北京市怀柔区 2018-2020年三年中考二模英语试题汇编-书面表达专题(含解析)
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书面表达
从下面两个题目中任.选.一.题., 根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
题目①
39. 假如你是李华,你想邀请你校交换生 Mike 参加你班活动---参观慕田峪长城,请你写一封邮件告诉他出发时间和地点以及游览注意事项等。
提示词语:schl gate, by bus, 2 hurs, take…with,
提示问题:● When and where will yu meet?
● Hw lng will yu visit the Great Wall?
● What is yur advice fr Mike abut the activity?
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging?
I’m writing t invite yu t jin ur activity—visit the Mutianyu Great Wall.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If there is anything that I can d, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Mike,
Hw is it ging?
I’m writing t invite yu t jin ur activity—visit the Mutianyu Great Wall. We are ging t meet at the schl gate at 8 a.m. As it is a little far, we decide t g there by bus. It will take us tw hurs t get there. The whle climbing will start at abut 10 ’clck, and last abut three hurs. Please wear sprts shes because we may walk a lng way, and dn’t frget t wear sun glasses and sun hat. What’s mre, remember t take yur camera with yu, I’m sure the view n the tp f the Mutianyu Great Wall deserves a recrd.
If there is anything that I can d, please let me knw.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇邀请信,书信格式已给出。根据提示可知作文应包括集合的时间,地点,乘坐的交通工具,参观多长时间以及一些建议。根据材料内容本文主要用第一人称,一般将来时来写。
2.例文点评:例文包含了所有要点,时态使用正确,表达有条理,语句通顺,意思连贯,使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点:
短语:at the schl gate;a little far;decide t d;last abut three hurs;wear sprts shes;n the tp f。
句型:①原因状语从句 As it is a little far, we decide t g there by bus.
Please wear sprts shes because we may walk a lng way.
②祈使句 dn’t frget t wear sun glasses and sun hat.
remember t take yur camera with yu.
③宾语从句 I’m sure the view n the tp f the Mutianyu Great Wall deserves a recrd.
【点睛】中学生英语写作主要考查学生的语言运用能力、思维能力和书写能力。而同学们主要存在的问题是:跑题、遗漏要点、语法错误、单词拼写错误和层次不清等。因此,在操练时应注意以下环节:1)审题目:看到作文题不要急于动笔,要认真审题,仔细看清题目的要求。2)圈要点:为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,要充分发挥自己的观察力,把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。3)定基调:定出时态、人称、顺序、开头、结尾。
题目②
40. 假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Nancy来信询问有关新冠病毒(COVID-19)疫情的信息。请你给Nancy回信,内容包括:人们是如何抗疫的?你做了什么?疫情期间你的感受?
提示词语:stay at hme, clean hands, pen the windw, nline learning, exercise, ck, her, vercme the epidemic(战胜疫情)
提示问题:
● What d peple d t fight the epidemic(抗疫)?
● What d yu d during that time?
● What is yur feeling nw? (ur gvernment/dctrs /nurses/yurself…)
Nancy,
I’m glad t receive yur email and yu asked me t share with yu what I’m ding during the epidemic. I am writing t tell yu abut this. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Nancy,
I’m glad t receive yur email and yu asked me t share with yu what I’m ding during the epidemic. I am writing t tell yu abut this.
Everyne is asked t stay at hme t stp the COVID-19 frm spreading. What’s mre, peple need clean hands mre frequently. And in rder t keep the air inside clean, peple shuld pen the windw. During that time, I culdn’t g t schl, s I had nline learning. I als spared sme time t exercise t keep me healthy. I learnt t ck meals by myself.
Many dctrs and nurses have made their effrt t vercme the epidemic, they are my heres. I am prud f them.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是书信类书面表达,要根据提示内容完成信件,格式按照书信格式,补充剩余内容及可。
2.例文点评:例文采用三段式结构,第一段表示收到对方邮件很高兴,第二段介绍了疫情期间人们所做的事情和自己所做的事情,第三段介绍了自己的感受。整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第一人称和第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。
3.高分亮点:
短语:ask sb. t d sth.;stay at hme;what’s mre;in rder t;keep healthy;by neself。
句型:Everyne is asked t stay at hme t stp the COVID-19 frm spreading. 被动语态be dne,动词不定式作目的状语;Many dctrs and nurses have made their effrt t vercme the epidemic, they are my heres. 现在完成时have dne。
2019年北京市怀柔区中考二模英语试题
书面表达
文段表达
从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
39.题目①
假如你是李华,正在教你校的英国交换生Peter学习汉语请你写封邮件告诉他下次上课的计划。内容包括:上课的时间、地点,学习内容及课前准备。
提示词语;Chinese character, Chinese sng,ntebk
提示问题:When and where are yu ging t have class?
What are yu ging t learn?
What d yu advise Peter t prepare fr it?
【答案】范文
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging?
I’m writing t infrm yu f the plan fr the next Chinese class. The class will start at ur classrm at 8 next Sunday mrning. I will teach yu sme Chinese characters and then yu are ging t learn t sing a beautiful Chinese sng. I think it will be easy fr yu because yu are s interested in Chinese. I think yu'd better prepare a pen and a ntebk t practice writing the Chinese characters. I wnder if the time is suitable fr yu, s I hpe t receive yur early reply.
