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一、思维导图
第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）
1、恶劣环境
（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味道。In late summer, the pnd wuld be cvered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Smetimes a strng, unpleasant smell rse frm it.
（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。
In the middle f the pnd, the ice gave way with a sudden crack.
（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning smell filled the air.
2、负面情绪：害怕
(1) Watching the shre in the distance, I felt pwerless(无力的) as if we were brken tiny bats at the mercy f strng waves.
(2) Exhausted and cld, the thught that we might die here flashed acrss my mind，
which made me quiver with an uncntrllable terrr/hrrr/fright(难以控制地发抖)
Lking at the vast sea, I felt a sense f fear surging thrugh my whle bdy (在身体涌动)
第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）
1、.挣扎努力
Tm lked thughtful(若有所思)
“We need t think ut a way!” I muttered (喃喃自语), scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)
...,We swam tth and nailspared n effrt t
tth and nail
spared n effrt t
(全力以赴地).
2. 救人有关的惊险场面描写
(1) The next thing I knew I was hanging n t the edge f a hle in the ice by arms utstretched n the ice. Frm my shulders dwn I hung in icy water.
(2) I tried t climb ut f the hle, but when I gt a knee n the ice, it brke like windw glass(像玻璃一样破裂). （浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
(3)As the cat became cmpletely wet, it dragged me dwn(把我拖下水). I was tired f the struggle and rested with my arms stretched ut n the ice.（浙江省十校联盟考试续写2020.10）
3.实施救援的过程
“帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“Help me get Simmns ut f the car!” Nrwd yelled ludly t her friends, wh were left in a panic. 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。
尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
Nervus and anxius, Nrwd struggled t calm herself dwn and carried ut first aid t Simmns.
诺伍德和她的朋友们把西蒙斯放到平躺的位置，打开了她的呼吸道。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
4、如释重负
Ensuing their safety, I felt a surge f triumph .(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)
Hearing the news, I culdn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
It thrilled us t hear the gd news (听到新消息很高兴).
On hearing the gd news, Tm and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气), grinning merrily at each ther.
第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）
1、感激
“If I had nt been given first aid, I wuld have dead.” Simmns said t Nrwd gratefully. Simmns shwed her gratitude t Nrwd, saying “It was yu wh came t my aid and saved my life.” 如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
“Thank yu fr entering my wrld and I will always remember what yu have dne fr me.” Simmns whispered t Nrwd. “谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。” 西蒙斯对诺伍德说。（2021年山东新高考质量测评联盟）
2、升华句
(1) 花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。
Take sme time t learn the knwledge f first aid. It saves lives, and it wrks.
(2) 这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。
The stry shws that a gd knwledge f first aid can make a real difference.
(3) 每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。
Everyne shuld learn smething abut first aid, fr every secnd will cunt in an emergency.
(4) 了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knwing basic first-aid techniques will help yu respnd quickly t emergencies.
精讲精练
Passage 01—野外遇蛇
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling(种树苗)，Pa. Have we planted enugh?” Pa walked t the end f the rw f cttnwd seedlings. “N,” he said. “We have t plant trees all the way t that rck ver there. We’ll need abut twenty mre seedlings.”
“I’ll get the seedlings.” ffered Rebecca. She lnged t cl her feet in the shallw river running thrugh the cttn field. “Yu’d better let me g, Miss Petticats,” teased her twin brther, William. “There are dangers all ver this prairie(牧场/草原）“Yu may bth g,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like t finish befre sundwn.”
They went acrss the shallw river t a sandbar where small cttnwd seedlings grew. Gently, they pulled the seedlings frm the sand. “There! That’s twenty, with a few t spare.” said Rebecca. “OK，” said William. He led the way t the riverbank, then stpped.
“Lk! There’s the dugut(防空壕）we lived in when we mved here last year.” He pinted t a hle in the grassy river bank. “Cme n, let’s g inside.” “N，” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard telling what’s in there.” “Then yu start back.” said William, handing the seedlings t Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran t the dugut and stepped inside.
