14.2022届高三二轮专题卷 英语（十四）读后续写附答案解析

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1. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger I knew if I didn’t leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.

He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes sill on the table. “Don’t you have enough to do? I can take care of myself.” I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut.

Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.

The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home-cooked meal and a good night’s sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal（燕麦）for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.

Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe s warning, I turned off the main route. I thought it hadn’t rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn’t risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks（喇叭声）.

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.

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I screamed at Joe that I couldn’t make it.

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【参考范文】

Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe! I couldn’t help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.

I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Joe, however, remained calm! He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn’t have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.

【写作分析】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲叙了十一月的一个早晨，下着大雨，作者的丈夫Joe叮嘱作者不要抄近路去上班，而作者没有听丈夫的话，还是走了近路，结果车被困在了积满雨水的道路上。

1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我回过头，盯着一辆卡车闪烁的灯光。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现是丈夫来解救自己，以及丈夫解救作者的经过，最后作者被一根树枝拦住了。

②由第二段首句内容“我尖叫着说我过去不了。”可知，第二段可描写作者的丈夫是如何鼓励作者克服了困难的，最后作者意识到丈夫其实懂得如何照顾自己，尽管他做家务很麻烦。

2. 续写线索：回头看到灯光——丈夫开车救援——鼓励——成功解救——感悟

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①大喊：shout at sb./ cry out/call out

②抓住：get hold of/ catch hold of/ seize/ clench/grab

③鼓励：encourage/ urge/inspire

④哭泣：weep/ sob/ cry

⑤道歉：apologize/ make an apology/say sorry for

情绪类

①感谢：show appreciation/show gratitude/be grateful

②积极：positive attitude/act positively

【范文点评】

[高分句型1]Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)

[高分句型2]Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.（运用了“only+副词”置于句首的倒装句。）

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2. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Jenny stared at the store window longingly. There was nothing in this world that she wanted more than a Happy Hannah doll and all that currently separated her from the hottest doll of the holiday season was a thin piece of glass and S29.95 plus tax. Unfortunately, Jenny didn’t even have the 95 cents, so she let out a deep sigh and continued walking home.

Suddenly, a pink rectangle(矩形)in the snow caught her eye. Jenny walked over and realized it was a leather wallet. She removed it from the snow, and opened the wallet to find a thick pile of folded green bills and two plastic cards. One was a credit card and the other an ID.

Jenny stared at the old woman in her ID photo. The woman had a beautiful smile that reminded Jenny of her grandma. Jenny sighed and then she put the wallet into her purse. She turned around and walked in the direction from which she came.

Jenny’s heart beat quickly as she entered the store. She had long dreamed about this moment, but something didn’t feel right about it As she approached a neat pile of Happy Hannah dolls, she pushed away her feelings. She grasped one Happy Hannah dolly.

As Jenny approached the register, the Happy Hannah Show theme song began playing. It was her mobile pone. It was her grandma In one hand she held the Happy Hannah doll and in the other she held the phone on which her grandma was calling. Jenny’s heart was filed with love and appreciation as she thought of her sweet old grandma She put the doll down and picked up the phone call.

“Hi Grandma? I’m going to be a little bit late tonight. I’ve got to drop something off... Yeah, it was good...OK...Alright...I love you too.” Jenny left the store and walked through the melting snow all the way to the other side of the town. She though of her grandma as she rang the bell at 301 West Street.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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The woman who answered the door had been crying recently and looked upset and anxious.

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The woman took the wallet smilingly.

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【参考范文】

The woman who answered the door had been crying recently and looked upset and anxious. “Are you Mrs. Green?” Jenny asked politely, recognizing her from the ID card instantly. Mrs. Green nodded in confusion and let her come in. “Madam, did you lose something?” Jenny continued and asked some necessary questions. “I lost my wallet with the money to buy gifts for some poor children.” The old lady blurted out at last, her eyes rounding in surprise and sparkling with hope. Overcome with guilt, Jenny felt her face burning and handed the wallet to her. Thank God, she would have disappointed those kids.

