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备战2022高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练
(高考模拟+名校真题)
专题12 情绪
1．（2021·山东烟台·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Are you ready for our walk?” Grandma asked the usual question every Friday evening.
“Of course, we are!" We shouted excitedly, ready to talk about the end of the week and fill Grandma in about our week.
Growing up, my sisters and I always knew Grandma had heart problems and couldn't do anything hard, but we did know she would do anything to spend more time with us. Whether it was wanders around the block or walks to the library, Grandma was there by our side.
When I was going into sixth grade, we were told that Grandma only had 2% heart function. Her heart wasn't benefiting her anymore, but she found out that there was a way to live longer: an IVAD．It is a heart pump （起搏器）that replaces the heart, basically, a battery instead of a heart and it's connected to a battery pack by a tube that conies out of the side. Grandma would become a robot with no heart! The Toledo Hospital, the only hospital near us that could do this surgery, offered to do it for Grandma. She, obviously, agreed.
The grey morning of the surgery was rough for our family, as we woke up bright and early to drive to the hospital. That car ride left me with worried thoughts racing through my mind: Will Grandma be okay? Will we ever take another walk around the block?
When we arrived at the hospital, we knew exactly where to go, as we'd been there many times before. After going through those familiar doors and up the stairs, my mom and I walked up to the nurses' desk and asked for Grandma.
“Oh, Mary?” A nurse answered. "She's one of the nicest patients we've had." Then she directed us to the waiting room and told us that only two of us were permitted to go into the ward （病房）at a time to say goodbye to Grandma before she went in for surgery.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The last two people were Grandpa and me.
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Finally, after the longest morning of my life, the doctor entered the waiting room, smiling.
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2．（2021·重庆南开中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Better to Give than to Receive
When a special occasion arrives, a gift often finds its way to a doorstep or an office desk. But once in a while, a present arrives at an unexpected moment as a reminder that someone is thinking about us.
Wanda Anderson remembers such a gift.
The rosebushes were finally in full bloom that day. Seeing roses always brings to mind Wanda's childhood memories. To this young girl, those flowers were a luxury. "We never had money to buy extra things, so even a tired rose was something to cherish," Wanda said.
Nowadays, to have a backyard filled with many different roses is pure enjoyment. Wanda especially loves the very first blooms. Her husband, Dale, devotedly tends the roses and knows this little fact about his wife. So, on this particular morning, he picked the very first flowers of spring, fresh from the garden, just for Wanda.
But as Dale came back, he was met by a neighbor who had dropped by. As the woman turned to go, Dale graciously (有风度地)handed the roses to her. Even though their visitor insisted she didn't want to take them, she was repeatedly assured that the flowers were hers to keep.
“I told her I was happy for her to keep them, but I really wasn't," Wanda said, recalling the emotions she was feeling right then. Seeing her very precious first blooms go out of the door filled her with regret.
Throughout the rest of the morning, Wanda argued with herself, knowing logically it was “better to give than to receive. Nevertheless, she wished she could have kept the roses for herself.
Later that day, the couple just arrived at the post office, where they were about to park the car.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then, without warning, a bunch of multi-coloured roses appeared at the car's window.
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For the rest of the day, she was happy and moved.
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3．（2021·山东枣庄·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a rainy night in March 2013, my husband Reece went out to get a box that he had forgotten in his car. On his way back inside, he noticed a small shadow moving on the driveway. He walked towards it quietly, and found it was a small hedgehog(刺猬), all wet in the grass, eating mud. Reece quickly removed his jacket and picked it up. The hedgehog was very weak and unable to move about quickly. But he did not seem to be frightened; nor did he resist being scooped up (抱起).
Once he was inside, Reece called out to me, saying that he had something that would make my heart melt, and he was right! We named the hedgehog Alf, because, just like the TV show character of the‘'80s, he came out of nowhere. And, like Alf the alien, this little hedgehog was amazingly intelligent. Not only did he learn to eat his dinner and drink water from his bowls, but he also learnt to wait for us inside his little indoor cubby house and hop into his pet carrier whenever we took him out with us.
Alf knows us very well and recognizes both our voices. He does not roll into a ball or put his spines up. Every day he allows us to pat him. He loves playing with paper and towels and will bite and tug on the bed sheets if given a chance. Like all pets, Alf loves his treats, in particular small pieces of sugar-coated biscuits.
Unfortunately, in April 2014, I was in a car accident and had to spend two months in the hospital. And boy, did I miss Alf! Reece told me that Alf would search around the house for me, checking in places where I'd normally be, such as my desk, my favorite seat in front of the TV and even my side of the bed.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One evening, Reece set up a video call for me from my hospital bed.
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I cannot describe the feeling when I arrived home and saw his little face again.
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4．（2021·辽宁·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I used to hate running. It seemed too hard, and pushing outside my comfort zone was not something I was raised to do.
