专题03 备战2022高考英语写作专题复习之建议信
展开2022高考英语写作专题复习之建议信
目录 | 内容 | |
Part A | 题目呈现 | |
Part B | 谋篇布局 短语句式罗列 | 解析题目内容;确定行文要点 |
罗列关键词以及必备表达 | ||
话题词汇写作储备 | ||
句式升级美化 | ||
Part C | 写作模板总结 | |
Part D | 学生作文点评 范文赏析 | 学生习作点评 |
学生习作美化升级 | ||
Part E | 课后练笔巩固提升 |
Part A 题目呈现
假如你是李明;在一些地区,限制使用塑料袋的做法并没有那么成功。“白色污染”仍在继续。请你给你当地报纸的编辑写一封信,
1:如实陈述你的意见
2:并提出两三个建议。
Part B 谋篇布局以及短语句式罗列
1:解析题目内容;确定行文要点
题目信息解读 | 指令关键词 | 要点归纳 |
规定应用文类型为书信 | Write a letter | 1.题目要求写一封信,书信格式需完整; 2.收信人为编辑,用词需要客气、正式; 3.信的内容必须包括:2. 收信人为报社编辑,用语要正式; 3.写信内容必须包括:对限塑令在某些地方不成功、白色污染仍然存在的背景介绍和观点陈述;提出相应的建议;注意收信人为报社编辑,并不是问题的直接解决者,提建议时要能顾及收信人的身份。 |
揭示收信人身份为报社编辑 | the editor(s)of your local newspaper | |
规定信件内容:给出自己的看法;并且提出2-3个建议 | 1) give your opinions briefly, 2)make two or three suggestions. | |
提供内容线索:交代所需发表看法的社会问题—限塑令在某些地方效果不明显;白色污染仍然存在 | Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White Pollution” is still going on. |
2:罗列关键词以及必备表达
1:faithful reader忠实读者
2:active reporting of积极报道...... active 可以替换为:enthusiastic, extensive, wide raging
3. social problem社会问题
4. abuse[n.滥用
5. unchanged[ a. ]未改观的
6. environmentally speaking从环境角度说
7. strengthen the control of加强对....的控制[ strengthen可替换为tighten, improve, increase]
8. production and circulation of... .......的生产和流通
9. equally importantly同样重要的是
10. all social sectors社会各界
11. implement the support for 将....的支持落到实处
12. discount [n. ] a reduction in the usual price of sth折扣
13. boycott[v. ]抵制,拒绝使用
14. beautify [v. ]美化
15. attract users from吸.....的使用者使用......
16. call on the public to do sth号召大家做.....
3:写作储备
话题表达补充:问题陈述与解决措施
问题陈述:plastic shopping bag购物塑料袋;plastic bag usage/ consumption塑料袋使用;environmental impact环境影响
解决措施:recycle ..循环使用;use durable cloth bags使用耐用的布包enforce a policy of执行政策; ; introduce levy on /tax..征税;announce a ban on/ forbid/cut back on the use of禁用;press a boycott on/ discourage their disposal抵制
[建议信常用表达]
1:陈述问题
1.I am concerned about...我对.....十分关注。
2.....which was supposed to be solved still exists.应该解决的问题仍然存在。
3.not have desired effects; be not satisfactory/ perfect没有达到理想效果
4.not have obtained the full attention未得到充分重视
5.have harmful/ serious/ negative effects有害严重、负面影响
2:提出可行方案
1.believe; think; suppose;maintain;hold认为
2.make full use of;maximize充分利用
3.minimize; reduce; restrict;avoid减少、限制、避免
4.In my opinion... ;I would like to suggest that. ..我的建议是.....
5.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果....会更有利。
6.I think it would be helpful to.... 我认为...有帮助。
4:句式升级美化
①写出简单句
在一些地区,人们仍在疯狂地使用塑料袋
Plastic bags are still crazily used in some region
你会注意到这个情况的
You will pay attention to the situation
我希望。
I hope it.
②利用衔接词将简单句整合
1 hope that you would pay attention to the situation that plastic bags are sill crazily used in some regions.
③增加表达精确性和美感
I hope you would pay attention to the abuse of plastic bags unchanged in some regions.
④增加衔接成分,连贯上下文
I hope you would also pay attention to the abuse of plastic bags unchanged in some regions.
课堂练习
句子成形步骤:
①写出简单句
我的声音很微小。
My voice is weak.
你可以呼吁公众实施对塑料袋的限制
You can call on the public to carry out the restrictions on plastic bags
②利用衔接词将简单句整合
Since my voice is weak, you can call on the public to carry out the restrictions on plastic bags.
③增加表达精确性和美感
Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope you could call on the public to fulfill the restrictions on...
