人教版高中复习之写作(结构)课件PPT

这是一份人教版高中复习之写作(结构)课件PPT，共23页。PPT课件主要包含了写作基本要求，缺乏耐心富有同情心，知己知彼评卷人，佳作五步走，Exercise，背景+现状+原因，网购的优点，网购的缺点，对网购的看法， 拓词成句等内容，欢迎下载使用。
TeachingObjectives
字数达到要求，100—120词之间语法、标点、拼写、格式正确文章内容切题，清楚连贯地传递信息，表达思想。
★★★★★卷面整洁，字迹清楚
高级词汇，高级句型（前提：正确运用！！！）
What is a gd writing？
1 Cntent: * everything needed included which is related t yur view. (内容要完整)2 Language: * N Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * N Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used wrds and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)3 Structure: * Gd beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well rganized and smthly develped (结构合理,行文流畅)
随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的人加入到网购群体中。请你谈一谈对于“网购”的看法。
体裁：题材：人称：时态：
nline shpping
第一/三人称复数（we/peple/it)
Cnclusin paragraph:
Intrductin paragraph:
The utline f the writing:
utline(nline shpping)
网购有利有弊，应理性网购；网购利大于弊，应倡导网购；网购弊大于利，应避免网购。
科技/网络发展+流行/新的生活方式+方便With the develpment f technlgy and the Internet, nline shpping is mre and mre ppular and even becmes peple’s new lifestyle because its cnvenience.
网购优点：方便/价格低/品种多
It’s cnvenient fr peple t shp nline.The price f the gds is usually lw.There are all kinds f species.
because we dn’t need t g ut t buy things.
than that in the physical stres.
s that we can buy anything we want.
网购缺点：质量差/信息泄露/资源浪费
The gds is ften nt in a gd qualityIt’s easy t leak ut ur message.Shpping nline may cause waste f resurces.
because we can nly see the pictures.
As a result, ur nline accunt may be attacked and thus lse mney.
Fr example, we may buy lts f things we dn’t really need and then waste them.
网购有利有弊，应理性网购。
Online shpping has bth advantages and disadvantages. Therefre, we shuld use it in a prper way.
With the develpment f technlgy and the Internet, nline shpping is mre and mre ppular and even becmes peple’s new lifestyle because its cnvenience. It’s cnvenient fr peple t shp nline because we dn’t need t g ut t buy things. The price f the gds is usually lwer than that in the physical stres. There are all kinds f species s that we can buy anything we want. The gds is ften nt in a gd quality because we can nly see the pictures. It’s easy t leak ut ur message.As a result, ur nline accunt may be attacked and thus lse mney. Shpping nline may cause waste f resurces. Fr example, we may buy lts f things we dn’t really need and then waste them. Online shpping has bth advantages and disadvantages. Therefre, we shuld use it in a prper way.
Linking wrds
1.表递进2.表转折　3.表因果4.表目的5.表归纳6.表列举
and, then, als, besides, mrever, what‘s mre, furthermre, in additin, apart frm
but, hwever, althugh, thugh, in spite f, despite, n the cntrary, n the ther hand...
because, since, therefre, s, hence, thus, cnsequently, as a result/cnsequence
in rder that, s that, fr the purpse f...
in general, in brief, in shrt, in cnclusin,in a wrd, n the whle...
Firstly/ First f all/ T begin with/ In the first place…Secndly/ In the secnd place… Thirdly/In the third place…Finally/ Last but nt least…
Sample writing:
With the develpment f technlgy and the Internet, nline shpping is mre and mre ppular and even becmes peple’s new lifestyle because its cnvenience. There are many advantages f nline shpping. First f all, It’s cnvenient fr peple t shp nline because we dn’t need t g ut t buy things. Als, the price f the gds is usually lwer than that in the physical stres. Mrever, there are all kinds f species s that we can buy anything we want. Hwever, each cin has tw sides. The disadvantages f nline shpping als can be seen easily. The gds is ften nt in a gd quality because we can nly see the pictures. Apart frm it, It’s easy t leak ut ur message. As a result, ur nline accunt may be attacked and thus lse mney. What’s wrse, shpping nline may cause waste f resurces. Fr example, we may buy lts f things we dn’t really need and then waste them. In cnclusin, nline shpping has bth advantages and disadvantages. Therefre, we shuld use it in a prper way.
说明一物的利弊 1、AAA has imprved the quality f ur lives and are playing an imprtant rle in ur daily life. The benefits AAA brings t us are far mre than its disadvantages. Hwever, we cannt ignre its prblem.2、On the psitive side, AAA has enabled us t (1) 此处填入 AAA 的优势之一。Fr instance, （ 2 ）举例说明优势之一。Besides, (3)AAA 的优势之二。Nwadays, (4) 举例说明优势之二。In additin, （ 5 ） AAA 的优势之三。3、On the negative side, (6) 此处填入 AAA 的劣势之一。Fr example,(7) 举例说明劣势之一。Besides,(8)AAA 的劣势之二。Furthermre,(9)AAA 的劣势之三。4、All in all, we can nt live withut AAA fr the cnveniences it brings t us, but we shuld als be aware f the negative effects it creates n the mdern life.
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