In fact, I wouldn't have become a runner if it weren't for my husband Charles. He had been a serious competitive runner for many years. But several years ago, he quitted running for some reason. After our marriage, he wouldn't stop talking about how much he missed it.
"So start running again, why don't you?" I was getting tired of hearing about it.
So he picked it up again, and after a year or so, I started to join him at the track. Just a few weeks later, Charles signed us both up for a five-kilometer race in my city. I hesitated about doing it. After all, it was too soon.
But on the race day, there I was. As soon as the gun went off, thousands of runners pushed forward.
The first kilometer was too tough for me.
"I don't think I'm going to make it." I was already breathing heavily and painfully aware of the group of runners pounding past me.
"No, you're doing great", said Charles. He was trying to encourage me, to get me focused on something other than my discomfort.
"I can't," I said, in a weak voice.
He tried a different way to persuade me. "Just make it to that house and let's see how you feel." I had to continue, sweating all over.
After another minute I saw the three-kilometer mark. All I could think of was that I was dying and that my husband was torturing (折磨)me.
Miserable doesn't even begin to describe how I felt. And there was pain, so much pain that I was on the verge of breakdown.
"You'll be fine. You've got less than a kilometer to go," Charles shouted loudly.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I rounded a corner.
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I had my arms held higher when I passed through the finish line.
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5．（2021·河北邢台·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Holly was confused as she opened the birthday present from her best friend. Susan — it was a twelve-by-eight inch dark blue carpet. Her “thanks” was hardly heard as Holly tried hard not to show her disappointment.
The next morning. I carried a kitchen rubbish bag outside only to find Susan’s carpet lying there. I immediately reached in and pulled it out of the rubbish can. After giving it a brushing. I brought it into the house and put it away.
Before Holly’s birthday, Susan had been a regular visitor in our home. But suddenly I realized that it had been nearly three weeks since we’d heard the mention of Susan’s name. I missed her warm smile very much.
“Susan invited us to go to her house after school tomorrow. “Holly said as soon as she arrived from school. From her voice I sensed she was pleased with the invitation.
We were traveling along the winding country road that led to her house the following day. On the way Susan talked nervously about her foster mom and the seventeen cats they had taken in and cared for.
When we came to a stop, Susan’s foster mom — who introduced herself as Glenda — gave us a warm welcome. Susan guided us through the house. She proudly showed us her room, which was only decorated with some shabby used furniture.
I followed Susan’s foster mom, Glenda, into the kitchen. After clearing a small area, Glenda poured us each a cup of black coffee with her trembling hand. Then she began to relax as we drank our coffee and chatted about her cats.
Her eyes shone as she showed her fondness for Susan. But her expression turned blue when she referred to the girl’s past In an instant, I came to respect this warmhearted woman who had opened her home to a younger girl and tied hard to make a difference in her life.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
As daylight began to fade, we offered our thanks for the visit and said goodbye.
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“Is this what you were looking for?”
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6．（2021·江苏南通·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文.
I was walking down the muddy road one day when my cell phone rang. A child's voice on the other end spoke to me softly, "Dad, please come hack soon. I miss you so much!” Unconsciously, I knew it was a wrong number once again. I don’t have a single daughter. I just have a six-year-old son. It is not unusual to receive this kind of calls nowadays, so I replied rudely, "You've dialed the wrong number!” and then hung up in anger.
During the following days, I got the same call now and then. It disturbed me, so I either rejected her or hung up right away rudely. I couldn’t help complaining about this, “What an impolite girl! How can she call me up over and over again?” How 1 wished the little girl would stop causing any trouble to me some day! Suddenly, the phone rang up again. It was from the same girl- It seemed that she would not give up until she got an answer.
She constantly called me up. Even if I did not give her an answer, she still dialed my number from time to time. Eventually I unwillingly answered the phone. 1 heard the weak voice of that little girl, “Dad, please come back now. I miss you so much! Mom told me this was not a wrong number. It is your cell phone number, right? Dad, I am in so much pain! Mom said you were too busy to take care of me. She is tired out from looking after me. Dad, I know you are busy. If you cannot come home, please kiss me again in the phone, OK?” The innocent request was difficult to reject. I made a loud kiss into the phone and heard a weak voice saying, “Thank you.... Dad, I am so... happy, so …happy
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右：
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone.
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I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was.
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7．（2021·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As a child, I clearly remembered watching the PBS cartoon character Arthur get glasses. The poor guy felt ashamed and was laughed at by other kids due to his glasses. So I was thankful that I had good eyesight.
However, when I entered the eighth grade, I could no longer see very clearly the writing on the blackboard. Luckily, I was usually seated in the front of the classroom, and my study was not affected. So I didn't turn to glasses.
