中考英语作文训练：主题10 观点聚焦

这是一份中考英语作文训练：主题10 观点聚焦，共10页。

在中学英语作文中，对于一个观点展开不同的讨论是常见的命题方式之一。学生们通常喜欢对他们喜爱的话题，如友谊、快乐、好老师、宠物等和一些热点话题，如手机、英语口试、家教等展开讨论。如何帮助学生写好这类作文是老师们应该认真考虑的问题。
一.主题词汇
deal with prblems n study
by urselves
learn prfunder knwledge
help us imprve ur scres
wrk ut difficult questins
becme independent
teach students t learn study methds
try ne's best t memrize the knwledge
sleeping mre and listening t teachers carefully
real ways
try t find sme gd ways
fit us
the basic ways f imprving study
二.有用句型
1. They can als teach us the way t slve different kinds f prblems.
2.Why dn't we study by urselves instead f having private tutrs?
3. Yu can imprve yur study by taking ntes regularly.
4. Fr sme students..., and fr the thers ...
5. T imprve ur study, students shuld g ver lessns, practise mre, listen t their teachers mre carefully and d their hmewrk by themselves.
6. I think these are the basic ways t imprve study.
7.One way t imprve study is ...
8. S my cnclusin is that ...
9. It's gd fr us t ...
10. If we have lessns at weekends, we wn't have the chance t take part in after-schl activities.
11. It is because we...
is a gd chance t slve the prblems and we can als learn extra knwledge that we can't learn at schl.
三.模拟试题
请以“Private tutrs in my eyes”为题写一篇短文。
Questins fr reference:
a. Is it necessary r unnecessary fr students t have private tutrs?
b. Why d yu think s?(Give at least tw reasns.)
c.What's yur suggestin fr imprving study?
要点分析
1.先审题，然后确定你自己的观点。（切记：正反两方面都要涉及。）
2.陈述至少两条理由来证明你的观点，论据要充分。
3.不要忘了写结尾，结尾应与开头相呼应。
写作素材
I.提出对请私人家教观点的
1. Nwadays, mre and mre private tutring centers call me and let me attend their class.
2. In my pinin, it is really unnecessary fr students t have private tutrs. Why?
Because it is nt very difficult fr us t study by urselves. We can deal with the prblems n study by urselves.
3. Nwadays, mst f the parents let their children have private tutrs, but I think it's unnecessary.
4. It's usual that sme f the students have private tutrs.
5. I think it is necessary fr students t have private tutrs.
II.正方观点认为“请私人家教很重要”的
It is necessary fr us t have private tutrs.
1.We can learn much further knwledge that we can't learn frm schl n subjects.
2.We can have mre time t check whether ur wn study methd is gd r nt, and
we can exercise mre and deal with many prblems n study.
3. It can help us with ur hmewrk.They can teach us hw t wrk ut difficult questins.And they can help us imprve ur scres,t.
4. It is a gd way t g ver ur lessns.
5. They can teach students t learn study methds.
6. Thus, my suggestin fr imprving study is that we have mre revisins.
7. But I think the mst basic way f imprving study is t be cnfident.Then nthing can stp yu frm achieving success.
8.They can als teach us the way t slve different kinds f prblems. I think I will learn my subjects easily if I have a private tutr.
9. The best way t imprve study is t review ntes. Private tutrs in my eyes are helpful and necessary.
10. Fr students wh are pr at subjects, they need private tutrs t help review the knwledge which they have failed t understand.Fr thers,they need private tutrs t give them mre practice t study better and faster.
反方观点认为“请私人家教没有必要”的
It is unnecessary fr us t have private tutrs.
1.It is just a waste f time and mney.
2. It must be very expensive. It ften csts us several thusand yuan and even mre.
3. If we always depend n private tutrs, we wn't becme independent learners.
4. On the ther hand, it isn't cheap t have a private tutr and they may nt be as helpful as the teachers at schl.
5. Having private tutrs isn't as helpful as having classes at schl but csts much. What's mre, sme students think it's unnecessary t listen t teachers carefully at schl because f private tutrs.
6. Listening carefully in class is the best way t imprve ur study and we can als d sme practice.
7. Yu shuld try yur best t memrize the knwledge that the teachers teach in class. Mre imprtantly, d as many exercises as yu can.
8. I shuld have mre time fr my hbbies at weekends.
9. If yu want t imprve yur study, try t find sme gd ways which fit yu well.
10.We can write dwn all the mistakes and their crrectins n a ntebk and ften review them.
