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(一)课前自主学习
Ⅰ.阅读单词——————知其意
1.junior adj. 青少年的;地位(或职位、级别)低下的
2.severe adj. 严重的;严厉的,严格的;艰巨的
3.temporary adj. 短暂的;暂时的
4.allocate vt. 分配
5.adequate adj. 足够的;合乎需要的
6.mature adj. 成熟的
vi. 成熟;使充分发展
7.vivid adj. 清晰的,生动的,鲜明的
8.handy adj. 易使用的;便利的
9.goodwill n. 友好;善意
10.depth n. 最深处;深度;深厚
11.soul n. 灵魂
12.automatic adj. 自动的
13.ache vi.& n.[纵联1] 疼痛
Ⅱ.重点单词——————写其形
1.directly adv. 径直地;直接地
conj. 一……就……
2.predict vt. 预言,预告,预报
3.assist vt. 帮助,协助
4.advocate vt.[纵联2] 拥护;支持;提倡
5.quit vt.& vi.[纵联3] 停止;放弃;离开
6.instant adj. 即食的,方便的;立刻的
n. 瞬间,片刻
7.obey vt.& vi. 服从,听从,顺从
8.talent n. 天资,天赋;天才
9.rebuild vt. 重建;改建
10.outstanding_adj.[纵联4] 优秀的,杰出的,出色的
11.thankful adj. 感激的,感谢的
12.apart adv. 分开,分离
13.sorrow n. 悲伤,悲痛
14.parttime adj.& adv. 部分时间的(地);兼职的(地)
15.uncertain adj. 无把握的;不确定的
16.instructor n. 教练;导师
Ⅲ.拓展单词——————通其变
1.surround vt.环绕,围绕→surrounding adj.周围的→surroundings n.环境,周围的事物
2.suffering n.疼痛,痛苦;折磨→suffer vi.& vt.遭受;忍受
3.appreciation n.感激,感谢;欣赏;理解;(艺术方面的)鉴定,评估→appreciate vt.欣赏;感激
4.accomplish vt.完成,实现→accomplishment n.完成,实现
5.adapt vi.& vt.(使)适应;改编→adaptation n.适应;改编;改编本,改写本
6.admirable adj.令人钦佩的,令人羡慕的,值得赞美的→admire vt.钦佩;赞赏;仰慕→admiration n.钦佩;赞赏;羡慕
7.unbearable adj.无法忍受的→bearable adj.可忍受的→bear vt.承受;忍受;承担
8.accompany vt.陪伴,陪同;伴随;为……伴奏→company n.公司;陪伴;同伴,伙伴
9.entertainment n.娱乐活动;娱乐;招待,款待→entertain vt.使快乐;招待,款待→entertaining adj.有趣的,使人愉快的
10.motivation n.动力,动机→motivate vt.激励,激发;成为……的动机→motivated adj.积极的,主动的
纵联1.拜访“疼痛”家族
①ache疼痛 ②headache头痛
③backache背痛 ④stomachache胃痛
⑤toothache牙疼 ⑥earache耳痛
⑦heartache心痛
纵联2.“支持,拥护”速记
①advocate ②support
③sustain ④in favour of
⑤back up ⑥be for
纵联3.不要轻易“停止,放弃”
①quit ②stop
③abandon ④pause
⑤desert ⑥give up
纵联4.“优秀人才”描绘词
①outstanding优秀的 ②talented有才能的
③capable有能力的 ④excellent优秀的
⑤gifted有天赋的 ⑥intelligent聪明的
⑦brilliant卓越的
单元话题——追求幸福
子话题1 积极的生活态度
①optimistic adj. 乐观的
②relaxing adj. 令人放松的
③compliment n. 恭维;敬意
④pleasant adj. 令人愉快的
⑤expectancy n. 期待,期望
⑥enjoyment n. 享受
⑦wellbeing n. 幸福;生活安宁
⑧fulfillment n. 完成;满足(感)
⑨stable adj. 稳定的
⑩content adj. 满足的,满意的
子话题2 消极的情感状态
①pessimistic adj. 悲观的
②frustrated adj. 挫败的
③complain vi.& vt. 抱怨,诉苦
④pressure n. 压力
⑤upset adj. 沮丧的
⑥apathetic adj. 冷漠的
⑦lethargic adj. 无生气的
⑧awkward adj. 令人尴尬的
⑨depressed adj. 郁闷的
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一) 阅读中的词汇应用
1.(2016·浙江高考完形)During the war, my husband was stationed at an army camp in a desert in California. I went to live there in order to be near him. I hated the place. I had never before been so unhappy. My husband was ordered out on a longterm duty, and I was left in a tiny shack (棚屋) alone. The heat was __❶__ (bearable) — almost 125 even in the shade of a cactus (仙人掌). Not a soul to talk to❷. The wind blew nonstop, and all the food I ate, and the very air I breathed, were filled with sand, sand, sand!
