专题06 备战2022高考英语写作专题复习之道歉信

2022高考英语写作专题复习之道歉信

Part A  题目呈现

你从加拿大回来然后发现一盒忘记归还给你的房东Bob的音乐CD在你的行李箱里；就此写一份信

1：发表歉意

2：建议解决措施

Part B  谋篇布局以及短语句式罗列

1：解析题目内容；确定行文要点

2：罗列关键词以及必备表达

1. unpack the luggage打开行李收拾

2. be busy doing sth忙着做某事

3. come across突然发现   【替换表达: encounter; run across】

4. (sth)slip one's mind忘记(某事)

5. it dawned on sb that..某人明百.....

6. make up for弥补  【替换表达compensate for】

3：写作储备

[道歉信常用表达]

1.开头语

1．There's no excuse for my carelessness; I had ... ....

没有理由掩饰我的粗心。

2．I am very sorry for my careless mistake that...

我非常抱歉犯下了...这个粗心的错误。

3．I didn't realize my forgetfulness until yesterday when ...

直到昨天当我.. ,才意识到我的疏忽。

4．Here is my deepest apology for the mistake I made.

我对犯下的错表示诚挚的歉意。

2.结束语

1．To compensate for my carelessness, I'd like to...

为弥补我的疏忽，我愿意....

2．I am truly sorry that... For my part, I will do my best to make up for the trouble I have caused.

真的为...感到歉意。就我来说,我会尽最大努力弥补我所造成的困扰。

4：句式升级美化

句子成形步骤:

①写出简单句

我上周从你那里借了那张音乐CD。

I borrowed the music CD from you last week.

我从加拿大回来后正在处理这些行李。

I was dealing with the luggage after my return from Canada.

我在行李里找到了那张音乐CD。

I found the music CD in my luggage.

②利用衔接词将简单句整合

As I was dealing with the luggage after my return from Canada, I found the music CD which I borrowed from you last week.

③增加表达精确性和美感

As I was unpacking the luggage after my return from Canada, I came across the music CD borrowed from you there last week.

课堂练习

①写出简单句

我想弥补我的粗心大意。

I wish to make up for my carelessness.

我已经通过邮政寄来了。

I have sent the CD through EMS.

我还寄来了一本关于鲁迅的书。

I have also sent a book of Lu Xun.

②利用衔接词将简单句整合

To make up for my carelessness, I have sent the CD through EMS and also a book of Lu Xun.

③增加表达精确性和美感

To make up for my carelessness, I have mailed the CD through EMS, along with a book written by your favorite Chinese writer, Lu Xun.

Part C  写作模板总结

Dear       

As I was            ，I        ， It dawned on me that                     . I feel terribly sorry. I was so busy                      that it must have slipped my mind.

To make up for my carelessness, I                 ， Again, I would like to apologies for any inconvenience it may have caused you.

Yours,

Li Ming

Part D  学生作文点评与范文赏析

作文一

作文二

范文及译文

Part E  课后练笔巩固

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好周日一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

注意:

1.词数:100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Sincerely，

Li Ming

参考答案：

Dear Bob,

I’m writing to apologise to you because I can’t go to the bookstore with you this Sunday as planned.Luckily,I’ve been chosen to represent our school to take part in the National English Debate Contest for middle school students next Friday.So crazy about English am I that I cherish this chance a lot.Now I need enough time to practise my oral English.

Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart.How about 10th July?Will you be available then?If it’s convenient for you,let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

（B）

假设你是李华,你和外国朋友Tom约好这个周五晚上去体育馆看足球赛,但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件:

1.表达歉意;

2.解释原因;

3.另约时间。

注意:

1.词数:100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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Sincerely，

Li Ming

参考答案：

Dear Tom,

I’m so sorry to say that I can’t go to watch the football match with you as scheduled this Friday night.This afternoon,I suddenly received the news that my grandfather fell and broke his left leg.With my father out on a business trip and my mother occupied to look after my little sister at home,I have to take the responsibility of taking care of my grandfather in the hospital these nights.

I’ve heard that there will be a match which is more exciting next Friday night.I wonder whether you are available then.If you are free,we can make an appointment to watch that football match.

I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies.

Yours,

Li Hua