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It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs. His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning, Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl. In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit ran in frnt f my hrse. Paragraph 2:We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West. We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
我和父亲开始一场从未有过的旅行。
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
我在叔叔家愉快的度假生活。
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
我和父亲骑马上山,注意环境描写
回答下面几个问题,检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。
Q2: What did the writer want t d the next afternn? Why?
Q1: Where did the writer and his father stay in Albuquerque?
Q3: Did the writer ride by himself?
Q4: What did Uncle Paul remind them befre they set ut?
Q5: Hw did the writer feel n the hrse back?
Very pleased / satisfied.
On Uncle Paul’s farm.
T take a hrse ride. Because he wanted t be cl as well.
N, he didn’t. His father went with him.
Keeping t the track t avid getting lst and returning n time fr supper.
(Para 3) My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. (Para 4) S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains.
研读以下句子,想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索?
There was a river nearby.
The writer and his father were n different hrses.
阅读完材料,试着完成下面的故事山吧!
What did I d?
My dad tk me t Uncle Paul’s farm t experience the farm life.
Seeing Dad and Uncle riding hrses, I wanted t try hrse riding myself.
A little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse …
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark …
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
研读两段给出句,想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索?
Para. 1: Suddenly a little rabbit ran in frnt f my hrse..
Para. 2: We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
Accrding t Para. 2, the writer and his father must have gt lst; if this was the case, hw did they get lst? Where did the hrses carry them? Hw did they feel abut and deal with the situatin?
Did they eventually make it back t the farm huse? Hw?
Paragraph 1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. _______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 : We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. _______________________________________________________________________
表明上一段我们应该是追兔子然后迷路了。
本段应该续写如何找到回去的路。
根据括号中的提示,补出范文缺失的部分,并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的问题。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. _________________________ _____________________________________(我的马受到惊吓跑了起来,速度之快超出了我的想象。s … that …倒装句型)I was hlding n as hard as I culd and my dad was trying t keep up with me. My hrse gt ff the track, kept running, and stpped when it reached the river, a beautiful spt. _______________ _____________________________________ (我爸爸说太阳要落山了,我们得离开了,因为他不想我们迷路。并列宾语从句,注意时态)We turned arund t start back but the track was nwhere in sight.
We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. My dad had a great idea t fllw the stars back t the farm huse. I remembered that the Nrth Star was right abve Uncle Paul’s farm huse. We set ff n the lng jurney hme. _________________________________________________ (我脑中充满了怀疑的想法,希望不会遇见饿狼。介词短语作状语)We rde alng the dirt. ____________________(我们骑得像风一样。like做介词)At last we were at the farm huse. I hugged my uncle tightly. After dinner, I was relieved t be safe in my bed.
Paragraph 1 : Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
They were s cute, s we hrsed after it.
The rabbit run quickly.
We lst ur way
The rabbit run away.
Paragraph 2 : We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
We called uncle fr help
But can nt get thrugh, we tried t seek a slutin
we fund the right directin
memrable deeds f rabbit hunting.
1. 它毛茸茸的,有一身漂亮的棕色头发。
It was furry and it had brwn hair.
It was furry with a cat f grgeus brwn hair.
2. 它用它的一对红眼睛看着我,然后开始在前面疾驰。
It lked at me with its red eyes, and the run quickly.
After lking up at me with its pair f red bulbs, it began t scurry ahead.
3. “为什么不把它抓回来交给保罗叔叔呢?他们一定很高兴。”想到这一点,我拼命地骑着马去寻找它。
“Why nt catch it and bring it back t Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.” When I thught this, I rde hard t hunt fr it.
“Why nt catch it and bring it back t Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.” With this thught, I rde hard t hunt fr it.
rde hard t hunt fr
4. 爸爸看到了,只好跟着我。兔子非常敏捷,很快就进入了一片山林。
Dad saw it and had t fllw me. The rabbit was very agile, sn entering a muntain frest.
was very agile
a muntain frest
5. 我们不得不下马,继续追赶,完全忘记了后面的赛道。
We had t get dwn the hrses, cntinued t chase and ttally frgetting the track back.
