2021届高考英语二轮专题训练第三篇第二部分题型应对策略第1讲应用文一建议信&求助信&告知信课件20210223164
展开【典例】(2018·浙江11月高考)
【要点盘点】 1. 第一段——点题: 说明写信目的, 告诉对方自己寻求帮助①I’m writing _______________(以寻求帮助). 2. 第二段——主体段落展开: 航班信息、钱包特征和里面物品②乘坐从中国到伦敦的FL753航班的商务舱I flew business class _________________________________. ③到达伦敦后发现钱包丢失_______________________n arrival f Lndn. ④钱包特征和里面物品It is a black leather ne and ________________________________________________in it.
t seek yur help
n yur FL753 frm China t Lndn
I fund my purse was gne
my ID card, tw credit cards as well as sme
3. 第三段——告知具体联系方式⑤If _____________________________________________(任何人找到它, 请发电子邮件到xxx@gmail. cm告诉我).
anybdy finds it, please tell me at xxx @ gmail. cm
★ 词句靓化1. 句①增加个人相关信息_____________________________________________and I’m writing t seek yur help. 2. 合理利用多种句式, 升级句子结构用现在分词的完成式作状语连接句②和句③, 航班信息具体化__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m Li Hua, a wuld-be cllege student frm China
Having flwn business class n yur FL753 frm China t Lndn n Nvember
1st, 2018, I fund my purse was gne n arrival f Lndn.
用完全倒装改写句④It is a black leather ne and ____________________________________________________. 3. 调整表达语气, 拓展表达希望得到帮助If anybdy happens t find it, _________________________________________________? I wuld _____________________.
in it are my ID card, tw credit cards as well as
wuld yu be kind enugh t tell me at xxx @
be grateful fr yur help
【五档满分范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a wuld-be cllege student frm China and I’m writing t seek yur help. Having flwn business class n yur FL753 frm China t Lndn n Nvember 1st, 2018, I fund my purse was gne n arrival f Lndn. It is a black leather ne and in it are my ID card, tw credit cards as well as sme mney. All these things are vital and urgent fr me t register and start my cllege study. If anybdy happens t find it, wuld yu be kind enugh t tell me at xxx @ gmail. cm?I wuld be grateful fr yur help. Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
【阅卷老师点评】1. 该题目写作时容易犯的错误(1)审题不清楚, 时态容易混乱(2)行程信息不能具体化, 钱包特征不明显, 不能适当增加细节2. 该范文运用了较多的高级词汇和复杂句式, 以及各种衔接词, 如seek, vital, urgent, grateful, as well as, 非谓语动词Having flwn, 条件状语从句等。
Passage1 (2020·温州三模)假定你是李华, 你的美国朋友 Peter 的家乡 Flrida 新冠肺炎疫情严重, 他很担忧自己和家人会被感染, 向你咨询如何做才能更好地保护自己和家人。请你给他回复一封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 表达担忧; 2. 提出合理建议(至少两条); 3. 祝福。
注意: 1. 词数 80 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。参考词汇: 新冠病毒: the 2019-nCV_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear Peter, Srry t hear Flrida severely affected by the pneumnia caused by the 2019-nCV. I’m writing t ffer suggestins n the self-prtectin frm being infected. Initially, the 2019-nCV has prved highly infectius, s minimizing utdr activities t avid unnecessary cntacts with thers is f vital imprtance. Besides, d remember t crrectly wear a mask, preferably a
surgical mask, if yu have t g ut. It is als wise t keep gd hygiene by washing yur hands ften either at hme r when returning frm the utside. Sincerely hping these are f help and wish yu a healthy and safe life!Yurs, Li Hua
Passage 2 假定你是李华, 你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》(English Mnthly)向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件, 内容包括: 1. 自我介绍; 2. 说明该报优点: 内容丰富, 指导英语学习; 3. 提出建议: 多介绍中国传统文化及励志故事。注意: 1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________
【参考范文】Dear editr, I’m s glad t give my persnal pinins n my favrite newspaper English Mnthly set up by the Student Unin. I’m a high schl student wh is enthusiastic abut reading newspapers and I want t learn smething frm them, I think English Mnthly has many advantages, Fr ne thing, it’s rich in cntent, ranging frm ecnmy t civilizatin. Fr anther, it’s a guide t
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