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备战2022高考英语写作专题复习之申请信

目录	内容
Part A	题目呈现
Part B	谋篇布局短语句式罗列	解析题目内容；确定行文要点
		罗列关键词以及必备表达
		话题词汇写作储备
		句式升级美化
Part C	写作模板总结
Part D	学生作文点评范文赏析	学生习作点评
		学生习作美化升级
Part E	课后练笔巩固提升

Part A 题目呈现

假如你是李明；你想要通过希望工程为偏远山区的失学孩子提供金融资助；就此给相关部门写一封信

1：要求帮忙找到合适的资助人选

2：确定人选计划

3：明确如何实施援助计划

Part B 谋篇布局以及短语句式罗列

1：解析题目内容；确定行文要点

题目信息解读	指令关键词	要点归纳
规定应用文类型为书信	Write a letter	1.题目要求写一封信，书信格式需完整; 2.收信人为相关工作人员,用词需要客气、正式; 3.信的内容必须包括:说出自己希望捐助一名偏远地区的失学儿童,介绍如何实施经济援助，请求对方给自己找到合适人选。
揭示收信人身份为相关工作人员	to the department concerned
规定信件内容:要求帮助寻找到合适人选、确定人选要求、明确如何实施援助计划	asking them to help find a candidate specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan
提供内容线索:说明人选应该为偏远地区的失学儿童	Project Hope a child in a remote area
提供内容线索:说明帮助手段是提供经济资助	offering financial aid

2：罗列关键词以及必备表达

dropout辍学者
Remote area偏远地区
financial assistance经济授助
proper candidate合适人选
Recommend 推荐
finish college=complete college study完成大学学业
recipient of ....的接受者
additionally 额外地
dropout girl 失学女孩
living expenses生活费
remote and poor area=isolated and underdeveloped area偏远贫困地区
contribute to为....做贡献
personal information个人信息
tuition学费

3：写作储备

候选人优点:optimistic乐观，hardworking刻苦，industrious勤劳, modest谦逊, cultured/ refined有教养,kind-hearted善良,honest诚实，easy going随和, intelligent聪明

资助计划:pay one's tuition and provide living expenses 提供学费和生活费, provide money to buy books and stationery提供买书和文具的钱:

[常用表达]

1.开头语;

I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to...我写这封信想有机会...

I'm writing to ask if it is possible for you to...我写这封信是想知道您是否能....

2.主体陈述

1hopeyoucould...我希望您能够.....

If it is convenient, could you.. ?如果方便的话，您能....吗?

3.结束语

Your favorable consideration of this matter will be greatly appreciated.如果您能考虑我的事务，我将感激不尽。

4：句式升级美化

①写出简单句

我写信想问一个问题.

I am writing to ask a question.

你能推荐一个孩子吗？

Can you recommend a child?

这个孩子可以得到我的经济援助。

The child can receive my financial assistance.

②利用衔接词将简单句整合

我写信是想问你是否可以推荐一个可以得到我的经济援助的孩子。

I am writing to ask whether you can recommend a child who can receive my financial assistance.

③增加表达精确性和美感

1 am writing to ask whether you can recommend a child as the recipient of my financial assistance.

课堂练习

句子成形步骤:

①写出简单句

我希望能实现我的愿望。

I hope to realize my wish.

我可以为发展偏远地区的教育提供一些帮助。

1 can offer some help to develop education in remote areas.

②利用衔接词将简单句整合

1 hope to realize my wish that I could offer some help to develop education in remote areas.

③增加表达精确性和美感

1 hope you could help me to realize my wish to contribute to educational development in remote areas.

Part C 写作模板总结

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to ask whether you can .

To be specific, I hope_ __.(说明自己的要求) I will and additionally (说明自己所能提供的条件)

I hope you could help me to Please contact me when you .

It would be very helpful if you could . I appreciate your valuable attention and hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Mine

Part D 学生作文点评与范文赏析

作文一

学生作文赏析 (5分)

点评意见

I am writing this letter in purpose ask1 you to help find a candidate accept my financial a aid in a remote area2

My plan is as following.3

Firstly，I will give the tutors until he/ she finishes the normal high education. Secondly， as the information4 is a basic skill in the future, I will give the child a laptop So I hope the chosen child better is interested in the computer .

