专题06 建议信-备战2022年新高考英语写作全攻略

新高考英语写作全攻略 专题06 建议信建议信主要分两大类：(1)别人给你写封信，让你给他提供一些大方向上的帮助，比如说旅游方面，对方想去北京旅游，你提供一些旅游上的建议；或者学习方面，对方要进入一个新的学校学习，希望你提出一些建议。(2)别人给你写封信，向你表达了他遇到的问题并且比较苦恼，你给他提供解决问题的方法，并且要加入安慰的话。Sample Model 01假如你是李华，你的美籍朋友John被北京一所重点高校录取。他给你写信希望你能提供一些关于学习和生活方面的建议，请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。内容主要包括：1.合理安排时间；2.课前、课上和课后注意事项；3.注意劳逸结合。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。思维过程第一段：写信原因＋写信目的(建议的主题及题干)[1]我听说你已被北京某重点中学录取了。    I hear that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing.[2]我很高兴能帮助你为即将到来的学校生活做准备。I feel happy to oblige(帮忙，帮助) you with the preparations for your coming school life. (用oblige替换help)Sentence I.非谓语＋其他, SVO.     SVO, 非谓语＋其他.  (S,非谓语＋其他,VO.)[2014全国I]当我读到这条消息的时候，我发现了几个问题。    Reading this message, I find a great deal of trouble.[2014全国II]当看到报纸上的这个消息时，我发现了几个问题。Noticing the advertisement in the newspaper, I find many problems which confuse me.[2011全国]面对多种多样的困难，我不得不向你求助。Facing a variety of obstacles, I have to ask you a favor/turn to you for help.[2010全国]我是李华，一名二年一班的学生，现就读于育才中学。I am Li Hua, a student in Class One, Senior Two, presently studying in Yucai High School.[*同一个主语发出两个不同的动作，其中一个主要的动作要用谓语动词，而另外一个不那么主要的动作用成非谓语动词。][1]听说你已被北京某重点中学录取了，我很高兴能帮助你为即将到来的学校生活做准备。Hearing that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing, I feel happy to oblige you with the preparations for your coming school life.第二段：建议内容及理由[2]首先，一个合理的时间表将会在时间安排和活动组织上给你很大的帮助。First and foremost, a reasonable timetable will be of great assistance to you in managing time and organizing activities. (assistance无形容词形式)Sentence VIII. It is +adj. +for sb to do/that从句     It is +of +n. to do[2013全国]你能去机场接他，把他带去酒店真是太善良了。It is so kind that you can meet him at the airport and take him to his hotel.[2008全国II]学习并且演唱中文歌是很重要的，因为你通过做这样的事，你会学习并且更容易记得中国汉字。It is of great importance to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.[3]此外，有一些学习的基本规律你需要去遵循，比如课前预习，上课认真听老师讲课以及课后复习笔记。*In addition, there are quite a few basic rules of study you had better follow, including previewing lessons before classes, listening to your teachers attentively during classes as well as reviewing notes after classes.Sentence IV. There + be +n., consisting of A, B as well as C.    There + be +n., including A, B as well as C.[4]最后，在工作和休闲之间保持适当的平衡是非常重要的。Last but not least, striking a proper balance between work and leisure is essential to keep you healthy. 第三段：表达愿望[5]我的建议将大有益处，如果你能坚持去做的话。*I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them.[6]我相信你在中国会度过一段美好的时光并取得成功的学习成果。I am confident that you will have a good time in China and obtain successful learning achievements.完整设计              Dear John,Hearing that you have been admitted to a key high school in Beijing, I feel happy to oblige you with the preparations for your coming school life.First and foremost, a reasonable timetable will be of great assistance to you in managing time and organizing activities. In addition, there are quite a few basic rules of study you had better follow, including previewing lessons before classes, listening to your teachers attentively during classes as well as reviewing notes after classes. Last but not least, striking a proper balance between work and leisure is essential to keep you healthy.I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them. I am confident that you will have a good time in China and obtain successful learning achievements. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua Sample Model 02从英国来到北京的交换生Tom在语言交流和生活学习等方面遇到很多问题，写信给曾经在英国做交换生的好友李华，表达了自己的烦恼和困惑。假如你是李华，请用英文给他回一封邮件。要点需要包含以下内容：1.表达安慰；2.予以鼓励；3.提出建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.结束语已为你写好。思维过程第一段：表示同情＋安慰及鼓励(建议的主题及题干)[1]很抱歉听到你目前面对的问题，就像我以前在英国的时候一样。I’m sorry to hear about the problems you are faced with at present, just as I used to be when I was in England.[2]你必须振作起来，并且时间会抚平你所有的困难。