专题01 读后续写速成：“天龙八步”法 教案

这是一份专题01 读后续写速成：“天龙八步”法 教案，共11页。

目录：
第1部分
第2部分 八步法实战应用：高考真题讲解
读后续写，大部分都是围绕cnflict，slutin来运转的，首先你能看懂材料，如果这一步无法完成，那这篇文章并不适合你。然后，你要找到文章到底提出什么冲突或问题。大部分文章都是这个模式：
(1)情绪：消极情绪
(2)细节：进一步解释描写
(3)转折：个人的努力或借助外界
(4)转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
(5)失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)新法：突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
(7)结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
(8)总结：点题，呼应前文
第1步 情绪：情绪描写
第2步 细节：进一步解释描写
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【例2】
【例3】
【例4】
【例5】
【例6】
第3步 转折：个人努力或借助外界
【例7】
第4步 转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
【例8】
第5步 失望：但是问题还未解决或出现了新问题
【例9】
第6步 想法：突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
【例10】
第7步 结局：过段时间，事情有了最后的转折
【例11】
第8步总结：点题，呼应前文
例12
第二部分 “八步法”实战应用：高考真题讲解
故事梗概：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm. “I'm ging t find a better spt fr us t camp" and walked away.
With n path t fllw,Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place. she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm! "she cried. "Help!"
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落)smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy,she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw. Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
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But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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第一段：But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane wke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
情绪描写∶ 笑
smile brightly;laugh; beam; light(sth)up; light up with; burst int laughter; burst ut laughing; wear a bright/brad smile; give sb a smile
细节描写∶笑
看到直升飞机，Jane高兴地笑了起来。
(1)At the sight f the helicpter，Jane beamed with wild jy.
(2)Seeing the helicpter，Jane beamed with wild jy.
(3)The mment she caught sight f the helicpter，Jane's eays/face lit up with delight.
(4)The mment she caught sight f the helicpter，a bright smile lit up Jane's faceleyes.
情绪描写∶哭
cry; sb; weep; burst int tears; burst ut crying;(ne's eyes)brim with/befull f/be filled with tears
细节描写∶哭
(1)A lump came t his thrat.他哽咽欲哭。
(2)Her eyes were red frm crying.她的双眼哭得通红。
(3)Her eyes brimmed with tears.她的眼里满含泪水。
(4) Tears cursed/trickled/streamed/ran dwn her cheeks.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。
情绪描写∶ 害怕
frightened; panicked; scared; speechless;in(a)panic; in a cld sweat;be full f fear; be filled with terrr;be rted t the spt; freeze;run away; flee; ne'sknees feel weak; (hands) sweat
细节描写∶ 害怕
我感到很害怕。
I felt very frightened/scared/panicked.
(2) I was in (a) panic/was full f fear.
(3)I std rted t the spt,brimming with fear/filled with fear.
(4)I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(5)I frze with terrr, t scared t mve.
(6)I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr; my palms sweating.
情绪描写∶ 高兴激动
v. dance;jump/leap withjy; feel a surge f happiness/delight/jyexcitement; whistle; be vercme with happiness/delight/jy/excitement;(ne's eyes) twinkle;(ne's heart) beat/pund wildly
adj. happy; delighted; verjyed; excited; thrilled; wild with jy
细节描写∶高兴激动
当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
(1)When she knew the result f the test, she felt excited/thrilled.
(2) When she knew theresult f the test, her eyes twinkled with excitement.
(3)When sheknew the result f the test,her heart was punding with wildjy.
(4))When she knew the result f the test,a wildexcitement tk hld f her.
(5)Knwing the result f the test, she felt a surge f excitement.
(6)Knwing the result f the test,she was vercme with excitement.
情绪描写∶伤心痛苦
sad; bitter; srrwful; feela surge f sadness;(sadness)surge within sb; ne's heart ache; be vercme with sadness
细节描写∶伤心痛苦她伤心不已。
Sam felt extremely sad.
(2) A sadness came ver her.
(3) Her heart ached, tears streaming dwn her cheeks.
(4) Numb with grief, she became speechless.
(5)Feeling a surge f sadness,she culdn't help crying bitterly.