①用所给词的适当形式填空:unbearable
②将加黑的句子翻译成汉语:无人可交谈
2.(2012·全国卷Ⅱ阅读E)We are all born with growth mindsets. (Otherwise, we wouldn't be able to live in the world.) But parents, teachers, and __❶__ (instructor) often push us into fixed mindsets by encouraging certain❷ actions and misdirecting praise. Dweck's book, Mindset: The New Psychology of Success, and online instruct ional program explain this in depth❸.But she says there are many little things you can start doing today to make sure that your children, grandchildren and even you are never defeated by failure.
①用所给词的适当形式填空:instructors,其同根词instructions意为“说明书”。
②写出加黑词在本单元的反义词:uncertain,certain在本句中意为“某些”。
③写出加黑词在此处的汉语意思:深度,in depth意为“深入地,全面地”。
高考采撷(二) 写作中的词汇应用
(根据汉语及提示词翻译句子)
1.(2017·浙江高考书面表达)但当他看向那边时,他立即看到那根本不是一只狗,而是一只狼。(instantly)
But_when_he_looked_to_the_side,_he_saw_instantly_that_it_wasn't_a_dog_at_all,_but_a_wolf.
2.(2016·全国卷Ⅲ书面表达)我宁愿我现在在北京,这样我就能陪你去书店了。(accompany)
I_would_rather_I_were_in_Beijing_now,_in_which_case_I_would_accompany_you_to_the_bookstore.
(二)课堂重点释疑
1.surround vt.包围,围绕,环绕
[记牢]
(1)surround oneself with sb. 使自己身边围绕某人
be surrounded by/with ... 被……包围
(2)surrounding adj. 周围的
surroundings n. 环境(指周围的具体的物质环境)
[练通]
单句语法填空
①I came to realize that the key to success lay in trying to surround myself with creative people.
②Standing in the watchtower, we admired the surrounding (surround) scenes.
③She was faced with a new job, in unfamiliar surroundings (surround) with strange people.
完成句子
④Surrounded_by_the_forest (被森林包围着), the village looks very beautiful.
⑤In a word, you are welcome to our school and I hope you can adapt_to_the_new_
surroundings (很快适应新环境) soon.
[写美]
⑥(2013·江苏高考书面表达)在图1中,一名男子正试图在被树桩(stump)包围的孤树上张贴横幅,但徒劳无功。
In_Picture_1,_a_man_is_trying_to_put_up_a_banner_on_a_lonely_tree_surrounded_by_stumps,_but_in_vain.
2.adapt vi.& vt.(使)适应;改编
[记牢]
(1)adapt (oneself) to (使……)适应于
adapt ... from ... 根据……改编……
be adapted for ... 为……而改写/改编
(2)adaptable adj. 能适应的;可修改的
adaptation n. 适应;改编;改写本
[练通] 单句语法填空
①All in all, I hope you can adapt yourself (you) to the new environment and we can become good friends.
②Adapted from J.K. Rowling's book series of the same title, the Harry Potter movies are universally acknowledged as classics.