During my first year in high school, my eyesight became poorer. My eyes were examined, and the doctor determined that my eyesight was quite bad. I would either have to wear glasses full time, or try contact lenses (隐形眼镜). Since I had watched the cartoon character Arthur before, I was afraid to be judged by others due to my glasses — it made me believe the glasses would affect a person’s beauty. And being a teenage girl, I cared much about my self-image. Besides, at that time, there were few students around me wearing glasses. So I chose to wear contact lenses. I felt they would not affect my appearance. On the contrary, they would make me more attractive. And after wearing contact lenses, my entire world was transformed. Trees actually had leaves. People around me showed clear expressions. I was overjoyed at my new-found sight and appearance, and I had more self-confidence.
But when my junior year came along, I began to have trouble with my eyes. Once in a while, the contact lenses would irritate (刺激) my eyes, almost to the point where the pain was unbearable. It would take me thirty minutes just to get the lenses in comfortably every day, which made me so upset. With time going by, the pain only got worse.
In spite of endless visits to the hospital, my doctor found nothing wrong with my eyes. He tried countless mediations to ease my pain, However, none of them worked, and there was nothing left to try.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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He suggested that I wear my glasses full-time. __________________________
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Later in my summer camp, I met a very outgoing girl who also wore glasses.
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8．（2021·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内界和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On July 8, 2017, eight members of a family in total, were enjoying an evening together at the beach in Panhandle, Florida. As the sun sank lower on the horizon, the two boys Noah 11 and Stephen 8 swam into the waves without the grown-ups noticing. Soon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the sea. After trying and failing to swim back, they started waving and screaming for help. But the lifeguards had been off duty for the evening.
The boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha, a couple from Georgia, heard them. They dived into the water and s0on reached the two brothers. But after a few minutes, they were all trapped in a rip current (离岸流),a powerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea! By then, some teenagers had heard the cry. One of the teens rushed into the water, grabbed Jacky. and pulled him back to shore. Meanwhile, Tabatha could feel herself being pulled farther out. She was already exhausted and beginning to feel desperate as she was trying to save both boys alone.
Onshore, Jacky was terrified. A man stopped. “What’s wrong?” asked Shaun, who was heading back to his car. “My wife is drowning!" Brittany said. Shaun immediately strode (大步跨) into the water. But several minutes later, a gaping 15 feet still lay between him and Tabatha and the boys. He knew that if he continued, he’d become another victim. He turned around to seek help.
It was about that time that Roberta, the boys’ mother, returned from the bathroom and looked around for her children. She was shocked to spot them floating much farther out than they were allowed to go. She fought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to save them, but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in any direction. Looking around, Roberta sighed with relief to see some more people coming to help.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1
When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha, a risky idea came to them.
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By then, more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain.
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9．（2020·全国·高二课时练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A little boy and his grandmother came to see Santa at Mayfair Mall in Wisconsin. The child climbed up on Santa Claus's lap holding a picture of a little girl.
"Who is this?" asked Santa, smiling. "Your friend? Your sister?"
"Yes, Santa," he replied.
"My sister, Sarah, who is very sick," the boy said sadly.
Santa glanced over at the grandmother who was waiting nearby and saw her wiping her eyes with a tissue.
"She wanted to come with me to see you very much, Santa!" the child shouted.
"She misses you," he added softly.
Santa tried to cheer the boy up, asking him what he wanted Santa to bring him for Christmas.
When they finished their talk, the grandmother came over to help the child get off his lap， and started to say something to Santa, but halted （停顿）.
"What is it?" Santa asked warmly.
"Well, I know it's really too much to ask you, Santa, but..." The girl in the photograph is my granddaughter. You see... she has leukemia（白血病）and isn't expected to make it even through the holidays," she said through tear-filled eyes.
"Is there any way, Santa, any possible way that you could come to see Sarah?
All she's asked for. for Christmas. is to see Santa.
Santa blinked. swallowed hard and told to the woman to leave information with his elves（小精灵）as to where Sarah was，saying he would see what he could do. Santa thought of nothing else for the rest of that afternoon. "What if it were MY child lying in that hospital bed, dying?" he thought with a sinking heart.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Santa knew what he had to do.
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One year later at Mayfair Mall, a little girl came up to sit on Santa’s lap and said, “Hi, Santa! Remember me?”
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10．（2021·河北·张家口市第一中学高二阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为120左右。
On December 16, 2008, Randy Heiss was hiking in Patagonis, a town near the US-Mexico border when he noticed there was a red balloon. He walked towards it, and found the balloon’s string was attached to a piece of paper. “Dayami”, it read on one side, in a child’s writing. Heiss turned the paper over. It was a numbered list, all in Spanish.
Heiss suspected that a child had tried to send Santa Claus a Christmas wish list by balloon, something he used to do himself when he was a kid. Nobody had ever returned his letters, but he wondered whether he could find the girl who had sent this one. It would be difficult, but Heiss had a few clues. About 20 miles to the southwest, was the city of Nogales, Mexico. Based on the blowing wind, he was pretty sure that’s where it came from.