The woman took the wallet smilingly. She held it to her chest tightly and then hugged Jenny, tears streaming down her face. “You are the real angel. No one knows what the wallet means to the children.” She sobbed in gratitude. Jenny’s soft heart was touched because her grandma often called her angel. That night, she darted across the street, the creaking of snow echoing in the air. How eager she was to tell her grandma that today she got a present more meaningful than Hannah doll-She was a real angel!

【写作分析】

文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jenny一直想买洋娃娃，但是她的钱不够，一天在路上捡到了一个钱包，本来想要拿着里面的钱买洋娃娃的，但是正准备去付钱时，祖母的电话打来了，她选择了不买，把钱归还了失主。

1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“开门的那个女人最近一直在哭，看起来既沮丧又焦虑。”可知，第一段可描写Jenny找到失主后，询问了相关信息确认钱包的主人，开门的女人描述了钱包里钱的用处。Jenny把钱包还给女人的同时感觉愧疚。

②由第二段首句内容“女人微笑着接过钱包。”可知，第二段可描写Jenny归还钱包后，女人赞扬了Jenny的行为。听了女人对她的赞扬后，Jenny被感动了。此时Jenny想到奶奶说的话，她多么想把这个消息告诉奶奶。

2. 续写线索：

失主开门—询问——还钱包——女士惊讶——女士感谢——赞扬——感动——告诉奶奶这个故事

3. 词汇激活：

行为类

认出：recognize/identify

递给：hand/pass

拿出：take out/bring out

接受：accept/receive

情绪类

惊讶的：surprised/amazed/astonished

感激的：grateful/thankful

【范文点评】

[高分句型1]The old lady blurted out at last, her eyes rounding in surprise and sparkling with hope.（独立主格结构）

[高分句型2]No one knows what the wallet means to the children.（what引导的从句为宾语从句）

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3. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Long long ago in a town, a newly-elected mayor was determined to do something effective to make the town better than before.

The mayor was acutely aware that his goal should be achieved not only by laws but also morals as well. He was a firm believer of the thought that nothing good could come to a town whose people only complained and expected others to solve their own problems! One day, a new idea suddenly struck him.

Early one morning, the mayor dressed himself up and went to a village nearby. He secretly placed a large stone in the middle of the main street and hid a gold coin under the stone. The instant every preparation was done, he hid himself behind a huge maple tree and watched closely, wondering what would happen before long.

The first person down the street was a milkman with his cart. He took no notice of it and the cart violently crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. “What fool put this stone here?” he shouted loudly. He picked himself up and angrily went away.

After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head and paying no attention to the road. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. Neither she nor her friends thought about moving the stone out of the road.

The mayor watched all day as many people passing to and fro complained about the stone but he found nobody making an attempt to move it and have the road cleared of the obstacle. The mayor was disappointed and even in despair. “Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbors from harm?”

注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Just then, the mayor saw a young girl coming along.

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At that moment, the mayor stepped out from behind the tree.

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【参考范文】

Just then, the mayor saw a young girl coming along. She was from a poor family and had worked all day, worn-out. When seeing the stone, she thought, “It’s a danger to whoever comes down the street after dark. I should move it out of the way!” Thin as she was, she pushed the stone with all her might and finally made it. Turning round, she saw the gold coins where the stone had been. Rooted to the spot with surprise, she was wondering whose gold it was.

At that moment, the mayor stepped out from behind the tree. “Sir,” she said, “Is this gold yours? If not, we surely must find the owner!” He replied, “My dear, the gold is mine but now it’s yours, because it’s you that has learned the lesson I want to teach my people.” The story went about soon. The adults passing earlier felt ashamed and guilty about their irresponsibility. From then on, the people in this town became more responsible and caring for each other. Of course, one good turn deserves another. Years later, the whole town took on a completely new outlook.

