高中英语Unit 6 Earth first导学案

Unit 6 Earth first

劝说信

本单元写作任务是写劝说信。劝说信要求对有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题劝说某人采纳自己的建议或看法。

[基本框架]

1．开头：说明写信目的；

2．主体：分析问题并阐述理由；

3．结尾：提出自己的建议或劝告。

[常用词块]

1．give rise to the traffic problems 引起交通问题

2．live up to parents' expectations 不辜负父母的期望

3．pass our love and friendship to others

把我们的友谊和爱传递给别人

4．take some measures to protect rare animals

采取措施保护稀有动物

5．use public transport as much as possible

尽可能多使用公共交通

6．make a contribution to protecting the environment

为保护环境做贡献

[常用语句]

精彩开头

1．I am writing this letter to raise your awareness of air pollution.

我写信旨在提高你们对空气污染的意识。

2．I am writing to persuade you to ...

我写信想说服你……

3．I will try my best to make some constructive suggestions.

我会尽力提出一些建设性的建议。

丰满主体

1．The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.

我的建议如下。

2．In my opinion/Personally/As far as I'm concerned，it would be wise to take the following actions.

在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。

3．By the way，you may take Bus No.322 and it will take you directly to the club.

顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。

余味结尾

1．I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.

我希望这些建议会对你有用。

2．I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway.

无论如何，我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助。

3．If you have any questions or requirements，please do not hesitate to tell me.

如果你还有任何问题或要求，请及时告诉我。

假定你是李华，你的朋友Mary因为缺乏运动而生病。请给她写一封信，劝说她康复以后多参加体育活动，每天至少锻炼一个小时，以增强身体素质。

注意：1．词数80左右，开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mary，

    I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now._________________________________________________________________

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Yours，

Li Hua

[学生习作]

Dear Mary，

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have studied too hard，and you have no time for exercise.I feel you take more exercise will be good for your health，so you should take more exercise in the future.

Exercise will improve our body health.When we have a good body，we can keep on studying a long time and don't feel tired.Exercise is useful to our body and study.

I hope you to take exercise at least one hour every day.I will be very happy to see you very strong.

Yours，

Li Hua

名师点评：

1．习作中出现了一些错误，例如第一段最后一句I feel后面的you take more exercise应作主语，可在其前加that或改为动名词复合结构。

2．习作中出现了汉语式表达，例如our body health，have a good body，I hope you to take exercise。

3．尽可能多使用句型使表达更地道，例如第一段第二句可用so ...that ...句式，第三句可用it作形式主语，第二段第二句可用倒装句。

[升格作文]

Dear Mary，

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now.You have studied so hard that you have had no time for exercise.I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in the future.

Exercise can improve your physical health and refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying without feeling exhausted.Exercise is as useful and important as your study.

I hope you can take at least one hour's exercise every day after you recover.I would be more than happy to see you have a stronger body.

Yours，

Li Hua

假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom在考试中没有及格，但是他的妈妈对他寄予厚望，为了不让妈妈失望，他不得不撒了谎。请你给Tom写一封信，给他提出一些建议，解决这个问题。内容要点如下：

1．表示安慰；

2．提出建议：坦诚相告，积极沟通；努力学习，用实际行动证明自己。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom，

I have learned that you lied to your mother because you failed in the exam.________________________________________________________________

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Yours，

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Tom，

I have learned that you lied to your mother because you failed in the exam. I know you don't want to disappoint your mother.But lying can't solve the problem.

My suggestions are as follows.First of all，you'd better have a heart­to­heart talk with your mother and apologize to her.I think your mother will forgive you because being honest is more important than scores.Secondly，you should focus your efforts on your study and prove yourself by actions.I believe that as long as you work hard，you'll succeed sooner or later.

I sincerely hope these suggestions can be of use to you.

Yours，

Li Hua