北师大版八年级下册Communication Workshop精品第二课时学案

这是一份北师大版八年级下册Communication Workshop精品第二课时学案，共2页。

Self-check
□I wrte abut nly ne event.
□I fllwed lgical rder.
□I used all Key Wrds, Key Expressins and vcabulary crrectly.
□I duble-checked spelling, grammar and punctuatin.
Peer-review check
□Is the paper interesting? If nt, hw culd it be interesting, fr example, give
mre details?
□Des it make sense? If nt, what culd the writer d t make it better, fr example, better fllw a mre lgical rder?
□Des it answer yur questins abut the student’s mst unfrgettable event? If nt, what else wuld yu like t knw?
□Did the student use Key Wrds, Key Expressins and vcabulary crrectly? If nt, circle any mistakes.
□Is the spelling, grammar and punctuatin crrect? Circle where the student had prblems.
□D yu have any ther suggestins?
Li Ran’s writing:
My Mst Unfrgettable Experience
I had the mst unfrgettable experience when I was 12 years ld. One day in the afternn, I was riding bike with father near my hme. I was excited. After a while, I saw a big stne. But I culdn’t take away frm the stne. S I fell ff frm my bike. My right arm was brken. And my father tk me t the hspital as quickly as he culd.
In the hspital, the dctr tld me that I needed t stay at hme fr a mnth. Then my dad tk me t hme. My grandparents was very wrried abut me. They asked whether I was hurt. But I culdn’t answer them. Frm then n my dad lked after me every day. I felt I was the mst happy peple all ver the wrld. He helped me with my study, and helped me washed clthes. He ften made lts f delicius fd fr me.
I learned hw much my father lves me and cared abut me. and I knw my father was prud f me. I thught he is the best father in the wrld. I tld him I wuld a university student t make him happy in the future.
Yur suggestins:
Plish yur writing
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Bdy paragraph
Ending paragraph
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