人教版高中英语必修一 作文专题——求助信 课件

这是一份人教版高中英语必修一 作文专题——求助信 课件，共15页。

作文专题求助信I am writing this letter to ask you to do me I’m writing to ask whether you can help me.I have some difficulty/ trouble in doing…I find it difficult for me to do sth. Faced with/Facing so much difficulty, I have to turn to you for some help.It would be very helpful if you could do me a favor.I really don’t know what to do and expect you to give me your advice.I have no idea what I should do and long for your advice. I would be grateful if you could give me some suggestions on how to ... I would appreciate it if you could offer me some help.必备句子指导老师：1.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。2.我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……3.不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。4.我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。5.面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do sthI am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more, … What troubles me most is …检查背诵Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on...?I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me .指导老师：简介Step 1 analyze the requirements(认真审题) Step 2 draw up an outline(谋篇布局)Step 3 organize the sentences(联句成篇)Step 4 get the article polished up(锦上添花)Step 5 check the mistakes(查漏补缺)求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。指导老师：典例分析剖析（2016年新课标全国卷I）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。一般现在时第一、第二人称问候对方+介绍自己+点明目的描述困难+恳求帮助表示感谢+期盼回复谋篇布局指导老师：Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. I'm writing to ask for your help. This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. Firstly, I'm wondering if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me. I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours truly,Lihua 高级短语，高级句型指导老师：联句成篇高级短语做某事有困难 给某人帮助寻求帮助渴望做某事因某事感激某人 提供一些有益的指导费心地去做某事为某事做准备让某人失望忙于做某事have trouble/difficulty(in)doing sth.do sb. a favor/give sb. a hand ask for help/turn to sb for helpbe anxious/eager to do sth./long to do sth.be grateful/thankful/appreciative to sb. for sth.offer some constructive guidancetake the trouble to do sth.make preparations for.…let sb. downbe busy/occupied/engaged in doing sth.指导老师：高级句型1. not only.....but also 倒装句 在外企工作不仅能开阔我的视野，还能帮我交到新朋友。Not only can working in a foreign company broaden my horizons ,but also itcan help me make new friends.2. 非谓语我写给你这封信，希望你能给我一些建议。I’m writing you the letter ,hoping you can give me some advice.3.从句我写这封信的目的是我想向你寻求帮助。(the reason why... is that...)The reason why I write this letter is that I want to ask you for help.这是我第一次写申请信。(This is the first time that...)This is the first time that I have written an application letter.我不知道我应该注意什么，这使我很苦恼。(非限制性定语从句)I don't know what I should pay attention to ,which makes me very upset.I have no ideaWorking in a foreign company can not only broaden my horizons ,but also it can help me make new friends.指导老师：Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. I'm writing to ask for your help. This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them. Firstly, I'm wondering if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me. I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours truly, Lihua注意过渡，衔接表顺序：first of all,to begin withwhat's more,in addition ,besides,moreoverlast but not least表观点：as far as I am concerned，in my opinion其他：on the one hand ，on the other hand for one thing， for another查漏补缺，注意标点和格式等指导老师：必背模板①Dear________, I am writing to formally request to ______（请求的内容）. The reason for _____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）. I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours,Li Hua指导老师：必背模板②Dear________, My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to ____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that __________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容). I am sure that I can make great progress in ________(表达期待).Yours,Li Hua课堂作文 假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张， 甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意：1.词数100左右， 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Homeworkplease perfect your composition after class.Make your final copy as neat as possible. Thank you!