高中英语UNIT4Scientistswhochangedtheworld表达作文巧升格学案译林版必修第三册

UNIT 4 Scientists who changed the world

写一篇介绍活动计划类的文章

介绍活动计划类文章是介绍相关活动安排的应用文，是高考英语应用文主要考查的形式之一。一般来说学生只需要说明活动内容和时间、地点安排即可。

[基本框架]

1．开头

活动的时间、地点、参加的人员及活动主题。

2．主体

活动主要内容及代表性的活动。一般来说，给人印象最深刻的往往是有代表性的活动，应详细介绍、突出重点。

3．结尾

收获或感想。不同的活动给人的感受是不一样的：有的活动能够增进友谊，有的活动使人轻松愉快，有的活动令人增长见识，有的活动可以催人奋进……写了真情实感，才能感染读者。

[常用词块]

1．meet at the school gate 在校门口集合

2．have a wide variety of activities活动多样

3．spend some time together花一些时间一起

4．take photos for future memories拍照方便以后回忆

5．be deeply impressed by the exhibitions对展品印象深刻

6．return at 5 p．m. and get home 1 hour later下午五点返回，一小时后到家

[常用语句]

精彩开头

1．With...drawing near/approaching，we will hold ...

2．...is scheduled to take place on Friday.

3．...is aimed at teenagers who have difficulty in...

正文佳句

1．Firstly... Secondly... Thirdly...

2．First...Then... Finally/At last...

3．If you're interested in...，...will be intended for you.

4．If you have any questions about..., you can take part in...

5．If you want to know more about..., nothing can be better than...

余味结尾

1．...is meaningful/significant, where you can have a better understanding of...

2．Hope you all enjoy it!

3．I sincerely hope...will be a great success!

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry，在中国学习。他来邮件询问你校举办的科技展的情况，请回复邮件。内容包括：

1．科技展的时间和地点；

2．科技展的内容和意义；

3．发出邀请。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：科技展Science and Technology Exhibition

Dear Terry，

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Yours，

Li Hua

【学生习作】

Dear Terry，

I am happy to tell you something about the exhibition next week.

The Science Exhibition will be in my school. It includes many activities like AI and VR. It also has a new collection of science books and videos.You can have a try in many places.

Now I invite you to come. Come on，don't forget the time.

Yours，

Li Hua

点评：1．词数少；

2．句型单一；

3．缺少衔接词语。

【参考范文】

Dear Terry，

I'm delighted to tell you the details of the Science and Technology Exhibition  to be held by my school next week in the science building.

The exhibition, including several themes like AI and VR, features a new collection of science books and videos. Not only can visitors enjoy a variety of inventions, such as robot models, 3D printers, etc., but they can also experience the 9D Virtual Reality chair. The activity is of great significance.

Therefore, I sincerely invite you to participate in it. And I bet you will have an unforgettable experience.

Yours，

Li Hua

假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国的某中学的访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排其在天津的活动。请根据提示，给美国的领队史密斯先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动安排并简要说明理由，最后征求对方的意见。

1．上午与我校学生座谈(如校园文化、文化差异)；

2．中午与我校学生共进午餐(饺子、面条等)；

3．下午和我校学生游览海河。

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【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith，

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. I am very pleased to learn that you are coming to visit our school on June 26. I am writing to tell you what we have arranged for you.

In the morning, there will be a forum in the school auditorium, where visitors and students from our school communicate with each other, talking about school life and cultural differences. At noon, you are invited to have lunch in our school cafeteria with students from our school. You can taste dumplings, noodles and other Chinese foods. In the afternoon, the students in our school will show you around the Haihe River.

How do you like the arrangements? I hope you will have a nice time in Tianjin.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua