专题08 申请信-备战2022年新高考英语写作全攻略

新高考英语写作全攻略

专题08 申请信

申请信主要是工作或入学申请，你想要得到一个工作的职位或是想要得到一个学习的机会，你写信去申请，这种写作的实质是对自己的推荐，即自荐信。

Sample Model 01

[2012全国]假如你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)；

2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)；

3.希望获准。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

思维过程

第一段：背景呈现(自我介绍＋说明写信的目的)

[1]我是李华，我是来自中国的一个中学生。

I am Li Hua, and I am a middle school student from China.

[2]我从互联网的得知一个消息，消息的内容是一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营。

I learn a message from the Internet, and the message is that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore.

[3]我对此很感兴趣。

I am interested in it.

[1]从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡举办夏令营，我是李华，一个来自中国的中学生，我很感兴趣。*

Learning from the Internet that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it.

[*开头设计Learning from+获得消息处that+消息内容，I，姓名，身份，VO.]

第二段：个人介绍＋参加意图

[2]我爱英语，并学习很多年了。我希望能和不同国家的学生交流。

I love English, and I have learned English for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries.

[2]我爱英语，并学习很多年了。我希望能和不同国家的学生交流。

I am so keen on English and I have been learning it for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries.

[*love可以用be (so)keen on替换。很多完成时have done可以根据句意替换成现在完成进行时have been doing。]

[3]夏令营欢迎各国学生参加，我想参加。

Students from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in it.

[*want to do可以用 intend to do或be eager to do替换。]

[4]如果我被接受成为其中一员，我就可以给其他学生介绍中国，并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。

     If I am accepted as a member of your summer camp, I can tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.

[4]只有我成为其中一员，我才能给其他学生介绍中国，并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。

Only when I am accepted as a member of your summer camp can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.

Sentence VII. Only+状语/状语从句＋一般疑问句  (参见邀请信设计模块)

                 Only when+ SVO can you/we/they +VO*

第三段：希望获准

[5]如果我很快收到您的回复，我将不胜感激。*

I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon. *

[*I would appreciate it if +SVO. 如果+SVO，我将不胜感激。]

完整设计                

Dear Sir or Madam,

Learning from the Internet that you’ll have a summer camp in Singapore, I, Li Hua, a middle school student from China, am interested in it.

I am so keen on English and I have been learning it for 10 years. I desire that I can communicate with students from different countries. Students from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in it. Only when I am accepted as a member of your summer camp can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.

I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon.

Regards,

Li Hua

Sample Model 02

第30届夏季奥运会将于2012年7月27日在英国伦敦举行。伦敦奥组委现在面向世界招募志愿者。假设你是李华，一名高三学生，你有意参加此项活动。请你给奥组委写封信，根据以下要点简要陈述你应聘的理由：

     1.你的爱好：喜欢体育活动；

2.你的特长：擅长英语；

3.你的有利条件：高考结束后，你有足够的时间；

4.其他理由。

     提示词：伦敦奥组委the London Olympic Organizing Committee

            高考the College Entrance Examination

思维过程

第一段：背景呈现(自我介绍＋说明写信的目的)

[1]从伦敦奥组委得知他们面向全世界招募志愿者，我是李华，一名高三学生，我想参加此项活动。

Learning from the London Olympic Organizing Committee that they need volunteers from all over the world, I, Li Hua, a student in grade three in senior high school from China, am interested in becoming one of them.

第二段：个人介绍＋参加意图

[2]首先，我特别喜欢体育活动，特别是台球。

First and foremost, I am so keen on sports, especially table tennis.

[3]其次，我爱英语，并学习很多年了。

Besides, I am an expert in English, and I have been learning it for 8 years.

[4]最后，在高考结束后，我会有足够的时间来当一名志愿者。

Last but not least, I will have enough time to serve as a volunteer after taking the College Entrance Examination in June.

[5]来自不同国家的人都很受欢迎，所以我也很想参加这个活动。

People from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in the activity.

[6]只有当我被接受成为一名志愿者，我才能给其他人介绍中国，并了解其他国家的不同文化和风俗。

Only when I am accepted as a volunteer can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.

第三段：希望获准

[7]如果我很快收到您的回复，我将不胜感激。

I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon.

完整设计                   

Dear Sir or Madam,

    Learning from the London Olympic Organizing Committee that they need volunteers from all over the world, I, Li Hua, a student in grade three in senior high school from China, am interested in becoming one of them.

    First and foremost, I am so keen on sports, especially table tennis. Besides, I am an expert in English, and I have been learning it for 8 years. Last but not least, I will have enough time to serve as a volunteer after taking the College Entrance Examination in June. People from different countries are welcome, so I’m eager to join in the activity. Only when I am accepted as a volunteer can I tell them the lives of China and learn about different cultures and customs of their countries.

    I would appreciate it if I receive your reply soon.

  Yours truly,

Li Hua

Sample Model 03

假设你是李华，是ABC大学的一名新生。你打算申请助学贷款，请你根据下列提示，写一篇介绍自己情况的文章。内容要至少包含以下几点：1.你的基本情况；2.你申请贷款的原因、数额及用途；3.你的还贷计划。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

思维过程

第一段：自我介绍＋说明写信的目的＋表达愿望

[1]我是李华，是ABC大学的一名新生。

My name is Li Hua, a freshman at ABC University.

[2]我写信申请一份学生助学贷款，希望我的情况能够满足贷款的要求。

I am writing to submit an application for a student loan, expecting that my situation can meet the requirements of applying for the loan.

第二段：申请原因＋个人条件介绍＋后期计划

[3]我很自豪地成为我们村的第一个大学生。

I am proud enough to be the first university student in my village.

[4]但是学费给我的家庭带来了很大的压力。

But the tuition has exerted great pressure on my family.

[5]我的父母都是下岗工人。

My parents are both laid-off workers.

[6]这将超出他们的能力去支持我读完大学。

It will be beyond their ability to support me through my college years.

[7]我渴望通过助学贷款来减轻他们的负担，我将通过自己的努力来偿还。

I am eager to reduce their burden by getting a student loan, which I will repay through my own efforts.

[8]我会努力去获得奖学金，并且在业余时间找兼职工作。

I will endeavor to win a scholarship and look for part-time jobs in my spare time.

[9]我保证五年内还清贷款。

I guarantee that I will pay off the loan within five years.

第三段：表达愿望＋盼望回复

[10]如果我的申请被考虑的话，我将不胜感激。请尽早给我一个反馈。*

I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account. Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience.

完整设计               

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua, a freshman at ABC University. I am writing to submit an application for a student loan, expecting that my situation can meet the requirements of applying for the loan.

I am proud enough to be the first university student in my village. But the tuition has exerted great pressure on my family. My parents are both laid-off workers. It will be beyond their ability to support me through my college years. I am eager to reduce their burden by getting a student loan, which I will repay through my own efforts. I will endeavor to win a scholarship and look for part-time jobs in my spare time. I guarantee that I will pay off the loan within five years.

    I would appreciate it if my application is taken into account. Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua