人教新目标 (Go for it) 版Section B学案设计

Unit 5  What were you doing when the rainstorm came?

课时4  Writing

  写作目标

本单元以＂谈论过去正在发生的事情＂为话题，讲述了大事件发生时人们正在进行的各种活动。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们会对过去正在发生的事情进行描述，在写这类短文时，要运用相应的过去时态，如一般过去时或过去进行时等。在写作时要注意以下几点：

①明确中心思想，无论是看图写作，还是情景描写，都要围绕文章中心展开；

②要注意记叙文的几个要素，即把时间、地点、人物、事件、起因、经过、结果等交代清楚；

③要合理安排好写作的顺序；

④叙述事件时语言简洁，把文章写得生动、详实。

  词汇积累

（一）动作类短语

1. 步行回家 walk home      2. 去上班 go to work

3. 入睡 fall asleep        4. 下大雨 rain heavily

5. 洗热水澡 take a hot shower     6. 发出响声 go off 

7. 接电话 pick up        8. 逐渐变弱 die down 

9. 确认；确信 make sure

（二）时间类短语

1. 当暴风雨来的时候 at the time of the rainstorm

2. 在那个时候 at that time

3. 在地震时 at the time of the earthquake

（三）其他短语

1. 沉默地 in silence       2. 做某事有困难 have trouble doing sth

3. 一团糟 in a mess       4. 首先；起初 at first

  句子积累

（一）佳句欣赏与模仿

1. I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that.

【so...that...如此……以至于……】[来源:Z&xx&k.Com]

在台风来临时，我如此地害怕以至于待在床上一动不动。

At the time of the typhoon, I was so scared that I stayed in bed without moving.

2. I had trouble thinking clearly after that because I was very afraid.

【have trouble doing sth在……方面有困难】

由于雨下得非常大，我走路回家相当困难。

I had trouble walking home because it rained heavily.

3. Ben’s dad was putting pieces of wood over the windows while his mom was making sure the flashlights and radio were working.

【while当……时候，连接两个同时发生的动作】

我爸爸正在关窗户时，我妈妈在扫地。

While my dad was closing the windows, my mom was sweeping the floor.

4. Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together.

【although 虽然；尽管】

尽管他累了，但他还是继续工作。

Although he was tired, he went on working.

（二）用when与while连接两个句子

when是一个从属连词，它引导的是一个时间状语从句，when后通常用短暂性动词；while后通常用持续性动词，因此它所引导的状语从句中，谓语动词常用进行时态。

1. I was doing my homework. Typhoon Sanmei came. (while)

Typhoon Sanmei came while I was doing my homework.

2. My friend, Li Bing, was making his way home. Typhoon Sanmei came. (when)

My friend, Li Bing, was making his way home when Typhoon Sanmei came.

（一）

（2016﹒天津）假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。

    （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶。[来源:学#科#网]

    （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他看上去又冷又饿。

    （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。

    （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。

    （5）你很感动……

    参考词汇：乞丐 beggar  感动 be moved

    要求：

    （1）词数：80 ~ 100；

    （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；

    （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

On a cold morning, while I was _______________________________________________________________

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【思路导航】

【佳作展示】

On a cold morning, while I was buying breakfast for myself, I saw the girl in front of me buy some bread and milk. When she was about to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree. The old beggar looked cold and hungry. The girl went up to him and gave the food to him. The beggar thanked the girl for her help and had the delicious breakfast. The girl smiled and left without saying anything. I was so moved that I felt that it was very warm in my heart and in my school.

【名师点评】

（二）

（2016﹒山东东营）在你的成长过程中，父亲一定做了许多令你感动或印象深刻的事情。父亲节就要到了，Teen Times杂志正在组织感恩父亲征文活动，请以＂Father and me＂为题写一篇英语短文，参加本次活动。

    内容包括：

1. 描述一件发生在父亲和你之间的事情；

2. 你的感受或对你的影响；

3. 表达对父亲的爱和感激之情。

要求：

1. 80—100词；

2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。

Father and me

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【思路导航】

本题是与＂感恩父亲＂主题相关的一篇征文，根据要求，短文应从描述父亲与自己之间发生过的事情、自己的感受及对父亲的爱及感激之情三个方面进行写作。要详写发生在自己与父亲自己的故事，从中表达自己与父亲之间的爱，并自然表达出自己的感激之情、感恩之心。描述发生在父亲与自己之间的故事时，用一般过去时态；描述自己的感受等时，用一般现在时态。学科/网

【佳作展示】

Father and me

I used to think father didn’t care for me. But one thing changed my mind.

One Sunday, I was sad because of another ＂C＂in English. At that time father invited me to climb a mountain. Soon I felt tired and wanted to give up. Father encouraged me and gave me a hand when necessary. At last, we got to the top. Then I found the way up wasn’t so hard. Suddenly, I understood father: stick to your dream and you can do it.

Father’s Day is coming. I want to say, ＂Thank you and best wishes to you. I love you, Dad.＂

【名师点评】

do sth，give up，stick to等结构的使用，使本段增色不少。第三段表达作者的感恩、感激之情，语言精炼，中心突出，主旨鲜明。

（一）

初中生活即将结束，我们有很多不能忘记的美好记忆。与同学之间的友好交往，与老师之间的坦诚沟通，与家长之间的倾心交流……已成为我们生活中的重要内容。请以＂My Past Beautiful Life＂为题，写一件你与同学（或朋友、老师、家长）等曾经经历过的美好事情，以表达对他们的感激或怀念之情。

要求：1. 书写规范，层次清楚，真情实意；

2. 文章中不得使用你及你的朋友、同学、老师、家长的真实姓名和校名；

3. 词数不少于80。

部分参考词汇： an unforgotten time (一段难忘时光)；meaningful(有意义的) ；thankful(感激的)；moved(感动的)

My Past Beautiful Life

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（三）

假如你和几个同学上个星期天外出郊游、野餐。请你根据下面的提示写一篇日记，记下这次愉快的周末郊游。

提示：1. 天气晴朗，爬山很开心；

2. 在山顶欣赏美景（enjoy beautiful scenery）、拍照（take photos）；

3. 中午在山脚下野餐（have a picnic lunch）、在山谷里玩游戏（in the valley）；

4. 西山美丽风光让我们流连忘返（enjoy oneself so as to forget to leave）。

注意：1. 词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

          2. 短文条理清晰，不可直接全文照搬提示，可适当发挥；

          3. 文中请勿提及学校和个人的真实信息。

Sunday, May 1st, 2016                                                                     Clear

I had a trip to West Hill with several of my friends last Sunday. _____________________________________

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We had a great time at West Hill. We were tired but happy. It was a pleasant trip.[来源:学科网]

（一）[来源:Zxxk.Com]

My Past Beautiful Life

Our life in middle school will come to an end soon. It was an unforgotten time. I will never forget you, an outgoing boy. There is always smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. It was very meaningful for us to play basketball. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. So I was thankful and moved. At this every moment I’m saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes:

I hope you are happy and healthy forever.[来源:学#科#网]

I hope you are successful in the future.

（二）

Sunday, May 1st, 2016                                                                     Clear

enjoying the beautiful scenery and taking photos on the top of West Hill. At noon, we had a picnic lunch at the foot of West Hill. Then we played games in the valley. Beautiful scenery at West Hill made us enjoy ourselves so much as to forget to leave.

We had a great time at West Hill. We were tired but happy. It was a pleasant trip.