If there is anything that I can d, please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】题干解读:这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的同学Peter写信,告诉他下次上课的计划。审题可知,短文应包括以下内容:首先应在信的开头点明自己写这封信的目的,引出文章的话题;然后是具体的一些通知的内容,如下次上课的时间、地点、学习的内容以及告知Peter需要准备的东西;最后有一个适当的结尾。短文应以一般现在时态、第一人称和第二人称来叙述。
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文有以下几个优点:首先文章内容充实、完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,层次清晰,结构完整,叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,以简单句为基础,穿插使用了并列句、状语从句、宾语从句等复杂句式以及非谓语动词等结构,长短句结构,文章富有节奏的变化。文意连贯,表达流畅。
高分亮点:
短语:write t;next Sunday;be interested in;be suitable fr。
句型:I will teach yu sme Chinese characters and then yu are ging t learn t sing a beautiful Chinese sng.;I think it will be easy fr yu because yu are s interested in Chinese.;I think yu'd better prepare a pen and a ntebk t practice writing the Chinese characters.;I wnder if the time is suitable fr yu, s I hpe t receive yur early reply.
40.题目②
我们的生活是多姿多彩的,每一天都不一样,在你的印象中肯定有特别的一天。
假如你是李华,英语校刊正在开展以“A.Special Day”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇短文分享你“特别的一天”。内容包括:你在哪,那天发生了什么,为什么是特别的。
提示词语:birthday party; sing and dance, play games, grw up
提示问题:Where were yu?
What happened n that day?
Why was it special?
【答案】It was my birthday last Sunday. I stayed with my parents and my friends. My parents prepared a big party fr me at hme t celebrate my birthday. My friends sang and danced at the party. We played games tgether and we had a gd time. It was special fr me because it was my fifteenth birthday and I was grwing up. I wuld try t be a better ne in the future, and d smething meaningful.
【解析】
【详解】题干解读:这篇作文要求以A Special Day为题,介绍自己生活中比较特殊的一天。题目中给出了一些提示词和问题,这也正是学生们写作的主要内容。审题可知,短文应包括以下内容:首先介绍那个特殊的一天是哪天;然后具体介绍你当时在哪里、做了什么;最重要的是叙事清楚那天为什么是特别的。短文应以一般过去时态为主,注意谓语动词的正确形式,人称应为第一人称。
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文有以下几个特点:首先文章内容完整、丰富,包含了题目中要求的所有要点,没有遗漏信息。层次清晰,叙述有条理,理由充分。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,用词准确,语法规范。句式结构完整,以简单句结构为主,穿插了并列句和状语从句,语句通顺,符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:stay with;prepare fr;play games;have a gd time;grw up;in the future。
句型:My parents prepared a big party fr me at hme t celebrate my birthday.;We played games tgether and we had a gd time. It was special fr me because it was my fifteenth birthday, and I was grwing up. ;I wuld try t be a better ne in the future, and d smething meaningful.
北京市怀柔区2018届九年级第二次模拟考试英语试题
书面表达
五、文段表达
39.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
39. 假如你是李华,为了帮助贫困地区人们,你们学校下周五将组织以“友爱、互助”为主题的献爱心捐赠活动。请你给你们班交换生Peter同学写一则捐款通知,告诉他活动的目的,捐赠的时间和地点,以及需要做的准备。
提示词语:dnate(捐赠), pr children, ld peple, clthes, bks, mney
提示问题:● Why are yu ging t hld the activity?
●When and where are yu ging t dnate the things?
● What d yu advise Peter t prepare fr the activity?
Dear Peter,
【答案】Hw is it ging?
I’m writing t tell yu t take part in Caring Activity. We are ging t hld the activity next Friday.Yu can dnate things in the schl hall n that day.I think yu shuld give away the clthes,bks and mney t the pr children and ld peple in need.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇你给你们班交换生Peter同学写一则捐款通知,告诉他活动的目的,捐赠的时间和地点,以及需要做的准备。 动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一,二人称,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
40. 假如你是李华,为了帮助贫困地区的人们,你们学校上周五组织了献爱心活动。请你用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投稿,谈谈你在这次活动中做了什么,为什么这样做,以及你的感受。
提示词语:dnate (捐赠), bk, schlbag, clthes, ty, help, prud
提示问题:What did yu d in this activity?
Why did yu d that?
Hw did yu feel?
At my schl, we held Caring Activity t help the peple in the pr areas last Friday.
【答案】At my schl, we held Caring Activity t help the peple in the pr areas last Friday. Almst all my schlmates and teachers tk part in the dnatin. I dnated sme used textbks, a schlbag, sme clthes and many tys. I did this because I wanted t help the children ut f their difficulties, and shw my lve t them. I’m very prud f what I have dne.
【解析】
这是一篇你给你们班交换生Peter同学写一则捐款通知,告诉他活动的目的,捐赠的时间和地点,以及需要做的准备。 动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一,二人称,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging?
I’m writing t infrm yu f the plan fr the next Chinese class.
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
If there is anything that I can d,please let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
Hw is it ging?
I’m writing t tell yu t take part in Caring Activity.
Yurs,
Li Hua
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