专题05 备战2022高考英语写作专题复习之辞职信
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目录 | 内容 | |
Part A | 题目呈现 | |
Part B | 谋篇布局 短语句式罗列 | 解析题目内容;确定行文要点 |
罗列关键词以及必备表达 | ||
话题词汇写作储备 | ||
句式升级美化 | ||
Part C | 写作模板总结 | |
Part D | 学生作文点评 范文赏析 | 学生习作点评 |
学生习作美化升级 | ||
Part E | 课后练笔巩固提升 |
Part A 题目呈现
两个月之前你在Design&Fashion杂志社获得了一份编辑的工作;但是现在你发现这份工作并不是你所期待的那样;你决定辞职;并写封信给老板Mr.Wang
1:告知老板你的决定
2:陈述你的理由
3:发表歉意
Part B 谋篇布局以及短语句式罗列
1:解析题目内容;确定行文要点
题目信息解读 | 指令关键词 | 要点归纳 |
规定应用文类型为书信 | Write a letter | 1.题目要求写一封信,书信格式需完整; 2.收信人为老板,用词需要客气、正式; 3.写信内容必须包括:自己要辞职;说明理由;谈论工作中不符合预期的地方;结尾表达歉意 |
揭示收信人身份为老板 | the boss for the magazine Design&Fashion | |
规定信件内容:告知决定;陈述理由;发表歉意 | telling him your decisions Stating your reasons Making an apology | |
提供内容线索: 说明决定是辞职同时陈述辞职理由 | You decide to quit The work is not what you expected |
2:罗列关键词以及必备表达
1. promising position有前途的职位
2. best-selling magazine畅销杂志[ best-selling可以替换为: popular, prevalent ]
3. make the hard decision to do sth艰难地做出做某事的决定[ hard可替换为:difficult]
4. overestimate[v.]高估
5. adaptability [n.]适应力
6. match the requirement of与..... 的要求符合
7. highly value看重
8. open-mindedness[n.]开放的心态
9.creativity [n.]创造力
10. the shortage of......,的欠缺
11. professional knowledge专业知识
12. job performance工作表现
13. negatively ad. 负面地
14. transition n. when sth changes from one form or state to another过渡期
3:写作储备
话题表达补充:辞职理由
1.relocation of my family搬家,
2.heath concern健康问题,
3.further education进修、深造,
4.better career opportunity更好的工作机会,
5.interest has changed兴趣改变
[辞职信常用表达]
1.开头语
1.With regret I have to submit my letter of resignation很抱歉,我得递交这封辞职信。
2.It is difficult to write this letter of resignation because we have together accomplished so much.. 写这封辞职信很艰难,因为我们一起完成了如此多的....
3.I have thoroughly enjoyed the year I have spent with .. and regret having to write this resignation letter. 我很享受一起度过的时光,对辞职感到很遗憾。
2.陈述辞职原因
1.Personal problems compel me to take this step.个人原因使我做出了这个选择。
2.Due to..., I have made the decision.因为....我做出了决定。
3.The reasons are as follows:原因如下:
3.结束语
1.I have thoroughly enjoyed my time in this company and hope to be able to serve you again sometime in the future.
我十分享受在公司中的时光,希望将来能有机会再为您服务。
2.I will be forever grateful for having the opportunity to work with such a dedicated group of people.
能有机会和如此敬业的人共事,我将永远心存感激。
3.In closing, I would like to express my sincere appreciation to you as my supervisor, as well as to my friends and colleagues.
最后,我想对您,我的上司,以及我的朋友和同事表达衷心的感谢。
4.I have truly enjoyed my years working with all of you, and am grateful for the learning and growth opportunities I was given over the years.
5.我真地很享受和你们共事的岁月,感谢您这些年来给我的学习和成长的机会。
4:句式升级美化
①写出简单句
这份工作需要思想开放和有创造力的人。
This job needs open-minded and creative people.
我不能满足这项工作的要求。
I can 't meet the requirements of this job.
②利用衔接词将简单句整合
I can't meet the requirements of this job which needs open- minded and creative people.
③增加表达精确性和美感
My personality can't match the requirements of this position which highly values open mindedness and creativity.
④添加衔接成分,连贯上下文
My personality actually can't match the requirements...
课堂练习
①写出简单句
我没有足够的设计和编辑知识。
I don't have enough knowledge in designing and editing.