11. If we have private tutrs,we will depend n them all the time,and we can't slve the prblems by urselves.
12.There are tw reasns fr this. First, the private tutrs may help us slve difficult prblems, s we dn't d them by urselves. Gradually,yu will be pr at thinking.Yu prbably d yur hmewrk well but d badly in yur test. Secndly, t have private tutrs csts much. It is difficult fr yur parents t earn mney, If yu can study well by wrking harder,why nt save the mney!
总结性话语的
1. Remember,private tutrs aren't the nly way t imprve ur study.
2.In a wrd,studying hard,sleeping mre and listening t teachers carefully are real ways t imprve study.
3. S why dn't we study by urselves instead f having private tutrs?
4.There is nthing difficult if yu put yur heart int it.
5.T sum up, t have private tutrs is unnecessary. We shuld study by urselves.
6. S I believe that having a private tutr is never a gd idea.
7. In brief, imprving study largely depends n students' interest in the lessn and his desire f being gd at it. S trying t stay interested and wrking hard are the keys t success.
8. An easy way t imprve study is t cncentrate in class. The things teachers said are always very imprtant. At night, yu shuld g ver what yu have learned. If yu take my advice, yu will get gd grades.
例文
T have private tutrs seems t becme a trend amng students nwadays. Hwever, I think it's unnecessary t have tutrs. First f all, it's really difficult t find a prfessinal tutr because many f the tutrs available are just cllege graduates and they may lack experience. Secndly, students will rely n their tutrs s that they wn't be independent enugh t wrk ut hmewrk prblems themselves. In my pinin, students can ask their wn teachers fr help. They can als discuss prblems tgether. By ding these well, they can surely imprve their study.
四. 写作操练
1.在学校的一次班会课上，班主任老师针对当前手机是否可以带进学校这一具有争议的话题，让学生展开了热烈的讨论。请你针对这个话题写一篇短文。
a.正方观点
With the develpment f mdern science, mre and mre peple have their wn mbile phnes. I als have a mbile phne. Frm my pint f view, it's necessary fr students t bring mbile phnes t schl. Fr ne thing, mbile phnes can help us t cmmunicate with ur parents s easily that they wn't get wrried abut us. On the ther hand, mbile phnes are capable f cnnecting t the Internet.We can nt nly gain a lt f infrmatin frm it but als get help fr study.
T sum up, the advantages f using mbile phnes ver weigh the disadvantages.Thus, I think it's necessary fr students t bring mbile phnes t schl.
b.反方观点
Nwadays yu can see almst every student bringing a mbile phne t schl. But I think this is really unnecessary.
Firstly, it might get stlen. Therefre, students have t spend a lt f time taking care f it. Secndly, many students play games n it after class, What's wrse, they use mbile phnes t cheat during exams. In additin, students wn't be able t cncentrate n their study with a mbile phne arund.
Althugh mbile phnes can bring a lt f cnvenience int ur life, we need t have self cntrl t make better use f it. If students really need t bring a mbile phne t schl, they can give it t their teachers during schl time, because if we dn't use it well, it will have bad effects n us.
2.“城市里可否在家中养狗”这一话题，长久以来是人们茶余饭后讨论的热点话题。请你针对这个话题，写一篇短文。
a.正方观点
I think that having a pet dg can change a persn's life. Peple shuld be allwed t have pet dgs. There are lts f reasns fr this.
First,dgs are really cute. It's nice t pick them up and hld them in ur arms, and it's s wnderful t see them grwing up quickly. Secnd, we can learn abut respnsibility frm keeping pet dgs. We have t feed them,walk them and play with them. Third, we can als learn abut life and death frm dgs. Yung peple can learn hw t care fr thers and hw t respect all living things by keeping a pet dg. Finally, a dg will lve yu faithfully fr many years.
In cnclusin, keeping pet dgs is smething everyne can enjy.
b.反方观点
It is never a gd idea t keep a pet dg. First f all, pet dgs create a lt f mess at hme r in the streets. They leave fur and hair n the flr, n beds and n sfas, and sme peple are nt very gd at cleaning up when they take them fr a walk. Besides,we shuld remember that nt all dgs are friendly. Sme dgs bark at peple they d nt knw.This can frighten yung children. A few dgs bark all night s that their neighbrs can't sleep. Furthermre,mst peple have n chice but t keep their dgs in small spaces.This may make the dgs feel extremely unhappy.The last factr is paying fr dg fd and visiting the vet can be expensive.
