在一起的美好时光。祝福她!
二
自开展 “ 向阳光少年学习” 的活动以来，某中学 涌现了许许多多的 “ 阳光少年” 。请你根据以下图 示，以 “A Sunshine Teenager” 为题写一篇英语短 文，介绍你身边的一位 “ 阳光少年”（假设他的名
字叫李华）。
写作要求：
1. 内容完整，语言流畅，可适当发挥；
2.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名；
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Sunshine Teenager







【审题指导】
1. 本题是一道话题作文， 要求考生描写一位“ 阳光少年” 的事迹；
2.使用一般现在时；
3.短文须涵盖以下三个要点：（1）品质特征； （2）为人处事；（3）学习活动;
4. 在三个方面均可进行拓展。
【写作指导】
【高分范文】
A Sunshine Teenager
Since ur schl began the Sunshine Teenager activity, there have appeared many sunshine teenagers. Here I’d like t intrduce ne f them t yu.
Li Hua is kind, warm-hearted and utging, and is always ready t help thers.
At schl, he ften helps his classmates with their studies. At hme, he shares the husewrk with his parents after schl, and is always thankful what they have dne fr him. Nt being afraid f any difficulties, he always wrks hard at his lessns. He als takes part in many kinds f scial and sprts activities.Such is Li Hua, a sunshine teenager that we shuld learn frm.
模板02 介绍自己
通常分为三段：
1.引出人物并作出具体介绍，例如：年龄、身份、外貌、性格等；
2.介绍自己的能力，经历。
3.表达自己的愿望和想法。
『典型例题』
假如你叫李华，是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生，你校学生会(Student Unin)正在招募学生干部，你很想加入，请根据下图提供的信息，用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。
提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，可适当发挥；
2．词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和
地名。
Dear Chairman，
I am Li Hua, a student frm Class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle Schl.I'd like t be a member f Student Unin.






Yurs，
Li Hua
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：
1．写作时以第一人称为主；
2．图表中的全部信息要一一列举，不要遗漏；
3．词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
Dear Chairman，
I am Li Hua, a student frm Class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle Schl.I'd like t be a member f Student Unin.I like ding sprts s I am quite healthy and fit.I like studying very much and ften help my classmates with their lessns.I get n well with thers, s I have many friends.Cmmunicating with thers is ne f my abilities.I think it's very imprtant as a member f Student Unin.And I'd like t help thers, t.
If I can be a member f Student Unin, I'll be able t make mre friends.And I can d mre fr thers.
I hpe I can be received. Lk frward t yur answer.
Yurs，
Li Hua
解
真题·思维剖析
（2023·福建·统考中考真题）
某地“美丽乡村（Beautiful Village）”项目吸引了不少外宾，暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华，希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示，给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad t knw that yu are in need f sme tur guides.
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【高分范文】
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad t knw that yu are in need f sme tur guides. I’d like t be ne f them. I think I am suitable fr the jb.
First f all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have wn several prizes in English speaking cmpetitins. I am als gd at telling stries. S I can intrduce lcal culture t freigners in English. Mst imprtantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help freigners better understand the life f the village.
I wuld be thankful if I culd be given the chance.
Yurs,
Li Hua
二
（2023·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题）
榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中，荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍他的事迹，并呼吁大家向他学习。
要求：
1. 内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 至少含有两个复合句。
Zha Yu wn the 2023 New Times’ Gd Teenager award. Nw, I’ll intrduce him t yu.
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Zha Yu wn the 2023 New Times’ Gd Teenager award. Nw, I’ll intrduce him t yu. Zha Yu is 15 years ld. He is in Class Six, Grade Nine. He has sme hbbies. He likes playing ping-png. He thinks it’s relaxing. He is als gd at playing the erhu.
Zha Yu is very creative and he has invented sme small things. He even wn tw prizes fr his inventins. Zha Yu is helpful. When he is free, he usually wrks as a vlunteer in the cmmunity. Als, he is active. He ften takes part in many meaningful activities. Zha Yu is s kind that all his classmates like him.
Zha Yu is an excellent by. Let’s learn frm him.
练
好题·题型通关
一
是您, 启迪我们的心智; 是您, 传播我们的知识; 是您, 播种我们的希望……这就是我的老师。请根据下面的提示给你的好友Paul回一封电子邮件, 介绍一下你最喜爱的老师。
要求: (1)词数100左右(开头句和结尾句已给出, 不计入总词数); (2)请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥; (3) 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Paul,
Thank yu fr yur e-mail. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my favrite teacher.






