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1. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It is imprtant that yu teach yur baby t read at an early age. Why? Obviusly, being able t read is the basis fr any successful educatin, s the earlier they start, the better. All t ften, parents leave educating their children up t schls, which prbably explains why the United States is currently ranked 18th in its rate f reading and writing.
Teaching yur baby t read prvides brain exercise and it has als been shwn t increase the baby’s IQ because there is simply n better time in a persn’s life fr learning than when they are babies. During this time, their brains are develping rapidly. The sner they begin t read, the sner they can begin t learn ther subjects. This way, by the time yur children begin schl, they will already knw what’s being taught, and will be put n the fast track. Maybe they will even skip a grade dwn the rad. One f the cases was 17-mnth-ld Elizabeth Barrett wh drew public’s attentin. She was given a series f wrds and even sentences that she culd read quite well. Her parents had been reading t her since she was brn and had prvided her with a very early educatin.
Reading is the mst imprtant thing t teach babies at a yung age. It desn’t have t be stressful r difficult fr yur child. Learning can be fun at such an early age, and it can be accmplished s easily that they wn’t have t struggle in rder t learn.
If yu’re interested in teaching yur baby t read, the best way t start is by spending just a few minutes every day. Flash cards are a helpful tl. Simply shw yur baby matching picture n the ppsite side. There are als vides that help t teach babies t read. There is n better time t teach yur baby t read than the present.
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2. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The manta ray is ne f the largest fishes in the wrld, reaching up t 29 feet in width. And manta rays are sme f the friendliest creatures. They allw divers t swim right up t them. Unfrtunately, these gentle animals are in big truble. Since 2011, manta rays have been listed as a threatened species wrldwide.
Overfishing is cnsidered the biggest threat t giant manta numbers, bth intentinal and accidental. Peple catch manta rays fr their gill plates — the parts thrugh which they filter their fd frm seawater — are sld in China fr medical purpses. Driven by the huge demand, fishermen have hunted them mercilessly. Frm 2010 t 2013, the number f rays killed annually t supply the gill plate market tripled t 150,000. Clearly, verfishing is bad fr any sea creature, but it’s even wrse fr giant manta rays. Female mantas usually have nly ne baby, every tw t five years. S every manta ray that was caught hurts the ppulatin in a big way.
T prtect giant manta ppulatin, Peru, a cuntry in Suth America, recently tk a big step t prtect giant manta rays. It banned fishing fr them. Peple wh break the law can be fined r have their fishing licenses taken away. Even manta rays caught accidentally in fishing nets must be released. Althugh ther cuntries have passed laws t prtect manta rays, Peru’s may be the mst imprtant ne yet, because there are mre giant manta rays in the Pacific Ocean near Peru than in any ther place in the wrld.
Scientists wrking in the Manta Trust, an rganizatin that researches manta rays, are als trying t prtect manta rays by learning mre abut them. Earlier this year, the rganizatin attached vide cameras, called Crittercams, t manta rays ff the west cast f Mexic. The phts the cameras cllect culd help researchers predict where and when manta rays swim. The scientist culd use the infrmatin t warn fishing bats t avid these areas, helping reduce the number f accidentally caught manta rays.
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3. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Parents always want the best fr their children and giving them; the best educatin is always n tp f the list. But if yu think educatin is all they need, maybe yu shuld think twice. Sure, yu learn a lt f things in schl, but there are imprtant lessns and skills yu will need in life that ne can nly learn at hme. Therefre, teaching the children t d husehld chres is very helpful in their grwth. Mst families nwadays hire husemaids t d the chres, s children dn’t get t experience ding it anymre. But studies argue that it’s still necessary t let children d them.
Helping at hme can be a training place fr yur children t whatever respnsibilities they may have in the future. By ding s, they can learn what might be f their advantage when they grw up. “Perfrming chres ffers kids a feeling f self-sufficiency, helps them develp a wrk ethic, is tied t academic success in schl, makes them feel useful and teaches them the imprtance f helping thers and cntributing t the greater gd.”
Althugh, mst parents can als argue that it is nt easy t frce their children t d chres. It is a nature fr the children t refuse t d chres when they are tld t. But there are ways that can turn husehld chres int a mre likely activity fr the children. First, start them yung. This desn’t mean that yu let yur children d huge tasks at an early age. Yu can gradually increase the level f tasks as they grw ld but never ever push them t hard. Secnd, appreciate every little achievement. Praise them r give them smething. Children lve rewards and it drives them t d better.