【写作分析】

本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位新当选的市长为了让市民道德水平提高，设置了一道测试：放了一块石头在路中间，并自己躲在一旁现察。来来往往的人很多，但他们都是在抱怨而没有挪走石头，这让市长很失望。

1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“正在这时，市长看到一个女孩走了过来。”可知，通过上文对送奶工和滑倒女人的描述，所以作为对比，第一段可描写这个女孩应该是一个善良有责任心的人，她不会对挡路石视而不见，因此可以描写她搬走石头，搬石头时发现了什么。

②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，市长从树后走了出来。”可知，第二段可描写市长表扬这个女孩，并且号召村民向她学习。

2. 续写线索：

看见石头——思考——搬石头——发现金子——市长解释——故事流传——村民反思

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①看见：spot/witness/observe

②搬石头：move the stone/carry the stone way

③解释：explain/make clear/interpret/reply

情绪类

①思考：think deeply/ reflect on

②愧疚：be ashamed of/take shame on oneself

【范文点评】

[高分句型1]Thin as she was, she pushed the stone with all her might and finally made it. （运用了as引导的让步状语从句）

[高分句型2]Turning round, she saw the gold coins where the stone had been.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及where引导的地点状语从句）

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4. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One spring morning many years ago, I had been searching for gold along Coho Creek on southeastern Alaska’s Kuprean of Island, and as I emerged from a forest of spruce(云杉)and hemlock tree, I froze in my tracks. No more than 20 paces in the bog(沼泽)was a huge Alaskan timber wolf - caught in one of Trapper George’s traps.

Old George had died the previous week of a heart attack, so the wolf was lucky. Confused and frightened at my approach, the wolf backed away. Then I noticed something else: It was a female, and her teats were full of milk. Somewhere there was a den of hungry pups(小狼)waiting for their mother.

From her appearance, I guessed that she had been trapped only a few days. That meant her pups were probably still alive. But I suspected that if I tried to release the wolf, she would turn aggressive and try to tear me to pieces.

So I decided to search for her pups instead and began to look for tracks that might lead me to her den. Fortunately, there were still a few remaining of snow. After several moments, I spotted pups’ marks on a trail.

The tracks led a half mile through the forest, then up a slope covered with many rocks. I finally spotted the den at the base of an enormous spruce, There wasn’t a sound inside. Wolf pups are shy and cautious, and I didn’t have much hope of inviting them outside, But I had to try. So I began imitating the high-pitched(声音很尖锐的) sound of a mother wolf calling her young. No response. A few moments later, after I tried another call, four tiny pups appeared. They couldn’t have been more than a few weeks old.

注意：

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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I extended my hands.

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With her young to protect, she was becoming aggressive.

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【参考范文】

I extended my hands. They tentatively sucked at my fingers. Perhaps hunger had helped overcome their natural fear. Then one by one, I placed them in a fur bag and headed back down the slope. When the mother wolf spotted me, she stood up right. Possibly picking up the smell of her young, she let out a high-pitched, plaintive whine. I released the pups, and they raced to her. Within seconds, they were sucking at her belly.

With her young to protect, she was becoming aggressive. What next? I wondered. So tender were the pups that it was impossible for them to survive without mother’s protection. Hence, I had to release her. I fetched an iron bar. Using a rock as the supporting point I unlocked the chain. After gaining freedom, she howled at me with her head low showing gratitude. Watching the mother and her pups disappear in the forest, I let out a sigh of relief.

【写作分析】

这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述作者在多年前的一个春天的早上，在沿着Coho Creek淘金的时候，遇到了一只被困在猎人陷阱里的还在哺乳期的母狼，于是循着踪迹找到幼崽并把幼崽送到被困的母狼身边的故事。

1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我伸开双手。”可知，第一段可描写作者把小狼送回母狼身边的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“身边有了要保护的幼崽，它开始变得有攻击性。”可知，第二段可描写作者把小狼带到母狼身边之后的场景，作者犹豫是否要救它们出陷阱，以及最后的结果。

2. 续写线索：唤出——放回——救出——感谢——感受

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①放进：place…in…/put…in…

②注意到：take notice of/pay attention to

③释放：release/free/liberate

情绪类

①感谢：show gratitude/be grateful

②放松：feel relaxed/feel at ease

【范文点评】

[高分句型1]Possibly picking up the smell of her young, she let out a high-pitched, plaintive whine.（现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Watching the mother and her pups disappear in the forest, I let out a sigh of relief.（现在分词作状语）

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5. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

September is most beautiful in Strathroy, where people wholeheartedly enjoy the simple pleasures of life and nature.

