2021届新高考英语二轮复习短文续写精准练（5）

这是一份2021届新高考英语二轮复习短文续写精准练（5），共9页。
1.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。续写的词数应为150左右。
The Hidden Treasure
Old Man Dnvan was a mean man wh hated children. He threw rcks at them and even sht at them with a shtgun. At least that’s what we had heard.
His small farm brdered ur neighbrhd where my yunger sister, Leigh Ann, and I lived when we were grwing up. His farm was lng, narrw, and quaint. It held tw treasures. One was his beautiful fruit.
There were many varieties f fruit: pears, apples, and lts mre I just can’t think f. The fruit naturally drew the children t his land. It made them int thieves. But my sister and I didn’t dare t take his fruit because f the hrrible rumrs we had heard abut Old Man Dnvan.
One summer day, we were playing in a nearby field. It was time t head back hme. My sister and I were feeling very daring that day. There was a shrt cut t ur huse that went thrugh the Dnvan farm. We thught he wuldn't be able t see us run acrss his prperty arund the luscius fruit trees. We were almst thrugh the farm when we heard, "Hey, girls!" in a gruff, lw vice. We stpped dead in ur tracks! There we were, face t face with Old Man Dnvan. Our knees were shaking. We had visins f rcks punding ur bdies and bullets piercing ur hearts.
“Cme here,” he said, reaching up t ne f his apple trees. Still shaking, we went ver t him. He held ut several ripe, juicy, red apples. “Take these hme,” he cmmanded. We tk the apples with surprised hearts and ran all the way hme. Of curse, Leigh Ann and I ate the apples.
As time went n, we ften went thrugh Old Man Dnvan’s farm, and he kept n giving us mre luscius fruit. One day, we stpped by t see him when he was n his frnt prch. We talked t him fr hurs. While he was talking, we realized that we had fund the ther hidden treasure: the sweet, kind heart hidden behind his gruff vice. Sn, he was ne f ur favrite peple t talk t. Unfrtunately, his family never seemed t enjy ur cmpany. They never smiled r welcmed us in.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1:
Every summer, we wuld visit Mr. Dnvan and talk t him. ______________________
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Para 2:
The next winter, wrd gt arund that Old Man Dnvan had died. __________________
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2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Once there was a ship travelling n the tugh sea and n the ship there was a pair f cuple. All f a sudden, the ship met with an accident and the cuple had n chice but t run t the life bat withut delay. After reaching there, they realized that there was space nly fr ne persn. At that very mment, the husband pushed his wife behind him and jumped nt the lifebat himself, leaving his wife standing n the sinking ship, shuting smething desperately t her husband eyes filled with tears.”
The teacher stpped her stry-telling and asked her students, “Guys, guess what it was that she shuted.”
Mst students answered. “I hate yu!”
After listening t all this reply, the teacher glanced thrugh the whle class again and nticed that there was a by sitting silently thrughut. Then she asked him the same questin.
The by answered, “I believe she wuld have shuted-Take care f ur child.”
Listening t his remarks, the teacher was surprised and asked the by dubtfully. “Have yu heard f this stry befre?”
Shaking his head, the by said sftly and sadly, “N, I haven’t. But that’s what my mther said t my father befre she died f a deadly disease.”
Mved and feeling sad, the teacher replied. “Yur answer is abslutely right!”
Then she cntinued, “Let’s take up the stry. The ship sank eventually and the husband went hme and brught up their daughter alne. Many years later after the death f the man, their daughter was tidying up all his belngings when she fund his diary. In his diary she fund that when her parents were n the ship, her mther had already been diagnsed (诊断) with advanced illness and at the critical mment, the father rushed t the nly chance f survival.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In his diary, the man mentined he wished t sink t the cean with his wife but fr their daughter he had t live.
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​The stry was finished and the class was silent. ___________________________________
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3.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
The darkness was gathering as she wbbled(颤颤巍巍)in high heels (高跟鞋) alng the side f the highway. The car had cme t an unexpected stp, and like a nrmal teenager she did the nly thing she culd think ut and walk.
It was cld and late, and hme was far away. This culd be a lng night. If nly smene wuld stp and ffer her a ride. She prayed fr help and dragged herself frward.
The lights f a truck shne frm behind as it apprached. "Maybe he will stp," she hped. The brake lights flashed n as it stpped. Next mment, the car dr pened. A wrdless invitatin was extended and she understd. Withut hesitatin, the girl climbed up int the seat and clsed the dr. Slwly the truck pulled back nt the rad and disappeared int the night, never t be seen again.
I wke up in a cld sweat, frightened. Was it a dream r was it a visin? It was unbelievably real, and the girl was my daughter! I jumped frm my bed and ran t her rm. Her bed was empty.
I std in hrrr trying t think why she hadn't cme hme. As the mental fg began t lift, I remembered she was visiting her friend that evening. Perhaps she stayed there fr the night. It was 1:30 a.m., but I raced t the phne and dialed a number.
"Hell?" The vice was heavy with sleep.
"Hey. Srry t wake yu. Becki didn't cme hme tnight and I was wndering if she stayed at yur place."
"N, she left here a few hurs ag. She shuld have been hme at least by midnight!" The vice n the ther end began t reflect my wn panic.
Over the next frty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the flr in anxiety.
At 2:15 a.m. lights appeared as a car turned up ur lng driveway. I culd tell immediately that it was nt my daughter's car.