Mst imprtantly, let them knw that asking them t help-ut is nt a punishment. Chres shuld never be used as a punishment. They might get dne in the shrt term, but the effects wn’t last. This apprach des nt give the child the feeling f ding smething because it is the right thing t d. It nly makes them hate chres and hping ut even mre. Chres shuld be used as a sense f purpse. Explain t them that it is fr their benefit and everything they learn frm it is fr their advantage.
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4. 阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Bees are very strange creatures. They have their wn way f telling each ther that they have fund a new flwer. They bring sme f its nectar (花蜜) back hme and then d a little dance that shws where the flwer is and hw far away it is.
In autumn the wrker bees g ut and cllect as much nectar and pllen (花粉) as they can carry. Then they return t make hney and stre it fr the lng cld winter.
Bees build their wn huses but they d nt always have rund tps like peple draw them in strybks. They are usually five streys high. The queen bee always has the bttm strey. In between the bttm strey and all the rest there are bars nly just wide enugh fr the wrkers t pass thrugh. The queen bee can never g up t the ther flrs because she is bigger than all the ther bees. The streys the queen can’t enter are where the stre rms are. There are rms fr pllen, nectar and ryal jellies (蜂王浆). If there is a fire the wrkers have t cver the walls and entrance f the rms. They have t mve the hney and the nectar and pllen away frm the ht walls f the rm.
The queen is the nly that can lay eggs. She mates with a male bee called a drne. Once the queen has laid the eggs she thrws the drne ut because a drne just sits arund eating hney and nectar. He cannt g ut and cllect pllen because drnes d nt have pllen-carrying things n their legs like the wrkers have.
Yung bees are called nurses because they have t nurse the newbrn bees whether they like it r nt. What a bee ends up being when it grws up depends n what it eats. If it is t be a queen it must feed n ryal jellies and it must never, ever set eyes n anther queen. If it des they must fight till nly ne f them is still alive.
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5. 阅读下面短文，根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Cllege students need textbks t help them learn and earn an academic degree. Hwever, n tp f tuitin, rm and bard and meals, why are textbks s expensive? Textbks cver many areas f knwledge. They are prepared specifically with a lt f infrmatin that include many riginal pictures, special charts, and specific data. Textbks are extremely useful t students fr learning and prfitable fr the cmpanies that publish them. While textbks can be a financial burden n the student, they can be prfitable fr a bk scuter (侦察员).
A bk scuter is an pprtunist wh buys cheap used bks at thrift stres (二手店) r bk sales, and sells them fr mre mney. Brand new textbks are the mst desired f bks fr scuters since they typically cst ver $100. Of curse, used textbks dn’t cst as much. But when the scuter ges t a thrift stre and bk sales at libraries, textbks can cst as little as several dllars. S, buying used textbks that are new is ne f the mst prfitable bks that sellers can buy.
Unfrtunately, many cllege textbk editins change every year, which eliminates (消除) the student’s chance t use last year’s editin. S, they will have t pay mre mney fr brand new textbks. The sad reality is that very few changes are generally made between editins.
Bk scuters search fr textbks as well as ther categries f bks available at lcal thrift stres r bk sales. Textbks that are new r relatively new are marked dwn t just a few dllars. Then they can be sld n Amazn fr ptentially high prfits. Amazn buys new textbks fr a lt mre mney than mst ther types f bks. If yu want t try scuting textbks t make a prfit, buy their newest editins r the nes ahead f them. Buy it in the best cnditin pssible. If yu live in a twn r city where there is a university, yu have a better chance f finding gd textbks.
Althugh textbks can be expensive fr the average student, he r she culd ptentially sell them n Amazn fr the same price that they were purchased. Just remember, knwledge is pwer and can be prfitable t.
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答案与解析
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【参考范文】
Teaching yur baby t read as yung as pssible is crucial wing t the necessity f btaining gd educatin. (要点一) It needs starting as sn as pssible because babies’ intelligence will be imprved when their brains develp fast. (要点二) Imprtant as it is, relaxatin and easiness culd be brught int the learning prcess. (要点三) Therefre, fr peple keen n teaching babies t read, it is high time t begin with sparing sme time regularly with effective teaching materials. (要点四)
【写作分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，为了获得良好的教育，让你的孩子从小就学会阅读是非常重要的。这需要尽快开始，因为婴儿的智力会随着大脑的快速发展而提高。重要的是，放松和轻松可以被带入学习过程。因此，对于那些热衷于教宝宝阅读的人来说，现在应该从定期抽出一些时间来阅读有效的教材开始。
1. 要点摘录
①It is imprtant that yu teach yur baby t read at an early age. Why? Obviusly, being able t read is the basis fr any successful educatin, s the earlier they start, the better.
②Teaching yur baby t read prvides brain exercise and it has als been shwn t increase the baby’s IQ because there is simply n better time in a persn’s life fr learning than when they are babies.