这严重影响了我在日常工作中的表现。
It has badly influenced my performance in daily work.
我没想到会有如此坏的影响。
I didn't expect such bad influence.
②利用衔接词将简单句整合
I don't have enough knowledge in designing and editing, which has badly influenced my performance in daily work, and I didn't expect such bad influence.
③增加表达精确性和美感
The shortage of professional knowledge, both in designing and editing, has influenced my job performance more negatively than I ever expected.
④增加衔接成分,连贯上下文:
What's more, the shortage of professional knowledge..
Part C 写作模板总结
Dear .
Thank you very much for having offered me this promising position to work for ,It never occurred to me that I would have to leave, However, today I make the hard decision to quit it.
Painfully, I have realized that I overestimated my adaptability. 介绍第一个不适应工作的表现. What's more,介绍第二个不适应工作的表现.
I apologize for any inconvenience I might have caused and wish you could consider my request. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to make this transition easier for the company.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Part D 学生作文点评与范文赏析
作文一
学生作文赏析 (4分) | 点评意见 |
Dear Sir. I am writing this letter to resign I am finding myself character and job requirements not match,The lack of profession Skills and design bad influence my daily work. I hope you would consider my request, which may cause inconvenience,I apologize Yours sincerely, Li Ming
| 1:字数不够 2:表达缺乏交际性用语;太过直白 3:时态有误 4:中式表达;有歧义 5:不符合英语表达习惯
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作文二
学生作文赏析 (11分) | 尝试修改丰富文章句式 |
Honorable Mr/Mrs. Manager, I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my gratitude for your offer,but I am afraid that I have to abandon this job. This is a valuable opportunity, but it does not suit me. I am not majoring in this specialty, and I possessed no relevant working experiences. As a result,I have inadequate self-confidence with the work. I have less time for my family because few weekends I had hoped to have more time with my kid and parents when I requested for this job I do apologize for the trouble, and thank you very much for your offer Yours sincerely, Li Ming | Honorable Manager, Thank you very much for your- job offer, but I am afraid that I have to write this letter to quit this job. It is a valuable opportunity to work here,but this job does not suit me. At first,I have inadequate self confidence with the work because possess neither professional knowledge nor relevant working experience8. Secondly, I have less time for my family because I have few weekends here. Actually, when I applied for this job, I had hoped to have more time with my kid and parents. I wish you could understand my decision and I do apologize for the trouble I might cause Yours sincerely, Li Ming |
范文及译文
范文 | 译文 |
Dear Mr. Wang. Thank you very much for having offered me this promising position to work for this best selling magazine. It never occurred to me that I would have to leave. However, today I make the hard decision to quit it. Painfully, I have realized that I overestimated my adaptability. My personality actually can't match the requirements of this position which highly values open mindedness and creativity. What's more, the shortage of professional knowledge, both in designing and editing, has influenced my job performance more negatively than I ever expected. 1 apologize for any inconvenience I might have caused and wish you could consider my request. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to make this transition easier for the company. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
| 亲爱的王先生。 非常感谢你给我提供这个有前途的职位为这份畅销杂志工作。我从来没有想到我必须离开。然而,今天我做出了艰难的决定。 痛苦的是,我意识到我高估了自己的适应性。我的个性实际上无法满足这个职位高度重视开放的思想和创造力的要求。更重要的是,在设计和编辑方面的专业知识的缺乏,对我的工作表现的影响比我预期的更负面。 对我可能造成的任何不便表示歉意,并希望您能考虑我的请求。请让我知道,如果我可以做些什么来让这个过渡更容易的公司。 真诚地, 李明
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Part E 课后练笔巩固
加入你是李明;几个月前你在ABC company找到一份导购的工作;但是做了几个月你发现这份工作你并不喜欢;所以向老板Mr. Liu提出辞职;并写一封辞职信
1:告知老板你的决定
2:陈述你的理由
3:发表歉意
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Ming
参考答案:
Dear Mr. Liu,
I am a common employee of our company. The purpose of my letter, as a matter of fact, is to inform you that I intend to resign from my current position an editor of our magazine.
There are some problems that compel me to take this step. First of all, I find it difficult to get along with my immediate supervisor. Besides, it would be better for me to migrate to another city to be with my family. Most importantly, during the past two months, never was I assigned any really important task, so I think I won’t make any progress here.
I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused and I am looking forward to getting informed of your approval soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
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