重难点09 应用文提纲类（热点话题）-2022年高考英语【热点·重点·难点】专练（全国通用）

【命题趋势】

书面表达是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识的综合能力，这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题是最令学生头疼的，学生对应用文束手无策，无从下手。因此，在高中阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培养学生的英语书面表达能力是极为重要的。

【满分技巧】

1. 审题

 动笔之前，必须认真审题，分析命题意图。有的考生唯恐时间不够，急于成文，不认真审题，结果写出的文章抓不住重点，杂乱无章，缺乏逻辑性。其实审题的过程是一个思考加工的过程，并不是浪费时间。在审题的过程中，考生可以根据题目确定文章体裁，考虑文章结构，内容。把与题目有关的材料分析、整理加以取舍，这样初步形成这篇文章的大致框架，这在很大程度上关系到整篇文章的成败。

2. 拟提纲抓要点，列提纲。依据格式要求和内容提示，分清主次，理顺关系，抓住要点，列出提纲。因考

   试时间有限，宜用简易英文提纲。

(1)文章的主要要点要有逻辑地结合起来，使其结构严谨，内容连贯，层次分明，分好段落，设计好文章的

   开头和结尾。同时要有意在句子之间使用一些过渡性词语(比如表示因果、条件、时间等逻辑关系的词汇

   或结构)。高考高分作文的共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，意思连贯，给人

   以一气呵成之感。恰当地使用过渡词可以使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，避负脱节现象。

(2)语言表达。新的评分标准鼓励学生尽量使用较复杂的结构和高级词汇。语言要准确，长短句结合。学着

  使用一些高级词汇，为文章增色。评价一篇文章的好坏，一条重要的原则就是＂上下文连贯＂，要让评卷者有一种通篇流畅、一气呵成的感觉。可采用下列策略：

①使用高级语法与句型，如，名词性从句，分词作状语和定语，还有如不定式、强调句、感叹句、倒装句。

  常见词的复合结构，如＂with+复合宾语结构＂等等，这些形式来提高文章的档次，写出亮点句子。

②使用过渡性词汇，增加文章的逻辑性与连贯性。因为过度词可使文章结构更紧凑，上下文更连贯，逻辑

  性、可读性更强。比如常见的过渡性词语有表列举的first，second，third，next，then等等；表因果的because

  of，thanks to等。

③为了避免重复和连接上下文，多用指代词。对于出现过的非关键次和短语，常用指代词来代替，保持文

  章的简洁，使文章跟紧凑。

3. 修改

 写完之后，一定要认真仔细地修改。可遵循下列修改校对的方法：

(1)检查格式，内容要点。

(2)检查句子时态、语态是否正确，结构是否完整。

(3)检查大小写、单词拼写是否正确，书写要工整认真。通过这样的检查过程，能够最大程度的减少错误的

  发生，从而减少人为失分。

【热点话题】

   书面表达提纲类热衷于健康、环保类等。

【限时检测】（建议用时：每篇15分钟）

A

 （2021·全国·高考真题）

1. （全国甲卷）假定你是李华，你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英语网站上展示，请你给外国朋友Chris写封信，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友，内容如下：

1. 阐明写信事由；     
2. 征求建议；             

3.表达感谢。

注意： 1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Chris,

Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.

If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是一篇应用文，就学校主办的主题班会向好友Chris询问哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国朋友。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

主题：topic→theme

传统的：traditional→conventional

获得：get→obtain

解决：solve→work out

2.句式拓展

同义句改写

原句：Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

拓展句：It is because this activity will be presented on the English website that I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. (运用了whose引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. (运用了现在分词作状语)

 B

（2021·四川·成都外国语学校模拟预测）

2. 假定你是李华，你校即将举办线上中文歌曲大赛。你校留学生Alan目前在英国居家学习，请给他写一封邮件，内容如下：

1. 表示问候；

2. 大赛情况（目的、形式……)；

3. 发出参赛邀请。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Alan,

____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Alan,

How is everything going? Hopefully, you and your family are all well. I’m writing to invite you to join in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held by our school next Saturday.

The contest, with the aim of making our life colorful, will take place online, by virtue of using the app “DingTalk”. Each participant is required to turn on his camera and put on the performance in front of it, while the judges and the online audience will grade him. Keep in mind that it’s better to choose a song full of positive energy, which will surely impress the judges and the audience.