③Mike, Mary and I had a discussion about the adaptation (adapt) of the classic literature yesterday.
④Most of these tools have been specially adapted for use by disabled people.
⑤It was the culture, rather than the language, that made it hard for him to adapt to the new environment abroad.
[用准] 注意adapt与adopt在拼写和意思上的差别。adopt 意为“采纳;收养”。
[写美]
⑥(2014·江西高考书面表达)对你们所有新生来说,如何使自己适应新的环境是你们必须面对的第一件事。
To_all_of_you,_fresh_students,_how_to_adapt_yourselves_to_the_new_environment_is_the_first_thing_that_you_have_to_face.
3.advocate vt.拥护;支持;提倡n.提倡者,拥护者
[记牢]
(1)advocate (doing) sth. 提倡/拥护/支持(做)某事
主张……[从句谓语动词用“(should+)动词原形”]
(2)be an advocate of/for ……的提倡者/拥护者
[练通] 单句语法填空
①Many experts advocate reducing (reduce) the amount of children's homework and also advocate that children (should)_be_given (give) more free time.
②She has always been an advocate of/for changes to English spelling, to make it easier to learn.
③It is advocated that webbased selfaccess learning should be integrated into college courses.
[写美]
④(2011·四川高考书面表达)有人主张学校应为学生组织更多的活动,通过减少学生的家庭作业,让学生有更多的时间参加活动。
It_is_advocated_that_schools_should_organize_more_activities_for_students_and_leave_students_more_time_for_activities_by_giving_them_less_homework.
4.accompany vt.陪伴,陪同;伴随;为……伴奏
[记牢]
(1)accompany sb. to sp. 陪伴某人去某地
accompany sb. at/on 为某人伴奏
be accompanied with/by ... 伴随……发生;由……陪同
(2)company n. [U]陪伴; [C]公司
keep sb. company 陪伴某人
companion n. 同伴;陪伴;伴侣
[练通]
单句语法填空
①I don't think it's necessary for parents to accompany their children to college.
②While she was singing on the stage, her mother was accompanying her on/at the piano.
③The storm is accompanied with/by thunder.
完成句子
④I'll keep_you_company while you're waiting for her.
你等她时我会陪着你。
⑤Much to my regret, I was unable to keep my promise to accompany_you_to_Shanghai.
令我感到非常遗憾的是,我没能信守诺言陪你去上海。
句式升级
⑥When children are accompanied by their parents, they are allowed to enter the stadium.(现在分词作状语)
→Accompanied_by_their_parents,_children_are_allowed_to_enter_the_stadium.
[用准] “陪伴某人做某事”不能表达成“accompany sb. to do sth.”,而是表达成“accompany sb. to a place”或者“do sth. in the company of sb.”。
[写美]
⑦(2010·山东高考书面表达)我确实很抱歉下周末我不能陪你去北京,这是我答应过的。
I_am_indeed_very_sorry_that_I_can't_accompany_you_to_Beijing_next_weekend,_which_I_have_promised.
5.quit vt.& vi.停止;放弃;离开;辞去(工作);辍学
[记牢]
quit (doing) sth. 停止(做)某事
quit office/school/one's job 离职/退学/辞掉工作
[练通]
单句语法填空/单句改错
①You must quit smoking (smoke). Most important of all, you should start taking exercise.
②Cathy quit the office when her son was born so that she could stay at home and take care of her family.去掉the
完成句子
③He quit_his_job and struck out on his own as a publisher.
他辞去原来的工作,独自经营出版社。
[用准] quit的过去式和过去分词:quit, quit或quitted, quitted。
[写美]
④(2010·广东高考书面表达)我们没有人认为Ethan可以做到,但他确实停止了看电视。
None_of_us_thought_Ethan_could_do_it,_but_he_did_quit_(watching)_TV.
6.entertainment n.娱乐活动;娱乐;招待,款待
[记牢]
(1)entertain vt. 使娱乐,使快乐;招待
entertain sb. to sth. 用某物招待某人
entertain sb. with sth. 用某物使某人快乐
(2)entertaining adj. 有趣的;令人愉快的
[练通]
单句语法填空
①He entertained us for hours with his stories and jokes last night.
