高考英语复习课件：高考写作6大增分锦囊 5.教你如何行文及润色

这是一份高考英语复习课件：高考写作6大增分锦囊 5.教你如何行文及润色，共16页。PPT课件主要包含了五个步骤，连句成文，①主语和谓语，③逻辑关系，④开头与结尾，⑤语篇衔接，书面表达注意事项，1 强调句，2 倒装句，3 复合句等内容，欢迎下载使用。

1、审题 （文体、主题、内容、人称、时态）
2、提炼要点，思考关键词
3、紧扣要点，连词成句
②背景（增加时间、地点条件等）
5、检查修改，规范抄写
Sme students think it is nt gd fr peple t keep pets in cities, because it will cause pllutin t ur envirnment. And the pets always make a nise that will disturb thers. Hwever, thers think we shuld see the psitive aspects f keeping animals. It is very necessary fr the lnely ld peple t have cmpany and pets can be a gd chice. If we can get n well with the animals, it will enrich ur life, t. I think if we really lve animals, we needn’t shw ur lve t them by keeping them, because the pets are nt free and it’s nt fair t the animals. If we dnate the mney used in keeping pets t sme animal rganizatins, it will be mre helpful t the animals. (By Dng Shuyi)
Sme say that dgs make a big nise in the cmmunity, and smetime they even hurt peple. Besides, animal drps als pllute the envirnment. They dn’t agree t have pets in cities. Althugh I admit all the disadvantages they mentined, cmpared t the highlights, pets bring such shrtcmings seem t be as small as a pencil tip. As we see, a lvely kitty always keeps the ld in cmpany. It may bring gd health t the ld, as well as jy. And nwadays the harmnius sciety is being cnstantly prmted. We humans shuld live with animal friends in harmny as well. Only in this way can we make ur earth a paradise fr all the living. S, chse an animal friend and be a friend t animals. (By Zhuang Chenxi)
1.增加较复杂的句子结构
3.适当运用结构词和关联词:
hwever, therefre, thus, after a while, all f a sudden, at last, as a result, in fact 等, 使句子 更为流畅。
As far as I am cncerned, I strngly hld the pinin that this plan shuld be carried ut cntinually nt nly because it gives us mre space t develp ur critical thinking and independent ability but als because we really feel much happier than ever befre.
My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had bravely saved my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was ur brave Ah Fu wh had bravely saved my little sister.
I met an ld friend in the street. The street was very crwded. I met an ld friend in the street, which was very crwded.
We can make prgress in English nly in this way.Only in this way can we make prgress in English.
My mther sat in a chair with a newspaper in her hand.
My mther sat in a chair. There was a newspaper in her hand.（with 复合结构）
She left and did nt say gdbye. She left withut saying gdbye.
Satisfied with the result, he decided t g n with a new experiment.
He was satisfied with the result, s he decided t g n with a new experiment.（分词做状语）
并列and; as well as ; als; 选择r; either—r; r else; therwise原因because ; wing t; due t ;n accunt f ; thanks t结果s ; therefre ; thus ; as a result 时间when ;sn after ; befre; later ; first ; and then ; next ; finally ; afterwards.比较n the cntrary ; n the ther hand ; like 转折but ; yet; hwever ; althugh; in spite f ; instead ; 递进besides ; mrever ; even ; in additin 举例fr example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 总结after all ; in shrt ; in general ; generally speaking
你的英国朋友正在做一个课题；世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文：一、通常方式1．生日聚会2．生日礼物3．生日祝福二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由 *词数100-120


你班同学参加了 “二十一世纪中学生英文报组织的一场讨论。 讨论的主题是: 城市内是否可以豢养宠物(狗和猫)。请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英语给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况， 并说明自己的观点和建议。
注意：1.信的开头已为你写好; 2. 词数100左右。Recently we have had a heated discussin n whether peple shuld keep pets at hme in cities.
书面表达（满分30分）
饲养宠物 keep pets污染环境 pllute the envirnment吵闹声，甚至伤人be nisy and may even attack peple安慰孤寡老人 give lnely elderly peple cmfrt和谐相处 live in harmny with增添生活情趣 add fun t ….