专题03 2021年1月浙江卷（万圣节南瓜趣事）-2022年新高考英语读后续写历年真题解析（PPT课件）

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历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-punder back last year. This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst (最上面), I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk (软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders. My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1 I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. ______________________________________________Paragraph 2 That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. _______________________________________________________
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
根据短文内容填空,理清故事脉络。
pumpkin ______In a pumpkin field, we cmpete t seek ut the ______ ___.
This year, it was hard t tell wh was the _______.We frgt t ______ ur pumpkins befre ______ ______ their insides.
T prve my pint, I decided t ______ my head inside the pumpkin.It was nly when I tried t ________ my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less _______________than getting in.
straightfrward
根据短文内容填空，理解具体细节的描述。
I tried t remve my head ut f the pumpkin but failed.
Pumpkin carving at Hallween is a family traditin, and we cmpete t seek ut the biggest ne n a farm every year.
T prve I was the winner, I frced my head int my pumpkin.
I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Hw did I finally get ut?
That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. What was peple’s respnse t the vide? Hw did I feel abut the vide?
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
Characters: I, dad, mm, Jasn …
Setting: Hallween, hme, pumpkin cmpetitin
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-punder back last year.
介绍万圣节的传统：带最大的南瓜回家。
由cmpete with， the biggest判断人物情感：excited
This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately, we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
通过这些细节词可以得知我当时的情感是cmpetitive
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk (软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.
讲述了我为了证明我的南瓜大把头伸进南瓜里面的过程。
捕捉细节词，可以得知我的情感是excited
My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
捕捉细节词，可以得知我的情感是panicked。
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Paragraph 1 ： I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. _______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： That vide was psted the day befre Hallween._______________________________________________________________________
根据下面的推断，本段应该是我的头被拔出来的过程。
表明上一段落我的头被卡在南瓜中的的过程被拍下了视频。侧面反映上一段我的头应该是从南瓜里弄出来了。
Paragraph 1 ： I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.
I can nt breath.
My mther came t help me .
She und my rubber band t make mre rm fr breath.
Eventually I was rescued.
Paragraph 2 ： That vide was psted the day befre Hallween.
The pst gain t much shares and likes.
I was embarrassed.
He learn a lessn.
lk befre yu leap
at first/finally
manage t frce my head int the pumpkin
when I tried t remve my head
can't get ut
frgt t weighbe determined t prve
every Octber
carry pumpkins back hme
Read fr Cmplicatin actin
Hw did I manage t frce my head int the pumpkin?
Language Appreciatin
bent ver & pressed my head against the pening
gt jammed abve my eyes
my nse briefly prevented entry
put my head int it & straighten up
my excitement was shrt-lived
when I tried t remve my head, my nse gt in the way.
Pumpkin(南瓜) carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage---I carried an 85-punder back last year.This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I'm unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry, Finally, I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk(软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy, “I'm ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can't get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
a jyful & harmnius family
It was five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger.
The vide was psted nline the Mnday befre Hallween.
1. What was my feeling at that time?2. What was the reactin f my family?3. Hw did I finally get my head ut f the pumpkin?* Mm was filming the whle time
1. Was the vide ppular and what's the reactin f the public?2. Hw did my family and I take the matter?3. ENDING
Nun: Pumpkin; dad; Jasn;mm; head; nseVerb: manage; supprt; rest; pull
pumkpin; dad; mm; Jasn; head; nsemanage; supprt; rest; pull
pumpkin; mm; dad
1. I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak. 2. I frze with terrr, t scared t mve an inch.3. I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating.4. This made me feel sick and shivery.5. A fld f fear welled up in me./ Fear flded ver me. 6. Jenny was wrried sick. Her thrat was dry and her face was burning up.
para 1 ---feelings语料库
panic & fear & anxius
1. Twards the end f the day my lungs panted as they struggled fr xygen. 2. When I returned frm my shift I gasped fr breath and my head was dizzy with pain.3. But I lay suffcating slwly. My face was purple and my lips turned blue. I culdn't think. I drifted fr a few mments and then everything went blank. A rush f air revived me. 4. Again the Nautilus attacked the ice sheet like a huge battering ram, nly this time frm beneath. There was a shattering, crunching sund, as it brke thrugh, shting frwards and upwards and then crushing the ice beneath it as it landed. Oxygen flwed int everyne's lungs. We were saved.
para 1 ---语料库
“20000 leagues under the sea”《海底两万里》
1. 我还记得我是怎么获救的。
I still remembered hw I gt rescued.
Be/get rescued
2. 我在南瓜里面焦急的快不能呼吸了。
I can’t breath in the pumpkin with anxiusness.
The air inside the hllw vegetable was full f my anxius breath.
The hllw vegetable
3. 当看到发生了什么，焦急又害怕，妈妈放下手机，向我走来。
When my mther see what happened, she laied dwn her phne, and walked twards me, anxiusly and fearfully.
Upn seeing what had happened, verwhelmed with anxiety and fear, mm laid dwn her phne and apprached twards me in a flash.
Upn seeing what had happened
laid dwn her phne
4. “不要用尽你的氧气！“她喊道，把我的头进一步推进南瓜里，这样她就可以伸进去解开我头上的橡皮筋。
“Dn’t use up all yur xygen!” she shuted, and push my head farther int the pumpkin s that she culd reach in and und my rubber band.
“Dn’t use up all yur xygen!” she cried, pushing my head farther int the pumpkin s that she culd reach in and und my rubber band.
Push ne’s head farther int
und my rubber band
5. 只有当妈妈给我留出足够的空间时，我才成功地走出困境，尽管我的下巴和鼻子都很痛。
When mm spared enugh space fr me, I manage t get ut f it successfully, thugh my chin and nse were full f pain.
Only when mm spared enugh space fr me did I manage t get ut f it successfully, thugh my chin and nse were full f pain.
my chin and nse were full f pain
manage t get ut f
6. “我成功了！”我松了一口气。我14岁的弟弟杰森站在我面前，我才意识到他一直在拍视频。
“I made it!” I let ut a cry f relief. My 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, standing in frnt f me, then I realized he’d been filming the whle time.
“I made it!” I let ut a cry f relief. My 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, standing in frnt f me, it was nly then that I realized he’d been filming the whle time.
let ut a cry f relief
7. 令人惊讶的是，这段视频获得了数十万次的浏览量。
Surprisingly, the vide gained hundreds f thusands f views.
Surprisingly, it became a hit that the vide started racking up hundreds f thusands f views.
T ne’s surprise surprisely
hundreds f thusands f views
started racking up
8. 一开始，当我被认出是视频中的那个人时，我几乎无法控制自己的尴尬。
At the very beginning, I culd hardly cntain my embarrassment when I was recgnized as the ne in the vide.
At the very beginning, hardly culd I cntain my embarrassment when I was recgnized as the ne in the vide.
At the very beginning
cntain my embarrassment
Hardly…when; n sner …than
9. 然而，随着时间的流逝，我的生活又回到了正轨。
Hwever, with time trickling by, my life was back n track.
with time trickling by
Be back n track
10. 尽管万圣节南瓜雕刻是一个家庭传统，但是第二年则是一个更加庄重的节日。
Thugh pumpkin carving at Hallween was a family traditin, the fllwing year was a mre sedate affair.
A family traditin as pumpkin carving at Hallween was, the fllwing year was a mre sedate affair.
pumpkin carving at Hallween
mre sedate affair
11. 每当我想起头被南瓜卡住的那一天，我都忍不住大笑起来。
Whenever I thught abut the day when I gt my head stuck in a pumpkin, I culdn’t help but laugh ut lud.
Whenever I thught abut the day n which I gt my head stuck in a pumpkin, I culdn’t help but laugh ut lud.
culdn’t help but laugh ut lud
12. 我想说我吸取了教训-三思而后行！
I wuld say I learned my lessn —lk befre yu leap!
