2018-2020江苏十三市中考写作

这是一份2018-2020江苏十三市中考写作，共61页。试卷主要包含了书信作文，讲稿，材料作文，话题作文，便条等内容，欢迎下载使用。
2018-2020江苏十三市中考写作汇编

一、书信作文
1． 假如你是报社的编辑Sigmund，收到了初三学生Peter的一封求助信。请根据来信内容，用英文写一封回信，帮助Peter解决问题。
Dear Sigmund,
I had a quarrel(争吵) about my hairstyle with my mother the other day. She insisted that I should cut my hair short because of the comingzhongkao, but I wanted to keep it long. I dream of a long hairstyle, but don’t want to hurt my mother. What should I do? How can I persuade(说服) her?
Yours,
Peter
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好,不计人总词数。
Dear Peter,
It’s a pity that you haven't come to an agreement on your hairstyle. But it’s common for parents and teenagers to have different opinions.
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Best wishes,
Sigmund
2． 假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
FUNLAND
Hi! This summer holiday we will have different camps for kids. Here are three popular ones. Join us! Make a choice and explain why you choose it.
Reading Camp
●Chinese literature
●Western literature
●…
Culture Camp
●Western music
●Chinese art
●…
Sports Camp
●Ball games
●Water sports
●…
Come and have fun!

注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3． 2020年6月，我市西游文化嘉年华（carnival）活动全面启动。为了鼓励同学们更好地阅读与理解《西游记》，你校组织了“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一封信，邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选。内容包括：
（1）活动名称及目的；
（2）时间地点：7月20日下午6:00前，学校网站；
（3）参与方式：观看唱歌、故事讲述、短剧表演等视频作品，投票选择“最佳美猴王”；
（4）希望他……
注意：
（1）词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
（4）参考词汇：《西游记》Journey to the West 才艺展示 talent show
Dear Nick,
The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．书面表达
假设你名叫张华，是“2018无锡马拉松”组委会的一名工作人员。近日，外联络部转发给你一位牙买加选手的电子邮件，并附上了组委会的处理意见。请根据邮件内容及处理意见给他回复。

Dear sir/madam,
I'm Alfred from Jamaica. I took part in 2018 Wuxi Marathon on March 25 and I got a silver medal. I didn't realize you had got my name wrong until I showed the medal to my friends. My family name is Morrison, with double 'r'. However, there's only one 'r' on the medal. How could this happen?! :-(
Yours sincerely,
Alfred MoRRison
处理意见：
1.重制奖牌，6月25日前寄出；
2.提供一张免费机票作为补偿(compensation),两年内可从世界任意地点飞往上海；
3. 旧奖牌须收回。
注意事项：
1.邮件内容须根据处理意见自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
2.词数在80个左右，邮件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
3. 邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

二、讲稿
5． 阳光中学的英语社团下周将举行一次座谈会，主题为“幸福都是奋斗出来的”。假如你是魏华，将参与座谈。请根据以下图片提示，联系自身实际，从德、智、体、美、劳等方面中选取至少三个方面写一篇英语发言稿，谈谈自己将如何努力奋斗。


注意：1. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!

三、材料作文
6． 2020 年 6 月 16 日，我市某中学发生了一件感人的事情。请以 What a moving story!为题，写一篇英语短文，简要叙述事情经过并谈谈感想。要点如下：

经过
1．两工人为学校装空调，怕影响学生学习，夜晚工作；雨天路滑， 不小心碰掉一块瓷砖；留下纸条和 50 元钱，愿赔偿。
2．学校表示不用赔偿；学生也为两人点赞并送去了西瓜。
感想
……（内容自拟）

注意：
（1）词数 90 左右。短文需包含表格中的要点，但不要逐字翻译。
（2）短文已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。
（3）短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：空调：air-conditioner 瓷砖：ceramic tile
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7． 技术进步带来学习方式的变化。假如你是李华，参与某英语报组织的关于两种学习方式的讨论。请根据报纸上提供的信息，谈谈你喜欢的其中一种学习方式及理由，并对这种学习方式提出你认为的不足。
Traditional learning in a classroom
● fixed timetable
a plan made by a school
● face-to-face communication
● colorful class activities
● team spirit
Modern learning on the Internet
● flexible(灵活的) timetable
a plan made by oneself
● online communication
● rich learning resources
● any place with the Internet
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息；
2. 对你喜欢的学习方式说明理由，并提出你认为的不足；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the development of modern technology, the way of leaning is changing. I think__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8． 2020年6月23日上午，淮安市首届以 “龙舟竞渡迎端午” 为主题的大运河龙舟公开赛在淮安清江浦区隆重开幕。这项活动的开展不仅弘扬了中国传统文化，也给人们带来了生活的乐趣。
请围绕 “端午节” 这话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：
1. 叙述你今年如何度过端午小长假（包括时间、地点、人物、经过）；
2. 你对这些活动的感悟（活动的意义，……）；
3. 今后，你将如何弘扬祖国传统文化（经常参加有关传统文化的活动，……）
参考词汇：
聚餐have a big dinner； 看龙舟赛watch the dragon boat race；
包粽子make rice dumplings；讲屈原的故事tell the story of Qu Yuan.
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数在80-100之间, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图，请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
Choose a book
"Alice in Wonderland"
"Gulliver's Travels"
...

↓
Describe the book
Who is it about?
What happened?
What kind of book?

↓
Tell the reason
Why do I like it?
...


注意事项：
1.短文须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.提供的书名非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3.词数在90个左右，短文首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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10． 下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习，他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛，是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人，请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容，用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。

注意:
1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.文中须包括所有要点，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: workshop n. 工作坊
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
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Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
11．你校将组织英语作文比赛，请根据所给提示，以“Live a Colourful Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛。

注意事项：
1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
Live a Colourful Life
Life is a gift. We should do what is interesting and meaningful to_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．书面表达
假设你是阳光中学九年级学生李平。你的英国笔友Henry向你请教成语“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括： (1) 描述故事；(2) 概括寓意。
注意： (1) 词数90左右。(2) 邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
下图供参考。参考词汇：野兔（hare）；树桩（tree stump）

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13．随着电脑的普及，许多中国学生逐渐忽视书写。针对该现象，请你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿，阐述书写的重要性。
你的观点
电脑普及时代书写依然重要
你的理由
1．书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；
2．每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写书信更能表达情感；
3．……（再自拟至少一个理由并加以阐述）
注意：
1. 必须包括表中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数不少于90字（文章开头已经给出, 不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：handwriting 书法；字迹；书写（不可数名词）inherit 传承（及物动词）
Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important.
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14．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为”My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下流程图提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。
Conditions
Neighbourhood What is your neighbourhood like?
Neighbours What are your neighbours like?
How do they help others?(give two examples)
What did you do for your neighbours? (give one example)
Feelings How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My neighbourhood
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. ________________________________
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15．书面表达
假设你叫李文，是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。

