11.2022届高三二轮专题卷 英语（十一）应用文写作（建议信、申请信与告知信）附答案解析

【范文解析】

你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 你建议的线路；

2. 你的理由；

3. 你的祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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写作思维模板

Step 1 “五定”审题

Step 2 斟词酌句

◆醒目词汇

1. 文明_________  2. 建议_________

3. 很好了解_________  4. 风景_________

5. 总之_________  6. 相信_________

◆句式升级

1. 长江是世界第三大河流，中国第一大河流，中华民族的母亲河。

惯用表达：Yangtze River, the mother river of Chinese civilization, is the longest river in china and the third longest river in the world.

高级表达：(用主语从句和not only... but also...句型改写上面的句子)

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2. 我强烈建议你选这一条。从中你可以更好地了解中国和中国的历史。

惯用表达：I strongly advise you to choose this one. From it, you can have a better understanding of China and Chinese history.

高级表达：(用定语从句改写上面的句子)

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Step 3 完美成篇：认真工整，誊写在卷

Dear Jim,

I’m pleased to hear that you are going to China for a trip. In your letter, you asked for my suggestions on how to choose a better one from the two routes “Trip to the Yangtze River” and “Trip to Mount Tai”, as for which, I have the following opinions.

What is well known to us is that Yangtze River is not only the longest river in China and the third longest river in the world but also the mother river of Chinese civilization. Therefore, I strongly recommend that you choose this one, from which you can have a better understanding of China and Chinese history. In addition, the scenery along the river is amazing, which can make you have an unforgettable moment after your visit. Thus, I’m sure you are eager to come here to make a second trip.

In conclusion, I am convinced that the trip along the Yangtze River is a better choice. Wish you would enjoy yourself in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

醒目词汇：

1. civilization  2. recommend

3. have a better understanding of  4. scenery

5. in conclusion  6. be convinced that

句式升级：

1. What is well known to us is that Yangtze River is not only the longest river in China and the third longest river in the world but also the mother river of Chinese civilization.

2. I strongly recommend that you choose this one,  from which you can have a better understanding of China and Chinese history.

【写作模板】

•建议信模板与套用句式

Dear _________,

I’m sorry/glad to hear that you _________(事由). In your letter, you said that _________(问题信息). My suggestions are as follows.

Firstly, _________ because _________. Secondly, you should _________, for _________. Thirdly, you’d better _________.

Only in this way can you _________. What’s more, _________. I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.

Best wishes.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

•申请信模板与套用句式

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua, an outgoing boy _________. I’m writing to apply for the position that you are advertising.

For one thing, I _________(优势一). For another, I _________(优势二). My ability to _________(优势三) is out of question. If I’m lucky enough to have the opportunity to work in your _________(对方单位), I would _________(表达决心).

Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

•告知信模板与套用句式

Dear _________,

Glad that you’ve heard of the good news about the coming _________. I’m writing to inform you of the details.

As scheduled, the _________(活动或项目) will take place at _________(地点)on_________(时间). You are expected to _________(具体要求或期望). Besides, attentions should be paid to _________. Hopefully you will be well prepared for it and enjoy yourself/have a good time.

If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to ask me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【模拟演练】

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假设你是高中生李华，欲给你在英国的朋友Peter提如何学习中文的建议。请根据下列提示，写一封建议信。信件包括以下要点：

1. 写信目的；

2. 给出建议（至少两条）；

3. 表示祝愿。

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

词数：100-120左右。

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【答案】

Dear Peter,

Learning you have a passion for Chinese learning, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions on how to promote your proficiency in Chinese.

Firstly, Chinese classical literature works are highly recommended, through which you will undoubtedly acquire a glimpse of/get a deeper insight into Chinese traditions and cultures. Besides, TV programs and newspaper concerning China are also advisable, helping you have a better understanding of China’s true image. Lastly, engaging with your Chinese friends always serves the purpose to enhance your fluency in oral Chinese.

Sincerely hope my suggestions are workable to you and I wish you could make great progress.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给在英国的朋友Peter提如何学习中文的建议。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：

1. 写信目的；

2. 给出建议（至少两条）；

3. 表示祝愿。

第二步：列提纲

（重点词组）offer you some practical suggestions;a glimpse of; have a better understanding of ; to enhance your fluency in oral Chinese;make great progress; have a passion for

第三步：连词成句

1.Learning you have a passion for Chinese learning, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions on how to promote your proficiency in Chinese.