Rebecca tied the seedlings int her lng aprn(围裙）and began t walk. Suddenly she frze in her tracks. A huge prairie rattlesnake(响尾蛇）mved alng the river bank. It stpped right in frnt f the dugut and lay still, ciled up n the warm sunny bank. “William!” Rebecca shuted. “Dn’t cme ut!”
“Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny windw beside the dr f the dugut. Rebecca pinted tward the rattler. William's face paled when he saw the snake blcking the drway. He turned desperate eyes tward Rebecca, then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there mre snakes waiting in the shadwy crners f the dugut?”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying t think f a way t get William ut f there. An idea ppped int her head. It was their nly hpe. It was risky, but it was the nly hpe. “Dn’t mve,” she said t William in a sft vice. “When r say NOW, yu run ut f there as fast as yu can.” Rebecca remved the skirt-like petticat(衬裙）frm beneath her dress, then dipped it int the river. She squeezed ut sme f the water, then climbed t the tp f the bank, directly abve the dugut’s pening.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1:“Get ready t run, William,” she said, keeping an eye n the mtinless snake.
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Paragraph 2: Are yu OK? he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca ndded.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(她渴望在浅水中凉快一下) running thrugh the cttn field.
2. ______________________________(他们穿过那条浅河) t a sandbar where small cttnwd seedlings grew.
3. Suddenly ______________________________(她在路上僵住了).
4. “Huh?” ______________________________(威廉姆斯的脸出现在一扇小窗户前) beside the dr f the dugut.
5. ______________________________(威廉脸色苍白) when he saw the snake blcking the drway.
6. ______________________________(丽贝卡的大脑飞速转动), trying t think f a way t get William ut f there. ______________________________(她突然想到一个主意).
7. ______________________________(迅速地), she drpped the heavy garment n tp f the rattlesnake.
8. It tk them five minutes t _____________________________(找到呼吸，让自己冷静下来).
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参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
“Get ready t run, William, ”she said, keeping an eye n the mtinless snake. Rebecca pened the dripping petticat（wet thrugh with water）as much as she culd. Her hands shk as she leaned ver the bank. With ne swift mvement, she drpped the heavy garment n tp f the rattlesnake. “NOW！” she shuted t William as the snake began t mve under the petticat. William jumped ver the cvered snake and ran fast befre he stpped and turned arund. Rebecca was right behind him.
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“Are yu OK？” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca ndded. She was glad they managed t escape. It tk them five minutes t catch their breath and calm themselves dwn. Rebecca checked t make sure that the seedlings were still cmplete. Then William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks, sister. I’d have dne the same fr yu back there.” Rebecca said with a grin. “Yu culdn’t have, fr yu dn’t wear petticats！” Laughing, they raced back t the wds.
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【写作特训答案】
1. She lnged t cl her feet in the shallw river running thrugh the cttn field.
2. They went acrss the shallw river t a sandbar where small cttnwd seedlings grew.
3. Suddenly she frze in her tracks.
4. “Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny windw beside the dr f the dugut.
5. William's face paled when he saw the snake blcking the drway.
6. Rebecca’s mind raced, trying t think f a way t get William ut f there. An idea ppped int her head.
7. With ne swift mvement, she drpped the heavy garment n tp f the rattlesnake.
8. It tk them five minutes t catch their breath and calm themselves dwn.
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Passage 02 ---洞穴探险
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked dwn a narrw passage studded with sharp rcks. The rain came dwn steady and hard. Jasn Strie heard it but was nt wrried as he prepared fr a day f caving with five friends in a remte spt 80 miles nrthwest f his hme in Duncan, n Canada’s Vancuver Island.
It was 6 a.m. n December 5, 2015. As a newcmer t the sprt, Jasn had gne caving nly fur times. This wuld be his tughest uting yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerus enugh that the entrance was blcked by a lcked metal dr t keep the casual cavers ut. Abut a mile lng and 338 feet deep, Cascade was full f tums and barely passable tight squeezes.
Jasn was new amng the grup, with the least experience and, at 43, lder by a decade r mre. It was his friend Andrew Munz, 33, wh intrduced him t the sprt. Unlike Jasn, Andrew was an expert caver-a frmer caving guide, actually.