Would it be convenient for you to join us? I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇文章属于应用文，要求考生给目前在英国居家学习的校留学生Alan写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校举办的线上中文歌曲大赛，内容包括：表示问候；大赛情况（目的、形式……)；发出参赛邀请。

【详解】
1.词汇积累
参加：join in→participate in
比赛：contest→competition
凭借：by virture of→through
记住：keep sth. in mind→remember sth.
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The contest, with the aim of making our life colorful, will take place online, by virtue of using the app “DingTalk”.
拓展句:The contest, which aims at making our life colorful, will take place online, by virtue of using the app “DingTalk”.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I’m writing to invite you to join in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held by our school next Saturday.(运用了非谓语动词做后置定语)

[高分句型2] Keep in mind that it’s better to choose a song full of positive energy, which will surely impress the judges and the audience.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)

C

（2021·四川广安·模拟预测）

3. 假如你是李华。你校将举行庆祝端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)的活动，请你给交换生Jack写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。内容包括：

1.简介端午节；

2.活动时间和地点；

3.活动内容。

注意：

1.词数100左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jack,

The Dragon Boat Festival, which falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month, is one of the most important traditional festivals. Every year Chinese people will hold grand celebrations in memory of Qu Yuan. Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditions, I’m writing to invite you to take part in the celebration held by our school.

The celebration will take place by the lake of our school on June 14th. In the morning, we will wrap and cook “zhongzi”, which will be eaten as lunch. In the afternoon, a dragon boat race will be held on the lake.

I’m sure you will have a good time. Waiting for your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jack写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加你校将举行庆祝端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)的活动。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

盛大的：great →grand

对……感兴趣：be keen on →be interested in

参加：join in →take part in

相信：believe = be sure

2.句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句：In the afternoon, a dragon boat race will be held on the lake.

拓展句：It is a dragon boat race that will be held on the lake in the afternoon.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in Chinese traditions, I’m writing to invite you to take part in the celebration held by our school.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。

[高分句型2] In the morning, we will wrap and cook “zhongzi”, which will be eaten as lunch.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。

D

（2021·黑龙江·哈尔滨三中模拟预测）

4. 假定你是李华，10月27日下午，你校举办了一个二手书市活动，书市吸引了各个年级的同学们踊跃参加，请你为本次书市写一篇英文新闻报道。内容包括：

1.活动目的、时间和地点；

2.活动情况；

3.对本次活动的评价。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.文中不得透露学校名称；

4.标题已给出，不计入总词数。

The Second-hand Book Fair

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【答案】

The Second-hand Book Fair

Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make good use of their books, on the afternoon of Oct. 27th, a second-hand book fair was held on the campus square of our school.

The fair attracted a huge crowd from the entire school, who sold, purchased, and exchanged their second-land books with their peers. At the fair, there were books on diverse topics, including some handwritten notes from senior students which appealed to many freshmen. Most books were sold at a lower price. Many students got their favorite.

The book fair not only motivates students to further develop good habit of reading, but also raises public awareness of green campus and environmental protection. Everyone must benefit a lot from it.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，10月27日下午，你校举办了一个二手书市活动，书市吸引了各个年级的同学们踊跃参加，请你为本次书写一篇英文新闻报道。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

机会：chance→opportunity

吸引：attract→draw→appeal

购置：purchase→buy

意识到：be awareness of→realize

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Most books were sold at a lower price. Many students got their favorite.

拓展句：Most books which many students got were sold at a lower price.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] Aimed at providing a platform where students can have a chance to exchange and make good use of their books, on the afternoon of Oct. 27th, (运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2] The fair attracted a huge crowd from the entire school, who sold, purchased, and exchanged their second-land books with their peers. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)

E

（2021·云南·曲靖一中一模）

5. 假设你是李华,曲靖师院（Qujing Normal University）外籍教师John上周五到你校做了一场精彩演讲，请你根据如下内容给他写一封感谢信：

1.演讲内容：高效阅读策略；

2.演讲效果；

3.表示诚挚谢意。

注意: 1.词数110左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头与结尾已经写好，不计入词数。

Dear Mr. John,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mr. John,

I would like to extend my sincerest gratitude towards you for your motivational speech during the conference held in our auditorium. Your views on developing an effective reading strategy and its execution have broadened our horizons and improved our reading comprehension .

Please accept our appreciation for such a commendable job. We will take your words into practice. You have covered all essential elements of reading strategy and your description of how to execute it is remarkable.

I once again would like to thank you for such a wonderful speech and hope to get a chance to hear such speeches from you in future also.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设考生是李华，曲靖师院（Qujing Normal University）外籍教师John上周五到考生所在校校做了一场精彩演讲，请你根据如下内容给他写一封感谢信。

【详解】

1. 词汇积累

表达：show→ extend

提高：promote→improve

精彩的： excellent→ wonderful

机会：opportunity→ chance

2. 句式拓展

简单句变强调句

原句：Your views on developing an effective reading strategy and its execution have broadened our horizons and improved our reading comprehension .

拓展句：It is your views on developing an effective reading strategy and its execution  that have broadened our horizons and improved our reading comprehension .

【点睛】

[高分句型1] I once again would like to thank you for such a wonderful speech and hope to get a chance to hear such speeches from you in future also.（动词不定式作后置定语）

[高分句型2] You have covered all essential elements of reading strategy and your description of how to execute it is remarkable.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语）