In shrt, I believe that peple shuld nt keep pet dgs.
3. 以“When an ld man falls dwn in the street”为题写一篇短文。
Use the fllwing pints as a guide:
keep quiet and g away help the ld man and send him t the hspital
send a message t his family members wrry abut calm dwn give sb. a hand
When an ld man falls dwn in the street
a.正方观点
Recently,the tpic “Shall we help an ld man wh falls dwn in the street" has becme very ppular.Different peple have different ideas. In my pinin, if I see an ld man fall dwn in the street, I will certainly help him.
There are three reasns. Firstly, helping thers is a traditinal virtue f China. Whenever we meet smene wh is in truble, we shuld give him a hand. Secndly, it's als a student's duty t help the ld. Many peple will wrry: “What if the ld man is cheating me?” If everybdy wrries abut this, ur sciety will never be peaceful and n ne will live happily. There will be n mre kind peple. S, whenever I see an ld man fall dwn in the street, I will try my best t help him. What's mre, I'll stay calm and call the plice fr help. While waiting fr the plicemen, I'll stay t take care f him.
I believe when we help thers, we are helping urselves t becme a mre respnsible and helpful persn.
b.反方观点
Nwadays, a great number f the peple, including my classmates and myself, have truble abut what t d when we see an ld man fall dwn. As we all knw,helping thers in truble is certainly a gd manner, but the recent survey shws that few peple will help an ld man falling dwn because they are afraid t be taken as the guilty. In my pinin,it's n dubt that we shuld help an ld persn falling dwn with great cautin.
In rder t keep myself frm being in truble, perhaps I have t let sme peple take phts t prve the real situatin. Peple shuldn't be indifferent, r the sciety wuld be really terrible. I hpe that mre and mre peple can shw their warmth t the ld. As the saying ges,“Present rses t thers with remaining fragrance at hand.”I believe the wrld will be full f warmth and lve if we all try the best t help thers. And meanwhile,we shuld prtect urselves well.
4.当今，社会上掀起了学生出国学习的热潮，并且年龄趋向于低龄化。请以“Studying abrad is”为题写一篇短文，就出国学习好与否表明你自己的观点。先把题目补充完整再进行写作。
Studying abrad is necessary.
Nwadays, mre and mre students chse t study abrad. Sme students ging abrad want t braden their minds and learn mre abut the culture f anther cuntry. Sme ther students find that the educatinal system in anther cuntry is mre suitable fr them, s they chse t g abrad fr better educatin. Still thers believe that they can take advantage f the experience f studying abrad t find a better jb. Hwever,we shuld be aware that studying abrad csts ur parents a great sum f mney. S, studying abrad is necessary, yet we shuld think carefully befre we decide whether t study abrad.
5.近日，据媒体报道，很多餐厅出现了通过支付宝或微信给服务员“打赏”的现象，相当于给小费。小费是流行于西方国家的习俗，那么你支持在中国推行给小费的行为吗？请以“My pinins n tipping waiters”为题写一篇短文。
My pinins n tipping waiters
I think it's a gd idea t tip waiters wh have made ur dinner a wnderful experience.First f all, the waiters' hard wrk deserves ur thanks and tipping them is a way t shw ur appreciatin fr their service. Besides, mst f the waiters receive a lw salary despite lng hurs at wrk, s tips frm custmers can increase their incme. Furthermre,it will make us happy if the small amunt f tip helps t lighten up their day. After all, the happiest peple are thse wh make thers happy. S next time yu eat ut in a restaurant,remember t tip the waiter!
生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请以“When I have truble with my best friend”为题写一篇短文，就此话题谈谈你的做法以及这样做的理由，可结合自身经历进行阐述。
When I have truble with my best friend
Truble is arund us, including all kinds f prblems in wrk and life. Smetimes we may have truble with ur clse friends. When I have truble with my best friend, I always remind myself f ding the fllwing things. First f all, I will stay alne at a quiet place and think abut why she gets angry and what my mistakes are. Perhaps I wn't talk t my friend until I calm dwn because I may hurt her when I am in anger. In additin, I will discuss with my best friend abut hw t slve the prblem. I will aplgize t her fr my bad manners. Furthermre, I will even buy sme small gifts fr her.
In cnclusin, cmmunicatin and understanding really matter. I believe if we try t d them better with each ther, ur friendship will last frever.