Heiss brought the note home to his wife, who is fluent in Spanish and helped him translate the list. They found that Dayami had asked for a doll, a dollhouse, clothes and art supplies. Heiss then posted about his search on Facebook, attaching photos, hoping some of his friends in Nogales might know the girl’s family, but with no success. Heiss worried that time was running out before Christmas. On December 19, 2008, he sent a private message to Radio XENY, a radio station in Nogales.
The next morning, Heiss got a message from Radio XENY: They had located Dayami, an eight-year-old girl whose parents were killed in a car accident. They would arrange a get-together with Dayami at the radio station. So they bought just about everything on Dayami’s list.
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Then the Heisses drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales.
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Ten years later, Heisses received a phone call from Dayami.
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参考答案：
1．One possible version
The last two people were Grandpa and me. Entering the room, I saw Grandma sitting on the bed with a blanket around her. I ran forward and gave her the biggest hug with tearful eyes. Grandma, holding me tightly in her arms, said, “I know there’s a chance I won’t make it, but I love you forever.” Grandpa patted Grandma on the back and comforted her, “Don’t worry, honey. We are all waiting for you here.” Grandma nodded with her usual smile. Then she was wheeled away, leaving us waiting and praying anxiously.
Finally, after the longest morning of my life, the doctor entered the waiting room, smiling. “Mary is out of surgery. You’re allowed to visit her as long as you’re quiet,” he said. Relief swept over my body and tears began trailing down my face. Thank goodness, I had Grandma back! Once we walked into the room, there lay Grandma, looking peaceful yet painful with so many tubes attached to her. I felt so shocked but so happy. Grandma would be okay. She was taking the first step to becoming better and going on another walk with us one day.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的奶奶尽管心脏有问题，但也愿意花费更多的时间陪伴她们，后来奶奶的心脏功能只有2%，不得不做手术，作者和她的家人们都非常担心，但是手术最终成功了，作者和她的家人都非常开心，奶奶又可以陪她们散步了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“最后两个人是爷爷和我。”可知，第一段可描写作者和爷爷同奶奶作手术前的谈话，互相安慰。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，在我生命中最漫长的一个早晨之后，医生微笑着走进了候诊室。”可知，第二段可描写作者的奶奶手术很成功，家人们都非常开心。
2.续写线索：进入房间——拥抱——安慰——等待——看望--手术成功——开心
3.词汇激活
行为类
进入：enter/get into/come into
拥抱：give sb. a hug/hold in one‘s arms/embrace
看望：visit/pay a visit/call on
情绪类
平静的：quiet/peaceful/calm
开心的：happy/glad/pleased
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Then she was wheeled away, leaving us waiting and praying anxiously.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. Once we walked into the room, there lay Grandma, looking peaceful yet painful with so many tubes attached to her. （由once引导时间状语从句）
2．
Then, without warning, a bunch of multi-coloured roses appeared at the car's window. Staring at the beautiful roses with her open mouth, she rocked her husband’s arm excitedly, saying “Look，Dale! Roses!” Dale smiled at her and opened the door for her, saying “They are just for you，honey! ”with the bunch of the roses in his hands. Dale told her that he had planted the multi-coloured roses especially for her and in order to give her a big surprise, he asked a girl to hold the roses at the post office.
For the rest of the day, she was happy and moved. Feeling her husband’s thoughtful love, she expressed her gratitude and her deep affection for him again and again. She had expected to miss her first blooms this year and had been depressed all morning though she comforted herself non-stop that it’s better to give than to receive. Deeply touched, she decided to give the special bunch of roses to the little girl who had just held it for her to taste the joy of giving rather than receiving.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以Wanda的情绪变化为线索。讲述了童年贫苦的Wanda因为买不起玫瑰而将其视为享受。她的丈夫了解Wanda这段童年记忆便种植了满园的玫瑰，并且将第一束玫瑰送给妻子。但是，今年当丈夫带回第一束玫瑰花到家时，恰巧遇到邻居。出于礼貌，丈夫便把玫瑰花送给了邻居。Wanda虽然内心不断地告诉自己给予比接受更好，但是内心还是有遗憾。最后，没有想到的是，丈夫以一种意想不到的方式将第一束多彩的玫瑰送给Wanda。深受感动之后，Wanda决定将这束特殊的玫瑰花送给刚才帮助她的小女孩，去践行给予比接受更好。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后，毫无预兆地，一束五彩玫瑰出现在车窗前。”可知，第一段可描写这束多彩玫瑰的由来。
②由第二段首句内容“那天剩下的时间里，她又高兴又感动。”可知，第二段可描写Wanda收到这束多彩玫瑰后的兴奋与感动。
2.续写线索：多彩玫瑰的出现——多彩玫瑰的由来——兴奋和感动——感悟
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①想起：bring to mind/ recall
②到达：find one’s way to /arrive at/drop by
③感动：touch/move
情绪类
①享受：luxury/enjoyment
②再三地/不停地：repeatedly/non-stop/again and again
③遗憾地：fill sb. with regret/be depressed
④惊讶：with her open mouth / give her a big surprise
【点睛】
【高分句型写范文中的就可以，至少2个高分句型】
[高分句型1]. Staring at the beautiful roses with her open mouth, she rocked her husband’s arm excitedly, saying “Look，Dale! Roses!”（非谓语动词短语Staring at the beautiful roses with her open mouth和saying “Look，Dale! Roses!”做伴随状语）
[高分句型2]. Dale told her that he had planted the multi-coloured roses especially for her and in order to give her a big surprise, he asked a girl to hold the roses at the post office. （由连接词that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型3]. She had expected to miss her first blooms this year and had been depressed all morning though she comforted herself non-stop that it’s better to give than to receive.（though引导的让步状语从句）
3．One evening, Reece set up a video call for me from my hospital bed. When the video phone was connected, I saw Reece holding Alf in his arms and Alf was staring at the phone screen. Alf seemed shocked when it saw me at the other end of video. It kept scratching the phone screen with its claws, which made me so excited that tears filled my eyes. At this moment, I knew she also missed me very much. How I wanted to run back to it and pat it. Then we could play with each other.
