2021学年Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good导学案

这是一份2021学年Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good导学案，共8页。

假定你是李华，想给某英文杂志投稿，发表一篇关于什么是真正的美的文章。下面是被询问学生的一些看法，要点如下：
(1)有的学生认为外在美很重要；
(2)有的学生认为内在美很重要；
(3)你的观点。
注意：
①可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
②开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editr，
Cncerning beauty, we made a survey. Different students have different pinins.________________________________________________________________________
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2．写作思路
(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题
体裁：议论文
主题：真正的美
(2)二定：确定时态和人称
①时态：一般现在时态为主
②人称：第一人称和第三人称为主
(3)三明确：明确写作要点
内容要求：
a．开篇点明主题(谈论的话题)；
b．根据提示的要点写出对待这一问题不同的人的不同观点；
c．发表自己的看法，提出解决问题的办法。
(4)四分段：结合要点分为三个段落。
3．素材整理
(1)关键词语
①外貌 physical appearance
②对……有影响 have an influence/effect n
③美的标准 standards f beauty
④符合 live up t
⑤深信…… hld the firm belief that...
⑥树立信心 build yur cnfidence
⑦相信…… be cnvinced that...
⑧就我而言 as far as I am cncerned
(2)重要句型
有些学生相信外貌对一个人的生活有很大影响。
①Sme students hld the firm belief that ________________ a persn's life.(同位语从句)
②外貌对每个人都有吸引力，尤其是异性。
Physical beauty is attractive t everybdy, ________________________.
③他们坚信，外貌美没有固定标准，有些标准对我们来说根本不可能达到。
They are firmly cnvinced that there is ________________ and sme f the standards are simply ______________________.(宾语从句)
④更重要的是内在美，因为它是我们的内在，对社会来说是非常有意义的。
It is ________________________ because it is smething beneath us and can be very meaningful t the sciety.(强调句)
⑤我认为内在美与外在美是并存的。
________________， physical beauty cexists with inner beauty.
4．满分作文(连句成篇)
请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。
参考范文：
Dear Editr，
Cncerning beauty, we made a survey. Different students have different pinins. Sme students hld the firm belief that physical appearance has a big influence n a persn's life. Physical beauty is attractive t everybdy, particularly t the ppsite sex. Besides, charming faces can help us t win mre chances t realize ur dreams.
Hwever, ther students are firmly cnvinced that there is n fixed standards f physical beauty and sme f the standards are simply impssible fr us t live up t. It is the inner beauty that is mre imprtant because it is smething beneath us and can be very meaningful t the sciety.
As far as I am cncerned, physical beauty cexists with inner beauty. Physical beauty is by birth, but inner beauty is cultivated after birth. It was cnfirmed by a famus Russian writer in wrds much like this “A persn is nt lvely fr being beautiful but beautiful fr being lvely.”
综合点评：(1)紧扣内容要点，结构清晰，详略得当，并进行了适当拓展与发挥；
(2)人称、时态运用恰当；
(3)关联词运用恰当，如besides, hwever, as far as I am cncerned等，使写作衔接自然；
(4)复杂句表达精准，如同位语从句、宾语从句，强调句等。复杂多变、错落有致的句式给人一种美感。
5．佳作背诵
(1)佳作一
假如你是某健康栏目的主持人Mr. Helper，人们经常写信询问健康之道，请你写一封回信，指出健康的重要性，并针对“如何保持健康”给出自己的建议。信的内容需包含以下信息：
①健康的重要性；
②给出保持健康的方法，如：避免高糖、高脂的食物，摒弃不良习惯，多锻炼等。
注意：词数80左右。
Dear readers，
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Yurs sincerely，
Mr. Helper
(2)佳作二
假如你是学生会主席，你所在的校园的一些学生有不良的饮食习惯，请你在升旗仪式上发表演讲，号召同学们养成健康的饮食习惯。
内容包括：
①简述健康饮食习惯的意义；
②不良饮食习惯：不吃早餐，吃零食，挑食和暴饮暴食等；
③提出你的健康饮食习惯的建议。
注意：
①词数80左右；
②内容充实，结构完整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
③书写须清晰、工整。
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(3)佳作三
假如你是李华，请你针对目前中学生越来越关注自己的外表，以及因缺乏知识，在表达自己思想与情感方面存在困难这些情况，给校长写一封信，希望他就以下问题给学生作一次演讲：
①怎样才算美；
②如何处理同学之间的争执；
③……
注意：
①词数80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir r Madam，
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Yurs truly，
Li Hua
(4)佳作四
假定你是李华，减肥以后，常常感到身体疲倦、虚弱，不知如何是好，想写一封电子邮件向健康专家求教。请根据下面的内容提示写一封邮件。词数80左右。
减肥原因：觉得自己太胖，体重不断增加，担心身材不好，被同学嘲笑。
减肥过程：①去健身房——两三次就放弃了，感觉太累也没时间；
②节食——坚持了大约一个星期，经常饿得不能继续学习；
③服用减肥药—— 一开始有效果，体重迅速下降，但减肥药产生了副作用。
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(5)佳作五
最近的一项研究表明，大约50%的青少年有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇短文。
原因：晚上学习到太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会儿；女孩子为保持苗条身材不吃早餐；
结果：上课打瞌睡，注意力下降；学业不理想；
吃早餐的好处：提供全天所需要能量的30%；有助于创造性思维的发展，做出更好的判断。
注意：
①可以适当增加内容使文章充实；
②词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A recent study shws that nearly 50 percent f the schl kids d nt have breakfast.