(常见的鼓励方式)*You have to cheer up and time will smooth away all your difficulties.第二段：建议内容及理由[3]外国人在中国遇到的语言障碍很正常。但我从不怀疑你能在短时间内克服它们，因为你学得很快。你需要做的是找到一个中国学生成为学习伙伴。你可以练习你的中文，而他可以提高他的英语。(问题一：语言障碍)First and foremost, it is natural for foreigners to come across language barriers in China. But I never doubt that you will overcome them in a short time, since you are such a quick learner. What you need to do is (to) find a Chinese student to be a learning partner. You can practice your Chinese while he can improve his English.[4]至于饮食习惯，每个人都需要很长时间才能适应不同的饮食习惯。那么为什么不尝试自己烹饪呢？也许你在一段时间以后会喜欢这样做。(问题二：饮食问题)In addition, as for the eating habits, it takes a long time for everyone to get used to a different diet. So why not try cooking yourself? Maybe you will enjoy doing so after a period of time.[5]保持乐观的生活态度，你会享受生活带给你的快乐。Last but not least, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.第三段：表达愿望＋愿意再次帮助[6]我希望你在中国会过得很愉快。I hope your stay in China will be pleasant and enjoyable.[6]我的建议将大有益处，如果你能坚持去做的话。I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them.[7]如果您有任何其他问题，请随时随时与我联系。If you get any other problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.完整设计Dear Tom, I’m sorry to hear about the problems you are faced with at present, just as I used to be when I was in England. You have to cheer up and time will smooth away all your difficulties.First and foremost, it is natural for foreigners to come across language barriers in China. But I never doubt that you will overcome them in a short time, since you are such a quick learner. What you need to do is (to) find a Chinese student to be a learning partner. You can practice your Chinese while he can improve his English. In addition, as for the eating habits, it takes a long time for everyone to get used to a different diet. So why not try cooking yourself? Maybe you will enjoy doing so after a period of time. Last but not least, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.    I hope your stay in China will be pleasant and enjoyable. If you get any other problems, please feel free to contact me at any time.               Yours,Li Hua Sample Model 03[2014安徽]为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪思维过程第一段：表示同情＋安慰及鼓励(建议的主题及题干)[1]我很遗憾听说你现在状况很糟糕。事实是，每个人都会有一段事情看起来很糟糕的时期，所以没有必要特别担心。(把问题泛化是最好的安慰手段)I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so there is no need to worry too much.[2]你应该学会自我控制，这样可以避免说和做一些你会后悔的事情.。You are supposed to learn self-control, which can help avoid saying and doing something that you’ll regret.[3]以下是三点建议。The following are three suggestions.第二段：建议内容及理由[4]首先，把你的感情和你的朋友与老师分享是一个很好的选择，因为这样做可以移除你的负面情绪。(与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力)To begin with, sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so.[5]另一个有效的建议是，你应该多锻炼身体，这可以帮助你摆脱愤怒。(多参加户外活动，多和朋友们玩球类运动)Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can help you get rid of anger.[6]最后，保持乐观的生活态度，你会享受生活带给你的快乐。(保持乐观的心态)Last but not least, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.第三段：表达愿望[7]希望我的建议能够起到作用。愿你很解决你的麻烦。I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon.[7]我的建议将大有益处，如果你能坚持去做的话。I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them.完整设计              Hi Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so there is no need to worry too much. You are supposed to learn self-control, which can help avoid saying and doing something that you’ll regret. The following are three suggestions.To begin with, sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so. Another effective suggestion is that you should take more physical exercise, which can help you get rid of anger. Last but not least, keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you.I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you. May you get rid of your trouble soon. I feel that my suggestions would be of great benefit if you stick to them.Yours,Jamie