专题15+灾难故事-直击2022高考英语+专项突破“读后续写”

专题15直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”—灾难故事

灾难，我们没法控制，但是可以用温暖呵护承受灾难的人……

01

阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift, I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell off the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.   

I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed myself.   As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.

Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldn't walk. We made a seat for the patient by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.

Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse.

注意：续写字数应为150词左右。

Paragraph 1: However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.

Paragraph 2: Later in the afternoon, I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.

【答案】However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together. The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued. Gradually and slowly, we lifted the nurse out of the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. Finally, all, including patients, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.

Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. It was our teamwork that made a difference. I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.

【解析】

本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。

2.续写线索：和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建

3.词汇激活

行为类

①集中在…上：focused on/fix on

②面对：were faced with/face

③继续：continued /keep on

情绪类

①保持镇定：stay calm/keep calm

②感觉有压力：felt a weight in my chest/feel stressed

【点睛】

[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的定语从句）

[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）

02

Ken Scott kicked off the covers and leapt out of bed at his home in the Rocky Mountain town of Mullan, Idaho. He’d just heard on the radio that the nearby Silver Mountain Resort had been blessed with nearly a foot and a half of new snow. As an experienced ski addict, he didn’t want to miss this big golden opportunity. These conditions are what skiers live for.

When Scott reached Silver Mountain’s locker room, he came across his friend Paul, a former ski instructor who had also been a regular on these slopes for more than two decades. Both of them were exhilarated. Before setting off, it was Paul’s routine to check his phone tightly fixed inside his parka (风 雪外套). For the next hour the pair skied on various runs under a lightly dull sky, making fresh tracks. They were both in a playful mood, laughing as they tackled the steep runs.

Almost immediately, the snow beneath their feet gave way. In a millisecond, Paul realized what was happening. “Avalanche! (雪崩)” he yelled to Scott, who was not far behind. Scott responded. The sudden snow slide caused fear in his voice. “This is happening!” Instantly, both were hit by a mass of snow that would hit and carry them some 500 feet down the mountain. Scott felt it surrounding and enclosing him, moving quickly up his back and over his shoulders, then heavy against his neck. Snow filled the space in front of him and piled up around the whole of him. Paul, too, was swept downhill.

They remembered the avalanche survival lessons they had learned. Keep your head up. Try to swim. Stay on top of the snow. But the snow was too powerful and they felt themselves rolling like a load of clothes in a washing machine. When Scott finally came to rest, he was lying on his left side and completely buried, skis and poles still attached.

注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

Paul was luckier, ending up partially buried and probably surviving.

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Paragraph 2:

Recalling the terrible experience, Scott thanked his friend and the rescue team.

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【答案】Para1

Paul was luckier, ending up partially buried and probably surviving. So fortunate was he that most of the snow had gone over his body and continued down the hill. In such a shallow burial, he began to shake off the snow, scooped snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out. Looking around the world of snow, he desperately shouted Scott’s name but received no trace of responses. Paul unzipped his parka and pulled out the phone to make the emergency call. Shortly afterwards, the rescue team arrived. With great efforts, Paul and the team located Scott and found him alive in an enclosed space, which ended the unthinkable accident with an incredible survival.

Para2

Recalling the terrible experience, Scott thanked his friend and the rescue team. When buried under snow in the enclosed space, Scott drifted between terror and panic, hoping that his friend Paul was not buried so deep. He held on to that faint possibility like a rope which could pull him to safety. He painstakingly took only tiny breaths, fighting to stay positive by focusing on this breathing. Time ticked away slowly. Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. In that one-in-a-million chance, they made it. With the dull sky clearing up, both Paul and Scott breathed in the fresh air with abandon, feeling the rebirth of life.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了经验丰富的滑雪爱好者肯·斯科特和好友保罗结伴滑雪，突遇雪崩后死里逃生的故事。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“保罗比较幸运，部分被埋葬，很可能还活着。”可知，第一段可描写保罗如何脱险，以及脱险后寻找好友和寻求救援。

②由第二段首句内容“回忆起那次可怕的经历，斯科特感谢了他的朋友和救援队伍。”可知，第二段可描写当被埋在封闭空间的积雪下时，斯科特的心理活动及获救后的感激之情。

2.续写线索：结伴滑雪——突遇雪崩——寻求援助——获救——感激

3.词汇激活

行为类

1.到达：arrive in/reach

2.遇见：come across/meet

3.集中:focus on/concentrate on

情绪类

1.高兴的：exhilarated /pleased

2.惊恐：terror /panic

【点睛】

[高分句型1].Just as he was feeling himself fading away, the rescue team arrived. （as引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2] With great efforts, Paul and the team located Scott and found him alive in an enclosed space, which ended the unthinkable accident with an incredible survival.（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

03

Jack still remembers that one morning when he was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Lily. Jack was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first, he thought nothing of it since customers' voice in the motorcycle shop directly below their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.

“Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone shouted.

Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Jack opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorcycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying.

Lily, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor through the smoke.

They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Lily stopped in her track. She turned around and headed back the way they came. Jack had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.

Lily had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik, Malay for auntie. Lily began banging on Makcik’s door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Jack could see many of their neighbors — some still in their pyjamas — running for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind.

“She might have run for safety like everyone else!” Jack cried. However, Lily refused to give up. “I know Makcik's still inside.” She said she was familiar with Makcik's daily routine and was certain she would still be sleeping. She pounded the door. “Go downstairs. Go now! Go!”

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Just at that time, Jack noticed the flame was reaching up.

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Luckily, all the neighbors went downstairs and an ambulance came.

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【答案】Paragraph 1: Just at that time, Jack noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He compre-hended the gravity of the situation and held Jane's hand tightly. Both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Jack begged Lily to run for safety as quickly as possible. Lily tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Jack burst out crying.

Paragraph 2: Luckily, all the neighbors went downstairs and an ambulance came. A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Lily 's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Lily and Jack were very happy.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者杰克十岁那年的一个早晨，他和姐姐莉莉在家，他们所在的公寓发生了火灾，他们正朝走廊尽头的楼梯走去，这时莉莉停下了脚步和杰克返回去叫醒住在他们隔壁的那位70多岁的老人。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“就在那时，杰克注意到火焰正在蔓延。”可知，第一段可描写尽管很危险杰克和莉莉努力的去敲老人的门。

②由第二段首句内容“幸运的是，所有的邻居都下楼了，救护车来了”可知，第二段可描写他们和邻居合力将老人救出。

2.续写线索：火势严峻————二人并没有放弃敲门——门被推开——老人被送往医院

3.词汇激活

行为类

阻止鼻孔吸到烟：shield her nose from the choking smoke / prevent her nose from the choking smoke

取代：replace /take the place of

突然大哭起来：burst out crying /burst into tears

情绪类

快乐的：glad/pleased

无意识的：unconscious/unaware

【点睛】

[高分句型1] he was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself.（由where引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.（though引导的让步状语从句）

04

Besieged (被包围的) Paris was suffering from famine (饥荒). Even the sparrows on the roofs and the rats in the sewers were growing rare. People were eating anything they could get. As Monsieur (法语，先生) Morissot, watchmaker by profession and idler (懒汉) for the occasion, was walking along the boulevard one bright January morning, his hands in his trousers pockets and stomach empty, he suddenly came face to face with his friend—Monsieur Sauvage, a fishing friend. Before the World War II broke out, Morissot had been in the habit, every Sunday morning, of setting forth with a bamboo rod (杆子) in his hand and a tin box on his back. He took the Argenteuil train, got out at Colombes, and walked to the Ile Marante. The moment he arrived at this place of his dreams he began fishing and fished till nightfall.

Every Sunday he met in this very spot Monsieur Sauvage, a fat, happy, little man, a draper in the Rue Notre Dame de Lorette, and an warm-hearted fisherman. They often spent half the day side by side, rod in hand and feet dangling over the water, and a warm friendship had sprung up between the two. Some days they did not speak; at other times they chatted; but they understood each other perfectly without the aid of words, having similar tastes and feelings. In the spring, about ten o'clock in the morning, when the early sun caused a light mist to float on the water and gently warmed the backs of the two enthusiastic anglers, Morissot would occasionally remark to his neighbour: "My, but it's pleasant here." To which the other would reply: "I can't imagine anything better!" And these few words sufficed to make them understand and appreciate each other.

A beautiful day in autumn, they decide to go fishing in Colombes which is not far from the base of Germans.

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Suddenly, a gun pointed at Morissot.

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【答案】A beautiful day in autumn, they decide to go fishing in Colombes which is not far from the base of Germans. A breeze stirred the lake, and they were bathed in the bright sunshine. What a sunny day! The peaceful sight made them feel relaxed. They took out their equipment and prepared to fish. Days were hard when people were eating anything they could get. The reason why they chose this dangerous place was that there were more fish to catch. They need to feed the family, and they have no choice but to take the risk. It seemed that they chose the right place because they caught more fish. Both of them were excitedand they decided to go home. What they didn’t realize is that several soldiers were coming toward them.

            Suddenly, a gun pointed at Morissot. The solider asked them what were they doing here in German. They feel scared and answered in terror "we were so hungry that we just want to fish ".The solders didn’t believe what they said. they searched all over their body, hoping to find some evidence, but in vain. Finally, they found the fish they caught and believed what they said. But the solders warned them never to came here to fish.

【解析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了第二次世界大战爆发之前，灾难严重，被围困的巴黎正在遭受饥荒。甚至屋顶上的麻雀和下水道里的老鼠也越来越少了。人们吃了他们能吃到的任何东西。Morissot习惯了每个星期天早上去钓鱼并且和 Sauvage先生一起钓鱼，在一个秋天，他们决定去哥伦布钓鱼，那里离德国人的基地不远。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“一个美丽的秋日，他们决定去哥伦布钓鱼，那里离德国人的基地不远。”可知，第一段可描写他们在德军基地哥伦布钓鱼的情况。

②由第二段首句内容“突然，一支枪指着莫里索。”可知，第二段可描写他们被德军发现后的事情。

2.续写线索：饥饿——钓鱼——危险——转危为安

3.词汇激活

行为类

①一起走路：walk together/keep him company

②回家：go back home/return home

情绪类

①害怕：scared/in terror

【点睛】

[高分句型1]The solider asked them what were they doing here in German. （由连接词what引导的宾语从句作ask的宾语）

[高分句型2]The reason why they chose this dangerous place was that there were more fish to catch. （由关系词why引导限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句）

05

At first, Michael didn’t see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors’ home. He and his wife had just parked around the corner from their own house when they got a call from one of his daughters: “The house next door is on fire!” He went to check. That’s when he saw two women and a girl helpless and heartbroken on their doorway.

“The baby’s in there!” one of the women cried. Though the fire department had been called, Michael, then 64, immediately ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-old Tiara, the woman’s granddaughter and a playmate of Michael’s three youngest kids.

Entering the burning house was like “running into a bucket of black paint”. The thick smoke caused Michael to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe. The conditions would have been dangerous for anyone, but for Michael, who has severe lung disease, they were life-threatening.

After a few minutes in the smoke-filled house, he retreated outside to catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately.

“The second floor,” her aunt shouted back.

Michael knew he couldn’t hold his breath for long. However, taking a deep breath, he went in a second time. The darkness was overwhelming. Yet because the house had a similar design to his, he made it to the second floor. He turned to the right and was met by intense heat. He was already out of breath.

“Baby girl, where are you?”

His throat and lungs burned as if he’d inhaled fire instead of the smoke in the air. Every blink stung his eyes. All he could hear was the crackling and popping of burning wood. Then a soft but distinct moan emerged. Still unable to see, Michael fell to his knees on the hot wood floor. He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. An unlucky thought crossed his mind: I’m probably gonna die up here.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

Finally, Michael touched something.

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Paragraph 2:

Tiara was safe now; however, Michael fainted down to the ground, unconscious.

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【答案】

Finally, Michael touched something. A shoe, then an ankle — It was Tiara! He scooped her into his arms and stood. Turning, he fought through the smoke and made his way to the outside. Michael put Tiara down on the doorway. And He started CPR — the first time he’d ever done so. The women stood behind him, praying silently. Soon a slight cough came from Tiara’s throat. He gave five more breaths. She opened her eyes and took a breath on her own.

Tiara was safe now; however, Michael fainted down to the ground, unconscious. When he woke up, Michael found himself in the hospital, surrounded by his neighbors who constantly said thank-you to the hero. Michael spent over a week in the hospital. Tiara was released from the hospital after a few days. The fire sickened Michael’s lung disease, and he feels the effects even two years later. “It’s a small price to pay,” he always replies. “I’d do it again in a heartbeat. Wouldn’t give it a second thought.”

【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。讲述了64岁的Michael在邻居遇到火灾时，不顾自身安危冲进火海救人的故事。

【详解】

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“Michael摸到了什么东西”可知，第一段可描写Michael找到了女孩Tiara并救助她的过程。

②由第二段首句内容“几天后Michael在医院醒来了”可知第二段可描写Michael救人后在医院救治的情况，以及事情结束后的感悟。

2.续写线索

找到女孩——抢救——醒来——Michael住院——救治——感触

3.词汇激活

行为类

①停车：stop/park/pull up

②跑：run/rush

③爬：crawl/climb

情绪类

①哭：cry/weep/sob

②可怕的：terrible/horrible/frightening/scary

【点睛】

[高分句型1] When he woke up, Michael found himself in the hospital, surrounded by his neighbors who constantly said thank-you to the hero.（运用了过去分词作状语以及who引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] The women stood behind him, praying silently.（运用了现在分词作状语）