读后续写之巧用动作链+学案-2022届高三英语二轮复习

这是一份读后续写之巧用动作链+学案-2022届高三英语二轮复习，共5页。学案主要包含了巧用动作链等内容，欢迎下载使用。

在描写动作时，要学会细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作（2-3个动作）形成动作链，写出动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感，使人物更立体。其本质就是避免简单粗暴的使用一个动词概括整个动作，而是用2-3个动词给合进行描述。
句式3：主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C （三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）
示意停车=看到车+走到路中间+扬手
He lked up at the car, stepped int the rad, and held up a hand t stp me.
他一抬头看到我的车，便走到路中央，扬手示意我停车。
练能生巧：用括号内动词的正确形式，结合语境补全句子构成动作链。
仿写1：上车=拦车+上车+告诉目的地
He________ the taxi, ________in with the suitcase and________ the driver, “G t the plice statin, please.” （tell, jump,stp)
仿写2：抱住儿子=冲向前+蹲下+一把抱住
She ________ frward, ____________ and________ her sn int her arms.( kneel dwn下跪, gather, dash冲)
仿写3：歌手唱歌=扫视观众+深吸一口气+开始演唱
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仿写4：孩子跳进湖里嬉戏=孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进水里。
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仿写5: 妈妈给钱那个可怜人=打开钱包+取出钱+递给可怜人
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句式4：句子+ing/ed, 或者ing/ed+句子（使用条件：凸显同一逻辑主语，主动或被动，表示动作伴随，原因或结果）
1、Putting his ladder against the wall, he climbed and peered ver.《秘密花园》
他把梯子靠在墙边，爬上去往外看。
2、老人静坐=坐在夕阳下+看报纸+听广播
The ld man sat under the sunset, reading the newspaper and listening t the radi.
练能生巧：用括号内动词的正确形式，结合语境补全句子构成动作链。
仿写1：I _________ the telephne and __________, _________.(put dwn, shake, sit dwn)
仿写2：_________ me crying luder and luder, she silently____________ a pack f napkin and_________ t me.( pull ut f, hand, see)
仿写3：他站起身来，走到窗前，苦思冥想。(stand up, walk, think)
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翻译巩固（每日三题）
他穿上外套，怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。(put n,strm ut, slam the dr shut)
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Lrna 走到窗前，打开窗子，抬头望向星空。
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她拿起照片，盯着看了一会儿，然后小心翼翼地放进相册里。(pick up, stare at, place)
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她和妈妈吵了一架，然后生气地跑出房子外。
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我毫不犹豫地抓起我的暖和外套，匆匆走向那个家伙。
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(2021全国I卷)爸爸拍拍他们的头，告诉他们不要担心。
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第二天一早，我们收拾好装备，沿着海岸出发了。（pack up, set ff)
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她轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀，然后说再见。
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听到他的声音，Kent沉默了。
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听到这个消息，她妈妈笑了，轻轻拍了一下她的背。
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父亲拍着我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃自己的梦想。
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她站在一个摊子(stand.n)旁边，看着一个中年人忙着做事情。
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_________________________________(看到我的女儿安全到达)，I rested my heavy n the sfa.
她和妈妈一起在收银台(checkut stand)等着，她看到一串闪亮的珍珠项链挂在一个粉红色的金属盒子里。
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看到这么可怕的景象，我能感觉到背后的寒意。
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低头看着熊，我们发现它在吃我们刚做的面包。
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看着孩子的背影，大卫如释重负地哭了。
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看到他, cnry 太太很困惑。
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看到一辆车正在靠近，她激烈地挥手，希望能搭上车。(wave vilently, get a ride)
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想到他会让他妹妹失望，阿里忍不住哭了。
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我们绝望地站在那里，不知道下一步该怎么办。
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我睡在床上，想知道我还能不能再见到我的孩子们。
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Spt看起来病了，懒洋洋地躺着，不愿意动。
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我很震惊，说话声音很低，有点犹豫。(in a lw vice, with hesitatin)
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他向他父亲道歉，乞求他父亲原谅他的不良行为。
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简感到很失望，又一个人待了一晚。
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现在感觉更强壮了，简开始沿着小溪走，希望它能把她带到湖边。
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他们站在空旷的路边，仰望天空，感受着珍贵的平静。
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二、巧用动作链
仿写1：He stpped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and tld the driver, “G t the plice statin, please.”
仿写2：She dashed frward,knelt dwn and gathered her sn int her arms.
仿写3：The singer glanced at the audience, tk a deep breath and began t sing.
仿写4: The children rushed excitedly t the lake, tk ff their clthes and jumped int the water. 孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进水里。
仿写5: 给钱=打开钱包+取出钱+递给可怜人
My mm pened the purse, tk ut five dllars and handed it t the pr man.
仿写1：I put dwn the telephne and sat dwn, shaking.
仿写2：Seeing me crying luder and luder ,she silently pulled ut f a pack f napkin and handed t me.
仿写3：He std up ,walked t the windw and thught hard.
He std up and walked t the windw,thinking hard.
翻译巩固。（每日三题）
He put n his cat, strmed ut and slammed the dr shut.
Lrna came t the windw, pened it and lked ut up at the night sky.
She picked up the pht, stared at it fr a while and placed it carefully int the album.
She had a quarrel with her mther and ran ut f the huse with anger.
Withut hesitatin, I grabbed my warm cat and hurried t the guy.
The father patted their heads, telling them nt t wrry.
Early next mrning,we packed up the equipment and set ff alng the cast.
She patted me n the shulder gently and saying gdbye t me.
Hearing his vice, Kent became silence.
Hearing the news ,her mther smiled, patting her back gently.
My father patted me n the shulder, encuraging me never t give up my dreams.
She std beside a stand , watching a middle-aged man busy ding his business.
Seeing my daughter arrive safely, I rested my heavy n the sfa.
Waiting with her mther at the checkut stand, she saw a necklace f shining pearls in a pink mental bx.
Seeing such terrible sight, I culd tell a cldness flding frm my back.
Lking dwn at the bear,we fund that he was eating the bread that we just made.
Lking at the back f the child, David cried with relief.
Catching sight f him, Mrs.Cnry was cnfused.
Seeing a car appraching, she waved vilently, hping t get a ride
Thinking he wuld let his sister dwn, Ali culdn’t help sbbing.
We std there hpelessly, wndering what t d next.
I slept n the bed, wndering if I wuld ever be able t see my children again.
Spt lked sick,lying lazily and unwilling t mve.
I was shcked, speaking in a lw vice with hesitatin.
He made an aplgy t his father, begging his father t frgive his bad behavir.
Feeling hpeless, Jane stayed alne fr anther night.
Feeling strnger nw,Jane walked alng the stream, hping that it wuld lead her t the lake.
Standing beside the empty rad, they lked up int the sky, feeling the precius peace frm within