②Pets are amusing and entertaining (entertain), but we are in a way doing animals harm.
完成句子
③To my great joy, he promised to entertain_me_to ice cream.
令我非常高兴的是,他答应请我吃冰淇淋。
[写美]
④(2014·上海高考书面表达)就涉及的健康、娱乐、文化三个栏目,我建议娱乐栏目应该去掉。
Of_the_three_columns_concerning_health,_entertainment_and_culture,_my_suggestion_is_that_the_column_of_entertainment_(should)_be_removed.
7.assist vt.帮助,协助
[记牢]
(1)assist (sb.) in doing sth. 帮助(某人)做某事
assist sb. with sth. 帮助某人某事
(2)assistance n. 帮助,援助
come/go to sb.'s assistance 来/去帮助某人
with the assistance of ... 在……的帮助下
(3)assistant n. 助理,助手
[练通]
单句语法填空
①Local villagers assisted the doctors with the people wounded in the bus crash.
②I will assist you in solving (solve) the difficult problem.
③They are appealing to the world community to come to Jordon's assistance (assist).
④Mary was chosen as an assistant (assist) to help Mr. Brown finish his research.
一句多译
一组护士协助医生施行手术。
⑤A_team_of_nurses_assisted_the_doctor_in_performing_the_operation.(assist sb. in)
⑥A_team_of_nurses_assisted_the_doctor_with_the_operation.(assist sb. with)
[写美]
⑦(2013·天津高考书面表达)展望未来,如果我有幸成为副主席,我会尽力协助主席并为我的同学服务。
Looking_into_the_future,_I_will_try_my_best_to_assist_the_president_and_serve_my_fellow_students_if_I_am_lucky_enough_to_be_the_vice_president.
8.instant adj.即食的,方便的;立刻的 n.瞬间;片刻;某一时刻
[记牢]
(1)in an instant 一会儿,马上,立刻
for an instant 片刻,一瞬间
the instant ... 一……就……
(2)instantly adv. 马上,立即
conj. 一……就……
[练通]
单句语法填空
①She did not hesitate but answered the question the teacher had asked instantly (instant).
②He paused for an instant before continuing his work.
单句改错/完成句子
③He asked me to clean the room in instant.in后加an
④The_instant/Instantly_I_saw_him,_I knew he was the man the police were looking for.
我一看到他就知道他是警方正在寻找的那个人。
[写美]
⑤(2016·江苏高考书面表达)此外,网上投票使得即时反馈成为可能。
Furthermore,_voting_on_the_Internet_makes_instant_feedback_possible.
[词汇过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.单词拼写
1.In their eyes, they can accomplish (实现) anything with enough money, and this is where I disagree.
2.They began to recover slowly from their nightmare of pain and suffering (痛苦).
3.What he said and did at the party made us unbearable (难以忍受的).
4.Nowadays, healthy lifestyles are being advocated (提倡) in society.
5.I shall be pleased to go, if you will accompany (陪同) me.
6.According to the notice, Sally has quit/quitted (辞去) her job.
7.He is one of the most outstanding (杰出的) writers of the time.
8.Not every child has an equal talent, an equal ability or an equal motivation (动力).
9.Television is our country's most popular form of entertainment (娱乐).
10.It is absurd to predict (预言) that the sun will not rise tomorrow.
Ⅱ.单句语法填空
1.Nowadays the old find it more and more difficult to adapt to the new world.
2.The old professor loved to surround himself with young people.
3.Some people advocated limiting (limit) the number of cars on the main road.
4.He has been given six months to live if he doesn't quit drinking (drink).
5.The public is urgently requested to assist police in tracing this man.
6.He shook me by the hand and we opened a conversation instantly (instant).
7.China has made admirable (admire) achievements in scientific field.
8.Every time you celebrate an achievement, be thankful to those who made it possible.