(6) Sadness surging within her, she burst int tears.
情绪描写∶ 生气愤怒
felt/get angry/furius; feel a surge f anger/rage/fury;eyes blaze;strm ut f/int/ff; strm/say angrily; sth makes sb bld bil; sth makes sb extremely angry; clasp ne's fists/teeth; speechless
细节描写∶ 生气愤怒
Sam感到非常生气。
(1) Sam felt very angry.
(2) Sam std rted t the spt, his eyes blazing with anger.
(3) Sam felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm,slamming the dr
furiusly behind him.
(4) Biling with rage,Sam shk his fist at me.
(5)Filled with fury,Sam was unable t uttera single wrd.
鼓起勇气; 他人的鼓励
pluckup/take/gather ne'scurage(t d….)
毫不犹豫
sb culd hardly wait t d sth
(2) withut a secnd thught
(3) withut even thinking
(4) withut delay
(5) withut hesitatin
似乎
(1) It was like ding sth
(2) It seemed as if/that
希望
(1) hping that..
(2) see/feel a glimmer f hpe
(3) trying hard t d sth
欣慰
(1)… asigh f relief-sighed with relief 松了—口气
(2)(a wave f relief flded thrugh/washed ver sb
(3)t ne'srelief… 使人欣慰的/放心的是……
不幸的是
(1)but bad luck fr sb,.….(2), but in vain
(3),but withut success(4),but n use
不知道做什么
(1)sb did sth, wndering what t d next.(2)sb did sth,nt knwing what t d next.
(3)sb did sth,unsure f what t d next.(4)sb was at a lss what t d.
(5)sb was in a dilemma abut whether t d r nt.
某人想到 /明白/有了主意
(1)It suddenly ccurred t sb that+从句-It hit sb that+从句
-lt struck sb that+从句-It dawned n sb that+从句
(2)(idea，thught..)ccurred/came t sb= int ne's mind- in ne's mind
(3)ne's mind began t race
过了一段时间
(1)nt lng after that, afterwards,….-befrelng,….=It
didn't take lng befre+从句=It tk sme time befre+从句(2) fr an instant/mment
事情有了转折
(1)T ne'ssurprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that+从句
(2) But n secnd thughts,….
(3)But what happened next was pure magic.
直到……才意识到
(1)倒装句∶Nt until+时间状语+did sb realize/ntice that+
从句
(2)强调句∶It was nly+时间状语+that sb realized that+从句
还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中
(1) One's wrds(eched/rang ut) in ne's ears.
(2) One's wrds/vice/sng lingered/whispered in ne's mind/ head.
(3) One's head was still full f..
经历与教训
(1)What a/an valuable/useful/great/painful lessn sb taught
me/sb learned frm sb!
(2)What a/an enjyable/pleasant/wnderful/unfrgettable/
memrable/interesting/valuable experience sb had!
(3) Dwn deep in ne's heat….在某人的内心深处
读后续写
续写
1.A wave f terrr swept ver her.
一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。
1.情绪
2.Her heart punding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner vice tld her that she had t find a safe place.
她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。
2.细节：详述情绪
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her curage t feel the way.
虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。
3.转折∶ 个人努力
4.Luckily, it didn't take lng befre she fund a cave.
5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer f hpe. saying t herself."Tmrrw is anther day."
4.幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。
5.松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。 对自己说。 “明天又是新的一天。”
转机：成功、希望来了。
With that, she went t sleep, in whse dream her husband kept her cmpany.
说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。
衔接句
读后续写
续写
1.Hungry and disappinted, she fund nt any helicpter verhead,at a lss what t d.
1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。
再度失望(出现新问题)
2.It suddenly dawned n her that she shuld find a big pen area first.
3. Having gbbling dwn sme blackberries, she can't wait t set ff.
4. After what seemed a century,such an area did cme int sight.
Her face brightened up.
2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。
她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。
4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。
5.她的脸变亮了。
突然有了办法
What a cincidence that meanwhile, a helicpter was flying twards her.
Upn its landing, ut dashed her husband wh hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart.
6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。
7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。
结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜
It was at the mment that they decided nt t quarrel any mre but learned t cmprmise.
8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协
(总结)