③Learning can be fun at such an early age, and it can be accmplished s easily that they wn’t have t struggle in rder t learn.
④If yu’re interested in teaching yur baby t read, the best way t start is by spending just a few minutes every day.
⑤There is n better time t teach yur baby t read than the present.
2. 缜密构思
要点二和要点三之间形成因果关系，整合四、五要点
3. 遣词造句
①Teaching yur baby t read as yung as pssible is crucial wing t the necessity f btaining gd educatin.
②It needs starting as sn as pssible because babies’ intelligence will be imprved when their brains develp fast.
③Imprtant as it is, relaxatin and easiness culd be brught int the learning prcess.
④Therefre, fr peple keen n teaching babies t read, it is high time t begin with sparing sme time regularly with effective teaching materials.
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]Teaching yur baby t read as yung as pssible is crucial wing t the necessity f btaining gd educatin.（teaching为动名词作主语，用一个简单句总结了原文第一段的内容）
[高分句型2]Imprtant as it is, relaxatin and easiness culd be brught int the learning prcess.（用as引导让步状语从句，总结文章第三段的内容）
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【参考范文】
Thugh being large and friendly, the giant manta ray are in danger.(要点1) Due t its medical value and huge prfit, manta rays are ver-hunted, which can be mre detrimental fr the species given its lw prductivity.(要点2) T save the endangered species, the Peru gvernment has taken the initiative, carrying ut strict laws.(要点3) Besides, scientists are making attempts t prtect manta rays thrugh gaining mre knwledge f them.(要点4)
【写作分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，尽管巨大的蝠鲼又大又友好，但它们正处于危险之中。由于它的医疗价值和巨大的利润，蝠鲼被过度猎杀，考虑到它的低生产力，这可能对这个物种更有害。为了拯救濒危物种，秘鲁政府采取了主动，实施了严格的法律。此外，科学家们正试图通过更多地了解蝠鲼来保护它们。
1. 要点摘录
①The manta ray is ne f the largest fishes in the wrld, reaching up t 29 feet in width. And manta rays are sme f the friendliest creatures. Unfrtunately, these gentle animals are in big truble.
②Overfishing is cnsidered the biggest threat t giant manta numbers, bth intentinal and accidental. Peple catch manta rays fr their gill plates — the parts thrugh which they filter their fd frm seawater — are sld in China fr medical purpses.
③T prtect giant manta ppulatin, Peru, a cuntry in Suth America, recently tk a big step t prtect giant manta rays. It banned fishing fr them. Peple wh break the law can be fined r have their fishing licenses taken away.
④Scientists wrking in the Manta Trust, an rganizatin that researches manta rays, are als trying t prtect manta rays by learning mre abut them.
2. 缜密构思，将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3. 遣词造句
Thugh being large and friendly, the giant manta ray are in danger.
Due t its medical value and huge prfit, manta rays are ver-hunted, which can be mre detrimental fr the species given its lw prductivity.
T save the endangered species, the Peru gvernment has taken the initiative, carrying ut strict laws.
Besides, scientists are making attempts t prtect manta rays thrugh gaining mre knwledge f them.
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]Due t its medical value and huge prfit, manta rays are ver-hunted, which can be mre detrimental fr the species given its lw prductivity.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第二段进行了概括，其中which引导非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2]T save the endangered species, the Peru gvernment has taken the initiative, carrying ut strict laws.用不定式作目的状语对第三段进行了概括。
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【参考范文】
Teaching children t d husehld chres is very helpful in their grwth, which can make hme a training place fr yur children t whatever respnsibilities they may have in the future. Althugh it’s hard t frce children t d chres, there are ways that can turn husehld chres int a mre likely activity fr the children. But mst imprtantly, chres shuld be used as a sense f purpse instead f a punishment.
【写作分析】
本文是一篇议论文。文章主要论述了让孩子学做家务对于孩子成长的重要性，它可以培养孩子的责任心，同时，要运用合理的方式鼓励孩子学做家务，而不是将做家务作为惩罚，要让做家务成为一种使命感。
1. 要点摘录
①Therefre, teaching the children t d husehld chres is very helpful in their grwth.
②Helping at hme can be a training place fr yur children t whatever respnsibilities they may have in the future.
③Althugh, mst parents can als argue that it is nt easy t frce their children t d chres.
④But there are ways that can turn husehld chres int a mre likely activity fr the children.
⑤Mst imprtantly, let them knw that asking them t help-ut is nt a punishment.
⑥Chres shuld be used as a sense f purpse.