They hiked a bit befre cming t the dr, which sat in the grund—yu’d miss it if yu weren’t lking fr it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked dwn a narrw passage studded with sharp rcks. The silence was brken by a drip-drip-drip frm abve. Sn the drip turned int a light but steady flw, and they were wading in water up t their ankles, then t their shins.
Tw hurs later, they apprached ne f the features that made the cave unique: a narrw passage nt big enugh t stand up in that led int a shrt, tight dwnhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Fur streams met here, and indeed, the water was flwing mre quickly. The sund f the water had turned int a rar. When they finally neared the tp f the Crawl, there were barely fur inches f air left between the water and the ceiling. nt enugh fr them t keep their heads up t breathe. They came t terrifying realizatin that they were in danger！
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1：
The water kept rising, and there was n hpe f rescue.
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Slwly but steadily, the grup made their way frward.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(他们的路被前照灯照亮了) , they walked dwn a narrw passage studded with sharp rcks.
2. ______________________________(沉默被打破了) a drip-drip-drip frm abve.
3. Fur streams met here, and indeed, ______________________________(水流得更快了).
4. ______________________________(当他们最终接近Crawl的顶端时), there were barely fur inches f air left between the water and the ceiling. nt enugh fr them t keep their heads up t breathe.
5. The water kept rising, and ______________________________(没有营救的希望).
6. They dzed ff and then ______________________________(猛然醒来).
7. Over the next 90 minutes, ______________________________(他们朝入口走去), at times in chest-high water.
8. _____________________________(杰森的情绪控制了他) and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.
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参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
The water kept rising, and there was n hpe f rescue. The hurs passed. Jasn and Andrew didn’t dare t mve fr fear f slipping. They dzed ff and then jerked themselves awake. Every nce in a while, ne f them turned n his headlamp t check the ­water level. An hur later, the water level went dwn enugh that they culd try an escape. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr 12 hurs, they slwly unflded their bdies. Jasn screamed in pain, but he was determined nt t let it stp him.
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Slwly but steadily, the grup made their way frward. Still, each time Jasn mved a leg, he cried ut. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way tward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Nw, in a passage that was high enugh fr them t walk upright, Jasn saw smething flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jasn shuted ut. Fr the first time since entering the cave, ver 20 hurs earlier, Jasn’s emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.
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【写作特训答案】
1. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked dwn a narrw passage studded with sharp rcks.
2. The silence was brken by a drip-drip-drip frm abve.
3. Fur streams met here, and indeed, the water was flwing mre quickly.
4. When they finally neared the tp f the Crawl, there were barely fur inches f air left between the water and the ceiling. nt enugh fr them t keep their heads up t breathe.
5. The water kept rising, and there was n hpe f rescue.
6. They dzed ff and then jerked themselves awake.
7. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way tward the entrance, at times in chest-high water.
8. Jasn’s emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.

综合演练
读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane andher husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight bya lake in the frest. Unfrtunately ,n the way an unpleasantsubject came up and they started t quarrel .By the time they reached the lake,Jane was s angry that she said t Tm,“I’m ging t find a better spt fr ust camp” and walked away.With n path t fllw ,Jane just walked nfr quite a lng time .After she had climbed t a high place ,sheturned arund ,hping t see the lake .T her surprise ,she saw nthing butfrest and ,far beynd ,a snwcapped muntain tp .She suddenly realizedthat she was lst.“Tm! ” she cried. “Help! ”N reply .If nly she had nt left hermbile phne in that bag with Tm .Jane kept mving ,but the farther she walked,the mre cnfused she became .As night was beginning t fall ,Jane was stired that she had t stp fr the night .Lying awake in the dark ,Jane wantedvery much t be with Tm and her family .She wanted t hld him and tell him hwmuch she lved him.Jane rse at the break f day, hungry andthirsty. She culd hear water trickling(滴落)smewhere at a distance. Quicklyshe fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy, sheals saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw, Jane began t walk alngthe stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.As she picked her way carefully alng thestream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, thetrees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead.
Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
But n mre helicpters came and it wasgetting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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翻译小练习：
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
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2. 简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。
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3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”
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4. 她因无休止的焦虑而后悔，然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。
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5. 尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
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6. 令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
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7. 她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。
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8. 幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。
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9. 在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。
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10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。
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11. 此外，他们同意不再吵架，决定过上最充实的生活。
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参考答案：
1. 一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。
Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest.
2. 简，精疲力竭，害怕，躺在一块石头旁边，想念她遥远的家人。
Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance.
3. 所有美好的回忆涌上心头，她忍不住哭了起来：“如果不是我和汤姆吵架，走开，爬到高处，我就不会被困在这个可怕的地方，面对死亡的危险。”
All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreledwith Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn’t be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.”
4. 她因无休止的焦虑而后悔，然后眼睛里噙着晶莹的泪水。
She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
5. 尽管她很虚弱，她还是挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance.
6. 令她非常高兴的是，一架直升飞机一次又一次地从头顶飞过。
T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again.
7. 她又急又兴奋，把自己的黄色上衣挂在旗子上，不遗余力地大叫，以吸引别人的注意。
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers’ attentin.
8. 幸运的是，她最终被发现并被带上了直升机。
Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter.
9. 在那里，她看到了她的丈夫，一个男人盯着她，脸上带着宽慰的表情。
There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief.
10．她尽可能紧紧地抱住他，激动得说不出话来。
As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything.
11. 此外，他们同意不再吵架，决定过上最充实的生活。
Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.
参考范文：
But n mre helicpters came and it wasgetting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn’t help crying, “Hadn’t I quarreledwith Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn’t be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance. T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers’ attentin. Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief. As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything. Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.
读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Rebecca stretched her tired back. “That’s the last seedling(种树苗)，Pa. Have we planted enugh?”Pa walked t the end f the rw f cttnwd seedlings. “N,” he said. “We have t plant trees all the way t that rck ver there. We’ll need abut twenty mre seedlings.”
“I’ll get the seedlings.” ffered Rebecca. She lnged t cl her feet in the shallw river running thrugh the cttn field. “Yu’d better let me g, Miss Petticats,” teased her twin brther, William. “There are dangers all ver this prairie(牧场/草原）“Yu may bth g,” said Pa. “But hurry back. I’d like t finish befre sundwn.”
They went acrss the shallw river t a sandbar where small cttnwd seedlings grew.Gently, they pulled the seedlings frm the sand.“There! That’s twenty, with a few t spare.” said Rebecca.“OK，” said William. He led the way t the riverbank, then stpped.
“Lk! There’s the dugut(防空壕）we lived in when we mved here last year.” He pinted t a hle in the grassy river bank.“Cme n, let’s g inside.”“N，” Rebecca said, “Pa is waiting. Besides, it’s hard telling what’s in there.”“Then yu start back.” said William, handing the seedlings t Rebecca. I’ll catch up.” He ran t the dugut and stepped inside.
Rebecca tied the seedlings int her lng aprn(围裙）and began t walk. Suddenly she frze in her tracks.A huge prairie rattlesnake(响尾蛇）mved alng the river bank.It stpped right in frnt f the dugut and lay still, ciled up n the warm sunny bank.“William!” Rebecca shuted. “Dn’t cme ut!”
“Huh?” Williams face appeared at a tiny windw beside the dr f the dugut. Rebecca pinted tward the rattler. William's face paled when he saw the snake blcking the drway. He turned desperate eyes tward Rebecca, then he glanced behind himself. Rebecca knew what he was thinking: “Were there mre snakes waiting in the shadwy crners f the dugut?”
Rebecca’s mind raced, trying t think f a way t get William ut f there. An idea pppedint her head. It was their nly hpe. It was risky, but it was the nly hpe.“Dn’t mve,” she said t William in a sft vice. “When r say NOW, yu run ut f there as fast as yu can.”Rebecca remved the skirt-like petticat(衬裙）frm beneath her dress, then dipped it int the river. She squeezed ut sme f the water, then climbed t the tp f the bank, directly abve the dugut’s pening.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:“Get ready t run, William,” she said, keeping an eye n the mtinless snake.