Ⅲ.单句改错
1.They forgot all their fears and miseries for an instant.for→in
2.Surrounding by the sea on three sides, modern Qingdao is considered one of the most livable cities in China. Surrounding→Surrounded
3.The TV plays adapted of adventure stories caught the imagination of many a young viewer.第一个of→from
4.They entertain them with live bands and vast plates of barbecued pork.with→to
Ⅳ.一句多译
1.我们将帮助你找到一份更好的工作。
①We_will_assist_you_in_finding_a_better_job.(assist sb. in doing)
②With_the_assistance_of_us,_you_will_find_a_better_job.(with the assistance of)
2.我的叔叔还没能戒烟,但是至少他抽得少了一些。
①My uncle hasn't been able to quit_smoking,_but at least he has cut down.(quit)
②My uncle hasn't been able to give_up_smoking,_but at least he has cut down.(give up)
③My uncle hasn't been able to stop_smoking,_but at least he has cut down.(stop)
④My uncle hasn't been able to get_rid_of_smoking,_but at least he has cut down.(get rid of)
(一)课前自主学习
1.apart_from 远离,和……不在一起;除了
2.in_good_spirits 心情好
3.go_after 追求;谋求;追赶
4.on_one's_own 独自,单独;独立地
5.head_for 朝……方向(地方)行进,前往
6.at_that_point 在那时;在那个阶段
7.in_a_rush[串记1] 匆忙地,急切地
8.adapt_(oneself)_to 适应
9.be_accompanied_by 伴随有;附有,带着
10.to_one's_relief[串记2] 令某人欣慰的是
11.cheer_up 高兴起来,振作起来
12.feel_caught_between 在……之间感到左右为难
13.ahead_of[串记3] 在……前面;早于
14.for_example 例如
15.focus_on 集中(注意力、精力等)于;聚焦于
16.assist_sb._with_sth. 帮助某人某事
17.be_full_of 充满
18.believe_in 信任,相信
[同根短语串记]
串记1.“in+a+n.”短语荟萃
①in a rush/hurry 匆忙地
②in a word 总之,一句话
③in a sense 在某种意义上
④in a mess 一团糟
⑤in a way 在某种程度上
⑥in a dilemma 处于两难的境地
⑦in a nutshell 一言以蔽之
串记2.“to one's +n.”高频短语
①to one's surprise/shock 使某人惊奇的是
②to one's joy/delight 使某人高兴的是
③to one's shame 使某人丢脸的是
④to one's disappointment
使某人失望的是
⑤to one's amusement 使某人愉快的是
⑥to one's relief 使某人欣慰的是
串记3.“提前”短语小结
①ahead of time ②in advance
③ahead of schedule ④ahead of timetable
1.be surrounded by family and friends 被家人和朋友围绕着
2.during times of a personal catastrophe 在个人遭遇灾难时
3.be happy with one's life 对某人的生活感到幸福
4.the secret to happiness 幸福的秘诀
5.have appreciation for the good things in life
欣赏生活中美好的东西
6.graduate from Peking University 毕业于北京大学
7.a feeling of contentment 一种满足感
8.focus on what they think 关注他们所想的
9.have the talent to do ... 有……的天赋
10.turn to sb._for help 向某人寻求帮助
1.By_the_time she competed in the gymnastics tournament at the New York Goodwill Games, she had_been a junior gymnast for eleven years.
到参加纽约友好运动会的体操锦标赛时,她已经是一名有着十一年经验的体操小将了。
2.It_feels_like allocating adequate time for each is just not practical.
要给每件事分配足够的时间,似乎是不切实际的。
3.All_I_had_to_do_was_go to school and spend a few hours studying when I came home.
我要做的事情就是上学,以及回家后再学习几个小时。
[学考对接·活学活用]
高考采撷(一) 阅读中的词块和句式(完成句子)
1.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ阅读七选五)Exercising makes you more awake and ready to handle whatever_is_ahead_of_you (你前面的任何事情) for the day.
