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历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled (骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday. Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac’s bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase (追赶). Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wlf’s teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh. At this mment, Paul and Becky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn’t think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. __________________________________________________________________________A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.___________________________________________________________________
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
事件：Mac的同伴要修自行车， Mac一个人独自骑车回家。
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
故事的发生：骑行途中遇到了狼。
情绪描写，环境描写以及后面的董总描写都突出了Mac害怕以及和狼勇敢地作斗争的情形。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t shw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.At this mment, Pauland Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
Mac继续和狼作斗争。
故事的转折：Mac能否成功逃脱？
Q1: Wh was Mac cycling with?
Q4: Wh did Mac recall when he was cycling alne?
Q3: What happened at the critical mment?
Q5:What did Mac d t stp the wlf frm chasing?
Q2: Why did Mac separate frm his friends?
Tw f his friends.
One f his friends’ bicycle was brken. They stpped t repair it.
His wife and tw yung daughters.
He fired the bear spray.
Paul and Becky drve by and nticed Mac.
根据短文内容，回答下列问题。
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him…
Mac cycled t Alaska with his friends n a warm July afternn.
Mac carried n with his rad trip while his tw friends stpped t make a bicycle repair.
Mac fired spray at the chasing wlf but didn’t stp it. At the critical mment he heard a large vehicle behind him.
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived…
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
Mac was cycling frm hme t Alaska with his friends.
Mac fught against the wlf twice but f little help.
Mac heard a large vehicle behind him and he pulled in frnt f it.
Mac sensed he was chased by a wlf.
Paul and Becky drve by and witnessed Mac’s desperate situatin .
Mac tried t escape, nly t meet a steep uphill climb.
Mac pedaled alng alne, enjying the breath-taking scenery.
Para1: The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
Para2：A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
Q1: What might happen as sn as the car stpped? Did Mac rush t get int the car? Did he make it easily? Or did smene get ut f the car?
Q3: What did Mac d n seeing his friends (the ther tw cyclists)? What came in sight f his friends after they arrived?
原文画线单词可用于回答上述哪个问题？其中动词适用于哪一段情节？人物会产生怎样的互动？
Q2: Hw did the wlf react t what just happened? Did it give up and run away?
Q4: What were Mac’s feelings after the incident? Did he and his friends cntinue their cycling trip? What can be a prper ending?
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Paragraph 1 ： The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived._______________________________________________________________________
本段应该是Mac跳上车逃脱狼的追捕的过程。
表明上一段落狼可能没有离开，这一段应该续写两个男孩加入一起对抗狼。
Paragraph 1 ： The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
Mac jumped ff his bicycle.
He went t the car.
The wlf caught up.
Mac used spray and ran t the car and climbed in.
Paragraph 2 ： A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
They were shcked.
They thrw meat t the wlf.
The wlf ran int the wds.
They eventually get rid f the wlf.
1. 麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门。
Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car.
rushed t the dr f the car
2. 但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就追上了，扑了上去。
But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack.
jumped t attack
3. 幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了麦克。
Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time.
4. 看到狼退后，保罗迅速打开车门，受惊的人很快爬上车，重重地关上身后的车门。
Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily.
unlcked the dr
climbed int the car in n time
5. 贝西从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车上，好像那是一场杀戮。
Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill.
lked ut f the back windw
as if it were a kill
6. 不久，那只动物跑了。
Sn after, the animal ran ff.
7. 他们对所见的感到震惊，于是加入保罗的行列。
They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul.
Be shcked at
8. 麦家的一个朋友挑出一些生肉扔给了狼。
One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf.
9. 狼对得到的东西很满意，就跑进了树林。
The wlf was satisfied with what he gt, and he ran int the wds.
Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds.
10. 麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“你停下来救我，我真是太感谢你了，我还活着，这都归功于你。”
Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.”