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Paragraph 2: Are yu OK?he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca ndded.
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翻译小练习：
1. 丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙（被水打湿了）。
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2. 她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。
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3. 她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。
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4. “现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。
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5. 威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。
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6. 她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。
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7. 丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。
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8. 然后威廉感激地拥抱了丽贝卡。“谢谢，姐姐。我也会为你做同样的事。”
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9. 丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。
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参考答案：
1. 丽贝卡尽可能地打开滴水的衬裙（被水打湿了）。
Rebecca pened the dripping petticat（wet thrugh with water）as much as she culd.
2. 她靠在岸边时双手颤抖。
Her hands shk as she leaned ver the bank.
3. 她一个快速的动作，把厚重的衣服扔到响尾蛇身上。
With ne swift mvement, she drpped the heavy garment n tp f the rattlesnake.
4. “现在！”当蛇开始在衬裙下移动时，她对威廉喊道。
“NOW！” she shuted t William as the snake began t mve under the petticat.
5. 威廉跳过那条被盖住的蛇，跑得很快，然后停下来转过身来。丽贝卡就在他后面。
William jumped ver the cvered snake and ran fast befre he stpped and turned arund. Rebecca was right behind him.
6. 她很高兴他们设法逃走了。他们花了五分钟才喘口气，使自己平静下来。
She was glad they managed t escape. It tk them five minutes t catch their breath and calm themselves dwn.
7. 丽贝卡检查了一下，以确保幼苗还是完整的。
Rebecca checked t make sure that the seedlings were still cmplete.
8. 然后威廉感激地拥抱了丽贝卡。“谢谢，姐姐。我也会为你做同样的事。”
Then William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks, sister. I’d have dne the same fr yu back there.”
9. 丽贝卡笑着说。“你不可能，因为你不穿衬裙！”他们笑着跑回了树林。
Rebecca said with a grin. “Yu culdn’t have, fr yu dn’t wear petticats！” Laughing, they raced back t the wds.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1:“Get ready t run, William, ”she said,keeping an eye n the mtinless snake. Rebecca pened the dripping petticat（wet thrugh with water）as much as she culd. Her hands shk as she leaned ver the bank. With ne swift mvement, she drpped the heavy garment n tp f the rattlesnake.“NOW！” she shuted t William as the snake began t mve under the petticat. William jumped ver the cvered snake and ran fast befre he stpped and turned arund. Rebecca was right behind him.
Paragraph 2:“Are yu OK？” he asked, breathing heavily. Rebecca ndded. She was glad they managed t escape. It tk them five minutes t catch their breath and calm themselves dwn. Rebecca checked t make sure that the seedlings were still cmplete.Then William gave Rebecca a grateful hug. “Thanks, sister. I’d have dne the same fr yu back there.” Rebecca said with a grin. “Yu culdn’t have, fr yu dn’t wear petticats！” Laughing, they raced back t the wds.
读后续写模拟专练03
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A yung man went t visit the ldest and wisest man in the village fr sme advice n hw he culd becme rich.
“Treasure is yurs t be had at the tp f Ynder Muntain,” advised the wise ld man as he pinted t a tall muntain in the distance. “Yu must travel n ft t the tp f the muntain. There yu will find riches beynd yur belief. Once yu leave the tp f the muntain, whatever remains will be lst frever.”
The yung man culd hardly wait until the mrning when he was t meet with the wise ld man fr final instructins. When he arrived at thewise ld man's hme, he saw a lng, thick lg lying n the grund in frnt f the huse.
“Yu must carry this lg n yur jurney t the tp f the muntain, and it is a necessary part f yur jurney. Yumust take it with yu t the tp f the muntain t claim yur treasure,”explained the wise ld man.
The yung man was nt pleased with this sudden surprise, but he respected the wise ld man and as he lifted the lng, heavy lg nt his shulders and struggled dwn the rad twards themuntain, he realized that the trip wuld nt be as easy as he thught.