注意事项：
1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.流程图中包括部分非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在 90 个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总数。
4.发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
4. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
16．假如你是阳光中学的李华，每周五下午你校开设校本必修课(required course)与选修课(elective course),请介绍必修课Travel of Science, 根据个人情况选择一门选修课并说明理由；同时，对你的选择的课程提出建议。
Required course
Elective Course
Subject
Travel of science
l introducing scientists
and inventions
Subject
Photography
l taking photos
Gardening
l growing flowers

Teacher
a professor
Teacher
a young reporter
4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.
School’s garden

Time & Place
l 2:30 p .m.- 3:15 p.m.
l school hall
Time & Place
l 4:00 p.m.-4:45 p.m.
l City Park
An old gardener
Tip
take notebooks and pens
Tip
Take cameras
tools offered by school

要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括必修课及一门选修课的所有信息；
2. 对你所选择的一门选修课说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
17．假如你是李明，请参考《南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案》的相关指标，对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结，举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施，完成一份自评小结。


注意：1. 图表中的内容不需要面面俱到，不要逐条翻译。2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Self-assessment
I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it’s necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．书面表达
76. 减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义？”展开了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示，以“How To Make Our Spare Time More
Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

注意： (1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;
(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;
(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
(4)参考词汇：提升素养promote literacy
How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
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19．为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：
1．你看到或参加过一次活动（包括时间、地点、经过）；
2．你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情；
3．你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2. 词数在80～100, 已给出的文字不计入总词数。
To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland（祖国），_____________________________________
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20．书面表达
为丰富初三学生课余生活，上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍此次活动，并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容：
1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；
2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想：
1．师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；
2．倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；
3. ……（考生自己发挥）
要求：
1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计人总词数。
2．所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
3．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇：市民广场Civic Square
In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it.
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21． 假定你是苏华，最近你的澳大利亚笔友Nathan犯了一些错误，倍感懊恼，写了一封邮件向你诉说，为帮助他排解困感，请你根据他的邮件内容并结合自身经历．用英语回信开导他。
To：subua@china.com
From：nathan.australia.com
Subjects： Learning from mistakes
Dear Su Hue,
I'm unhappy that I've made some mistakes recently. They're troubling me a lot these days. I really need your help. Would you please share your experience with me?
u Do you agree that everyone makes mistakes?
u Can you tell me one of your mistakes?
u How did you deal with your problem?
u What have you learned from the mistake?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best,
Nathan

注意：
l.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词量；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. ______________________________
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I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes
Su Hua
22． 假如你是李华，在网上看到英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。

IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing. The app is to help learners explore ideas, organize them and write them down. Your ideas are needed!
Here’s what to do:
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative!
Please let us know:
●What’s the name of the app?
●What problem does the app solve?
●What does the app do? Contact us at appdesign@Britech.com
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for designing an app for English writing.



Yours,
Li Hua
23． 某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app，邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示，用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
名称
Happy English Learning
内容
英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。
好处
1. 便于和同学一起学学习；
2. 帮助学生扩大词汇量；
3. 有利于提高英语听力；
4. ……（自主发挥，至少一点）
其他方面
……（自主发挥，至少一点）

注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
2.内容要包括表中要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通畅;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名，校名、地名等;
Here is my design for the new app. ______________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

24．书面表达
“和谐邻里，互助互爱”是中华民族的传统美德。最近，某社区发生的一件事在当地传为佳话：两周前，李明八十岁的父亲独自在家，他突然生病了，而李明夫妇在离家很远的学校工作。幸亏邻居张先生的帮助，老人被及时送往医院，现已脱离危险。李明十分感激。请根据上述材料，用英语写一篇短文，文章必须包括以下要点：
1. 简述李明父亲得救的经过；
2. 你对这件事的感悟（拥有好邻居很重要，……）；
3. 如何成为好邻居（和睦相处，……）。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
2. 词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
“Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood” is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example.
Two weeks ago, ___________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We can create a harmonious neighborhood in this way.
25．书面表达(略)
Simon是一位学习小组组长,在组织小组活动时,遇到组员不积极参与的情况。请根据提示，以“ Building better teamwork”为题,写一篇短文,提出你的建议。

注意事项：
1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。
Building better Teamwork
Teamwork can have a good influence on students’ daily study. But______________________
26．书面表达
“南通市安全教育平台”让广大中小学生学到了很多安全知识。假如你是Jack，你的英国朋友Simon想了解平台的相关内容，请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文，从提供的六个类别里选择两个，跟 Simon谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享你的体会。
Contents
（内容）
Categories（类别）
fire safety
food safety
traffic safety
Internet safety
natural disasters
accidental injuries
Solutions（措施）
……（请按你自选的两类内容分别写两点）
Understanding（体会）
treasure life；…（请写1～2点）

提示词汇：accidental injuries意外伤害 treasure珍爱 vt．
注意：1．短文中应包含所要求的信息，可以适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3．短文中中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Dear Simon，
Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong. sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．

27．书面表达
假如你是李华，将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学（study tour）活动，英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议．请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复．
The Green family
•an old couple
no children
two dogs
•a flat， in the centre of London
•wi﹣fi
•350pounds
The Black family
•a middle﹣aged couple
a junior school boy
a primary school girl
•a house， a little far from London
•a garden
•230pounds
要求：1．所写内容必须包括某一家的所有信息及你选择的理由；
2．结合自身情况提出1﹣2点游学活动的建议；
3．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
5．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息．
Dear Sir/ Madam，
I have read the information about the two families． And I have decided to live in
Many thanks，
Li Hua
28．书面表达
暑假将至，学校呼吁每天花三小时自主读书．但是，同学们对于主要读什么产生了分歧．请根据下表提示，写一篇英文短文，向学校报刊投稿．
观点一
读长篇读物，如文学作品、科学书籍，因为能培养阅读习惯
观点二
读实用短文，如社会新闻、生活知识，因为能更多了解世界
你的选择
长篇读物还是实用短文？
你的理由
…（至少两点）

注意：1．必须包括表中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3．表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
4．词数不少于100．文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
5．参考词汇：长篇读物 full-length reading n．[u]；
文学作品 works of literature n．（pl．）
29．写作
81.假如你是李明,你的英国笔友Mike给你发了一封电子邮件,请认真阅读并用英语回复。

Hello Li Ming,
I'm going to China as an exchange student this September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. Could you tell me: What is the Mid-Autumn Festival? How do you celebrate it? What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?
Write soon.
Mike
要求:1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2)须回复所有问题(问题1两点，问题2和问题3各三点)，并适当发挥；
3)词数：100词左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Mike
It's fantastic that you will come to China and spend the Mid- Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.

Enjoy your stay in China.
Li Ming
30．书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校正在对本校学生英语学习的情况进行调查，并征求同学们对英语教学的建议。请按下表提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的英语学习情况以及你对老师教学的建议。
项目
内容
你对英语的认识
1. 英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言；
2. 英语有助于了解世界上不同的文化；
……
你目前的英语水平
1. 能用英语与同学进行简单的交流；
2. 喜欢演讲，去年在校演讲比赛中获奖；
……
你英语学习中存在的问题
1. 不能正确地运用语法规则；
2. 写作中有时不能清楚地表达自己；
……
你对英语教学的建议
…… (考试自己发挥，至少一点)

要求：
1. 词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
I am Li Hua.




I wish our school will consider my advice.
31．书面表达
请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
Hi,
At KIDS MAG we like to share your ideas about our school. In my column, HAVE YOUR SAY, you can let other kids know what you think. This month we want you to have your say about Culture Week in our school:
●what theme(主题)of Culture Week you like
●why you like the theme
●what activity/activities you can organize for the theme
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sam Southland
注意：
1．对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2．词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. ____________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
32．书面表达
现在，越来越多的外国友人开始关注中国文化。假定你是苏华，你的加拿大笔友Ryan是一个中国迷，他想在中秋期间来中国看看。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的了解用英语回复。
To: suhua@ china.com
From: ryan2003@canada.com
Subject: Chinese culture
Dear Su Hua,
How are you? I hope you are well. As a fan of Chinese culture, I’m thinking about
going to China during the Mid-autumn Festival. Would you please tell me the following
things?
• How do you usually celebrate the Mid-autumn Festival?
• Which city in China is most worth visiting? Why?
• What is the best way to travel between cities in China?
• What gift can I buy for my friends?
Please write back and tell me everything.
Best wishes,
Ryan

注意：1．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Ryan,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.
All the best,
Su Hua
33．书面表达
76．积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，某英文报开展了一次关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示,以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点
具体内容
调查数据

每天锻炼的时间


不经常锻炼的原因

锻炼的意义
有益身体健康;保持思维敏锐;变得自信快乐。
你的建议
就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议(至少两点)。

注意：(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(2)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(3)短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。
(4)参考词汇:敏锐的sharp
Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey,

34．“你养我长大，我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出，成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节，是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点，写一篇英语短文。
1．给我生命，一直照顾我成长；
2．努力工作，为我提供良好的生活和教育条件；
3．拥有爱心，教我学会…
4．今天，我要为您……(自主发挥，至少两点)
注意事项：
1．词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.

四、话题作文
35． 为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题, 根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿, 号召全体同学行动起来, 共建美好校园。
Purposes
develop a green lifestyle
Actions
save resources
1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper
2. save ... : two examples
3. save ... : two examples
reduce pollution
1. take care of the trees and flowers
2. ...
Hopes
...

要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥;
（3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）;
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
36． 学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动，请根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。

My favourite book
*What’s the name?
*What’s it about?
*Why do you like it?
…

注意事项：
（1）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
37．书面表达
你校英文报组织了题为“我喜欢的英语谚语，，征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句英语谚语中任选一句，写一篇90词左右的短文，参加征文活动。
Many hands make light work.
Meaning: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.
Practice makes perfect.
Meaning: If you keep practising，you will be better at it.
短文内容须包括： (1）你喜欢的谚语及其含义 (2）体现该谚语含义的个人经历 注意：1．短文中已给出的部分（见答题卡）不计入总词数。 2．短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。

五、便条
38． 假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：
1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；
2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；
3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li hua

参考答案
1．例文；
Dear Peter,
It’s a pity that you haven't come to an agreement on your hairstyle. But it’s common for parents and teenagers to have different opinions. As parents, they want good things for their children. They may think your long hair can get in the way of your schoolwork.
You’d better communicate with your parents. You can tell them that you should be allowed to make this choice yourself. If talking to your parents is difficult, you can find another way to communicate with them. Learn to write down what you want to say and give them a letter. Show your love to them and your worries as well. They will always love you and stand by your side.

