2021年高考英语写作分类精粹 （2）建议信（新高考）

这是一份2021年高考英语写作分类精粹 （2）建议信（新高考），共7页。试卷主要包含了 推荐的礼物；， 礼物的特色等内容，欢迎下载使用。
1.假定你是李华，你的英语外教Mr Black打算买一些中国特色的礼物带回国送给亲友，请你给他写信给出你的建议。要点如下：
1. 写信目的；
2. 推荐的礼物；
3. 礼物的特色。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr Black,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
​Yurs,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华，你和你的同学决定要在紧张的学习之余，为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片。请你给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导，内容包括：
1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容；
2.请她编写英文字幕；
3.询问对拍摄的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:字幕subtitle；纪录片dcumentary
Dear Miss Evans,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
​Yurs,
Li Hua
3.假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信说他的父母打算搬家到纽约，他感到很苦恼，因为他更喜欢目前的小镇生活。请给他写封回信，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.你的看法及建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4.假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Peter发邮件告诉你他的家乡刚刚发生一场地震。这场地震不仅造成了很大的损失，也给 Peter留下了心理阴影。请根据以下要点，写一封信安慰他。内容包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 提出具体的建议；
3. 你的愿望。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信就下周三要参加孔子学院(the Cnfucius Institute)的面试征询你的意见。请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议(至少 2 条)；
3. 表示祝愿。
注意：词数 80 左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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答案以及解析
1.答案：
Dear Mr Black,
In yur last letter yu asked me abut sme Chinese gifts. I am writing t recmmend sme gifts t yu.
As is ften the case, tea is yur first chice because tea des gd t health and there is a variety f tea fr yu t chse frm. Anther cmmn gift is Chinese paintings, which have a lng histry and special beauty. In additin, yu can chse sme Chinese knts r sme traditinal Chinese fd, like Beijing Rast Duck. I firmly/strngly believe that yur friends and relatives will be excited with the gifts.
Yurs,
Li Hua

2.答案：
Dear Miss Evans,
Hw is everything ging? I am writing t ask yu t d me a favr. As Senir Three students,we are having a busy but very meaningful year. Therefre we intend t make a dcumentary in English fr it.
We have decided t fcus n bth ur study and life. On the ne hand, we will recrd sme wnderful scenes in time; n the ther hand, we are ging t insist n videing nce a mnth t recrd ur life. Hwever, we find it demanding t write English subtitles. I wuld really appreciate it if yu culd ffer us the English subtitles and give us sme valuable suggestins.
I am lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
解析：
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导拍摄英文纪录片。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容;
2.请她编写英文字幕;
3.询问对拍摄的建议。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
d sb. a favr; intend t; decide t d; fcus n; in time; insist n; lk frward t
第三步:连词成句
1.I am writing t ask yu t d me a favr.
2.As Senir Three students, we are having a busy but very meaningful year.
3.Therefre we intend t make a dcumentary in English fr it.
4.We have decided t fcus n bth ur study and life.
5.On the ne hand, we will recrd sme wnderful scenes in time; n the ther hand, we are ging t insist n videing nce a mnth t recrd ur life.
6.Hwever, we find it demanding t write English subtitles.
7. I wuld really appreciate it if yu culd ffer us the English subtitles and give us sme valuable suggestins.
8.I am lking frward t yur reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表转折对比关系:Hwever, On the ne hand…,On the ther hand…
2.表因果关系:Therefre
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] On the ne hand, we will recrd sme wnderful scenes in time; n the ther hand, we are ging t insist n videing nce a mnth t recrd ur life.(动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Hwever, we find it demanding t write English subtitles.(it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是动词不定式)
3.答案：
Dear Mike,
I really understand yur situatin. It's never easy t leave a familiar neighbrhd fr an unfamiliar ne.
In my pinin, urban life als has its advantages. Fr instance, cities have a better learning envirnment. Als, mre jb pprtunities are available there. Maybe that's why yur parents have planned t mve. S yu shuld cmmunicate with yur parents abut the mve and express yurself. If it's settled, yu'd better adapt yurself and get ready fr the new life.
Please dn't hesitate t tell me if there's anything I can d. May yu get rid f yur truble sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua

4.答案：
Dear Peter,
I am srry t hear that yu just experienced an earthquake. I knw yu must be frightened and wrried nw. I have sme advice that may help t lessen yur fear and anxiety.
Firstly, dn’t spend any time alne. Yu shuld share yur feelings with thers. Secndly, yu can talk with yur family, friends r classmates, and let them knw what yu are thinking. Finally, if yu feel t scared, yu can turn t a dctr and ask fr sme treatment.
I hpe yu can recver frm this disaster sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua

5.答案：
Dear Peter,
Glad t receive yur letter asking me fr sme advice n the interview fr the Cnfucius Institute scheduled fr this cming Wednesday. I’m writing t tell yu what t prepare fr.
It wuld be wise f yu t read sme bks abut Cnfucius, which helps t better understand traditinal Chinese cultures. It wuld als be helpful t learn a few Chinese expressins. What’s mre, wearing Han-style clthing will make yu stand ut in the interview and impress the interviewers greatly.
I d hpe my suggestins culd be practical. Wish yu gd luck!
Yurs sincerely,​
Li Hua