注意:
1. 所续写短文词数应为 150 左右;
2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词;
3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
My face pressed against the windw and fund it was hard t breathe. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
"Mm, she gave me a ride hme." Becki said. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案以及解析
1.答案：
Paragraph 1:
Every summer, we wuld visit Mr. Dnvan and talk t him. We shared with him ur clrful experience at schl while he kept giving ut his luscius fruits t us as usual. As time went by, we seemed t be mre a family than gd friends and his family gradually came t greet us with a warm smile. But ne summer, we were infrmed that he was seriusly ill and we were anxius and restless, feeling like sitting n pins and needles. The next day, we rushed straight t the hspital t see his health cnditin. Weak as he was, he cmfrted us that it wasn’t a big deal. It was frm his family that we knew the truth. Old Man Dnvan had fell frm a tree while lking after the fruits and his head was seriusly hurt and need an peratin. The peratin might nt succeed and it was a gamble whether he wuld live r die.
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The next winter, wrd gt arund that Old Man Dnvan had died. Hearing the bad news, my sister and I just culdn’t believe it until we went back hme and saw his smiling face n the wall. I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes. The family apprached and welcmed us. “I’ m srry fr yur lss.” I gave them a big hug. On my way back hme, the wind whistled thrugh the trees, as if murning fr the death f Dnvan. I realized gne were the days when we sat tgether chatting with each ther. I realized gne were the days when we were lucky enugh t have a taste f the luscius fruit grwn by him. Hwever, he left us a hidden treasure-- his kind heart, which shall never die away with the passage f time.
2.答案：
In his diary, the man mentined he wished t sink t the cean with his wife but fr their daughter he had t live. Withut him, their baby daughter wuld becme an rphan. After drwning himself in srrw fr a shrt time, he uplifted himself and learned hw t raise baby. Whenever faced with hardships, he wuld inspire himself with his wife’ wrds—“Take care f ur child.” Seeing the little girl grw int a sunny, pretty girl with duble lve frm bth parents, the man knew he made it t keep his prmise.
The stry was finished and the class was silent. Nbdy talked r laughed as usual. Instead, it seemed that every student was lst in deep thught, tasting the mving life stry. The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting n their replies and that they had understd the mral f the stry. Of the Gd and Evil in this wrld, there are hidden secrets behind them. S we shuld nt really fcus n the surface and judge anyne withut understanding them first. Put yurself in thers’ shes and then yu can really understand their behavir.
解析：
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知,文章主要讲述了老师在课堂上给学生们讲了一个故事:故事的大致内容是一对夫妇在海上遇到事故,但是救生艇只能容纳一个人,最后,丈夫推着身后的妻子,自己跳上了救生艇,留下妻子站在正在下沉的船上,绝望地对着丈夫喊着什么。老师让学生猜想妻子说了什么,大多数学生的回答是“我恨你!”,但是一位学生却回答说妻子让丈夫照顾好孩子。老师继续说故事,多年以后,他们的女儿在整理遗物时发现了父亲的日记,原来母亲已经被诊断出病情严重,在关键时刻,父亲冲向了唯一的生存机会。
【详解】续写部分分为两段,第一段开头是:在他的日记中,他提到他希望和妻子一起沉入大海,但为了他们的女儿,他必须活下去。接下来可以写没有他,他们的宝贝女儿会变成孤儿。在短暂的悲伤之后,他提升了自己,学会了如何抚养孩子。每当遇到困难时,他都会用妻子的话激励自己——“照顾好我们的孩子。”看着小女孩成长为一个阳光明媚、漂亮可爱、受到父母双爱的女孩,这个男人知道他这样做是为了履行自己的诺言。第二段的开头是:故事讲完了,全班安静下来。接下来可以写没有人像往常一样说话或大笑。相反,每个学生似乎都陷入了沉思,品味着动人的人生故事。老师确信学生们正在反思他们的回答,并且他们已经理解了这个故事的寓意。这个世界上的善与恶,背后都隐藏着秘密。所以我们不应该只关注表面,在不了解任何人之前就对他们进行评判。设身处地为别人着想,你就能真正理解他们的行为。
【点睛】续写内容得当,使用了固定短语和高分句型。如:be faced with;take care f;make it;keep ne’s prmise;reflect n;fcus n;put neself in thers’ shes等固定短语。①Seeing the little girl grw int a sunny, pretty girl with duble lve frm bth parents, the man knew he made it t keep his prmise.中使用了现在分词seeing作状语;②The teacher was sure that the students were reflecting n their replies and that they had understd the mral f the stry.中that引导的是宾语从句。
3.答案：
My face pressed against the windw and I fund it hard t breathe. The car pulled in frnt f the huse, and ut f it emerged my precius daughter, making her way up the steps. Tears stinging(使刺痛)my eyes,I threw pen the dr,pulled her inside and hugged her tightly. The dream was just t real and I culd hardly believe I was nw having my daughter in my hug. I wndered if it was because my pray was answered. Then thrugh my blurred visin(模糊的视野)I saw a lady stepping ut f the car.
“Mm, she gave me a ride hme."Becki said. “My car brke dwn n the highway and withut her help, I wuld never have made it hme in my high heels. " she cntinued, expsing her blistered(起泡的)ankles. My heart shuddered(一想起就怕/担心/难受) at the thught f hw painfully Becki staggered(踉跄) alng the dark highway. She must be an angel fr Becki! I apprached the lady and invited her inside. Nw,I was definitely grateful t her fr extending a helping hand.