专题04 描述改变-2021年中考英语书面表达【最后一题】压轴抢分必背

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（一）
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求：
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used t结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
范文：
My Changes
I'm in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First, I used t be thin, but nw I am a little fatter. I used t have curly hair, but nw I have shrt straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Secnd, I have made much prgress in English. I wasn't gd at it at the beginning. But with my English teacher's help, nw I ften get gd scres n my English exams. What's mre, I'm mre utging than I used t be. I was s afraid f speaking in frnt f peple in the past, hwever, nw I can give a speech in public cnfidently. Last but nt least, I have made lts f friends as well. These are my changes. What abut yurs?
（二）
生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定觉得许许多多的人或物与众不同。请以“A different _______”(以“与众不同的______”为题，写一篇不少于80个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
提示：要求先进行总体描述，再说说你认为其与众不同的理由。
要求：
1. 必须包含提示所给的要点及内容，可大胆进行合理发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数80个。
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参考范文
A different me
I used t be a girl f less cnfidence. I always suppse that I can d well in any lessn except the sprt. When it cmes t the sprt, I will feel sad because I’m nt gd at sprt, especially running. I remembered there was a sprt meeting when I was in Grade 8. My head teacher asked me t take part in running race. I tld her that I didn’t run fast, s I culdn’t participate in it. The teacher tld me that if I wanted t get success, I must try t d it first. After listening t her wrds, I tried my best t exercise after schl. With her encuragement and my persistence, I gained the third prize. Nw, I becme a cnfident girl. I believe in that cnfidence is the main factr f success. Hw happy I was t see such a different me!
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇半命题作文。要求补充完整题目“A different _______”，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文要先进行总体描述，再说说认为其与众不同的理由。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
疫情带来的生活改变
去年，新冠肺炎 (COVID-19) 的爆发和反复给人们的生活带来了许多变化。在这段时间里，你的生活一定也发生了一些改变。根据下面的提示，写一篇文章。
提示：
1. 你的生活里发生哪些令你意想不到的事情？
2. 你的生活因此发生了怎样的改变
3. 你有怎样的感受？
范文：
Fr nw, COVID-19 seems t be under cntrl in China. Our lives have mstly gne back t nrmal. It was a tugh experience fr mst f us here.
I didn't realize it wuld affect my life in such a big way. Last year, my new semester was suppsed t start in March. But I was tld that I wuld have t study at hme. I always dreamed f nt having t g t schl — my dream came true in an unexpected way. I started hmeschling. At first, I thught it was fun and interesting t talk t my teachers and classmates nline. But ver time, I gt distracted by the internet and had truble fllwing my teacher. I failed ne f my final exams, which really upset me.
I regret that I didn't make better use f my time during the perid. I realized self-cntrl is necessary fr successful develpment. I hpe I can learn frm this.
（三）
Write a passage abut yur changes after three years’ middle schl life.（写一篇短文叙述经历三年的初中生活后你的变化。）
（请根据下面的提示，在答题卡第六节下面，写出一篇90~120词的短文。注意：不要出现自己信息；诸如姓名、学校，人名可以用英文名字。）
1. First write abut yur past（lk, hbbies, ways t study and grades...）.（首先写你的过去，包括外貌、爱好、学习方法、学习成绩等。）
2. Then write abut yur present（lk, hbbies, ways t study and grades...）.（然后写你的现在，包括外貌、爱好、学习方法、学习成绩等。）
3. At last write abut hw t make yurself better.（最后写写如何让自己变得更好。）
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One pssible versin:
Three years ag, I came t my middle schl. At that time I was shrt and thin. As I was new at schl, I was shy and didn’t have any friends. I just stayed quiet and studied. I wrked hard at schl and I listened t my teachers carefully in class, s I always gt gd grades when I had exams.
Nw, I’m taller and strnger than befre. As I study fr lng hurs every day, I wear glasses. I’m mre utging than befre and I have mre friends. We have a lt in cmmn. We all like t study and discuss questins tgether. I still always get gd scres n my exams.
Maybe I shuld take up a hbby like playing a musical instrument r playing a ball game. It’s nt nly gd fr my study, but als gd fr my health.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据要点提示内容，从外貌、爱好、学习方法、学习成绩等方面写一篇短文，叙述自己经历三年初中生活后的变化；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
家乡改变
（一）
假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Tm在看到有关中国脱贫攻坚战全面胜利的报道后很好奇你的家乡是否有变化，现在是什么样子。请你回复他的邮件，用英文描述一下扶贫工作所取得的成就。
提示：
1. 地方政府提供科技支持，人们找到新的工作机会，生活水平显著提高；
2. 环境得到更好的保护，家乡变得更宜居更美。
要求：
1. 包括以上要点；
2. 语言准确，逻辑清晰，行文流畅；
3. 词数不少于90词。
提示词：pverty alleviatin 扶贫；be lifted ut f pverty 脱贫
Dear Tm,
I'm glad that yu are interested in pverty alleviatin in my hmetwn. I am prud t say that great changes have taken place in the past few years.
Peple in my hmetwn used t make a living in big cities, leaving their kids at hme. But with the help f the lcal gvernment, they n lnger need t live that way. They can nw stay in the hmetwn and still enjy a gd life. Fr example, many f them are selling fruit nline. The gvernment has als made effrts t imprve the envirnment. The river that flws thrugh my hmetwn is getting cleaner. Trees have been planted as well. We are starting t receive turists.
I'm lking frward t yur visit in the future. Yu can see hw things have changed with yur wn eyes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
（二）
随着脱贫攻坚工作的进展，我们的生活发生了很大变化。70多岁的李奶奶见证了生活的变迁，请根据李奶奶的感受，以“Hw has life changed? ”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要求：要点要齐全；提示词要用上。
Hw has life changed?
As the wrk f ending pverty is ging n, great changes have taken place in ur cuntry.
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参考例文：
Hw has life changed?
As the wrk f ending pverty is ging n, great changes have taken place in ur cuntry.
First, families have gt smaller than they were in the past. Tday mst families have nly ne r tw children. Secnd, mst f us have gt a gd educatin and we are busy wrking every day. What’s mre, transprt and travel are easier tday. Nw we can take the bus everywhere, and there’s als the undergrund. And sme peple can take a plane t anywhere in the wrld. And last but nt least, we have many mre activities t enjy urselves. Fr example, there’re many mre gd prgrams n TV, like the Beijing Opera and ld films.
Generally speaking, ur life is better tday. We eat better and we live lnger.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：本题要求以“Hw has life changed?”为标题，根据表格内容提示写一篇英文短文，主要内容是我们的生活在家庭、教育、交通和旅游以及娱乐这几方面的变化。变化可作为单独一段进行写作，内容要点的最后一点可作为总结文章的最后一段。
2. 写作指导：本文内容主要是和以前对比的生活的变化以及现在生活的情况，所以时态主要采用现在完成时和一般现在时为主；写作时注意不要遗漏要点，并且表格中的提示词也要出现在文章中；本文内容要点较多，可使用连接词，比如First，Secnd等进行写作，这使得文章层次清晰，表达流畅；最后在检查时还需注意语言是否符合语法规则和英文表达习惯。
（四）国家改变
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jim最近来中国探望你，他惊讶地发现中国比起他上一次来的时候已经发生了翻天覆地的变化，他十分好奇中国的快速发展给你的生活带来了哪些变化，你有什么感受和体会。请以此为主题写一篇英语文章。
提示词语：
ecnmic develpment 经济发展
incme 收入
achievement 成就
提示问题：
1. Hw has China's develpment affected yur life?
2. Hw d yu feel abut these changes?
3. Are they gd r bad?
Over the last several years, great changes have taken place in ur lives in China. My wn life is a gd example.
When I was a kid, my family lived in a small huse in a village. We never had spare mney fr snacks, clthing, r travel. But nw we live in a big, cmfrtable apartment near the city center. We ften g ut t eat n weekends. We smetimes g shpping fr trendy clthes and like t travel during hlidays.
China's develpment has imprved ur living standards and enriched ur lives. There are better mvies and TV shws these days. There are als mre fun and interesting extracurricular activities at schl. I am grateful that these changes have taken place. They make ur lives better. I will study hard and eventually make my wn cntributins t China's develpment in the future.
Changes
1. Family
smaller, ne r tw children
2. Educatin
gd educatin, busy wrking
3. Transprt and travel
easier, bus, undergrund, plane, anywhere
4. Entertainment
many mre activities, gd prgrams n TV, the Beijing Opera and ld films
5. 总体说来，今天我们的生活变得更好了。我们吃得更好，活得更长寿。