2.(2012·广东高考阅读C)_Apart_from_that (除那之外), there were all sorts of disasters that used to occur on the way to and from work.
3.(2009·山东高考完形)He would just simply smile and ask what else he could do, then thank me for letting him stay and slowly head_for (朝……进发) home.
高考采撷(二) 写作中的短语和句式
(根据提示翻译句子)
1.(2017·天津高考书面表达)到上学期结束时,我几乎已经学完了所有的大学课程。 (by the time)
By_the_time_last_term_ended,_I_had_almost_finished_all_my_college_courses.
2.(2017·浙江高考书面表达)让Mac感到宽慰的是,它(狼)摇着头退了回去。(to one's relief)
To_Mac's_relief,_it_fell_back,_shaking_its_head.
(二)课堂重点释疑
[短语集释]
apart from远离,和……不在一起;除了,除……之外(还有)
[辨清] 写出下列句中apart from的含义
①Apart from two men on watch in the engineroom, everyone was asleep.除了……之外(不包括)
②Apart from good service, the restaurant offers different kinds of traditional Fujian dishes.除了……之外(包括)
[用准]
除去
but, except, except for
apart from
除……还有
besides, in addition to, as well as
[练通] 完成句子
③Apart from (=In_addition_to/Besides/As_well_as) his intelligence, he was tirelessly industrious.
除了很聪颖以外,他还是一个孜孜不倦的勤奋的人。
④She usually goes to work by bike apart_from/but/except/except_for on rainy days.
除了雨天之外,她总是骑自行车上班。
[写美]
⑤(2017·天津高考书面表达)除了我的学业,我总能设法找到时间来处理我感兴趣的事情。
Apart_from_my_academic_studies,_I_always_manage_to_find_time_for_what_I'm_interested_in.
[句式集释]
1.It feels like ...
[教材原句] It_feels_like allocating adequate time for each is just not practical.
[悟拓展例句]
(1)I was only there two days, but it_felt_like_a_week.
我只在那里待了两天,但好像过了一个星期似的。
(2)She really feels_like_having_a_talk with him about his study at school.
她的确想和他谈一下他在学校的学习情况。
[析用法规则]
用法归纳
(1)句中It feels like ...意为“似乎,感觉好像……”,like为介词,后面一般跟doing,也可以直接跟名词或从句。
(2)feel like doing ...可用作固定结构,意为“想要做……”,相当于would like to do ...。
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Now it feels like more and more foreigners are getting interested in Chinese papercutting.(要点句)
(2)(2014·福建高考满分作文)It felt like the bike was too heavy and difficult to control.(要点句)
2.省略to的动词不定式作表语
[教材原句] All_I_had_to_do_was_go to school and spend a few hours studying when I came home.
[悟拓展例句]
(1)I'm so tired in the evenings, and all I want to do is sit_and_listen_to_music.
我晚上累得什么都不想做,只想坐下来听音乐。
(2)What you need to do is just follow_the_instructions_and_rules.
你所需要做的只是遵守这些指示和规则。
(3)The first thing that I want to do is rush_home_and_tell my parents the good news.
我想做的第一件事就是飞奔回家告诉我父母这个好消息。
[析用法规则]
用法归纳
动词不定式作表语时省略to的常见情况:
(1)all作主句主语,其后的定语从句中含有实义动词do的某种形式时常省略to。
(2)what引导的从句作主语,从句中含有实义动词do的某种形式时常省略to。
(3)(主句)主语被 the only, the first, the least,形容词最高级等词修饰,且其后作定语的从句或短语中含有实义动词do的某种形式时常省略to。
注意事项
一些含有but的固定搭配如can not help but, can not choose but, can not but等结构中,but后面跟不带to的动词不定式。
She could not choose but leave her child at home.
她别无选择只好把孩子留在家里。
[背写作佳句]
(1)(2017·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)As your good friend, the only thing I can do is help you improve your Chinese quickly.(要点句)
(2)(2011·北京高考满分作文)All he has to do is turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.(总结句)
[词块、句式过关综合训练]
Ⅰ.选词填空
in good spirits, be accompanied by, cheer up, focus on, adapt (oneself) to, to one's relief, be full of, go after
1.To_her great relief,_her missing son was found and is now at police station.