I cannot describe the feeling when I arrived home and saw his little face again. As Alf saw me again, it rubbed my trousers with its little face, and then grabbed my pants tightly with its claws as if I would disappear. When Reece saw us like this, he said he thought Alf had regarded me as his mother. I looked at him with great excitement and said," I also think of it as my own child." People can cultivate feelings with each other, while people and animals can also cultivate such affection. And then we would live happily with Alf.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以动物为线索展开， 讲述了作者的丈夫捡回来的一只小刺猬， 他们给小刺猬起名叫Alf，并且像养宠物一样，让Alf学会吃饭和用碗喝水，在和Alf的相处中，Alf也和作者一家相处的非常快乐。 但不幸的是， 作者出了车祸， 需要在医院呆两个月，作者非常想念Alf，Alf也非常想念作者，它们通过视频互相表达想念，最后作者终于康复回到家，再次见到Alf的经历。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，里斯给在病床上的我打了一个视频电话。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Alf通过视频电话表达想念。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回到家，再次看到他的小脸时，我的感觉难以形容。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家再一次见到Alf的感受。
2.续写线索：接通电话——盯着看——想念——回家——见面——激动快乐
3.词汇激活
行为类
①接通电话：connect/get through/put through
②盯着看：stare at/gaze at
③想念：miss/ long to see again
④认为：regard as/think of
情绪类
①激动的：showing one’s excitement/excited/ excitedly
②快乐地：happily/joyfully
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. It kept scratching the phone screen with its claws, which made me so excited that tears filled my eyes.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] As Alf saw me again, it rubbed my trousers with its little face, and then grabbed my pants tightly with its claws as if I would disappear.（由as引导的时间状语从句和as if引导的方式状语从句）
4．I rounded a corner. Immediately I saw both sides of the street which was thick with people watching the race, all cheering the runners on. I willed(用意志力驱使)my legs to keep going. Then I looked up and saw the clock. The seconds ticking away gave me an incentive(动力). I knew that if I had actually finished this race I would have achieved something. So, I straightened up, and gathered up all my strength to dash for the finish line.
I had my arms held higher when I passed through the finish line. I succeeded. But I was too tired to say any word, only panting for breath. A volunteer put a medal around my neck. Charles raced to me and cried in excitement, “You did great! I'm so proud of you!” He patted my shoulder and helped me up. “That was amazing! I want to do another race. This running stuff is amazing!” I shouted, resting my head on my husband's shoulder. My lungs and my comfort zone both expanded.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者以前讨厌跑步,但是在丈夫的激励下，作者加入了跑步并且参加赛跑。比赛过程中，作者在丈夫的鼓励下，坚持不懈地跑着，虽然过程很痛苦，但是最后作者成功了，她走出了自己的舒适区。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我拐过一个弯。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到赛道两旁的观赛者给参赛者加油，于是自己坚定意志力继续前行，努力冲向终点。
②由第二段首句内容“当我冲过终点线时，我把手臂举得更高。”可知，第二段可描写作者非常棒地完成了比赛并获奖，感悟自己走出了舒适区。
2.续写线索：观看比赛——继续前行——成功——疲惫——兴奋
3.词汇激活
行为类
①观看比赛：watch the race/watch the game
②继续前行：keep going/keep on moving
③成功：succeed/win/triumph
情绪类
①疲惫： tired/exhausted
②兴奋：excitement/in high spirit/exhilaration
【点睛】
[高分句型]1] Immediately I saw both sides of the street which was thick with people watching the race, all cheering the runners on.（由关系代词which引导的定语从句，修饰先行词the street）
[高分句型2] I knew that if I had actually finished this race I would have achieved something. （由that引导的宾语从句，宾语从句中又有if引导的条件状语从句）
5．As daylight began to fade, we offered our thanks for the visit and said goodbye. Holly sat quietly in the car on the way home, pressing her forehead against the window as if lost in thought. All the way we didn’t say even a single word. No sooner had we come to a stop in the driveway than she threw open the back door and flew straight to the side gate of our house. I followed her silently and my throat tightened as I observed my daughter standing by the rubbish can looking inside. Soon she puffed, paused for a second or two, and walked inside, seeming slightly anxious and irritated.