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Sectin Ⅳ Writing——真正的美
3．①physical appearance has a big influence n
②particularly t the ppsite sex
③n fixed standards f physical beauty impssible fr us t live up t
④the inner beauty that is mre imprtant
⑤As far as I am cncerned
5．(1)参考范文：
Dear readers，
It ges withut saying that withut health n pleasure can be tasted by a man. Health is far mre imprtant than anything else. Gd health enables us t enjy ur life and achieve what we hpe fr in ur career.
Hw can we keep healthy? Here are sme suggestins fr yu t fllw.
T begin with, we shuld develp gd habits. We shuld avid fd with lts f sugar and fat. What's mre, we have t get rid f thse habits that damage ur health, such as drinking and smking. Last but nt least, we'd better exercise every day t make ur bdies strng. Prper diet and enugh exercise d gd t ur health.
If we fllw the advice given abve, we will lead a healthy life.
Yurs sincerely，
Mr. Helper
(2)参考范文：
Dear students，
As we all knw, we are what we eat. Therefre, it's very imprtant fr us t frm healthy eating habits.
Hwever, bad eating habits are still very cmmn amng us students. Sme f us ften g t schl withut breakfast; sme like t have snacks; sme thers are particular abut fd; and still sme eat r drink t much. All these bad habits will surely d harm t ur health.
Frm my pint f view, we shuld have varius healthy diets in rder t keep fit, which generally include prper amunts f fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main fd. Besides, we'd better have meals regularly, and we shuld try t develp healthy eating habits t build up a strng bdy. Only in this way can we have enugh energy t study better.
That's all. Thank yu!
(3)参考范文：
Dear Sir r Madam，
I am writing t ask yu t give us a talk abut what the real beauty is and what we students shuld be in schl.
As yu knw, there is an increasing tendency that we pay mre and mre attentin t ur appearance. Hwever, fr lack f knwledge, we have difficulty cnveying ur feelings and thughts. Meanwhile, sme students dn't knw hw t deal with the quarrels with their classmates. Even sme bys wear lng hair while sme girls wear strange clthes. T be hnest, it is mre and mre imprtant t help us students have a right attitude twards beauty.
And please recmmend sme bks abut it t us t read in ur spare time s that we can imprve greatly.
Best wishes!
Yurs truly，
Li Hua
(4)参考范文：
Dear Health Expert，
I have gt a prblem and I need t ask fr yur help. I feel I am t fat. What's wrse, I am putting n weight all the time. I am very wrried abut my figure. I even fear that sme f my classmates laugh at me.
At ne time, I tried t wrk ut in a gym tw r three times, but I finally gave up just because I had n time fr it and always felt very tired after ding exercise. Once I tried ging n a diet. Hwever, after abut a week, I culd nt g n it because I felt s hungry that I was nt able t cntinue my study. Then I bught and tk weight­lss pills in secret. Shrtly after, they did wrk and I was lsing weight quickly. But sn I felt tired and weak smetimes.
I knw thse pills usually have bad effects n ur health. Thus, I dn't knw what I shuld d. Culd yu be kind enugh t give me sme gd advice?
Best wishes!
Yurs，
Li Hua
(5)参考范文：
A recent study shws that nearly 50 percent f the schl kids d nt have breakfast. The reasns fr this are as fllws.
Sme students wh stay up late int the night chse t skip breakfast s that they can have a few extra minutes t sleep. Besides, sme schlgirls want t keep slim and they ften g t schl withut breakfast. As a result, these students tend t feel sleepy all day and have bad memries; therefre, it is hard fr them t get high marks in all kinds f tests.
In fact, the mrning meal plays an imprtant part. It can prvide 30 percent f the whle day's energy. In rder t get a creative mind and a better judgement, schl kids shuld start their days with a regular breakfast. Thus, they can bth get gd marks and keep healthy.