2. Firstly, Chinese classical literature works are highly recommended, through which you will undoubtedly acquire a glimpse of/get a deeper insight into Chinese traditions and cultures.

3. Besides, TV programs and newspaper concerning China are also advisable, helping you have a better understanding of China’s true image.

4.Lastly, engaging with your Chinese friends always serves the purpose to enhance your fluency in oral Chinese.

5.Sincerely hope my suggestions are workable to you and I wish you could make great progress.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Besides, Lastly连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

【范文点评】

[高分句型1]Learning you have a passion for Chinese learning, I’m writing to offer you some practical suggestions on how to promote your proficiency in Chinese.（分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Firstly, Chinese classical literature works are highly recommended, through which you will undoubtedly acquire a glimpse of/get a deeper insight into Chinese traditions and cultures.（介词+关系代词引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型3]Sincerely hope my suggestions are workable to you and I wish you could make great progress.（and连接的并列句）

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假定你是李华，新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议，请给书店经理Mr. Bowie写一封建议信，内容包括：

1. 拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验；

2. 提供公益讲座（public lecture）等服务；

3. 其他建议（至少一条）。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Mr. Bowie,

I know that new-built Foreign Language Bookstores are now seeking advice from the public to increase the number of visitors. As a book fan, I would like to offer some advice.

First, the book store should have enough space to provide good reading experience for our readers. Second, public lectures should be included in the activities to raise the readers’ interest. Third, the book store can donate some books to the poor students so as to attract them to the book store.

Hopefully, the book store will be the one where we can enrich our knowledge and relax.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查的作文类型是建议信。题目要求假定你是李华，新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议，请给书店经理Mr． Bowie 写一封建议信，内容包括：1. 拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验；2. 提供公益讲座（public lecture）等服务；3. 其他建议（至少一条）。解析可知，应该以第一人称为主，一般现在时进行写作。要点已经给出，要求考生根据提纲自己发挥拓展，考生要先想好写哪几点，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。

[高分句型1]I think that it is necessary to offer good reading experience to our readers, which makes them comfortable. 我认为有必要为我们的读者提供良好的阅读体验，这会他们感到舒服。that 引导的宾语从句和it作形式主语。

[高分句型2]Only in this way mentioned above the book store will be the place where we can enrich our knowledge and relax ourselves.只有这样，书店才是我们丰富知识、放松身心的地方。部分倒装和where引导的定语从句。

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假如你叫李华，今年暑假一家外企要招聘兼职英语翻译，你想申请这个职位。请你根据以下要点写一封英文申请信。要点如下：

1. 英语水平；

2. 工作经历；

3. 与人交往的能力；

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：申请apply for  申请书application

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Sir or madam,

I know that your company is looking for a part-time English translator in the summer vacation. I’d like to apply for the job. First, having learned English for seven years or so, I am able to express myself freely. Second, my previous working experience as a translator makes me convinced that I can well manage the job this time. What’s more, as an outgoing person, I am always ready to make friends with many kinds of people from all walks of life.

I am eager for the job to be offered by your company and I am sure that I will satisfy all your requirements. Thanks for your reading my application and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。首先，本文要求写一封申请信，因此时态应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称应以第一人称为主；其次，要点主要包括介绍自己的英语水平、谈谈工作经历以及本人的交际能力，写作时应注意适当地拓展，尽量使用一些高级词汇和句式；最后，要注意语句的连贯。

【范文点评】

本文较好地完成了写作任务，段落清晰、要点全面、语言规范。此外文章亮点纷呈、可读性强，如：1. 文中使用了一些高级词汇express，convinced，apply for，all walks of life，satisfy all your requirements，look forward to，application等；2. 文中使用了动词-ing形式作状语having learned English for seven years or so，动词不定式短语作定语to be offered by your company等；3. 文中使用了高级句式I am sure that等；4. 文中恰到好处地使用了过渡词，使得文章语句迹贯，如first，second，what’s more等。

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假如你是李华，南昌二中的一名学生，得知可向国际儿童基金会（Foundation）申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目（poverty-relief program），帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一篇文章。

1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；

2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；

3）你的愿望。联系方式：2016hope@ief.org

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a student currently studying at Nanchang No.2 Middle School. I am writing to apply for the 2000 yuan’s worth of fund aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.

