2021届中考英语一轮复习----The ways to improve your writing 教学课件 (共25张PPT)

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一、准确审题，运用恰当的词汇、短语、时态和句型正确地表达思想。
二、合理使用形容词、副词、关联词和从句，使文章条理清楚，层次分明，富有文采。
三、恰当使用谚语、例子，丰富文章内容，使文章有说服力。
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健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。
stay at hme
visit friends r parents
Style (体裁)：_____________Persn(人称)：_____________Tense (时态): _______________
1. 审(search):
A lt f peple travel. Sme peple stay at hme. Sme ther peple visit friends r parents. A few peple wrk.Enjy yur vacatin.
根据以下关键词及图表用 简单的句子列出文章的要点。
A lt f peple travel. Sme peple stay at hme. They watch TV r surf the internet. Sme ther peple visit friends r parents. A few peple wrk.
加首尾，使结构完整，突出主题。
2.The bdy
1.The beginning
Hw d peple spend their vacatin? We made a survey and here is ur reprt.
3.The ending
Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax well wrk well.
Beginning （2—3句话）“凤头”
Bdy （6—8句话）“猪肚”
Ending （2—3句话） “豹尾”
Spelling(拼写)Tense(时态)Grammar (语法)Handwriting(书写)Punctuatin marks(标点符号)
Crrect mistakes
1.Everyne knws that health is very imprtant fr study is getting mre and mre think travelling that can make peple feel relaxed and happy.4.I think it is unhealthy because peple dn’t have enugh time t relaxed many peple are suffer frm stress6.And there are a few peple still wrk n the can have a gd rest will be health.
harder and harder
that travelling
Hw d peple spend their vacatin? We made a survey and here is ur reprt.A lt f peple travel. Sme peple stay at hme. They watch TV r surf the Internet. sme ther peple visit friends r parents. A few peple wrk. Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax well wrk well.
5.美（beautify）
选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
Hw d peple spend their vacatin? We made a survey and here is ur reprt.Accrding t it, a lt f peple travel. And sme peple stay at hme. They watch TV r surf the Internet. Als sme ther peple visit friends r parents. Hwever, a few peple wrk. Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax well wrk well.
方法一：善用关联词连接句子，使文章更流畅。
1._____________ I am tired, I keep n wrking till didn’t g t mvies, he went t the cncert like ding kinds f sprts _____ swimming, running and , he std up. Then he gt ut. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled.
Thugh\Althugh
Finally\At last
A. A lt f peple travel.B. Mst peple chse t travel t get away frm the busy wrld during the hlidays.
A . Sme peple visit their friends and parentsB . T visit friends r parents als makes them relaxed.
方法二:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
Sme peple like t stay at hme, watching TV r surfing the Internet t have a gd rest.
方法三：妙用引文和例子，多用于“正文”,有时用fr example/such as
We interviewed peple abut the ways t spend the vacatin and here is ur reprt. Accrding t it, mst peple chse t travel t get away frm the busy wrld during the hlidays. Then sme peple like t stay at hme, watching TV r surfing the Internet t have a gd rest. And t visit friends r parents als makes them relaxed. Hwever, a few peple have t wrk. Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax well wrk well.
（the ending）Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax well wrk well.
As the saying ges, “All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by.” Cme and enjy yur vacatin. Peple wh relax well wrk well.
只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻
加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法
Jining the English club is a gd way t learn English.
As the saying ges, “Practice makes perfect.” S jining the English club is a gd way t learn English.
方法四：加谚语，可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。
Enjy sme prverbs
1.Practice makes twice befre yu there is a will, there is a as the Rmans early bird catches the is the mther f success.
Let’s practice!
某班正在开展以“（成长的烦恼）”为主题的英语正文活动，请你根据下面表格中的内容写一篇征文。
注意：1.信中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。2. 内容充实，适当发挥，结构完整，语意连贯。3. 词数80左右。征文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear editr,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Rse Tang
steps f writing
Search（审：体裁、人称和时态）List（列：重要信息）Add(加: 开头和结尾) Crrect(改：各种错误)Beautify(美：多种句子/谚语/例子)
A ( 17-20 分 ) :包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚．B ( 12-16 分 ) :基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚．C ( 10-15分 ) :内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意．D (6-9分 ) : 要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达．E (3-5 ) :只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云．F ( 0-2分 ) :白卷或文不对题．　得分：________ 评价人:_________