2.When you go to a new country, you must adapt_yourself_to new manners and customs.
3.Outside, a bitter east wind was_accompanied_by flurries of snow.
4.Their letters of support made me in_good_spirits all day long, and I was grateful to my friends for what they had done to me.
5.If you admit that life is_full_of beauty, be never too busy to enjoy the wonder of life.
6.Well, the first thing to do is decide what kind of work you'd like, and go_after it.
7.Cheer_up! You will achieve your dream of becoming a writer sooner or later as long as you keep trying.
8.Today we are going to focus_on the question of homeless people.
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.除了主人外,那里的人我一个也不认识。(apart from)
Apart_from_my_host,_I_didn't_know_a_single_person_there.
2.你必须做的是考虑你的强项和弱点分别在哪里。(省略to的不定式作表语)
What_you_must_do_is_consider_where_your_strengths_and_weaknesses_lie.
3.感觉好像很快要下雨了,你最好带把伞。(It feels like ...)
It_feels_like_raining_soon_and_you'd_better_take_an_umbrella.
4.那一刻,什么事都有可能发生。(at that point)
At_that_point,_anything_could_happen.
5.不要单纯追求名利。(go after)
Don't_just_go_after_fame_or_money.
Ⅲ.分步写作
假设你是李华,你的笔友王强最近沉迷于电脑游戏,造成了很多危害。请你给他写一封书信,劝说他戒掉这个不良习惯,并提出建议。内容包括:
1.浪费了本该学习的时间;
2.对身心造成危害;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步:准确审题,理行文脉络,拟写作要点
本文是一封劝说性建议信,时态为一般现在时,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。既然是劝说信,本写作可从题目给出的要点入手,从以下三方面进行写作:一是写信的目的,这个可以简单叙述;二是说明电脑游戏的危害,可以借助题目给出的两个要点:浪费时间、身心危害;三是建议如何戒掉网瘾,这个属于开放式问题,需要学生自己进行发挥,可以联系客观实际来提出建议。
要点1:我听说你沉迷于电脑游戏。(be addicted to)
I_heard_that_you_are_addicted_to_computer_games.
要点2-①:它会浪费太多宝贵的时间。(waste)
It_will_waste_too_much_valuable_time.
要点2-②:它会损害你的健康。(do harm to)
It_will_do_harm_to_your_health.
要点2-③:一些游戏充满暴力。(violence)
Some_games_are_full_of_violence.
要点2-④:我希望你能戒掉游戏。(break away from)
I_hope_that_you_can_break_away_from_it.
要点3:你可以多读好书、多做运动或参加一些社会活动。(take exercise, participate in)
You_can_read_more_good_books,_take_more_exercise_or_participate_in_some_social_activities.
第二步:添加细节,文意更丰满,表达更亮眼
为使内容更充实,我们需要对要点进行适度拓展。如要点1可表达出自己的担心;要点2-①可用定语从句拓展玩游戏的不当之处;要点2-②升级为非谓语动词作主语,并强调其危害性;要点2-③以定语从句引出危害面;要点2-④用“the+比较级,the+比较级”表达自己的迫切愿望;要点3添加目的状语,让表达更充分。
拓展1:听说你沉迷于电脑游戏,我很担心。(时间状语从句)
I_felt_very_worried_when_I_heard_that_you_are_addicted_to_computer_games.
拓展2-①:它会浪费你太多宝贵的时间,这些时间应该花在你的学习或其他有意义的事情上。(定语从句)
It_will_waste_too_much_valuable_time_which_should_be_spent_on_your_study_or_other_meaningful_things.
拓展2-②:长时间玩游戏会损害你的健康,尤其是对你的眼睛。(动名词短语作主语)
Playing_games_for_a_long_time_will_do_harm_to_your_health,_especially_to_your_eyes.