If you can find such child5, thank you for your kind consideration.

1：表达中式化：改为for the purpose of

2：后置定语调整到修饰名词后

find a candidate in a remote area to accept my financial aid

3：表达形式有误：is as follows

4：意义指代不明确：改为the computer skill is the basic skill

5：单数名词冠词不可少：such a child

作文二

学生作文赏析 (11分)

尝试修改丰富文章句式

Dear Madam or Sir

I want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Please help me to find a candidate. Thank you. I want to help a girl because in remote areas, a girl is harder to go to school than a boy. The girl must be good in study, and assure me

that she will finish her study in the future.

I will pay for her tuition every term and give her some living expenses. Certainly, if she has any other requirements, I will try my best to meet her10 if the demands are reasonable'.

1 am a teacher. I wish every kid could go to school.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

Dear Sir or Madam，

As a teacher, I wish every kid could go to school， so I want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. I especially want to help a girl, because in remote areas a girl has less chance to5 go to school than a boy. The girl must be academically excellent and guarantee to complete her study. I would appreciate it if you could help me to find a proper candidate.

I will pay for her tuition every term and give her some living expenses. In addition，if she has anyone reasonable requirements, I will try my best to meet them

I appreciate your attention and hope to hear from you soon,

Yours

sincerely

范文及译文

范文

译文

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to ask whether you can recommend a child as the recipient of my financial assistance.

To be specific, I hope to help a dropout girl from a remote and poor area in West China. I will take care of her tuition until she finishes college and additionally provide her with 200- yuan living expenses each month.

I hope you could help me to realize my wish to contribute to educational development in remote areas. Please contact me when you find a proper candidate. It would be very helpful if you could send me her photo and personal information. I appreciate your valuable attention and hope to hear from you soon.

Yours sincerely

Li Ming

亲爱的先生或女士

我写信的目的是询问您是否可以推荐一一个孩子作为我经济救助的接受者。

具体地说，我希望资助一名来自中国西部偏远贫困地区的失学女孩。我会负责她直到完成大学学业的全部学费,并且每月还会额外提供给她200元生活费。

我希望你能帮助我实现我对偏远地区的教育发展作出贡献的愿望。在你找到合适的候选人后，请与我联系。如果你能把她的照片和个人信息寄给我会很有帮助。感谢您的关注，希望尽快收到您的来信。

Part E 课后练笔巩固

（A）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你得知故宫正在招聘暑期义务英文讲解员，请你给相关部门负责人写一封申请信，内容包括：

1. 介绍你的基本信息；

2. 说明你的优势；

3. 表示你希望被录用。

注意：

1. 词数不少于50；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam，

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Sincerely，

Li Hua

（B）

假定你是李华，今年暑假一批英国学生到你校参观并游览你所在的城市，学校需要一批志愿者作为导游，你准备应聘。请根据以下提示，写一封申请信。

1. 申请缘由；

2. 你的优势；

3. 旅游建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考答案：

（A）

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned that English volunteer guides for the Forbidden City are wanted in the summer vacation. I am writing to apply for this position.

I’m a Senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School, and I believe I am qualified for the position. These years, I have been on several exchange programs in America, so I am confident with my communication skills in English. What’s more, as a fan of Chinese ancient history, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce the Forbidden City to foreign guests.

（B）

Dear sir or madam,

Having been informed that there will be a group of British students coming to our school during the summer vacation, I feel it an honor to be one of the guides to offer them a pleasant trip, and that’s why I am writing to apply for it.

First of all, I have a good command of English and can speak it fluently, which makes it possible for me to communicate well with them in English. Besides, I am an open-minded boy and fond of making friends, thus equipping myself with good qualities that a guide calls for. Above all, being a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture. Meanwhile, they will get my suggestions on how to get around the city and recommendations on some scenic spots of historical significance, promising the journey an unforgettable memory for the British students.

If given the chance to be a guide, I will spare no efforts to do everything I can. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua