2021届高考英语通用版一轮复习考点专讲：考点64书面表达日记学案

考点64 书面表达日记

高考频度：★★★★★

日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。在日记中，人们会对事件发表议论，阐述一下自己的态度或体会。日记中所记录的事情可以是自己的直接经历也可以是描述他人的事情。日记的种类有很多种，从体裁角度，可以分为记事型日记和议论型日记。记事型日记是以某种顺序描述某一件事情发生发展的过程。而议论型日记是针对当天的某一事件或某一现象表明自己的看法或态度。

 日记的篇章结构可以从以下几个角度入手：首先要对所发生的事件或现象进行描述。按照事件发展的先后顺序进行，适当添加对天气或景物或心情的描述。其次要发表感想或议论，针对事件进行感悟或议论性的描述，以使文章有所立意。最后要对未来提出展望或推测，或表示决心、态度、观点、意图、希冀等。

写好英文日记要注意以下几点：

1. 日记的格式

  英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy，Cloudy等。 

（1）日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如： 

  A)September 1，2017或September 1st，2017也可省略写成Sept. 1，2017或Sept. 1st，2017;the 1st of September in 2004(月份不可以缩写) 

  B)只有月、日：September 1或September 1st(月份可以缩写) 

  C)只有年、月：September 2004或the September of 2004(月份不可以缩写) 

  以上的1或1st都应读作the first. 

（2）星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。如： 

  Saturday，October 22nd，2004;October 22nd，2004 Saturday 

（3）天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如： 

  Saturday，March 4，2017，Windy;1st January，2017，Fine

2. 日记的时态：由于日记是对当天所发生事情的回顾，故常用一般过去时。在发表议论或感想时，也可使用现在完成时或一般将来时。

3. 日记的人称：因为日记是记载自己的亲身经历，故应用第一人称，语言尽量口语化，按照事情发生的先后顺序，清楚、准确、连贯地把事情表达出来。

【写作模板】

(月、日、年、星期、天气)

　　(标题)

　　Today/Yesterday, I/we .(事件)

　　In the morning, we ______________; then ______________; after that______________ . By the time we had a good time. Finally . I’ll never forget the memorable day! ______________________________________ (事件经过)

　　From this activity, I have learned that/I think . ______________ (事件意义和自己的感想)

假定你是李华，昨天你参加了你校举办的以"我最喜欢的一本书"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语日记，要点如下：

1.描述当时比赛的情况；

2.你的表现和感受。

注意：

1.词数120左右(开头已经给出，但不计入总词数)；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Friday          2nd May 2014                                                          Fine

Yesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I like best".

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Friday    2nd May 2014                                                             Fine

Yesterday afternoon I attended the English speech contest held by my school. The topic of it is "The book I like best".

When I knew that the first five candidates performed very well, I felt a little worried. At the thought of the words "I can do it", I became calm a lot. Soon it was my turn, when I said "The book I like best is Three Days to See written by Helen Keller. From the book, I realize that it would be an excellent rule to live happily each day as if we should die tomorrow." my teachers and classmates cheered for me. I gained much confidence and went on to do my best. Finally I won first prize.

Be happy every day and try my best to do everything. I’ll keep it in my mind and make it come true.

【解析】本篇是关于日记的写作，同时也是一篇半开放性的写作。文章要记述你校举办的以"我最喜欢的一本书"为主题的英语演讲比赛。话题对学生来说比较熟悉，但是要根据提示合理发挥，拓展主题。具体来说，文章内容应包括以下三个方面：(1)别的演讲同学发挥得好，对你所产生的影响；(2)当轮到你作演讲时，你的表现如何；(3)自己的感受是什么。这样文章才能够连贯通顺。特别要注意的是，由于文章是日记体，所以文章中的时态以"一般过去时"为主。

假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展"续写雷锋日记"活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿。

注意：

1.日记的开头已为你写好。

2.词数100左右。

Saturday, June 2Fine

This morning,___________________________________________________________________________

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【思路点拨】

这是一篇看图写作，一共四幅图。做题时：1. 认真读图，可知四幅图体现了你所做的一件好事，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。

【范文赏析】

Saturday, June 2Fine 

This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, which could take them there directly. They appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.

Writing 1（甘肃省会宁县2020届高三第四次月考）

12月9日，星期天上午，你们班同学到学校附近的会师园组织了一次环保活动。请根据下表内容，写一篇日记发表你对此次活动的看法。

注意：

1.日记必须包括表内所有的内容，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯。

2. 日记格式及首句已给出，不列入总词数。

3. 词数：100词左右

4. 参考词汇：烟蒂 cigarette end

December 9,  Sunday                                            Fine

This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby Huishi park. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 2（广东省广州市2019届高三普通高中毕业班综合测试）

你校昨天举行了年度校园“科技节” (Science & Technology Day)。请你写一篇日记，内容包括：

1. 科技节的主要内容；

2. 你所参加的活动及原因；

3. 你的感想。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 1

【范文】

December 9, Sunday                            Fine

This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby Huishi park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups. The first group collected the rubbish ,such as the waste paper, cigarette ends, plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.

I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people’s health and happiness ,measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.

Writing 2

【范文】

May 15th, Sunny

Dear Diary

Our school held the annual “Science & Technology Day” yesterday and I found it to be a hugely rewarding experience. Activities included technological knowledge quizzes, student research exhibitions and advanced technologies lectures. My classmates and I really enjoyed it all and deeply appreciated the efforts of the organizers.

I took part in the “create your own robot” competition, which was a great learning opportunity. The hand-on experience really helped me to better understand the theory behind robotics. 

Thanks to the festival, I have a much clearer understanding of technology and its applications than before. It has motivated me to focus on science as a career, and hopefully make a meaningful contribution to our society.

I can’t wait for the next festival.