In a wrd, I think she is ne f the best teachers in ur schl. We all lve her and respect her.
Yurs,
__________(落款)
【高分范文】
Dear Paul,
Thank yu fr yur e-mail. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my favrite teacher.
Wang Lin, my favrite teacher, is frm Shanghai, and she is arund 30 years ld. She teaches me English. She has lng black hair and she always wears a pair f glasses.
She is strict with us in ur study, s all the students are well-behaved in her class. Hwever, she can get alng well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. She will help us t deal with the prblems when we have difficulties. We all like her lessns a lt. That’s because she is very creative. Her teaching style is quite different frm that f the thers. She prepares her lessns well and crrects ur hmewrk carefully. In class she always encurages us t think hard and develp ur ability t study n ur wn.
In a wrd, I think she is ne f the best teachers in ur schl. We all lve her and respect her.
Yurs,
______(落款)
二
每到毕业季，学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感谢之情，如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假”“最后一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和要求，以“I Lve Yu, My English Teacher”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
1．What's yur English teacher like?
2．Why d yu like him r her?
要求：
1．短文须包括提示的两个问题，可适当发挥；
2．短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
I Lve Yu, My English Teacher
I have met many gd teachers in the last three years.







【高分范文】
I Lve Yu, My English Teacher
I have met many gd teachers in the last three years. My English teacher Mr.Huang is ne f them. Nw let me tell yu smething abut him.
Mr.Huang is f medium height and a little thin. He always wears a pair f glasses. He is very strict with us but cares abut every student. When the students frm pr families are in truble, he is always ready t help them.
I like my English teacher because he has many gd ways t make ur class lively. Many students fall in lve with English because f him.
I lve yu, my English teacher! I will never frget yu frever.
书面表达是中考的必考题型,它应符合以下要求。
1.中心明确
2.连续流畅
3.语言得体
(1)写作时应尽量避免使用冗长、复杂、易犯错误的句子,用简洁、精练的语句表达,做到言简意赅。
(2)写作前把要表达的内容整理归纳,理清思路,做到条理分明,要点齐全,切忌逐词逐句按汉语方式翻译,生编硬造。
(3)能清楚表达文章内容的前提下,尽量措辞,不时出现“闪光点”,这将为你的文章增光添彩。
高分要求
1.写出全部内容要点；
2.语句流畅；基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致；
3.词数达到要求；基本无单词拼写及标点错误。
第一步：
审题，列提纲
第二步：
1.根据提纲撰写文章
2.检查文章，改正错误
第三步：
全文抄写于答题卡，不出现涂改。
参考词句
单词
lvely可爱的；utging外向的；humrus幽默的；patient有耐心的；encurage鼓励；attitude态度
短语
be f medium height中等身材； give up放弃； thanks t多亏，由于；
be regarded as .被当作..； think highly f..对...评价很高；
be respected by.受...尊敬
句型
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2.Gd helps thse wh help themselves.自助者天助之。
3.He has a strng will and never gives up.他意志坚强，从不放弃。
4.He's very helpful. He is always ready t help thers.他很乐于助人。他总是乐于帮助别人。
5.He is gd at math and he is als talented in sprts.他擅长数学，在体育方面也很有天赋。
6.There is n dubt that he is a successful teacher.毫无疑问，他是一位成功的教师
要点提示
词块串联
开头： 引出主题
向……介绍… …（intrduce … t … ）
正文： 描述 “ 阳光少 年” 的品质特征、 为 人处事和学习活动等方面
为人处事（help with studies, share the husewrk, is always thankful fr）
学习活动（wrk hard,take part in, many kinds f scial and sprts activities）
结尾： 号召大家向他学习
向…… 学习（learn frm … ）
参考词句
单词
lvely可爱的；utging外向的；humrus幽默的；patient有耐心的；encurage鼓励；attitude态度
短语
be f medium height中等身材； give up放弃； thanks t多亏，由于；
be regarded as .被当作..； think highly f..对...评价很高；
be respected by.受...尊敬
句型
1.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。
2.N pains, n gains.没有付出就没有收获。
3.I used t be shy，but nw I'm utging.我过去很害羞，但现在我很外向。
4. My hbbies are playing basketball and reading bks. 我的爱好是打篮球和看书。
5. I am gd at swimming and playing basketball. 我擅长于游泳和打篮球。
6. My dream is t be a nurse when I grw up. 我的梦想是长大后当一名护士。
7.It's time t d…到了做..….的时间了。
8.Withut her help, I will never.如果没有她的帮助，我永远都无法...
What kind f persn yu are
friendly, active…
What yu are gd at
speak English, tell stries…
What yu can d
intrduce lcal culture, help freigners…
Name
Wang Lin
Age
arund 30
Frm
Shanghai
Persnality
kind—get alng well with all;
strict—students well-behaved in class;
patient—help students;
creative—interesting classes, easy t understand.
Yur ideas
. . .