2. 缜密构思
将第①、②两个要点进行整合；将第③、④两个要点进行整合；将第⑤、⑥两个要点进行整合。
3. 遣词造句
Teaching children t d husehld chres is very helpful in their grwth, which can make hme a training place fr yur children t whatever respnsibilities they may have in the future.
Althugh it’s hard t frce children t d chres, there are ways that can turn husehld chres int a mre likely activity fr the children.
But mst imprtantly, chres shuld be used as a sense f purpse instead f a punishment.
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]Teaching children t d husehld chres is very helpful in their grwth, which can make hme a training place fr yur children t whatever respnsibilities they may have in the future.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中which引导的非限制性定语从句等表达高级。
[高分句型2]Althugh it’s hard t frce children t d chres, there are ways that can turn husehld chres int a mre likely activity fr the children.用althugh引导让步状语从句对第三段进行了概括，且句中“that”引导定语从句修饰先行词“ways”，表达非常高级。
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【参考范文】
Bees are weird animals and have a unique way t cmmunicate with ne anther. (要点1) Wrker bees wrk tirelessly t stre fd. (要点2) Unlike wrker bees, the relaxing queen bee takes up the bttm strey f the five-strey huse. (要点3) She even deserts the drne after she finishes using him. (要点4) Same as wrker bees, yung bees need t wrk t care fr newbrn bees, but they can nly leave their futures t what they eat. (要点5)
【写作分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍蜜蜂家族生存习性、不同分工及蜂房布局。
1. 要点摘录
1）Bees are very strange creatures. They have their wn way f telling each ther that they have fund a new flwer.
2）In autumn the wrker bees g ut and cllect as much nectar and pllen (花粉) as they can carry. Then they return t make hney and stre it fr the lng cld winter.
3）They are usually five streys high. The queen bee always has the bttm strey.
4）The queen is the nly that can lay eggs. She mates with a male bee called a drne.
5）Yung bees are called nurses because they have t nurse the newbrn bees whether they like it r nt.
2. 缜密构思
将1、2、3、4、5段各概括为一个要点，共5个要点。
3. 遣词造句Bees are weird animals and have a strange way t cmmunicate with each anther.
Wrker bees wrk very hard t stre fd.
Unlike wrker bees, the relaxing queen bee always takes up the bttm strey f the five-strey huse.
She even thrws the drne ut after she finishes using him.
Yung bees need t wrk t care fr newbrn bees, but they can nly leave their futures t what they eat.
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]Unlike wrker bees, the relaxing queen bee takes up the bttm strey f the five-strey huse.运用介词短语作状语，对第三段内容进行概括，简练明白。
[高分句型2]She even deserts the drne after she finishes using him.运用含有时间状语从句的复合句对第四段内容进行高度概括。
[高分句型3]Same as wrker bees, yung bees need t wrk t care fr newbrn bees, but they can nly leave their futures t what they eat.运用文章纽带衔接词but，以及名词性从句what they eat将第五段进行高度概括。
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【参考范文】
Textbk burdens students financially but is prfitable fr bk scuters. (要点1) They buy used but new bks and sell them ut fr extra mney. (要点2) Hwever, because f the subtle editins change, students have t buy new bks. (要点3) Therefre, it’s wise t buy the newest versin fr mre prfits. (要点4) And students can sell their bks ut again fr the same price they bught when they dn’t use them any mre. (要点5)
【写作分析】
本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了二手教科书回收者通过回收使用过但是依旧保存良好的的课本并出售来赚钱这一现象。
1. 要点摘录
①While textbks can be a financial burden n the student, they can be prfitable fr a bk scuter.
②S, buying used textbks that are new is ne f the mst prfitable bks that sellers can buy.
③Unfrtunately, many cllege textbk editins change every year, which makes students pay mre mney fr brand new textbks.
④If yu want t try scuting textbks t make a prfit, buy their newest editins r the nes ahead f them.
⑤Althugh textbks can be expensive fr the average student, he r she culd ptentially sell them n Amazn fr the same price that they were purchased.
2. 缜密构思
将各要点进行整合，使得逻辑连贯。
3. 遣词造句
Textbks can be a financial burden n the student but be prfitable fr a bk scuter.
Bk scuters buy used bks which are new and sell them ut fr prfits.
Hwever, textbk editins have subtle change every year, which makes students have t buy brand new textbks.
Therefre, if yu want t make mre prfit, buy the newest versin.
Students can als sell their bks ut fr the same price that they were purchased when they dn’t use them any mre.
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]Hwever, because f the subtle editins change, students have t buy new bks.运用介词短语because f…作状语对第三段大部分内容进行了概括。
[高分句型2]And students can sell their bks ut again fr the same price they bught when they dn’t use them any mre.用省略关系代词的定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句对最后一段进行了概括。