Best wishes,
Sigmund
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应承接短文开头继续写作；根据题目要求回信帮助皮特解决与父母争论的问题。
2.写作指导：本文用第二人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，关于怎样处理与父母有争议的问题的建议，叙述完整，条理清晰。
2．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I like sports very much, especially basketball, so Sports Camp is my first choice. If I’m accepted, I think it’s a good chance to improve my basketball skills. I’ll have plenty of time to practice playing basketball and there must be many excellent coaches and players in this camp. Besides, I believe I’ll make some new friends who have common interests. That really sounds fantastic to me. I just can’t wait.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours
Li Hi
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇书信作文。主要是看到校刊上招募夏令营营员的消息进行回信，可以选择其中比较感兴趣的一个夏令营活动进行具体的描述，要写明参加这个夏令营的原因以及自己通过这次活动要取得的成绩，要注意时态的应用。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段感谢提供这么多精彩的夏令营活动；第二段写自己要参加的夏令营以及原因；第三段写期待尽早收到回复。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：plenty of；practice doing sth.；make friends；look forward to。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句；I believe+宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。
3．Dear Nick,
The Cultural Carnival of Journey to the West has started. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. I’m writing to invite you to vote for us.
You’re expected to visit our school’s website before 6 p.m. on July 20. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. We’d like you to vote for the best Monkey King.
I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求以李华的名义，用英语写一封信，邀请外籍教师Nick参与评选你校组织的“我是美猴王”在线才艺展示活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、二人称。书信第一段提出了活动的名称及目的，第二段提到了活动的时间及参与方式，第三段提出了希望；文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：encourage…to…；write to；be expected to；not only…but also…；as well；would like sb to do sth；learn more about。
句型：1. To encourage students to better read and understand Journey to the West, our school has held an online talent show called I am the Monkey King. 2. There are not only videos of songs, stories but also short plays. 3. You can enjoy paintings and speeches as well. 4. I hope you’ll like these works and learn more about Journey to the West.
4．Dear Morrison:
It is true that we have got your name wrong. I am sorry for making such a mistake.
We have decided to have made a new model for you after discussing it. It will be sent to you before June 25th. Meanwhile, we will offer you a free air ticket as compensation. You can fly to Shanghai from anywhere over the world within two years. But the old model must be taken back. If you have anything else, please contact with us anytime.
Thank you for supporting our work and wish you a good trip!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Hua
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，以“2018无锡马拉松”组委会工作人员张华的名义给牙买加选手回复一封电子邮件，注意书信的格式。首先要认真阅读所提供的电子邮件，掌握其书信内容：来自牙买加的艾尔弗雷德在2018年无锡马拉松比赛获得了银牌，但奖牌上的名字“Morrison”漏写一个“r”，质疑组委会怎么会出现这种情况。在写作中要结合组委会的处理意见予以回复。首先要对所犯的错误表示道歉，然后结合三点处理意见逐一回复，最后要感谢对方对工作的支持并祝旅行愉快。在写作中，要注意有两处用到被动语态来表达：奖牌于6月25日前寄出（一般将来时的被动语态），旧奖牌须收回（含有情态动词的被动语态）。
5．例文：
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Wei Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. I’m happy to be here to share my ideas. I think happiness is achieved through hard work.
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should give our seats to the elderly when we take a bus. After we see their smiling faces, we must be happier too.Secondly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy, we can work and study happily. So we should keep doing exercise every day. Thirdly, knowledge makes our life colorful and interesting. In our free time, we are willing to learn different kinds of skills (like computer and art) so that we can serve the society better. Finally, the beautiful environment gives us a comfortable feeling. We should plant more trees to protect the environment. We also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“幸福都是奋斗出来的”为主题，结合图片提示，完成英语发言稿，开头和结尾已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段点明“幸福都是奋斗出来的”这一主题，第二段结合自身实际，从不同的方面讲述了自己该如何奋斗，第三段是结束语；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。
3.高分亮点：
短语：make sb. do sth.；give one’s seat to sb.；for example；keep doing sth.；in one’s free time；be willing to do sth.；different kinds of。
句型：so that引导的目的状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句。
6．例文：
What a moving story!
A moving story happened in a school of our city on 16 June, 2020.
In order not to disturb the students who were studying at school, two workers decided to put in air-conditioners at night. It was rainy and wet. When they were carrying one air-conditioner, they broke one ceramic tile. Feeling sorry for what they had done, they left a note and 50 yuan to pay for the tile. The school, however, didn’t accept the money. The students gave the two workers thumbs up and sent a water-melon to show their gratitude.
I think both the workers and the school have done something right. If we do something wrong, we should be honest and face it bravely. Meanwhile, forgiving others is always appreciated. Just as the saying goes, “one good turn deserves another”.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述事情的经过并发表自己的看法。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第三人称进行写作，讲述事情主要采用一般过去时态来写作。讲述事情的经过叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in order not to; decide to; at night; feel sorry for; pay for; give…thumbs up。
句型：what引导的感叹句；when引导的时间状语从句；and表示并列的句子；if引导的条件状语从句；what引导的宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。
7．例文：

With the development of modern technology, the way of learning is changing. I think I still prefer the traditional learning in a classroom. First, there is a fixed timetable. A clear plan is often made by a school, so I don't need to think about how to arrange when to learn different subjects. Second, we can have the face-to-face communication with both teachers and classmates. Third, there are colorful activities in class. In this way, I can learn the new knowledge happily. What's more, learning in the classroom can help me develop a sense of team spirit, so I can learn how to get along with others.
However, when I study in the classroom, sometimes I can't follow my teacher. And learning in the classroom can't provide enough resources for me to choose from.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以李华的名义就“学习方式”写一篇文章。题目列出了两种学习方式，一是传统的在教室学习，二是现代化的网上学习，要求选择其中一种自己喜欢的学习方式进行分析，谈谈这种学习方式特点、自己喜欢的理由以及存在的不足等，以上要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主，注意主谓一致问题。
2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，层次清晰。第一段介绍了自己喜欢的学习方式以及自己为什么喜欢的理由；第二段介绍了传统学习方式的不足。文章要点齐全，逻辑清晰，使读者一目了然。另本文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。
3.高分亮点：
短语：with the development of；think about；in this way；what's more；get along with。
句型：there be句型；疑问词+动词不定式；when引导的时间状语从句。
8．例文：
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in our country. I’ll never forget this year’s Dragon Boat Festival. I had a good time on vacation. I did a lot of interesting things. I helped my mother make rice dumplings. It was difficult but fun. Then I had a big dinner with my family. It was a happy time to be with my family. My parents told me the story of Qu Yuan. I learned a lot about Chinese history and culture. One of the most exciting things was watching the dragon boat races. People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan. These activities not only carry forward the traditional Chinese culture, but also bring people the joy of life.
In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival. Festivals play an important part in Chinese culture. It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，写一篇短文介绍一下今年如何度过端午小长假，对这些活动的感悟以及将如何弘扬祖国传统文化，叙述如何度过端午小长假时用一般过去时，表达感悟时可用一般现在时和一般将来时，人称上主要用第一人称和第三人称。
2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点：
短语： have a good time；help sb. do sth.；one of the most exciting things；in order to ；bring people the joy of life；play an important part in。
句型：①动词不定式表目的 People did these activities in order to let the people old and young remember poet Qu Yuan.
②形式主语 It is our duty to respect the traditions and make Chinese culture known to the world.
③宾语从句 In my opinion, I think we should hold more activities to celebrate the Chinese traditional festival.
9．例文
The book I’d like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way back, he has to fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-known sentence from the book. Man is not made for defeat.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，今年“世界读书日”（World Book Day）的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动，要求根据草拟的写作流程图，介绍你所读过的一本书，用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：share with，tell about，fight against，on the way back，give up。
句型：This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事，他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。who在句中引导定语从句，修饰前面的a fisherman。
10．[例文]
Welcome to our school. I’m Lin Tao. I’m glad to introduce our Green Planet Club to you.
All our club members meet every Friday afternoon to do something meaningful.
We have DIY workshops. Here, old clothes can be made into handbags. It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.
Working as volunteers is our task as well. We hand out leaflets and tell people the importance of living a green life. Sometimes, we teach people how to separate waste in communities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we look after flowers and trees in our school.
Let’s work together for a green planet. Thank you!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部，写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时，人称用第一人称。
2.例文点评：例文开头结尾都已给出，需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要点，并进行了适当发挥，文章词句连贯、通顺，符合题目要求，是一篇合格的作文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be made into，work as，hand out，clean up，look after。
句型：
（1）Here, old clothes can be made into handbags.（被动语态）
（2）It’s also fun to use recycled bottles and used wood to make furniture like chairs and desks.（it作形式主语）
（3）Working as volunteers is our task as well.（动名词作主语）
11．Life is a gift. We should do what is interesting and meaningful to make our life colorful. What should we do to make it colorful?
First, as the old saying goes, never too old to learn. So we should read books every day. Second, except our work, we should know how to spend our spare time. So we should learn some new skills. For example, we can learn how to take photos or learn a new language. Maybe it is challenging at first. But it will benefit us a lot. Third, we should know something about art and enjoy different art forms. Last but not the least, we should often do some sports. Because health is the most important to all of us.
I hope everybody can have a colorful life and enjoy every day.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇材料作文。要求Live a Colourful Life为题，根据所给材料内容写出我们应该怎样才能活出多彩的生活，人称用第一人称，时态是一般现在时。本文所给材料比较详细，我们只需要用正确的句子把他们表达出来，并适当加入自己的语言写出具有连贯性和层次性的文章。写作时注意紧扣主题，层次要分明，中心要突出，语言要尽量简单，可以适当使用复合句，使文章具有一定的连贯性。写完后注意检查语言使用的正确性。本篇文章使用了总分总的文章结构，中间主体部分使用了First….Second….Third….使文章层次非常清晰明了，最后提出自己的期望，起到对上文总结的作用，非常不错的一篇文章。
12．例文
In ancient China, there was a farmer. Though he worked on his farm, his harvest could only support his own life. The farmer wanted to change his life, but he was too lazy to work hard every day.
One day, something amazing happened. The farmer was working on the farm. Suddenly, he heard a strange noise. He looked around and saw a little hare under a tree stump. It ran too fast so it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer was very happy, and he took the rabbit home and cooked a big meal. From then on, he didn’t work any more. He waited near the tree stump for hares day after day until he died. Obviously, he was not so lucky. Moreover, because nobody took care of the crops in the field, they all died.
This story tells us we should not always follow the past experience, we should fix new problems with new ways. Also, it warned us never to expect to gain without working.
【解析】
【详解】
该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。承接短文开头；第二段叙述“守株待兔”这一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。注意：1. 根据作文要求，使用第三人称来叙述故事内容。时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景。2. 描述故事时，要用场景描写，故事发生的背景、起因和过程要交代清楚。3. 根据写在内容，可以采用work hard、bump into、from then on、day after day、depend on、come from等短语；使用there be、until和while引导的时间状语从句，too…to…、so…that…、not…any more等句型和结构。
13．Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important. Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. Everyone's handwriting has personal meaning, for example, handwritten letters can express emotions better. I also think handwriting can improve students’ handwriting skill and interests; for another, it can teach students to love Chinese characters. In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds. For middle school students, it is quite beneficial to write beautiful and generous words. So it is necessary to hold handwriting contests among students.
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下书写的重要性。所提供的材料中列举了你的观点和理由。主要从电脑普及时代书写依然重要（观点）、理由：1．书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；2．每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写书信更能表达情感；3. 提高学生的书写技能和兴趣。4. 可以教学生热爱汉字。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须材料卡片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
I think that handwriting is still important. 我认为书写仍然很重要。
句子that handwriting is still important.是由that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Writing is an important part of Chinese traditional culture, so practicing writing helps to inherit culture. 书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化。
（提出了书写的重要性，照应了作者的观点——电脑普及时代书写依然重要）
【高分句型三】
In my view, practicing handwriting can make students improve both their bodies and minds. 在我看来，练习书法能使学生提高身心素质。
practicing handwriting是动名词做主语。
14．My neighbourhood
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it. And big green trees are around it. You can see a lot of people talking and playing there. Near my neighbourhood, there is a supermarket, a bank a hospital and many shops. So it is convenient for our life. My neighbours are very friendly. When someone has problems, they must help him. Once Aunt Li’s daughter was ill, and her husband was not at home. So her neighbours helped her send her daughter to hospital. Grandma Liu is old and her children are not around. She lives alone. So our neighbours often helps her wash dishes and clean up her house. I think I should do something for my neighbourhood. So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them.
This is my neibourhood. Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My neighbourhood为题，写一篇文章，介绍自己居住的社区。题目中利用流程图的形式列出了文章中应包括的内容，学生们应以此为依据，组织语言，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍自己居住的社区环境；接下来介绍自己的邻居是什么样的，并举例说明邻居们之间是如何互相帮助的，以及你自己为社区所做的事情；最后表达自己对社区的感受。短文应以一般现在时或一般过去时为主，根据表达需要使用正确的时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内，不能遗漏要点。可以适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实，但注意要切合主题，不能写不沾边的话。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，选择恰当的句型、短语和词汇。句子结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他高级句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意衔接自然，表达流畅。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己所居住的社区。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，结构清晰，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。短文主要分为三个部分：首先介绍了社区的环境；然后介绍了邻居，并举例说明邻居们互相帮助以及自己为社区所做的事情；最后表达了自己对所在社区的感受。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体。句式结构完整，以简单句结构为基础，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句以及非谓语动词等结构，调整了文章节奏，提升了作文档次。短文里使用的较好的句型有：There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it.、When someone has problems, they must help him、I think I should do something for my neighbourhood.、So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them.、Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here.等等。
15．Ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Wen. I’m a student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have met the discharge standards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言稿。主题是A Green World。因为今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，主要从介绍自己、中国为“绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
China has made its own efforts for the green world. 中国为绿色世界做出了自己的努力。
Many factories have met the discharge standards. 许多工厂的排污都达到了排放标准。
We have made use of many new energy sources. 我们利用了许多新能源。
这三句话，简短而有力量，体现了作者的语言功底深厚。
【高分句型二】
Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. 第三，我们去购物时，应该用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we go shopping,是由when 引导的时间状语从句。