假设你是中学生林芳，最近参与了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“My pinin n getting paid fr ding husewrk”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表明你的观点是什么？具体理由是什么？
My pinin n getting paid fr ding husewrk
正方观点：
It is cmmn fr children t get paid fr ding husewrk in the West. S why can't we? In my pint f view, children certainly can get the “salary”。There are sme benefits. First f all, parents can teach their children that if they need mney t buy things,they shuld pay effrt.They shuld wash a lt f dishes;they shuld walk their dgs twice a day;r they shuld weed the garden nce a week.These let them knw nthing cmes easily.The mre they want,the mre they pay.On the ther hand,children d cherish the mney they “earned”.They can frm the habit f saving mney gradually.Therefre,I’m in favr f getting paid fr ding husewrk.
反方观点：
Nwadays, it's cmmn fr children t d husewrk t help their parents.In rder t encurage their children t d mre husewrk, sme parents pay mney fr their children's labring as a reward. In my pinin, it is unnecessary fr children t get paid fr ding husewrk.There are many reasns fr it. First f all, it is respnsible fr every member f the family t d husewrk. Family members shuld d it tgether. What's mre,children are nt special members. They shuld cultivate the habit f ding husewrk fr the family and becme independent in the future. In additin, the relatinship between parents and children shuld nt be based n mney. T cut a lng stry shrt, children shuldn't get paid fr ding husewrk. Family members ught t care fr each ther and share the husewrk.
现在社会上有各种各样的培训班，这引起了家长、学生和各界人士的极大关注，有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要。请以“Is it necessary t attend training classes?”为题写一篇短文，具体阐述你的观点。
Is it necessary t attend training classes?
Nwadays,There are all kinds f training classes in the sciety nw. Sme peple think there is n need t attend the training classes, and thers stand n the ppsite side. It's really hard t say which pint is right r wrng. As far as I am cncerned, I think it is necessary t attend training classes.
T begin with,attending training classes f different subjects enables us t acquire fresh and prfund knwledge. As the saying ges, “There is n end t learning". As lng as we have mre knwledge, we can keep ahead f thers and stand ut brilliantly.
Mrever,with a view t bradening ur hrizns, we can take sme freign cultural lessns,nature science lessns instead f Chinese, Maths and English. These lessns cnvey varius knwledge nt taught by teachers at schl t yu.
Last but nt least, attending sme classes f leisure activities such as cking,managing mney and yga, can help us relax frm heavy burden in study r wrk. Nt nly can we learn sme basic skills, but als we can accumulate mre experience fr the future.
Take advantage f attending training classes, and yu'll benefit a lt frm it.
9.对于是否该穿校服，中学生们持有不同的观点。请以“My view n wearing schl unifrms”为题写一篇短文，分享你的观点，谈谈你的想法。
My view n wearing schl unifrms
Sme students,especially girls, dn't like wearing schl unifrms because they think the unifrms make them lk stupid. While thers think wearing schl unifrms can reduce students' psychlgical cmparisns s that they can pay mre attentin t learning.As fr me,I have psitive attitude t the unifrm rule. First f all, the schl unifrm shws ur identity. I am prud f being a student. Our schl unifrm is the symbl fr ur schl. It is like the name f yu. Besides, if every student wears the same schl unifrm,everyne in the classrm will seem t be equal. It will be helpful t make the students wh are frm pr families be cnfident. Last but nt least,schl unifrms always remind us that we are students. We mustn't d anything illegal.
Given the reasns abve fr wearing schl unifrms, why nt bey the schl unifrm rule?
10.随着科技的进步，越来越多的电子产品代替了报刊阅读。那么，刊阅读真的会被其他现代化的工具所代替吗？请以“Will newspapers die ut?”为题，为题写一篇短文，表达你的观点。
Will newspapers die ut?
Thanks t the develpment f technlgy in the past few years, peple nw can read news n the Internet easily. Instead f hlding newspapers t read, sme peple prefer t get wrldwide news n mbile phnes, cmputers and s n. S, des it mean it is the age f infrmatin technlgy and that newspapers will be replaced in the future? Things have tw sides.
On the ne hand, many peple prefer t read electrnic news as they think it is nt nly fast but als csts little. Besides, using paper means cutting trees. Reading nline news can bth prtect trees and save paper.
On the ther hand, sme peple believe that newspapers will still exist in the future, Firstly, nt everyne likes t read nline news since sme f them think it is bad fr eyes. Secndly,the develpment f high technlgy desn't spread all ver the wrld.
In shrt, althugh it is true that electrnic news has develped quickly in the past years, newspapers still play an imprtant rle in mdern life.