2022届高考英语三轮复习考前冲刺特训+9.+书面表达

2022届高考英语三轮复习考前冲刺特训

9. 书面表达

◎命题特点及解题技巧

书面表达是对考生语言运用能力进行全面考查的一种综合性测试，它不仅考查考生词汇、语法等基础性的语言知识，更考查考生思考问题的能力、语言组织的能力和语言表达的能力等。

从体裁上看，原来以书信、邮件为主，但2020年Ⅰ卷、Ⅱ卷及新高考卷采用了记叙文、新闻报道，2021年乙卷及新高考卷采用演讲稿和记叙文形式，体现考察形式的多样化，在备考中也要注意通知，倡议书甚至图画作文、说明文和议论文这样的写作体裁。

命题形式上采用提纲式半开放命题形式有简洁的文字提示。 提纲的形式引导学生明确写作要点这种形式也降低了写作难度，让学生有章可循，能在短时间内构思成文。同时也给了学生更多的想象空间，有利于提高作文的灵活性。

题材上与考生的学习和生活密切相关，突出多样性、实用性的特点。常涉及学习、日常活动、人际关系等，特别重视中国元素和传统文化。

   通过研究评分标准与评分原则及历年高分范文，我们发现高分作文有如下特点。

  要写好高考书面表达平时多研究背诵范文素材，可以参考以下六步法进行针对性练习：

◎典型高考真题体悟

【2021·全国甲卷】

假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
   1. 阐明写信事由；

2. 征求建议；

3. 表示感谢。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

◎高考真题解析

解析：审题：三审：人称，时态，题材

人称：第一人称

时态：将来时和一般现在时，

题材：求助信（征求意见）

要点：介绍中国文化给外国朋友，发布在英文网站上，这是班会的内容，因此求助外国友人，征求他们的意见。拓展介绍中国传统文化是难点。

【参考范文】

Dear Chris,

How is everything going? Recently our school is planning to hold a theme class meeting to introduce traditional Chinese cultures, which will be posted on some English websites. Therefore, I’m wondering what kind of traditional Chinese cultures attracts you foreigners most?

As you know, China is one of the four ancient civilizations with more than 5,000 years history and countless profound (博大精深的) cultures. By choosing the cultures that most foreigners are interested in may trigger (引起) more people to learn about Chinese cultures. Our current plan is to introduce traditional Chinese festivals, operas and paper cutting. But that’s not our final decision, which is why I’m writing to you.

Looking forward to your early reply and any suggestion is welcome. Thanks in advance.

Yours

Li Hua

◎高考真题及仿真题专项练习

A

【2021·全国乙卷】

你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：

1.分析优势与不足:

2.提出学习建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.题目和首句已为你写好。

Online learning is an important way to study recently.______________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

B

【2021·全国新高考1卷】

你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1. 读报的经历； 

2. 喜爱的栏目；  

3. 期望和祝福。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

C

【2020·全国高考1卷】

你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：

1. 人物简介；

2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。

注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。

The Person I respect

There are many respectable people around us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

D

【2020·全国高考II卷】

  上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括:

1. 农场情况；

2. 采摘过程；

3. 个人感受

注意:1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。

My Weekend

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

E

【2020·全国全国新高考卷】

假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括:

1. 参加人员:

2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下:

3. 活动反响。

注意:

1. 写作词数应为80左右:

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

A Cross-Country Running Race

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

◎答案解析

A

【参考范文】

Online learning is an important way to study recently. But how to become smart learners should become our high priority.

Undoubtedly,online learning can become mainstreamed for its obvious advantages such as easily accessible resources, the low cost and great convenience, which contribute to high study efficiency. Besides, current pandemic necessitates online learning when necessary. However, long screen time can do much harm to our eyesight, not to mention many online distractions especially for those lacking self-control.

Therefore,we are expected to be smart online learner by sensibly managing our

time online and doing eye exercises regularly. Most importantly, it takes self-discipline to resist all the distraction online towards a smart online learner.

B

【参考范文】

Youth and Me

To begin with, I’d like to express my sincerest congratulations on the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH.

Since it was founded, YOUTH has been popular with many students including me, a regular reader of YOUTH. The paper’s broad content and rich knowledge have not only widened my horizons but also given me much enjoyment. I am fond of all its columns, but what impressed me most is culture, where I can read humorous stories, poems, fictions and so on to improve my oral English. 

 Hopefully Youth will record more stories of positive energy and inspire more students in the next 10 years!

 C

【参考范文】

The Person I respect

There are many respectable people around us. Among them, our English teacher is regarded as my favourite one.

To begin with, my English teacher is a typical charming lady as you can imagine, slim figure(身材), fair skin(白皙的皮肤) as well as infectious (有感染力的)beautiful smile. But most importantly, far behind her outstanding appearance, it is her fabulous(极好的) teaching ability and empathetic feature(同理心的特质) that make her respectable. She has a talent for teaching, always making her class lively. Following her steps, we can learn English with great pleasure while receiving good grades. Meanwhile, she is the one that you can rely on, can turn to and can share everything with. She is not only a respectable teacher who does huge benefit to you, but also a lifetime friend you ought to cherish.

That is my English teacher, my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life. 

 D

【参考范文】

My Weekend

Last weekend, our class took part in/participated in an interesting picking activity on a modern farm, which turned out to be(证明是/结果是) extremely fruitful and meaningful. (总述事情的时间、地点、人物、事件)

The farm is far from the city, so we set off at 6:00 am, and it took us around/about two hours to get there by bus. On/Upon arriving at the farm（一到达农场）, what came into sight （进入眼帘的东西）were varieties of（各种各样的） fresh vegetables and fruit trees. Then we were divided into(被分成) two groups for a picking competition. One group was responsible for（负责） picking tomatoes and the other was in charge of(负责) picking apples. After one and a half hours’ hard work, both groups picked/harvested(收获) a lot, with our group being the winner.（with的复合结构表伴随结果）（农场情况和采摘过程及结果）

Tired as we were, we had great fun and a sense of achievement. Through this activity, we have a better understanding of how hard the farmers are and how precious/valuable the food is. Therefore, we should treasure/value the food and make efforts to make the world better.（个人感受）

 E

【参考范文】

A Cross-Country Running Race

Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. (总述时间、地点、人物事件)

The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessarily help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions (四面八方). (参加人员、比赛线路及比赛过程)

The activity was spoken highly of/thought highly of（高度评价），which turned out to be a great success. Not only does it build up our body, but also enriches our school life. (活动反响及意义)