After he was walking fr a while, a wdsman cameup t him and said, “It lks like that lg is pretty heavy. Wuld yu like met cut sme f it ff t make it lighter?”
The yung man was exhausted, s he said, “Isuppse that a little bit cut ff the end wuldn't hurt.” And the wds man cut tw inches ff the end.
A while later the yung man met a farmer n hisway back frm the fields. And the farmer helped him cut tw inches ff the end.
At the bttm f the muntain, the yung man metup with a trapper wh helped him cut fur mre inches ff the lg.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
The yung man cntinued tstruggle t climb the muntain.
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Paragraph 2:
The excited yung man laythe lg acrss the gap and discveredthat it.
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翻译小练习：
1. 原木仍然很重，但他觉得轻松多了。幸运的是，当他几乎筋疲力尽时，他看到了山顶。
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2. 围绕着山顶，宝藏闪闪发光。
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3. 他喜出望外，跑向宝藏。
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4. 但走近一点，他发现路的尽头有一个巨大的缺口，越过缺口似乎是找到宝藏的唯一途径。
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5. “我怎么能到那里？”他看了看日志，想起了那位睿智的老人所说的话。
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6. 兴奋的年轻人把原木放在缺口上，发现它太短了，走不过去。
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7. 他看到了无法够到的宝藏，多么后悔让原木被砍掉！
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8. 经过多次徒劳的尝试，他不得不离开顶端。
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9. 他真后悔！他明白了这位聪明的老人想教给他什么，那就是，当我们努力取得成功时，决不应耍花招欺骗自己。
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参考答案：
1. 原木仍然很重，但他觉得轻松多了。幸运的是，当他几乎筋疲力尽时，他看到了山顶。
The lg was still heavy, but he felt much easier. Luckily, when he was nearly tired ut, he saw the tp f the hill.
2. 围绕着山顶，宝藏闪闪发光。
Surrunding the tp f the hill, the treasure was glittering.
3. 他喜出望外，跑向宝藏。
Being verjyed, he ran t the treasure.
4. 但走近一点，他发现路的尽头有一个巨大的缺口，越过缺口似乎是找到宝藏的唯一途径。
But when gt clser, he fund a huge gap at the end f the rad, and getting acrss the gap seemed t be the nly way t get t the treasure.
5. “我怎么能到那里？”他看了看日志，想起了那位睿智的老人所说的话。
“Hw culd I get there?”Lking at the lg, he thught f what the wise ld man had said.
6. 兴奋的年轻人把原木放在缺口上，发现它太短了，走不过去。
The excited yung man lay the lg acrss the gap and discvered that it was t shrt t cver the distance.
7. 他看到了无法够到的宝藏，多么后悔让原木被砍掉！
Seeing the treasure that culdn't be reached, hw he regretted allwing the lg t be cut!
8. 经过多次徒劳的尝试，他不得不离开顶端。
After many vain tries, he had t leave the tp.
9. 他真后悔！他明白了这位聪明的老人想教给他什么，那就是，当我们努力取得成功时，决不应耍花招欺骗自己。
Hw regretful he was! Heunderstd what the wise ld man wanted t teach him, that is, when we are struggling t success, we shuld never play tricks t cheat urselves.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1:
The yung man cntinued tstruggle t climb the muntain. The lg was still heavy, but he felt much easier. Luckily, when he was nearly tired ut, he saw the tp f the hill. Surrunding the tp f the hill, the treasure was glittering. Being verjyed, he ran t the treasure. But when gt clser, he fund a huge gap at the end f the rad, and getting acrss the gap seemed t be the nly way t get t the treasure. “Hw culd I get there?”Lking at the lg, he thught f what the wise ld man had said.
Paragraph 2:
The excited yung man lay the lg acrss the gap and discvered that it was t shrt t cver the distance. Seeing the treasure that culdn't be reached, hw he regretted allwing the lg t be cut! After many vain tries, he had t leave the tp. Hw regretful he was! He understd what the wise ld man wanted t teach him, that is, when we are struggling t success, we shuld never play tricks t cheat urselves.