Being raised in families that don’t have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean ignoring our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions. Our efforts might make a difference in the lives of some young people, but who knows what butterfly effects these young minds may have on tomorrow's world?

We would be grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience. You could contact me at 2016hope@icf.org.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】该文体属于书信作文。首先明确的是一封申请信，所以在措辞时应该保持尊敬，谦和地语气，切记语气生硬，这时在商务交流时需切记的一点。其次囊括文本所要求的三个方面，但不代表不可以发挥自己的想法，总归来看文章还是有自己的发挥之处：经费的具体设想和使用方法，本方面需要考生能够结合实际情况给出具体的可行操作方案，考查学生的思辨能力和跨文化交际能力。在过渡时，用词能够衔接自然。最后要注明自己的联系方式已确保收到回信。

【范文亮点】

a student currently studying at Nanchang No.2 Middle School使用了同位语从句，students who are financially disadvantaged.使用了定语从句等，这些都丰富了整篇的句式多样化；apply for，On this account，make a difference等使用了固定搭配短语。We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students in a poverty-stricken area.这里明确点出了基金的具体用途，避免了空话现象。

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假定你是李华，由于新冠病毒（COVID-19）爆发，你校决定推迟开学，请你给回国度假的留学生Jack写封邮件，告知此事。内容包括：

1. 告知推迟开学；

2. 介绍疫情；

3. 开学日期另行通知。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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【答案】

Dear Jack,

I am so sorry to inform you that we’ll have to postpone the start of school this term due to the outbreak of COVID-19 during this winter vacation.

You must have known that COVID-19 is spreading all over the world, and that the situation is very bad. Many people have been infected and died. It is generally accepted that the best way to avoid being infected is not to gather and stay at home. So in order to defeat this infectious disease, we’ve decided to delay the start of school. The school will not begin until the outbreak is over. The specific time will be announced later.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给留学生Jack写信，告知他因为疫情爆发学校推迟开学的决定，以及后续安排。并给他介绍疫情。

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主

结构：总分总

要求：

1. 告知推迟开学；

2. 介绍疫情；

3. 开学日期另行通知。

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

inform sb. of sth./ postpone/ outbreak/ due to/ spread/ infect/ avoid doing sth./ gather/ decide to do sth./ delay to do sth.

第三步：连词成句

1. I am so sorry to inform you that due to the outbreak of COVID-19 during this winter vacation the start of this term has to be postponed.

2. You must have known that COVID-19 is spreading all over the world, and that the situation is very bad.

3. Unfortunately, many people have been infected and died.

4. It is generally acknowledged that the best way to avoid being infected is not gathering but staying at home.

5. So in order to defeat this infectious disease, we've decided to delay the start of school.

6. The school will not begin until the outbreak is over.

7. The specific time will be announced online later.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【范文点评】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I am so sorry to inform you that we'll have to postpone the start of school this term due to the outbreak of COVID-19 during this winter vacation.中that引导宾语从句；It is generally accepted that the best way to avoid being infected is not to gather and stay at home. 中that引导主语从句。

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假定你是李华，为方便学生为偏远山区学校捐赠旧书、杂志等，校学生会决定设置旧书回收角。请你写一封信给生病休假的留学生Tom告知此事，内容包括：

1. 询问近况；

2. 告知返校后捐赠书籍；

3. 祝愿早日康复。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How are you doing these days? Do you feel a bit better? I miss you very much. I have some good news to tell you.

A recycling corner for old books will be set in our school next week. If students have old books, newspapers and magazines they don’t want to read, they can donate them to it. All the collected books and magazines will be given away to the remote poor mountain schools. Remember to bring some old books when you return to school. We can do our part to help those kids in need.

Wish you get well soon. Looking forward to your early return to school.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文。

第一步：明确要求。假定你是李华，为方便学生为偏远山区学校捐赠旧书、杂志等，校学生会决定设置旧书回收角。请你写一封信给生病休假的留学生Tom告知此事，内容包括：1. 询问近况；2. 告知返校后捐赠书籍；3. 祝愿早日康复。

第二步：列关键词。如：donate … to，give away，remember to do，do one’s part to do，in need，look forward to等。

三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。

第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【范文点评】

此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：定语从句和条件状语从句：If students have old books, newspapers and magazines they don’t want to read, they can donate them to it.时间状语从句：Remember to bring some old books when you return to school.