Part C 写作模板总结
Dear
As a faithful ,I always appreciate 。I hope you would also pay attention to
总述应该实施的行为. To achieve it, the government should 。Equally importantly, all social sectors should .
Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope you could call on the public to
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Part D 学生作文点评与范文赏析
作文一
学生作文赏析 (5分) | 点评意见 |
I am very sorry to trouble with you. But this is a problem annoying with me. It is White Pollution,With the economic growth widely ,white pollution becomes more and more serous.It is harmonious between the men and the nature. The problem can be solved in some ways.First, attitude is everything. We must make everyone aware of this problem. In addition, the acts of pollution must be punishment. I'm looking forward to your reply Yours sincerely, Li Ming
| 1:表达不符合搭配习惯 2:表达不符合搭配习惯 3:中式思维写作;不符合表达习惯 4:主语模糊 5:句式不够高级;表达偏中式 |
作文二
学生作文赏析 (11分) | 尝试修改丰富文章句式 |
Dear editor I am very sorry to disturb you, . but I want to say that the problem of white pollution really annoys met . With the quick economic growth white pollution becomes more and more serious. It harms the harmony between the men and the nature and even threatens the existence of human beings The problem can be solved in some ways. We must first make everyone have a right attitude towards the problem.As it is said “attitude is everything”. In addition, anyone who causes pollution10 must be punished . I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely , Li Ming
| Dear editor, , It’s true that the problem of using plastic bags hasn't been well solved in our daily life. If we are reluctant to take measures to efficiently change this situation, the environment of our city may get worse, which is uneasy to reverse In my opinion, making sure that everyone has the awareness of plastic bag pollution is the most important thing. I also think it is convenient and economical to replace plastic bags with cloth bags Besides, choosing cloth bags is environmentally sound, because if cloth bags are widely used, plastic bags will gradually disappear. I am very grateful that you can read my letter, I hope my advice could help to solve the serious problem, Yours sincerely Li Ming
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范文及译文
范文 | 译文 |
Dear editor, As a faithful reader, I always appreciate your active reporting of the social problems. I hope you would also pay attention to the abuse of plastic bags unchanged in some regions. Environmentally speaking, the usage of plastic bags should be reduced. To achieve it, the government should further strengthen the control of the production and circulation of plastic bags. Equally importantly, all social sectors should implement the support for restrictions. Shops can offer small gifts or discounts to customers who boycott plastic bags. Designers can beautify cloth bags to attract users from plastic bags. Since my own voice is too weak to be herd, I hope could call on the public to fulfill the restrictions on plastic Yours sincerely , Li Ming
| 亲爱的编辑: 作为忠实读者,我一直很感激你们积极报道社会问题的努力。我希望就一些地区仍未改观的滥用塑料袋的现象,你们也会给予关注。 从环境角度说,应该减少塑料袋的使用。为实现此目的,政府应该进一步加强对塑料袋生产和流通的控制。同样重要的是,社会各界应该将对禁塑令的支持落到实处。商家可以向拒绝使用塑料袋的顾客提供小礼物或折扣。设计师可以美化布袋,吸引塑料袋的使用者使用布袋。 因为我个人言论力量有限,希望您能号召大家落实限塑令。 诚挚的, 李明
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Part E 课后练笔巩固
(A)
针对校园浪费粮食的现象,学校将举行以“节约粮食”为主题的倡议活动。假定你是学生会主席,请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封建议书,内容如下:
1. 活动的意义;
2. 具体的做法;
3. 呼吁从我做起,节约粮食。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
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Sincerely,
Li Hua
(B)
假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter所在的林肯中学将举办中国文化周活动,他来信向你寻求活动相关建议。请你给他回信,内容要点包括:
1.活动内容及形式;
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.可能用到的词汇:剪纸paper-cutting;书法calligraphy。
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参考答案:
(A)
Dear fellow students,
Being thrift on food is a Chinese traditional virtue. More importantly, in the time of pandemic and natural disasters, saving food is of vital significance for a country with 1.4 billion people.
The school is to launch a campaign against food waste. Banners will be put up to advocate saving food. As for us students, please don’t order food that we can’t finish. Furthermore, let’s remind each other to clear the plate all the time or pack leftovers home.
Remember, every grain comes after hard toil. Let’s save food and do it from today!
The Students' Union
(B)
Dear Peter,
I'm very glad to learn that a Chinese Culture Week activity will be held in your school. It's a good opportunity for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
First, a paper-cutting exhibition is a good choice. As a traditional Chinese art form, paper-cutting includes different themes such as plants, animals and so on. Additionally, holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest, which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture. What's more, lectures about Chinese history, architecture, poems, or even food, are surely welcome. And a Chinese painting show is always attractive.
I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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