We had t get dwn the hrses, cntinuing the chase and ttally frgetting the track back.
get dwn the hrses
the track back
6. 尽管我们拼命尝试,但兔子最终还是看不见了。
Even thugh we tried desperately, the rabbit was ut f sight in the end.
tried desperately
was ut f sight
7. 然后我们意识到我们在森林深处。
Then we realized we were in the deep part f a frest.
in the deep part f a frest
8. 乌云似乎在天空聚集。
And dark cluds seemed t be gathering in the sky.
gather in the sky
9. 拿出手机,我们很快就发现出了问题:没有信号。没有指南针。
Taking ut the cell phne, we sn fund smething was wrng: n signal. And n cmpass.
10. 我吓坏了,盯着爸爸,试图从他那里寻求解决问题的办法。
I am scared , and I stared at Dad, trying t seek a slutin fr the truble frm him.
Frightened, I stared at Dad, trying t seek a slutin fr the truble frm him.
a slutin fr the truble
dadUncle Paulfarm huseriverfeedsheeplatetrackgt lstsight
Wh When WhereWhat
10 key wrds
dad; Uncle Paul; sheep
feed; gt lst; sight
farm huse; river; track
Predict the develpment
rich, accurate, cherent(连贯的)
Requirements fr writing
Para.1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
What: feed; gt lst; sight
Where: farm huse; river; track
Finish the stry
Wh: dad; Uncle Paul; sheep
≥5 key wrdsLgical plt3.Apprpriate transitinal wrds4. Rich and accurate language5. Neat handwriting.
Requirements
The language f the given text is
A. plain and simple B. cmplicated C. beautiful D. detailed
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. S startled was my hrse that it ran faster than I culd imagine. I was hlding n as hard as I culd and my dad was trying t keep up with me. My hrse gt ff the track, kept running, and stpped when it reached the river, a beautiful spt. My dad said the sun was setting and that we had t leave because he did nt want us t get lst. We turned arund t start back but the track was nwhere in sight. We had n idea where we were and it gt dark. My dad had a great idea t fllw the stars back t the farm huse. I remembered that the Nrth Star was right abve Uncle Paul’s farm huse. We set ff n the lng jurney hme. With dubtful thughts ging thrugh my head, I hped that we wuldn’t see hungry wlves. We rde alng the dirt. We rde like the wind. At last we were at the farm huse. I hugged my uncle tightly. After dinner, I was relieved t be safe in my bed.
阅读以下参考范文,学习范文的精彩表达和亮点表述。
S startled was my hrse that it ran faster than I culd imagine. I was hlding n as hard as I culd and my dad was trying t keep up with me. My hrse gt ff the track, kept running, and stpped when it reached the river, a beautiful spt. My dad said the sun was setting and that we had t leave because he did nt want us t get lst. We turned arund t start back but the track was nwhere in sight.
Para1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
My dad had a great idea t fllw the stars back t the farm huse. I remembered that the Nrth Star was right abve Uncle Paul’s farm huse. We set ff n the lng jurney hme. With dubtful thughts ging thrugh my head, I hped that we wuldn’t see hungry wlves. We rde alng the dirt. We rde like the wind. At last we were at the farm huse. I hugged my uncle tightly. After dinner, I was relieved t be safe in my bed.
2018年6月浙江卷读后续写——逻辑连贯
Para2: We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
2018年6月浙江卷读后续写——精彩语言
检测一下你对范文的亮点语块掌握了吗?
hld n as hard as I culdkeep up withget ff the tracknwhere in sighthave a great idearight abveset ff
尽我所能抓牢赶上偏离路线无处可见有个好主意在正上方出发
阅读下面的补充语料,积累一些续写素材吧!
1. The hrse, frightened by the rabbit, began t race ….2. Startled by the sudden incident, the hrse sped ff the track in anther directin.3. Frightened as I was just a few minutes earlier, I was happy that I gt a chance t see such a place.4. S immersed in the charm f nature was I that I frgt …5. It was at dusk that we realized we were in the deepest part f the frest.6. We had left the track and we did nt have a cmpass, the last thing we wanted t lead us t find ur way hme in the dark.7. I managed t fight back the tears.8. The darkness swallwed everything and nly presented hpelessness t us.9. It was cmpletely dark except fr the faint light given ff by a few stars.10. After a while, we heard the familiar sund f sheep and caught sight f the farm huse.
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