I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. ________________________ (南瓜舒服地呆在我的肩膀上，不想离开。非谓语动词作状语). Frtunately, I’ve always liked the smell f pumpkins. Dad was called and he gt me t push my head farther int the pumpkin s Jasn culd reach in and und the rubber band rund my pnytail. I managed t pull my head ut and emerged with messy hair and my nse plugged with pulp. ______________________________________ (那时我才知道妈妈全程都录了像。强调句). That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. By the end f that day it had had ver 1,000 views, and by Hallween mrning we had gt phne calls frm TV shws — the vide started getting hundreds f thusands f supprters. ______________________________ (当我走在街上，我会被素不相识的人认出来。时间状语从句、定语从句). The pumpkin als became a minr celebrity. Passersby and trick-r-treaters wuld knck and ask t take selfies with it. ___________________________________________ (虽然尴尬，但是我对自己带给他人的快乐和乐趣感到满足。非谓语动词短语作状语、定语从句).
根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
阅读以下参考范文，学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. The pumpkin rested cmfrtably n my shulders, nt wanting t leave. Frtunately, I’ve always liked the smell f pumpkins. Dad was called and he gt me t push my head farther int the pumpkin s Jasn culd reach in and und the rubber band rund my pnytail. I managed t pull my head ut and emerged with messy hair and my nse plugged with pulp. It was nly then that I realised Mm had been filming the whle time. That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. By the end f that day it had had ver 1,000 views, and by Hallween mrning we had gt phne calls frm TV shws — the vide started getting hundreds f thusands f supprters. When I walked in the street, I was recgnised by peple I’d never met. The pumpkin als became a minr celebrity. Passersby and trick-r-treaters wuld knck and ask t take selfies with it. Thugh embarrassed, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I had brught t thers.
2021年1月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言
I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. The pumpkin rested cmfrtably n my shulders, nt wanting t leave. Frtunately, I’ve always liked the smell f pumpkins. Dad was called and he gt me t push my head farther int the pumpkin s Jasn culd reach in and und the rubber band rund my pnytail. I managed t pull my head ut and emerged with messy hair and my nse plugged with pulp. It was nly then that I realised Mm had been filming the whle time.
That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. By the end f that day it had had ver 1,000 views, and by Hallween mrning we had gt phne calls frm TV shws — the vide started getting hundreds f thusands f supprters. When I walked in the street, I was recgnised by peple I’d never met. The pumpkin als became a minr celebrity. Passersby and trick-r-treaters wuld knck and ask t take selfies with it. Thugh embarrassed, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I had brught t thers.
检测一下你对范文的精彩语言掌握了吗？
Dad was called and he gt me t push my head farther int the pumpkin s Jasn culd reach in and und the rubber band rund my pnytail. (Para. 1)【译文】爸爸被叫了过来，他让我把头伸向南瓜深处，这样杰森就可以把手伸进去，解开我马尾辫上的橡皮筋。【分析】本句中and连接并列句，s引导结果状语从句。Dad was called、he gt me t push … 和 Jasn culd reach in and und … 三个句子结构紧凑，一气呵成。
I managed t pull my head ut and emerged with messy hair and my nse plugged with pulp. (Para. 1) 本句将“我”把头拔出来后的窘样进行了细致的刻画：with messy hair（头发凌乱）和my nse plugged with pulp（鼻子被南瓜瓤堵住）。该描写巧妙地将“我”的糗事与万圣节的主题“恶作剧”结合在一起，从而为下文文章主题的升华做好了铺垫。
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
I was verwhelmed by a feeling f extreme regret. I culdn’t help thinking abut why I came up with such a stupid idea. Jasn suggested calling the fire department. Upn hearing it, Dad rushed … Only when Mm made enugh space fr me did I manage t … My mm was engaged in filming my embarrassing and awkward situatin … Surprisingly, it became a hit gaining hundreds f thusands f views. It created huge interest and received likes and cmments … Cnstant streams f curius peple even came by t take phts with my prized pumpkin. During Hallween, a festival f trick r treat, I tricked myself instead. Undubtedly, it was the mst unfrgettable Hallween thugh I still have n idea whse pumpkin was bigger yet.