拓展2-③:一些游戏充满暴力,这将对你的心理健康有害。(非限制性定语从句)
Some_games_are_full_of_violence,_which_will_be_harmful_to_your_mental_health.
拓展2-④:我强烈希望你能戒掉游戏,越早越好。(the+比较级,the+比较级)
I_strongly_hope_that_you_can_break_away_from_it._The_earlier,_the_better.
拓展3:为了过上有意义的生活,你可以多读好书、多做运动或参加一些社会活动来开阔你的视野。(不定式短语作目的状语)
In_order_to_live_a_meaningful_life,_you_can_read_more_good_books,_take_more_exercise_or_participate_in_some_social_activities_to_expand_your_horizons.
第三步:连句成文,排语句顺序,重衔接过渡
在连句成文时,可以考虑“三段论”写法,开头阐明写作的原因;中间可按句子的逻辑意义用to begin with, in addition, worse still, therefore等作好衔接过渡;结尾用“Looking froward to your good news.”表达希望对方早日戒掉网瘾的祝愿。
Dear_Wang_Qiang,
I_felt_very_worried_when_I_heard_that_you_are_addicted_to_computer_games._
To_begin_with,_it_will_waste_too_much_valuable_time_which_should_be_spent_on_your_study_or_other_meaningful_things._In_addition,_playing_games_for_a_long_time_will_do_harm_to_your_health,_especially_to_your_eyes._Worse_still,_some_games_are_full_of_violence,_which_will_be_harmful_to_your_mental_health._Therefore,_I_strongly_hope_that_you_can_break_away_from_it._The_earlier,_the_better.
In_order_to_live_a_meaningful_life,_you_can_read_more_good_books,_take_more_exercise_or_participate_in_some_social_activities_to_expand_your_horizons.
Looking_forward_to_your_good_news.
Yours,_
Li_Hua
理清段落结构之(三) 总结
具有总结性段落的标志词(句)有:
1.一般情况下出现the research/report indicates, the research/report suggests等类似的结论建议性表达方式时,表明此处为文中提及的实验和研究的结果或作者要阐明论证的结果。
2.转折词:一般而言,作者常常借用转折连词来引出文章或段落的主旨大意,如but, yet, however。需要注意的是转折连词后面的内容往往是作者真实的写作目的或基本观点,而这又常常是文章主旨的关键所在。
3.其他常见标志性词(句):on the whole, as a result, in short, therefore, thus, I agree with the opinion that ...; Given all these points above, I would support the idea that ...; For all the reasons mentioned above, I would prefer ...
[高考典例1] 2018·全国卷Ⅰ·D篇
So what's the solution (解决方案)? The team's data only went up to 2007, but the researchers also explored what would happen if consumers replaced old products with new electronics that serve more than one function, such as a tablet for word processing and TV viewing. They found that more ondemand entertainment viewing on tablets instead of TVs and desktop computers could cut energy consumption by 44%.
[高考典例2] 2018·江苏卷·D篇
However, the research — involving eight groups of 32 children aged 8 to 12 — suggested that as they headed toward their teens, they became increasingly anxious online.
[高考典例3] 2017·北京卷·阅读七选五
Their research also suggests how we may build lasting memories over time even though the synapses become thinner. The team discovered that some synapses seem to be protected and stayed the same size. It's as if the brain is preserving its most important memories. “You keep what matters,” Tononi says.
[高考典例4] 2015·广东卷·完形填空
On the whole, our population is getting older.The changes in our population will have lasting effects on our social development and our way of life.Some people fear such changes will be for the worse, while some see chances, not disaster.Today, many men and women in their “golden years” are healthy, still active, and young in mind if not in age.
[高考典例5] 2013·浙江卷·D篇
As the year progressed, we spent many hours discussing literature and ideas about human beings and their motivations. He helped me identify my weaknesses and my strengths. In short, he made a teacher of me by teaching me the reality of Emerson's words: “The secret to education lies in respecting the pupil.”