“Is this what you were looking for?” I asked her in a gentle voice as I drew out the carpet from the cupboard and placed it in front of her. She gazed at me with absolute surprise, which soon turned to wild joy. “Thanks. Thank you mom, but... “She nearly screamed out when I threw open my arms and hugged her tightly just as she did with the carpet. I could see tears shining in her crystal eyes, a drop or two splashing onto the dark blue carpet. Magically, what she once didn’t even want to refer to now turned out to be her precious birthday present.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的女儿Holly对好友Susan送的生日礼物——一张小毯子——很不满意，并把它扔进了垃圾桶里，作者看到之后把它清理干净并且收好。之后很长一段时间Holly都没有提到Susan，直到有一天，Holly说Susan邀请她们去她家里，在那里她们认识了Susan的养母Glenda，她是一位温暖有爱的人，并且从她家简陋的陈设来看，为了抚养Susan她付出了很多努力。回到家之后，Holly急切地寻找被她扔掉的小毯子，当她从妈妈手里拿过那张毯子时，她很感激妈妈，并且意识到这是她收到的最珍贵的礼物。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“天快黑时，我们表示感谢，并道别。”可知，第一段可描写在开车回家的路上Holly的反应，以及对那条毛毯的重新认识，并且希望重新找到它。
②由第二段首句内容“这就是你在寻找的东西吗？”可知，第二段可描写Holly看到被妈妈收起来完好无损的毛毯时的情绪反应，以及她的反思。
2.续写线索：回家——找毛毯——拿出毛毯——感谢妈妈——珍惜毛毯——反思
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回家：go back home/return home
②寻找：look for/search for
③凝视：gaze at/stare at
情绪类
①感谢：show one’s appreciation/show one’s gratitude/be grateful
②焦虑：be anxious about/be worried about
【点睛】
[高分句型1]No sooner had we come to a stop in the driveway than she threw open the back door and flew straight to the side gate of our house.（no sooner…than引导的时间状语从句，no sooner放句首，句子部分倒装）
[高分句型2]I followed her silently and my throat tightened as I observed my daughter standing by the rubbish can looking inside.（as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]She gazed at me with absolute surprise, which soon turned to wild joy.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
6．(One possible version)
Shortly after this, I became interested in who had been on the other end of my phone. When I called the number back, a woman answered, “Sorry, sir. I am really sorry to bother you. I did want to call to apologize.” From the woman, I learnt that the girl had bone cancer when she was born, and unfortunately her father died in an accident weeks ago. The little girl suffered from unbearable treatment every day. Feeling painful, she would cry for her dad who had always encouraged her, so her mother gave her a random number.
I couldn’t wait to ask the woman how her daughter was. The woman thought for a while, saying sadly, “She has gone. You must have kissed her on the phone, and she went with a smile as she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...” On hearing this, I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks. I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者无意中接到一个女孩找爸爸的错误来电并粗鲁挂断之后，女孩依旧不时地拨打作者的号码，即使并未得到答复。在意识到女孩不会轻易放弃后，作者最终接了女孩的电话。感动于女孩对爸爸的想念，作者应其请求，在电话中给了她一个吻，女孩也因为这个吻而感到格外的开心。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：在这之后不久，我对电话的另一端是谁产生了兴趣……，所以接下来应该写作者回拨电话以及女孩妈妈对作者的回复内容。特别要详细描述女孩之所以不停打电话找爸爸的具体原因。第二段开头是：我迫不及待地想问那个女人她女儿怎么样了……。本段应该写女孩现在的情况以及作者得知实情后的表现。
续写时需要注意：（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：suffered from，apologize，encourage，think for a while，stream down，pray for等高级词汇；限制性定语从句“she tightly held the cell phone with which she could hear her voice...”，“I didn’t know what to say, so I slowly hang up my phone, praying for her happiness and health in heaven.”中非谓语的灵活使用以及“I couldn’t keep back my sad feeling, tears streaming down my cheeks.”中独立主格的熟练运用。
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He suggested that I wear my glasses full-time. At last, I had no choice but to take his advice. The next day, with a pair of “ugly” glasses on my nose, I entered the classroom, lowering my head all the way. I could sense someone staring at me and whispering to each other about my glasses. “They must be laughing at me and feeling I am weird.” I said to myself. From that day on, I almost didn’t speak to anyone, just staying alone in the corner of the classroom. My life was darkened by the “ugly” glasses.