16．Every Friday afternoon, our school offers required and elective courses. Travel of science is a required course. We can learn about some scientists and their inventions. I think it will be interesting. The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture. So you mustn't miss it. The course is from 2:30 p.m. to 3:15 p.m. in the school hall. You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points. There are two elective courses, Photography and Gardening. I would like to choose the former because I like taking photos. I think I can learn more skills in the class. The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter. So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other. I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们对学校周五下午安排的必修课和选修课程进行介绍。审题可知，短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称为主来叙述。内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍必修课程Travel of science，题目中利用表格的形式展示了这个课程的主要内容、老师、上课的时间、地点以及小提示，学生们根据表格用正确的英语表达出来即可；接下来应根据个人情况，从表格中提供的两门选修课中选择一个，阐述自己的理由，并对该课程提出一些建议。这一部分需要学生们展开想象，结合自己的实际生活，补充具体的内容，再用英语表达出来。写作时应注意：首先短文应包括题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点，而且注意分清层次和结构，使叙述清晰、完整、有条理。合理安排各部分内容，主次分明。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了学校开设的校本必修课程，并从两个选修课中选择了自己喜欢的一个，介绍了自己选择这门课程的原因，并对该课程提出了自己的建议。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求，没有遗漏要点。叙述清晰、有条理，理由充分、合情理。提出的建议也比较中肯，符合该情景。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯，短文中用到了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、被动语态等多种句式和结构，增强了文章的表现力。文中较好的短语和句式有We can learn about some scientists and their inventions.、The course is given by a professor, who is well-known for his lecture.、You'd better take notebooks and pens so that you can write down the main points、The teacher who gives this course is a young reporter.、 So I think we may have similar thoughts and easy to get along with each other.、 I want the course to add more chances for us to take photos outdoors.等等。
17．Self-assessment
I’m Li Ming, a student in Class 8, Grade 9. I think it's necessary for me to find out my strengths and weaknesses at the end of this term.I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running. I have a good study habit. I can listen to the teacher and review carefully after class. I am a helpful person. I like to interact with my classmates. I have a good citizenship. I try to innovate knowledge. I also have a good sense of aesthetics. I think I am a good student.
【详解】
假如你是李明，请参考《南通市初中学生综合索质评价方案》的相关指标，对你本学期的突出优点和明显不足进行总结，举例佐证优点并针对不足提出改进措施，完成一份自评小结。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: I think I am a healthy person. I like sports. I like playing basketball and running.
18．Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
My schoolmates give the following suggestions. First, it's good to help our parents do some housework to show our love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Third, it is a good chance for us to get close to nature and relax ourselves.
In my opinion, we can do some sports to make us stronger and healthier. What's more, we can take an active part in some social activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let's make full use of our spare time and promote our literacy.
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，要表达如何让课外生活更有意义。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如a good chance to do, get close to, in my opinion, what’s more, take an active part in, in a word, make full use of, spare time以及“比较级and比较级”等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
19．To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland
In order to welcome the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. It's the greatest museum I've ever seen.We saw many weapons that used by the the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life. there are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions to my motherland in the future.
【详解】
为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到一些好的句型：It's the greatest museum I've ever seen.We saw many weapons that used by the the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life.这些给文章增色不少。
20．In order to enrich Junior 3 students' after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. In the morning, we visited the People’s Park. In the park, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and took pictures. I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. In the afternoon, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. After seeing these photo exhibitions, I was inspired and determined to study hard to serve my country.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从：1．上午游览人民公园：欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念；2．下午参观市民广场：观看图片展，了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深，感谢老师和同学的帮助；倍受鼓舞，决心勤奋学习报效祖国；（自己在发挥一些）。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
I would like to thank my teachers and classmates for their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。
该句话用到了would like to do sth. 丰富了语言。
【高分句型二】
In People's Square, we watched the photo exhibition and learned about the great changes of our country and hometown in the past 70 years. 在人民广场，我们看了70年来的摄影展，了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练，层次分明，语意明确，用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来郎朗上口。
21．Dear Nathan,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You needn't worry too much. It's true that everyone makes mistakes.
Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them. In this way, others will understand you. Then you will feel much better.
I hope my experience can help you out.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如too much，make mistakes，for example，so much，spend time doing，forgot to do，say sorry sb.，between and，whether or not，learn from，in this way，feel much better等。而固定句型I found it important to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.和It's true that everyone makes mistakes./ It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. / I hope my experience can help you out.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
22．例文
Thanks for designing an app for English writing. I’d like to share my ideas here. Could its name be “Writing Made Easy”?
Many of us have difficulty in writing. We don’t know how to organize ideas, use proper words, and so on. I hope it can solve these problems.
Here is my advice on what the app does. First, it should provide some reading materials. The more we read, the better we write. Second, the app should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills. Third, there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions.
I hope my advice is worth taking.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇根据英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
重点句型：have difficulty in doing sth做某事有困难，The more we read, the better we write.读的越多，写的越好。so that目的是
23．例文
Here is my design for the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English movies, English songs, English games and so on. It can make it easy for students to study together. It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study. Students can enlarge their English vocabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly improved. They can also practise their spoken English by singing English songs and watching films. In a word, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.
【详解】
这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如and so on，make it easy，in English study，watch films，in a word，have fun，be suitable for等。而固定句型It can make it easy for students to study together.和It is true that vocabulary is very important in English study./ I think the new app should be suitable for students of different ages.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
24．"Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood" is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example.
Two weeks ago， Li Ming's eighty- year- old father suddenly fell ill at home. Li Ming and his wife worked in a school far away from home. Thanks to the help of his neighbor Mr. Zhang，the old man was sent to the hospital in time and now he was out of danger. Li Ming was quite thankful to his neighbor.
It's important to have a kind-hearted neighbor. We should get on well with our neighbors. When anyone is in trouble，the others should offer a hand in time. In daily life, we should greet each other when meeting and say something kind to our neighbors in order to build a good relationship with them. We can create a harmonious neighborhood in this way.
【解析】
【详解】
"Enjoying a harmonious neighborhood" is one of our Chinese traditional virtues. What has happened in one community recently is a good example.
Two weeks ago, Li Ming's eighty- year- old father suddenly fell ill at home. Li Ming and his wife worked in a school far away from home. Thanks to the help of his neighbor Mr. Zhang，the old man was sent to the hospital in time and now he was out of danger. Li Ming was quite thankful to his neighbor.
It's important to have a kind-hearted neighbor． We should get on well with our neighbors. When anyone is in trouble, the others should offer a hand in time. In daily life, we should greet each other when meeting and say something kind to our neighbors in order to build a good relationship with them. We can create a harmonious neighborhood in this way.
25．Building better Teamwork
Teamwork can have a good influence on students’ daily study. But sometimes when doing teamwork, some team members are not active in most of the activities. Do you know how to deal with this problem. Here are some helpful suggestions for you.
First, before you do teamwork, all the members set some team rules together. Everyone should follow the rules and respect each other.
Second, you should talk with your team in a friendly way.
Next, you can discuss this problem with your teacher if you can’t agree with each other.
Finally, you should take turns to be the team leaders, so everyone wants to make the teamwork better.
In my opinion, everyone in a team should be kind, helpful and nice to others. Let’s trust each other to build better teamwork.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以“ Building better teamwork”为题,写一篇短文,介绍如何建立更好的团队合作，并给出我的建议。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Do you know ……？Here are……，all the members set……，you should……，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了团队合作很重要，接下来介绍关于如何建立更好的团队合作，最后表达我的观点。此处deal with, talk with, agree with, take turns to, in one’s opinion, be kind to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
26．Dear Simon，
Safety is very important．Our government especially pays attention to teenage safety．A website called nantong.sa fetree. com helps us gain a lot of knowledge of safety．On the website，I have learned a lot．
Food safety is the most common problem with us students．We should stay away from fast food．Perhaps fast food is delicious，but it’s bad for our health．Some dishes and food may be expired and you shouldn't eat them the next day，especially the dishes and food that were put into the fridge the night before．I once ate the dishes in the fridge．The next day，when I got to school，I had a stomachache．At least you should heat it enough before you eat them．Next，the traffic safety is also a big problem．It's necessary for us to obey the traffic rules，especially when we’re on the way to school or back home．Pay more attention to the traffic lights．Don't cross the road when the light is red．We should always go on the right side．Don't ride bikes side by side．
All in all，we must realize the danger around us and treasure our lives．Safety is always the first priority．
Yours
Jack
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，跟我的英国朋友Simon谈谈安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施，并分享我的体会。
【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Food safety is……，We should…….，when I got to……，we must……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了安全很重要，有一个网站帮助我们知道很多安全知识；接下来介绍安全的类别以及相应的保护自身安全的措施，最后指出我的体会。此处stay away from, be bad for, put into, at least, pay attention to, all in all等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
27．Dear Sir，
I have read the information about the two families． I have decided to live in the Green family． The old couple have no children but two dogs，so they will have more time to communicate with me in English and I can play with their pets as well．Their flat is in the centre of London ，so it's easy for me to go around．I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents． My family can afford the cost of 350 pounds．
I also have good ideas for the study tour．I love history ，so I wonder if we can visit the British Museum during the stay．I'm curious about British food as well，so if you can take us to have a taste， that will be very wonderful．（建议）
I'm really looking forward to this tour!
Many thanks，
Li Hua
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。假如你是李华，将参加今年暑期的英国伦敦游学（study tour）活动，英方提供了两个家庭供你选择居住，并征询你对游学活动的建议。请阅读以下信息，写一封电子邮件回复。仔细阅读材料和要求提示。这些提示要点构成写作的基本框架。动笔前要认真阅读，不要遗漏要点提示，并适当发挥。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲，提纲包括所有提示要点。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。
【点睛】
书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用，本文运用了重要句型和短语有：I can also use the Wi﹣fi to keep in touch with my parents．/ I'm really looking forward to this tour!/ communicate with … in English等。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
28．Our school asks us to spend three hours on self-reading every day in the summer vacation. However, opinions are divided on what to read．
Some of us think we should choose the full-length reading, such as works of literature and scientific books, Because they can develop our reading habits. Others think that we should read practical essays, such as social news and knowledge about life. Because they can help us learn more about the world. At the same time, we will find life interesting for us through reading them.
In my opinion, I would like to choose practical essays. On the one hand, they can help us deal with our life problems. On the other hand, social news can let us know what happens every day around the world.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们对同学们关于自主读书的一个讨论做一个介绍，题目中利用表格列出了主要的提纲，浏览表格可知短文的主要内容应包括：首先罗列两种同学们的不同观点以及他们的理由。这一部分内容在表格中有详细的提示，学生们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来；第二部分应介绍一下你自己的观点以及理由，这部分需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充细节信息，然后表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意，合理安排短文内容，应包括提示中的所有信息，不要遗漏要点；注意分清层次，最好分段来写；英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据表格提示逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子；句式结构可以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。穿插使用并列句或复合句，调整文章节奏，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了同学们关于自主读书的一个讨论。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。短文是分三段，第一段先介绍了事情的背景，点明了主题；第二段介绍了两种不同的观点以及他们各自的理由；第三段介绍了作者自己的看法以及理由。短文层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章用到了第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，符合表达的需要。文章中句式结构完整，以简单句结构为主，符合英语的表达习惯。语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如Some of us think we should choose the full-length reading, such as works of literature and scientific books.、Because they can develop our reading habits、At the same time, we will find life interesting for us through reading them、In my opinion，I would like to choose practical essays、On the one hand, they can help us deal with our life problems. On the other hand，social news can let us know what happens every day around the world等等。
29．Dear Mike
It's fantastic that you will come to China and spend the Mid- Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.
The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one important traditional festival in China, falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year. It is celebrated both in China and many Asian countries. People believe that a full moon is the symbol of reunion and good luck. It is also a custom to express best wishes to their beloved ones at this particular time. On that day we usually go back home to have a family get-together, and they appreciate the beautiful moon, enjoying the typical food---the moon cake.
As a guest at a meal, one should be particular about one’s appearance. When helping yourself to the dishes, you should take food first from the plates in front of you rather than those in the middle of the table or in front of others. Our Chinese all have a wonderful time at the festival.
Enjoy your stay in China.
Li Ming
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如the Mid-autumn Festival，falls on，the lunar calendar，the symbol of reunion and good luck，go back home，have a family get-together，help yourself，in front of，rather than，have a wonderful time等。而The Mid-autumn Festival, which is one important traditional festival in China, falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year./ People believe that a full moon is the symbol of reunion and good luck./ When helping yourself to the dishes, you should take food first from the plates in front of you rather than those in the middle of the table or in front of others.多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
30．I am Li Hua. Here are some of my thoughts about English. I think English is the most widely used language in the world. English helps us understand different cultures in the world. English can also help us improve our communication skills. And speaking more English can improve our confidence.
At present, I can make simple communications with my classmates in English. I also like making speeches. I won the prize in the school speech contest last year. And I believe that I should be able to speak English fluently when I go to a Western country.
However, I have some problems in learning English. I can’t use the grammar rules correctly. Sometimes I can’t express myself clearly in writing. I often find it hard to remember more difficult words.
At last, I have some suggestions for English teaching as well. I think teachers should communicate with us in English when they are in class.
I wish our school will consider my advice.
【详解】
试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，结合所给内容，把各要点有条理的表达出来。注意一些常见句式的应用，注意把握时态与人称。还要注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的观点和想法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中help sb. do sth，at present, make simple communications with, be able to, in class, However, and, at last等词(组)的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还使用倒装句、宾语从句、并列句、时间状语从句等丰富的句型，大大增加了信息的容量，情态动词运用精准，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
31．I am glad to share my ideas about Culture Week in our school. I like the theme about international cooking for our Culture Week, because this can help us better understand different cultures while enjoyed nice food.
First, we will invite teachers and parents to give talks about international cooking. Then, we will hold a Cooking Festival. All the students can bring their own dishes and share them with each other. Near the end of the week, we will have a DIY competition. There will be a surprise in the end.
I hope our Culture Week will be a great success!
【详解】
写作要求对学校文化周的主题、活动内容等进行讨论、分享。从三个方面展开叙述：你喜欢什么文化周主题？你为什么喜欢这个主题？你可以为主题组织什么活动？要求将自己喜欢的主题，喜欢的原因及为此安排的活动叙述清楚，并适当发挥。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
32．Possible version one:
Dear Ryan,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to China. China is a country with a long history and rich culture.
The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival in China. On that day, families get together and have a big dinner. We eat moon cakes and enjoy the full moon. It’s great.
There’re many beautiful cities in China. Beijing is one of the best choices. It’s the capital of
China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum
After visiting Beijing, you can take a high-speed train to visit other cities. And you can buy Chinese knots or chopsticks for your friends.
I hope my reply is of some help to you. Looking forward to seeing you in China.
All the best,
Su Hua
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以苏华的身份给自己的加拿大笔友Ryan回复一封邮件。Ryan在他的邮件中说他想要了解中国的文化，尤其是中秋节的风俗。写作前，首先应仔细阅读Ryan的邮件，根据他邮件中的要求给他回复。通过仔细阅读分析可知，这篇短文中应主要包括以下内容：首先介绍中秋节的风俗；然后给Ryan推荐一个比较好的旅游城市以及最好的旅行方式；最后给他建议带什么礼物。根据这些主要内容，组织语言，连贯成文。需要注意的是英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，写作时不能逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构考虑，使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，穿插使用并列句或复合句，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。选择适当的时态和人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式以及名词的单复数、形容词和副词的用法等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯，语句通顺。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给笔友Ryan回复了电子邮件。这篇短文的特点如下：首先文章内容完整、充实，全面、清楚地回答了Ryan的疑问。短文主要分为四段，每一段是一个话题，层次清晰，包括中秋节的习俗、推荐他去北京旅行、旅行方式以及给朋友带的礼物，最后表达了自己的祝愿。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态、第二人称为主，语法规范，语言得体。句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、复合句和一些高级句型。如There’re many beautiful cities in China. 、Beijing is one of the best choices. 、It’s the capital of China and it has many famous sights like the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum、After visiting Beijing, you can take a high-speed train to visit other cities.等等。
33．Exercising is important!
Recenly, we have done a survey about students’ exereising, Aocording to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good a exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.
As we all know, exercising is god for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising, Besids, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise. (104 words)
【解析】这是一篇图表，关于初中生段炼情况的调查活动。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
34．You raise me up. I will be with you in your life. You are an important person in the process of my growth.
You give me life and take care of me all the time, when I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help me and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also a man who has a heart full of love.
You are ready to help people in need. It is you who teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to you. Today is Father’s Day. I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results.
I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如raise me up，in your life，take care of ，all the time，patient enough to help me，and encourage me，in order to，live a pleasant life，work hard，from morning to evening，full of love，in need，in the past，get better results等。而In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive good education you always work hard from morning to evening every day. / You are also a man who has a heart full of love./ I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.等多种非谓语动词结构和从句句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
35．例文
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
On one hand, we should save resources. First, we should save paper. we can reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, we should save water. We can take short showers and reuse water. Third, we are supposed to save electricity. We can turn off the light when we leave from the classroom. Also, we needn't turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand, we should reduce pollution. We can take care of the trees and flowers, choose the public transport and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle, we can do more exercise and watch less TV. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful tomorrow.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】
1、题干解读：要求写一篇演讲稿，轮廓已经给出，学生需要将内容填充进去，合理有据即可。全文人称应以第一人称为主，时态应用一般现在时态。
2、例文点评：例文分为三段。第一段直接点题；第二段从两个部分说明了如何行动，分别是节约资源和减少污染；第三部分礼貌结尾。内容详实完整，语言规范。
3、高分亮点：
短语：On one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……；另一方面……；both sides of...……的两面；take showers洗澡；be supposed to do sth.应该做某事；turn off 关闭；turn on 打开；take care of 照料；instead of 代替，而不是；do exercise 锻炼。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。