11. 由于麦克受伤，这三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家。
Because Mac was injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
the rest f their jurney
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac （跳下）his bike and （冲向）the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He （绕到） t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t （爬进）the pen windw. Paul quickly （锁上） the dr, and the frightened man （跳进去）, （狠狠关上）the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal （跑掉）. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac （下车）the car and （拥抱） his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After （告别）t Paul and Becky, Mac （捡起） his bicycle, and the three men （继续） their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ （踩踏板） dwn the rad, Mac （靠边停车）and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bike and dashed fr the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He ran arund t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t climb thrugh the pen windw. Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing verMac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac emerged frm the car and hugged his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky, Mac retrieved his bicycle, and the three men resumed their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ pedaling dwn the rad, Mac pulled ver and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。
范文赏析——生动的语言
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bike and dashed fr the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He ran arund t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t climb thrugh the pen windw. Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac emerged frm the car and hugged his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky, Mac retrieved his bicycle, and the three men resumed their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ pedaling dwn the rad, Mac pulled ver and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bike and dashed fr the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He ran arund t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t climb thrugh the pen windw. Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac emerged frm the car and hugged his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky, Mac retrieved his bicycle, and the three men resumed their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ pedaling dwn the rad, Mac pulled ver and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
连续使用很急的动词生动表现Mac的求生欲望
jump ff his bikedash fr climb thrugh the pen windw dive inshrtly afterrun ffkeep in ne anther’s sight line pull ver
carry n catch up with t sb.’s relief tear int his flesh
追上继续撕烂他的皮肉让人感到欣慰的是
冲向跳进去不久之后从他的自行车上跳下来在同伴的视线范围内从开着的窗户爬进去让人靠边停车跑开
检测一下你对原材料和范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
Out f the car came Paul and Becky.Mac gt ff the bicycle and jumped int the car.One man tk ut a metal bar frm the car at nce and started t fight with the wlf.The wlf jumped up, and rushed twards ne f them, but was beaten back.Seeing that it culdn’t win, the wlf ran dwn the hill.Wandering fr a while, the wlf left.At the sight f the scene, they became aware f what had happened.They were shcked at what they saw, a brken bicycle and wrn-ut Mac.Mac explained what happened t him and intrduced his new friends t them.Meanwhile, they expressed their great regret fr Mac and thanked Paul and Becky.They asked whether Mac had been injured and cmfrted their cmpanin.“I wuld be caught by the wlf withut yur help,” Mac said in a grateful vice.
阅读下面的补充语料，积累一些续写素材吧！
历年高考英语读后续写真题分析
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled (骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday. Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him. Mac’s heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac’s bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase (追赶). Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wlf’s teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh. At this mment, Paul and Becky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn’t think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. __________________________________________________________________________A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.___________________________________________________________________
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled(骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
事件：Mac的同伴要修自行车， Mac一个人独自骑车回家。
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn't a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.Mac's heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac's bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
故事的发生：骑行途中遇到了狼。
情绪描写，环境描写以及后面的董总描写都突出了Mac害怕以及和狼勇敢地作斗争的情形。
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t shw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he'd be easy caught up and the wlf's teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.At this mment, Pauland Beeky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn't think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
Mac继续和狼作斗争。
故事的转折：Mac能否成功逃脱？
Q1: Wh was Mac cycling with?
Q4: Wh did Mac recall when he was cycling alne?
Q3: What happened at the critical mment?
Q5:What did Mac d t stp the wlf frm chasing?
Q2: Why did Mac separate frm his friends?
Tw f his friends.
One f his friends’ bicycle was brken. They stpped t repair it.
His wife and tw yung daughters.
He fired the bear spray.
Paul and Becky drve by and nticed Mac.
根据短文内容，回答下列问题。
阅读完材料，试着完成下面的故事山吧！
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him…
Mac cycled t Alaska with his friends n a warm July afternn.
Mac carried n with his rad trip while his tw friends stpped t make a bicycle repair.
Mac fired spray at the chasing wlf but didn’t stp it. At the critical mment he heard a large vehicle behind him.
A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived…
2. Build-up
4. Reslutin
Mac was cycling frm hme t Alaska with his friends.
Mac fught against the wlf twice but f little help.
Mac heard a large vehicle behind him and he pulled in frnt f it.
Mac sensed he was chased by a wlf.
Paul and Becky drve by and witnessed Mac’s desperate situatin .
Mac tried t escape, nly t meet a steep uphill climb.
Mac pedaled alng alne, enjying the breath-taking scenery.
Para1: The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
Para2：A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
Q1: What might happen as sn as the car stpped? Did Mac rush t get int the car? Did he make it easily? Or did smene get ut f the car?
Q3: What did Mac d n seeing his friends (the ther tw cyclists)? What came in sight f his friends after they arrived?
原文画线单词可用于回答上述哪个问题？其中动词适用于哪一段情节？人物会产生怎样的互动？
Q2: Hw did the wlf react t what just happened? Did it give up and run away?
Q4: What were Mac’s feelings after the incident? Did he and his friends cntinue their cycling trip? What can be a prper ending?
研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线索？
Paragraph 1 ： The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2 ： A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived._______________________________________________________________________
本段应该是Mac跳上车逃脱狼的追捕的过程。
表明上一段落狼可能没有离开，这一段应该续写两个男孩加入一起对抗狼。
Paragraph 1 ： The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him.