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Later in my summer camp, I met a very outgoing girl who also wore glasses. . However, the glasses on her face never seemed to bother her. She was active and confident, never afraid to express herself. Soon we became good friends. One day I shared with her my story about the glasses. After listening to me attentively, she hugged me and said, “Guess what, dear, a pair of glasses never ruins a person’s life, but a lack of confidence does. Whether you wear glasses or not, as long as you love yourself and are full of confidence, your life will be greeted with sunshine.” I owe many thanks to the lovely “glasses” girl, who pulled me out of the darkness and brightened my life, making me a brave and confident girl.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以眼镜为线索展开，讲述了作者因为看了卡通人物 Arthur戴眼镜而被嘲笑的故事后，对戴眼镜的行为很抗拒，所以在视力变差之后作者选择了戴隐形眼镜。但是在大二的时候，戴隐形眼镜让作者眼睛产生刺痛感，但是医生检查不出问题，也没有解决办法。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他建议我整天戴眼镜。”可知，第一段可描写作者无奈之下接受建议，并且因为之前对戴眼镜的抗拒而在戴眼镜之后出现的心理和行为上的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“后来在我的夏令营，我遇到了一个非常外向的女孩，她也戴着眼镜。”可知，第二段可描写作者通过跟这个女孩的相处，改变了对戴眼镜的看法，认识到自信才是最重要的。
2.续写线索：接受建议——变得自卑和自闭——遇见外向女孩——成为朋友——改变态度
3.词汇激活
行为类
①进入：enter/get into
②破坏：ruin/destroy/break
③点亮：brighten/illume/lighten
情绪类
①自信：confident/full of confidence/believe in oneself
②积极：active/positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The next day, with a pair of “ugly” glasses on my nose, I entered the classroom, lowering my head all the way.(使用了with的复合结构和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I owe many thanks to the lovely “glasses” girl, who pulled me out of the darkness and brightened my life, making me a brave and confident girl.(使用了非限制性定语从句和现在分词作状语)
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When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha, a risky idea came to them. To keep themselves from losing their footing in the rip current, they began holding on to one another to form a human chain extending from the beach all the way out to the struggling boys and Tabatha. They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand. However, that required more links — probably dozens of them. Shaun spotted other swimmers on the beach and shouted, “Don’t just stand there! Come and help.”
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By then, more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join the human chain. One by one, link by link, total strangers walked into the waves and grasped one another by the wrists, determined that no one would die on that beach. At last, they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were saved! “Those people on the beach are angels on earth,” said Roberta, showing her appreciation. Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain, they are all our heroes, who helped get our family out of trouble.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了一家八口在海边度假时，两个孩子不幸被海水卷入海中，其他人发现情况后主动救援的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当他们尽力营救兄弟俩和Tabatha无果后，他们想到了一个冒险的方法。”可知，关键词是“冒险的”，所以可以接着写：他们手拉手形成“人链”，希望可以拉住那些受困的人，避免他们被暗流带走。但似乎人手还不够，他们朝游泳的人大喊，让他们也过来帮忙。
②由第二段首句内容“更多游泳的人看到这种情况，都跑过来帮忙。”可知，关键词是“人多力量大”，故可以接着写：他们紧紧地相互拽着，终于可以够得着受困的人。在他们的努力下，两兄弟和Tabatha都被救上了岸。他们的妈妈对所有帮助的人表示感激。
2.续写线索：组成人链——朝向落水者——设法保证安全——呼唤他人加入——落水者成功得救——表示感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①组成人链：form a human chain/stand in a queue
②朝向：extend all the way out to/move towards
③设法：manage to do/think of any possible means
④呼唤：shout/cry/scream
⑤成功：make it/succeed in doing sth/do sth successfully
情绪类
①感谢：showing her appreciation/show her gratitude/be grateful
②决心：be determined to do/decide to do/make up one’s mind to do
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha, a risky idea came to them. 本复合句中使用了连词when引导的时间状语从句。
[高分句型2] They stayed linked tightly and managed to ensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sand. 本复合句中使用了宾语从句，它在ensure后面省略了连接词that。
[高分句型3] Whether it is the first person or the last person in the chain, they are all our heroes, who helped get our family out of trouble. 本复合句中使用了连接词whether引导的让步状语从句和关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。
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Santa knew what he had to do. He drove to the hospital and found out which room Sarah was in. Taking a deep breath, and forcing a smile on his face, he entered the room, saying "Ho, ho, ho! Santa!" Screamed Sarah weakly. Santa rushed to give her a warm hug and a Christmas gift. Now, Sarah," Santa said, "you have job to do, and that is to get well. I expect to see you at Mayfair Mall this time next year!" "Yes, Santa!" Sarah shouted, her eyes bright. Santa kissed her on the forehead and left.