36．例文：
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I’ve read, the Monkey King is my favourite book.
The Monkey King is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. He is not a normal monkey. In fact,he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights. So I like to read it.
The book mainly talks about three things. First of all, it tells us why the monkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and objects he can change into. Secondly, the book shows us how the monkey uses his magic stick. Sometimes he can make the stick so small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but not least, the book tells us how the monkey fights with bad people. I like to read this part very much because the monkey always tries his best to win the fights.
The book teaches us to be brave when we are in trouble. And it also tells us to keep fighting to help the weak. Most importantly, it tells us to keep trying in our lives and never give up.
【详解】
1. 题干解析：本题是一篇话题作文。主要以“My favourite book”展开描写。文章要写出题目中给出的所有的要点，同时也可以自行发挥，可以使用现在时描写，要注意语言的衔接要自然连贯。
2. 例文点评：文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题最喜欢的书是什么；第二段介绍书名的由来；第三段介绍整本书中的内容；第四段写为什么要读这本书，能够学到什么。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确通俗易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：in fact；fight with；talk about；first of all；try one’s best to do；be in trouble；give up。
句型：how引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；so…that引导的结果状语从句。
37．My favourtite English saying
My English saying is many hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, It will make a job easier to complete.
Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music. I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.
The charity show turned out to be a great success. We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us. Teamwork really works!
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇英语短文，参加学校英文报组织的“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动。题目中给出了两条谚语，我们可以从中选择一条，介绍一些它的含义，并描述能体现该谚语含义的个人经历，这才是文章的主体部分。通过审题可知，文章应主要包括两个内容：首先选择自己最喜欢的谚语，介绍它的含义；然后叙述一件自己经历过的、能体现该谚语含义的故事。写作时，可以根据这两个内容分为两段。短文应以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，介绍自己的经历时，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式，尤其注意不规则动词过去式的变化。注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不一样的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。而应从句子整体结构考虑，以英语中的简单句结构为基础，使用恰当的词汇和句型。为提升文章档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如and、but等连接的并列句，以及宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。语句之间、段落之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分为两段，第一段作者用了两句话，介绍了自己喜欢的谚语以及这个谚语的含义；第二段作者讲述了自己的一个经历，这个经历与自己喜欢的谚语是有关的，能较好的体现该谚语的含义。两段的格式使短文结构清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第一人称为主，第一段使用了一般现在时态；第二段使用了一般过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式。第三，短文句式表达符合英语的习惯，语言准确、地道。句子以简单句为主，也用到了很多的复合句，如并列句、宾语从句等，语句之间也用到了一些连接成分。较好的短语和句式有： It was difficult to get everything ready in a short time. 、Luckily, all my classmates worked together and shared the work. 、Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helped download the music.、 I’m good at singing, so I sang a song while my best friend played the guitar.、The charity show turned out to be a great success.、 We all realized that the success belonged to every one of us.等。
38．例文
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.
We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I’ve learned a lot from you.
It’s important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.
I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。
2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye；do well in；do well in；Since then；as soon as；have a talk with sb；learn a lot from；keep healthy；take part in；in order to；look forward to。
句型：①让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.
②时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.
As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well.
③宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.