Roland was no exception. He was a magnificent German Shepherd (德国牧羊犬), a little lazy and over-weight though. He loved to doze in the backyard. He yawned and stretched his body as he heard the slowly approaching footsteps of Mrs. Proudfoot. “Come have your lunch dear!” said Mrs. Proudfoot with her usual fondness for him and he wagged his tail affectionately in return.

Roland was licking the last piece of meat in his plate when the doorbell burst into music. Mrs. Proudfoot hurried to answer the door. Roland stood alert by her side.

“Good noon Mrs. Proudfoot”. It was Sam, her teenage neighbor. “My! My! You look pale! What happened?” asked Mrs. Proudfoot with genuine worry. She immediately waved him in and closed the door behind. Mrs. Proudfoot was a lonely widow, but was well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids, though she had no kids to call her own.

Once encouraged, Sam disclosed his dilemma. “My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library. It costs 150 dollars, but he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents can’t afford to pay the rest. Barry is working part time but that’s far from enough.” With a dramatic sigh he continued, “If he didn’t refund the loss before the end of term, he will be dismissed from final exams. That will ruin his future! I have to help him, whatever it takes. He is my best friend.”

“Don’t worry, Sammy. You want me to pay…”, but Mrs. Proudfoot was interrupted. “No, No, Mrs. Proudfoot. This is not what I came here for. I’ll work for you. Would you favor me to walk your dog please? For 2 dollars a day.” He looked up with begging eyes.

Mrs. Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement, “That can’t be better! I’ve been worried about Roland lately. He does need some exercise! It’s nice of you to make such an offer.”

Sam thanked her over and over, “I will start tomorrow morning.”

注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Sam arrived very early the next morning.

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A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.

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【参考范文】

Sam arrived very early the next morning. Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line, Sam darted towards him, arms widely opened. Giving him a lazy glimpse, Roland politelywagged his tail and then turned his head away, falling sound asleep again. Desperately brainstorming, Sam got a piece of delicious bone from Mrs. Proudfoot. Lured by the tasty smell, Roland swiftly bounced up and jumped at the bone, following Sam out. In this way, the first day was smoothly finished. Day by day, Sam was delighted to find Roland gradually become willing and eager to have a walk outside.

A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Enjoying the pleasure to roam along the country road with Roland, Sam also harvested a lot from the relaxing time. Eventually one day, Sam was excited to tell Mrs. Proudfoot, “Barry and I have earned enough money. Thank you, Mrs. Proudfoot! But can I continue walking Roland for you? For free!” Radiantly, Mrs. Proudfoot nodded. Receiving a positive answer, Sam was wild with joy and Roland, wagging his tail merrily, as if intoxicated. Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining, making the world more beautiful and harmonious.

【写作分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了山姆的朋友巴里不小心弄丢了图书馆里一本珍贵的书。为了帮助好友凑钱买书，山姆决定向普劳德福特女士请求帮助她遛狗换取报酬。原先懒惰又超重的狗，也因此变得精力充沛并且苗条了。

1. 段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“山姆第二天很早就到了。”可知，第一段可描写山姆遛狗的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“一个月之后，普劳德福特女士很高兴地发现罗兰瘦了，并且充满活力。”可知，第二段可描写山姆成功地通过劳动获得了报酬，并且请求免费帮普劳德福特女士继续遛狗。

2. 续写线索：狗的表现——引诱狗狗出门——狗的改变——完成任务——主动请求继续遛狗——主题升华

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①找食物：get a piece of delicious bone/ask a can of meat

②收获：harvest a lot/benefit a lot

情绪类

①高兴、惊讶：was delighted to find/was surprised to find

②欢乐：was wild with joy/was more than happy

【范文点评】

[高分句型1]Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line, Sam darted towards him, arms widely opened.（现在分词作状语和独立主格结构）

[高分句型2]Receiving a positive answer, Sam was wild with joy and Roland, wagging his tail merrily, as if intoxicated.（现在分词作状语）