Mac jumped ff his bicycle.
He went t the car.
The wlf caught up.
Mac used spray and ran t the car and climbed in.
Paragraph 2 ： A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived.
They were shcked.
They thrw meat t the wlf.
The wlf ran int the wds.
They eventually get rid f the wlf.
1. 麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门。
Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car.
rushed t the dr f the car
2. 但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就追上了，扑了上去。
But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack.
jumped t attack
3. 幸运的是，魔法喷雾第三次救了麦克。
Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time.
4. 看到狼退后，保罗迅速打开车门，受惊的人很快爬上车，重重地关上身后的车门。
Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily.
unlcked the dr
climbed int the car in n time
5. 贝西从后窗往外看，看见狼站在麦克的自行车上，好像那是一场杀戮。
Bechy lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill.
lked ut f the back windw
as if it were a kill
6. 不久，那只动物跑了。
Sn after, the animal ran ff.
7. 他们对所见的感到震惊，于是加入保罗的行列。
They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul.
Be shcked at
8. 麦家的一个朋友挑出一些生肉扔给了狼。
One f Macs friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf.
9. 狼对得到的东西很满意，就跑进了树林。
The wlf was satisfied with what he gt, and he ran int the wds.
Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds.
10. 麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“你停下来救我，我真是太感谢你了，我还活着，这都归功于你。”
Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.”
11. 由于麦克受伤，这三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家。
Because Mac was injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.
the rest f their jurney
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac （跳下）his bike and （冲向）the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He （绕到） t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t （爬进）the pen windw. Paul quickly （锁上） the dr, and the frightened man （跳进去）, （狠狠关上）the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal （跑掉）. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac （下车）the car and （拥抱） his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After （告别）t Paul and Becky, Mac （捡起） his bicycle, and the three men （继续） their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ （踩踏板） dwn the rad, Mac （靠边停车）and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
根据汉语提示补充范文中的动词或短语动词，使情节连贯，衔接合理。
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bike and dashed fr the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He ran arund t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t climb thrugh the pen windw. Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing verMac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac emerged frm the car and hugged his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky, Mac retrieved his bicycle, and the three men resumed their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ pedaling dwn the rad, Mac pulled ver and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
找出回答“首句精研”中问题的句子，注意题目中画线单词出现的语境。
范文赏析——生动的语言
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bike and dashed fr the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He ran arund t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t climb thrugh the pen windw. Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac emerged frm the car and hugged his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky, Mac retrieved his bicycle, and the three men resumed their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ pedaling dwn the rad, Mac pulled ver and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bike and dashed fr the back dr f the car. It was lcked. He ran arund t the passenger dr, but it was lcked, t, s he began t climb thrugh the pen windw. Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the dr behind him. Becky lked ut the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bike as if it were a kill. Shrtly after, the animal ran ff. A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac emerged frm the car and hugged his friends. “A wlf chased me. I thught I was ging t die,” Mac tld them. “I thught I wuld never see my wife and my lvely daughters again.” After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky, Mac retrieved his bicycle, and the three men resumed their rad trip, agreeing t keep in ne anther’s sight line. A few miles’ pedaling dwn the rad, Mac pulled ver and cried. “The rest f the trip was amazing, but I had t let that emtin ut.”
连续使用很急的动词生动表现Mac的求生欲望
jump ff his bikedash fr climb thrugh the pen windw dive inshrtly afterrun ffkeep in ne anther’s sight line pull ver
carry n catch up with t sb.’s relief tear int his flesh
追上继续撕烂他的皮肉让人感到欣慰的是
冲向跳进去不久之后从他的自行车上跳下来在同伴的视线范围内从开着的窗户爬进去让人靠边停车跑开
检测一下你对原材料和范文的亮点语块掌握了吗？
Out f the car came Paul and Becky.Mac gt ff the bicycle and jumped int the car.One man tk ut a metal bar frm the car at nce and started t fight with the wlf.The wlf jumped up, and rushed twards ne f them, but was beaten back.Seeing that it culdn’t win, the wlf ran dwn the hill.Wandering fr a while, the wlf left.At the sight f the scene, they became aware f what had happened.They were shcked at what they saw, a brken bicycle and wrn-ut Mac.Mac explained what happened t him and intrduced his new friends t them.Meanwhile, they expressed their great regret fr Mac and thanked Paul and Becky.They asked whether Mac had been injured and cmfrted their cmpanin.“I wuld be caught by the wlf withut yur help,” Mac said in a grateful vice.
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