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One year later at Mayfair Mall, a little girl came up to sit on Santa's lap and said, "Hi, Santa! Remember me?" "Of course!" Santa answered（as he always does）, smiling down at her. "You came to see me in the hospital last year!" Santa's jaw dropped. Tears immediately sprang into his eyes. "Sarah!" he shouted and hugged her tightly. He scarcely recognized her, for her hair was long and her cheeks was rosy-much difference from the girl he had visited a year before. He looked over and saw Sarah's grandmother smiling and wiping her eyes. That was the best Christmas ever for Santa Claus.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开， 讲述一个小男孩和他的祖母去威斯康星州的梅菲尔购物中心看圣诞老人， 因为小男孩的妹妹Sarah生病了。Sarah特别想和圣诞老人见一面，于是他的祖母请求圣诞老人帮忙去见一下Sarah。圣诞老人同意了，并且真的去医院看了Sarah并鼓励她快点康复，希望明年在梅菲尔购物中心能再次见到Sarah。一年后，Sarah真的去梅菲尔购物中心看圣诞老人，让圣诞老人非常感动，这也成为这个圣诞节圣诞老人收到的最好的礼物。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“圣诞老人知道他该怎么做。”可知，第一段可描写圣诞老人去医院看Sarah，Sarah很开心，圣诞老人鼓励Sarah快点康复，希望下一个圣诞节在梅菲尔购物中心看到她。
②由第二段首句内容 “一年后，在梅菲尔购物中心，一个小女孩走过来坐在圣诞老人的腿上说，“嗨，圣诞老人!还记得我吗?”可知，第二段可描写Sarah真的去梅菲尔购物中心看圣诞老人，这让圣诞老人非常激动。
2.续写线索：开车——找到——进入房间——冲过去——拥抱——非常惊讶——涌出泪水
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开车：drive to/drive a car/drive off
②找到：find/find out/seek out
③进入房间：enter the room/come into the room/get into the room
④冲过去：rush to/run to
⑤拥抱：hug/embrace/hold in one’s arms
情绪类
①非常惊讶：jaw dropped /surprised/amazed/surprisingly
②涌出泪水：Tears spring into his eyes/burst into tears
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He drove to the hospital and found out which room Sarah was in.（由连接词which引导的宾语从句作found out的宾语）
[高分句型2]. He scarcely recognized her, for her hair was long and her cheeks was rosy-much difference from the girl he had visited a year before.（由连词for引导的原因状语从句和先行词是the girl，省略关系代词的定语从句）
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Then the Heisses drove for 45 minutes, crossing the border into Nogales. They arrived at the radio XENY offices with all the presents and finally met this excited little girl. She didn’t expect that the wish balloon really did work. What happened was beyond her wildest dream. She couldn’t believe somebody out there did care about her.
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Ten years later, Heisses received a phone call from Dayami. Heisses was surprised that Dayami should still remember him and asked her how everything was going on with her. She told him in an excited voice that she had been admitted to a famous university in Mexico and she owed a lot to Heisses. She also told him that she started a Santa Claus’s Helper Project to pass on the love she received ten years ago.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知， Randy Heiss在远足时看到了一个红气球，他走近后发现气球的一端绑着一张纸。妻子看后确定是一个孩子试图通过气球向圣诞老人发送圣诞节愿望清单。Randy Heiss随后在Facebook上发布了有关这个孩子的信息，并附上照片，希望找到女孩儿的家人，但没有成功。随后他向Nogales的广播电台求助，后来Randy Heiss从电台得知，他们找到了八岁的女孩Dayami，她的父母在一场车祸中丧生。他们将在电台与Dayami相聚并为她购买了圣诞节愿望清单上的几乎所有商品。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后海斯夫妇开车长达45分钟时间，越过边界进入Nogales。接下来应该写他们带着所有礼物到达XENY广播电台，终于见到了这个激动的小女孩。她没想到通过气球表达的愿望真的能实现。接下来发生的事情超出了她的想象。她简直不敢相信有人在乎她。第二段的开头是：十年后，海斯夫妇接到了Dayami的电话。接下来可以写Heiss对Dayami仍然记得他感到惊讶，Heiss问她的情况如何。她用兴奋的声音告诉他，她已经被墨西哥的一所著名大学录取，她对Heiss非常感激。她还告诉他，她发起了“圣诞老人帮助者计划”，以延续十年前她收到的关爱。
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续写内容详略得当，使用了固定短语和主从复合句。如：beyond one’s wildest dream，care about，be admitted to，owe … to...，pass on 等固定短语。She didn’t expect that the wish balloon really did work. She told him in an excited voice that she had been admitted to a famous university in Mexico and she owed a lot to Heisses.这两句话使用了that引导的宾语从句；What happened was beyond her wildest dream. 该句使用了what引导的主语从句；She also told him that she started a Santa Claus’s Helper Project to pass on the love she received ten years ago. 该句中后面使用了省略that的定语从句。高级短语和句式的应用提升了作文的档次。